Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-38934077-20190730204553

Eh...needs quite a bit of polish.

Backstory: Kinda sloppy. Taking inspiration from another character is fine, but you've just copy/pasted a less interesting version of Garou's backstory with none of the charm found in the original. Is there a reason he's an asshole? Why has nobody tried to explain to him why everyone hates him? Is there a reason that he just doubled down on being an asshole instead of trying to be nicer? Is there a reason that he's so arrogant and underestimates people? You backstory makes it seem like he just woke up one day and decided to be a dick to everyone. Also I would suggest scrapping the "Bang" equivalent in your backstory. Come up with a more interesting and original reason for why he got so good at fighting.

Personality: So he realized that he was being an asshole, and the realization made him...more of an asshole? That's dumb.

Semblance: Super random, kinda dumb, hilariously edgy name. Rework.

Fighting style: Dude, just pick one.

Overall, your OC comes off as a dollar store version of Garou, rather than an original creation that takes inspiration from him.