Talk:Weiss Schnee/@comment-68.198.247.185-20140217201530/@comment-106.68.74.181-20140221115609

Chishio, you bring up good points, but first of all, its an anime inspired web series that is really just one long movie, which has its flaws like any other animated movie, or movie for that matter, which makes its plot go a little bit quickly. Heck, the only plot we've got so far is as follows:

Become a hunter (Hunter X Hunter) (What do hunters do anyway?)

Enter the tournament (Hunter X Hunter, Fairy tail, One Piece, Naruto, Angelic Layer, ect.) (Could be epic)

White Fang criminal activity/ Roman torchwick and Cinder (Soul eater, any mafia movie ever made)

What's more, the character stories... okay, I can let this one off as that can be given later on, but it doesn't help that we know more about Jaune velJaune than we do Yang, who is a main character.

And if this is exposition, then why not instead of giving character development to a minor character, give it to the main characters so that the minors can be greater developed later down the track. Weiss and Ruby didn't need to see eye to eye until they actually needed to start working as a team, and Jaune didn't need that whole bully arc with him and cardin. If anything, the first part of Jaundice was neccasary as it did let us know what it was Cardin was doing there, but they could have just left it at that. They didn't need to go any further and give the deus ex machina plot device.

Everything in the last paragraph could have been handled in the tournament, which is a perfect setting as you have people from all over coming to one place to battle it out. Jaune could have suffered a defeat and then instead of whining like a little girl, reliese his weakness and from there, develope a stronger character. As well as ruby and weiss. There could be this tag match battle royal where they decidto put there differences aside on there own, then team up in an epic battle involving (Just my imagination talking) A two headed King taijitu, tonfa rocket launchers, the gun gun, explosians, and some actual common sense while fighting it out.

Of course, we got what we got, and if they want to get better, than don't make the thing that was advertised as girls wielding gun blades devil may cry style against hordes of lycans and other animals that are both big and terrorfying.

-Raven