Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20161001000406/@comment-25396609-20161011162224

1: If you want the lightning color association, why didn't you give him a name that means lightning? Either way it's what I call a two-step connection; one step from thunder to lightning, one step to whatever color you happen to associate with lightning. I'm feeling like I might be nitpicking here, though, so I will hand you back the point.

2: Inconsistent in that you mixed Metric and Imperial units, rather than using one, the other, or both.

3: I'm holding my ground on the lack of a shirt, as it doesn't even mention he foregoes wearing one.

4: We have never seen grimm make any sort of attempt at large-scale strategization like that. Coordinated attack maybe, but not a full-on ambush.

5: I'll give you back the point on that one, albeit begrudgingly.

6: Weiss wasn't made the leader because Ruby is the one who took the initiative during, well, initiation. While fighting the Nevermore, she is the one who organized her team to fight. We know nothing about how initiation went down for CRDL so Dove is irrelevent here. It was mostly the lack of detail given that resulted in the loss of the point.

7: Regardless, the information should have been placed together for ease of access.

8: I'm going to assume you mean Gräuel; so much of the detail is placed in the design section because it is a fairly decorated weapon with several colors and patterns. You included no decorative detail, only functional, so it should have been listed in active form.

9: What I was going for is that you didn't give any mention of how it is used anywhere in the sheet; thus docking a point for incomplete information.

10: Regardless of what you based it on, the design and function are much closer to an anti-materiel rifle than to an abus gun; and he uses it as such. It's misclassified no matter how I look at it.

11: spears are in general not especially usefull against heavy armor, because there are less gaps to target; especially given the Ranseur has the additional points on it which would collide with the surrounding armor. In general, however, they are no less effective than other forms of spear.

12: I did consider the sonic boom, but that only results in a snapping or cracking sound that fades pretty quickly, it's the explosive soundwave that tends to linger long enough for it to be used to track your location.

13: You don't need to describe it in detail in the short description, that's what the entire rest of the sheet is for. It's meant to be a one sentence snippet about the broad function of it.

14: Emerald's hallucinations cause that metallic screeching noise, Pyrrha's polarity makes that *vrrm* sound, the Schnee glyphs make a high pitched droning sound, and so on. Every semblance was mentioned to have a unique sound effect; in fact as I'm updating my characters I've been adding them in.

15: It's not so much that it changed forms, it's that the change in form is... well, it doesn't make much sense. I can't think of how the change from a fractal cube to a fractal pyramid is in any way related to losing his lover. As for it being angelic: you called it that when describing it "Creates an abstract, rather-angelical-looking entity." and I'm not really sure how that works.

I'm going to go and work on grading the other entries now. Your score well be adjusted in a moment.