Thread:Winston117/@comment-25160154-20130924190220

This is Winston117s work not mine, I thought I should save it here for him.

Plot: In the World named Terra, We are going to the Republic of Andoria, Here lies a Harbour Town known as 'Blue Shore' and the most famous guild was: White Wing.

Characters: Neal Jäger

An Azurian Dragonslayer, a 17-year old mage brawler and a childhood friend of Yang, Who saved her from Kidnapper since they were young.

Yang Rose or known as Yang Xiao Long (Traditionally called by her mother)

She's an Aura Mage, Since she was 10, her family moved along with her blood-related sister to Blue Shore Town, During the day since they were on a picknick with her parents nearby the Forest, she went into the woods, as her parents didn't looked after her, But then two men appeared and tries to kidnap her, however, Neal came up and saved her after beating up the kidnappers, She instantly have a friend with Neal, also she now realized that he was a member of the famous guild of White Wing, she has a dream to join them, but she should first enroll the magic school first.

Neal's characterism: He has Brown hair, Blue jacket, Military brown pants with a pair of hiking shoes, plus he has fingerless combat gloves on his hands.

Neal's Personality: Head-Strong, Brave, Powerfull when he's on a Rampage/Rage Mode, and also he's secretly protective to Yang, cause he has a promise from her to protect her from any danger or threats since childhood.

Yang's Characterism: Unlike Vytal-Yang, She wore an elegant dress and a brown sweater, plus she carries a handbag with her.

Yang's Personality: Unlike Vytal-Yang's counterpart, She was innocent, matured and has a rare magic stored inside her known as 'Aura Magic', But she lacks Physical Close-Combat melee and can be easily outnumbered.

Prologue:  Terra, a world filled with magic and of course Science co-existed, although, there is magic flowing everywhere on the air, but however, we are going in the country known as the republic of Endoria, it was a neutral country, a country filled with powerfull guilds of .... Freelancers, but one of them is famous, one guild is known as: White Wing...

Nearby the shores lies a town known as 'Blue Shore', 10 kilometers on the west side of Blue Shore Town, lies a large forest, a little 10-year-old girl with golden hair in white-skirt was running in pure fear, running away from someone, however, the poor girl stumbled on a large root from a tree, then suddenly, two men approached to her, one was carrying a club and the other carries a large sack, they smirked evily to her, the little golden haired girl shielded herself with for her protection, however, the kidnapper grabbed her arm as they wanted to put her into large sack.

"No! Leave me alone!" The little girl begged as her tears flowing out. "Please! Help me!"

"You ain't going anywhere." The man grinned. "But you'll be a worth a prize to our slavery market!"

"Yeah, you're going to make us rich!" Added the other cheerly as he widely opened the sack.

"NNOOOO!!"

Meanwhile, In not so far away, a brown haired 10-year-old boy, Wears a Blue-Sweater, Simple short-pants and a brown modern military cap, he is only equipped with a stick, wanders around the forest to look or find something interested, but he he took out a great sight, knewing that he was bored.

"Man, this suck." He said for himself, then he kicked a little pebble aside. "I wish there would be fighting, it would be more fu-"

NNOOO! HELP ME!" Cried a high-pitched femal voice from nearby. "SOMEBODY HELP ME!"

"S-Somebody's in trouble."

The boy rushed in full speed to find the source of the voice, until he reached the area, for what he saw that two men tries to tie up the girl.

"Will you hold still!" The man said as he tied a cloth that wrapped around her mouth.

"Geez, why won't you hold still!?" Demanded the other as he covered her head with another little sack.

"MMMMPPFFFFF!!" The girl cried in a muffle, trying the struggle herself from the ropes, but it was hopeless.

However, behind the bushes, the boy was enrage in fury, seeing that the kidnappers were capturing her, he clenched his fist then ingited in fire, he charged out, to take his first rescue.

"Hey you!" He called out while he charge.

"Wha-?!" As the man turned his head and was punched brutally by a fist in fire and flew backwards and hit against a tree, the other man looked over the boy in schock, he took a club from the ground from his fallen friend and charged against the little boy, however, one blow was easy for him to dodge, the boy's right fist ignited in flames then attacked. "Azurian Dragon's Punch!"

At this moment, the kidnapper was punched harder into the cheeks and fell to the ground, the boy looked over the golden-haired girl, she was tied in ropes, moments later she was free, then she hugged him.

"Th-Thank you!" She cried. "I was scared of them, but gladly somebody was here!"

"Uh-...uhhh." The brown haired boy blushed, however, he was hugged too tightly and gasps for air.

"Oops, Sorry." She apologized.

"Th-That's alright." He said. "I'm fine, but by the way, My names Neal, Neal Jäger."

"Yang, Yang Rose." She smiled as she introduce herself. "Actually, I was called traditionaly by my mother in full name known as Yang Xiao Long."

"Okay...I guess I would call you Yang." He muttered. "What are you doing here?"

"Well...I was on a picknick with my parents and my little sister rose, outskirts of the forest." She said. "Actually, I was chasing a squirrel until I stumbled myself into those men."

"I see, by the way, let's get out from here before they woke up."

Later, after they went out from the forest, Yang's parents hugged her, they were searching for her for minutes, they explained to her that her voice screamed and echoed throughout the forest, she tells that she was kidnapped by kidnappers, but she was saved by the brown-baired boy named Neal, however, her parents scolded her for not going out anywhere without any permission.

"Hey.." Yang said to Neal. "Me, My sister and my parents are going home."

"I see then, well...I've heard that you're new in Blue Shore town, am I right?" He asked.

Of course, I lived on the hilltop." She replies. "That lies nearby Blue Shore and where do you live?"

"Oh me? Well I lived with my adopted uncle Ozpin." He said. "He's the Guildmaster of the White Wing Freelancer guild and I'm a member too."

"White Wing?! You're a member in the guild named White Wing!?" Yang said in surprisement. "I can't believe it, This is my first time to meet a member from the famous guild in entire Endoria! Oh I wish I want to join in, but my parents doesn't allow me to get in."

"Why not?"

"It's because I have my entire life to go to school." She huffed as she glares to her parents while they were packing up. "It wasn't fair."

"Well...how about that we can be friends?" Neal smiled. "It would be more fun with you."

"R-Really?" Yang blushed a little as Neal nodded. "Yay! We can be friends forever, actually, My other friends were somewhere else, they lived pretty far from here."

"Then, you will be my first friend!" He grabbed her hand. "How about that we could visit each other again?"

"How about Tomorrow?" She smiled.

"Okay." He gave her a thumbs up.  