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Commander Ghost wrote: I'm about to fall off the tight rope probably because of this oc....but.....(sighs) gotta improve somehow.... *Name: Tengiz Terrance Simmons Reserve judgment until he has a back-story. SpiritedDreaming wrote:  Name: Midas (Real name Flavio Goban)

 When he was seventeen, Midas discovered that a lot of the members of his father's rival gang were Aura users, and arranged for himself and Cereza to receive training. He got himself a series of tutors under various aliases, killing each teacher afterwards using surprise attacks as they left and moving safe houses every time. He never hid the murders from Cereza, but didn't go out of his way to involve her either. The scar on his collarbone came form one of his instructors when he was nineteen, as they battled to the death in a gruelling fight.

That’s a lot of extra enters…and that’s asking for a lot…granted I don’t find it impossible…get a young tutor that wanted some pocket money so there wasn’t a big gap to overcome…except there WAS a big gap to overcome since he didn’t have his aura unlocked prior to his first tutor as far as I can tell…AND no hunter training what so ever…if this was one young tutor I could buy, but pulling this off several times without getting caught…in a vacuum, I don’t like it, since it has this feel of ”everyone else is an idiot but me since I’m the main character of the story”…but I think a lot of this could be alleviated if multiple characters ARE after him, be it friends of the tutor or detectives sent after him that wouldn’t be deterred by lack of digital data on him…still I’d dial it down to one tutor…maybe 2 Yourresidenteccentric wrote: tend to come out better. 1) Basic info: Name: Leon Aozaki (Leon rhymes with neon.)

7) Statistics:

Strength: 3 No noticeable strength feat, not in semblance or weaponry, or a jod that requires a lot of it; strength should be a 2 at best