Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161205132101/@comment-31061197-20170116041654

Good night/morning/day. I'm new here and first time I'm on a thread but seeing what the thread is about I was hoping to get a feedback on an OC I made. It'd be appreciated. Thank you.

Core Info 1)Basic info  Name: Sol Crescendo  CNR explanation: Sol (Sun), Crescendo (Rising/Growing) Species: Human Age: 19 Gender: Male Symbol: Sun with solar rays coming out Handedness: Right, semi-left Nicknames: Occupation: Student 2) Appearence:Aura Color: Red Height: 5'11 Weight: 140lbs. Eyes: Black Skin Colour: Brown Face Shape: Round Hair: Black and graying, curly shoulder lenght. Physical traits: Stretch marks on shoulders and abdomen. Outfits:   Combat= Red jacket. Combat vest over black shirt. Black cargo pants with packs strapped in legs and back of belt. Black combat boots with yellow laces. Clawed gaunglet on right arm. Normal= random shirt, cargo shorts and sandals. Formal= Full three-piece suit with tie and dancing tap shoes. Sleep= shorts, and a shirt on cold nights      Dates & outings= Dress shirt over yellow T, blue jeans and ankle high boots. Accessories: Yellow pocket-watch with chain, has the engraving of a rising sun. Gadgets: N/A 3) Characteristics: Background:Born out of wedlock to one of the heads in the stock market has put his mother, Violet Tower, to disdain his father, to such a point where she does everything she can to have be as far away from Soleil as possible be in life or personality. Unfortunatly her self imposed task was in vain as Sol himself took in after his father when it comes to money and becoming a Hunter, something wich he shares with her father, Calamity Tower, causing her to have a falling out with her son when he decided to attend Beacon instead of following her plan of becoming a high class gentlement. While lothing to admit, Sol is grateful to his mother for teaching him etiquette, as those skills have helped him make a good impression, the fashion sense is just a bonus to him. Following on the dream of adventure of his father and hope for gaining recognition like his grandfather he resolves to surpasse them both. Personality: Sarcastic, melodramatic, pervert, enjoys others miseries, tolerant, has anger problems, loyal, considerate, hopeful, determined Misc Traits: When lying, tends to talk formally. Says the word "Dandy" when annoyed. Respects those who stand for what they believe in. Likes: Classic arts, dogs, cultures, technology, parties, video games, the hope and dreams of children Dislikes:  Idiots, ignorance for not wanting to learn, heavy drinking, to many chores. 4) Trivia Notable Relationships: Soleil Crescendo (Father), Violet Tower (Mother), Calamity Tower (Maternal Grandfather),Team SKAR (Scarlet) Skills: Swimming, Data management, woodwind instruments player, mental mapping Allusion: Notes:  Known  for lending money and always keeping count. A good majority of classmates & some teachers owe him favors. Also does errands and messaging for whoever asks.Always keeps extra med-kits and dust on hand.Extra protective of team. Hunter Extension A) Weapon Name: Corona Classification: Sword-Lance Shield Short Description: A silver shield with sharp edges the size of half his body, can change between sword and lance due to the grip being expandible, can use dust elemental attacks. Note: Has a side-arm in a simple handgun. B) Semblance Name: Solutus (Unbound) Short Description: Physical attributes keep incrising the longer the battle lasts. Activation Cue: The areas temperature increases. Reflection on Personality: Sol wishes to surpass and break the limits impossed on him. C) Combat Info Preferred Range: Mid-Close Landing Strategy: Have shield take blunt of impact and use it as a sliding board. Fighting Style: Head on, defensive, acrobatic Civilian Extension A) Day to Day Life Expanded Occupation/Business Details: Third year student at Beacon, leader of Team SKAR (Scarlet) Certification: Data Management License Optional Statistics: Levels are from 0 to 5, with 0 being nonexistent, 1 being low, 2 being below average, 3 being average, 4 being above average and 5 being high. First year students should not have more than 3 stats at level 5, and no more than 45 points spread over the statistics. @) Physical Statistics Strenght: 2 Speed: 4 Agility: 5 Stamina: 2 &) Aural Statistics Aura Reserve: 5 Aura Manipulation: 0 Semblance Manipulation: 3 Dust Manipulation: 2 $) Technical Statistics Dust Use: 2 Weapon Skill (Primary): 4 Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 1 Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 3 Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 4 Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 2 Total: 39