Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20170410034737/@comment-96.44.123.5-20170614021924

Here's the final draft, because I'm sorry for escaping the fact that I went overboard on this one

Here it is

Cybernetic Strength

User: Alexandre Obsidian Likes: the idea of Human and Faunus Equality, Beer served from the Top shelf and his Gauntlets: Tecton and Brasher Dislikes: When innocent People are harmed or killed, Conspiracies and Getting made fun of Weakness: being Fatigue and cocky.

Type: Aural, Psychic

Trigger: Getting hit hard by his Opponent

Range: 3 feet around him and 1 inch above his head

Effects: Strengthens user once when he takes damage, he uses this 50X Arm strength boost, when Tecton and Brasher are equipped this boost is slightly more than if he's wearing just his White Gloves

Dust: Fire Dust (Makes for explosive hits)

Capacity: Ten to twenty minutes.

Capability Tier 1: The arm's strength is boosted by Aura, this drains his Aura slightly and only after getting hit does it convert his loss of aura into a small strength boost (0.09% boost to 10% in

Capability Tier 2: this Gives Alexandre access to the use of Fire Dust in his Gauntlets as well as white Gloves he wears otherwise, this drains his Aura much faster than When he's using Tier 1 (Limit is 26% Aura before he gets tired, he's much easier to take on)

Edit Notes/ Trivia

-Previous range and duration have been changed due to fandom logic.

-Some details have been Added/Removed due to large irrelevancies.

-The creator of this Character is the same person who created this post.

How's this