User blog:MiniDaggers/RWBY Volume 1: Chapter 7 Jaunedice: Director's Commentary

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NOTES:

 
 * Curley braces {} are for things they said, while someone else was talking (If I could hear it clear enough)
 * Horizontal Lines are markers, that mark 1 minute intervals, since the beginning of that Chapter.
 * Note that there are 10 Chapters. Each "Part 1" & "Part 2" Episode is a single Chapter.
 * The commentary is continuous, and is meant to be heard in the movie mode on the DVD.
 * Wiggly lines ~ (no I don't know the actual name) mark specific parts of the episode, for example the intro narration or the onscreen sppearance of Ruby using this episode for said examples.

Transcript:

Part 1 Start

 1.  Miles: And thus begins, the Jaune arc.

2. Monty: Oh geez

3. Miles: Eh?

4. Kerry: I hate you so much. (Miles laughs) How've, how long have you been waiting for that?

5. Monty: By the way, {Miles: I've been waiting like two days.} Jaune's, Jaune's symbol is a rainbow, just so you know. Not a pair of moons.

6. Miles: Not a pair of moons. Although I wouldn't be opposed to that, since my last name's Luna. But no, rainbow, {Kerry: Shut up.} arc,

7. Kerry: It kind of looks like, like a, buttcheeks, like (fart noise).

8. Miles: Shut up.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">9. Kerry: You did that in Jaune voice, {Monty: Nick did a,} a little bit.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">10. Monty: Oh, Nick,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">11. Miles: (High pitched) "Shut up."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">12. Monty: Nick did this fight scene. Excellent job Nick.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">13. Kerry: (Inaudible) Really really well.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Cardin kicks Jaune

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">14. Miles: Ooh, right in the nads. (slight laughter from group) Considering what just happened, before we started recording.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">15. Kerry: So uh, we started, (laughs slightly) we were just about to start recording, and I don't even remember,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">16. Monty: Miles was doing a little dance.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">17. Miles: I did pelvic thrusts. (Monty laughs)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">18. Kerry: And he just like, hit and his hands like, right into his nuts.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Glynda looking at Cardin's and Jaune's aura on her scroll

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">19. Miles: So this is, another time where really, uh, aside from the nuts. We're really trying drive home that, his, aura is your shield, it is your, it's your like halo, shield. (laughs a little)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">20. Monty: Essentially.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">21. Miles: You have a health bar and everything. Um,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Jaune gets out and looks at his scroll

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">22. Miles: Shout-out to uh, shout-out to them graphics Kerry. {Monty and Kerry: Yeah} Checking out that scroll tablet.

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<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">23. Monty: Is, is his battery dying? (laughs)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">24. Miles: No, shut up.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">25. Kerry: See, clearly there's a picture of him so it's his battery that's dying.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">26. Miles: Shut up. (laughs slightly)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">27. Kerry: Yeah, uh, it was uh, you were cool to touch that Monty. Which is uh, I showed it to you and you were like "This is cool, let's add the rest of the characters too. Kind of like sell that..."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">28. Monty: It's almost like an RPG in a way.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Pan over spectators (Yang, Weiss, Ruby and Pyrrha)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">29. Kerry: Yeah, really it is. It's like y'know here's your whole team, here's their status and of course they're sitting in the bleachers so they're in green.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">30. Miles: Guys! Where's Blake? She wasn't in that shot.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">31. Kerry: Clearly, she's a cat.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">32. Miles: She's not a first year student.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">33. Kerry: They're all first year students.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">34. Miles: Damn it.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">35. Kerry: Oh, poor Jaune. "Oh I'm sad, my jeans are ripped. (Miles laughs) My hand-me-down jeans are ripped."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">36. Miles: "Man I bought these when acid washed jeans were cool."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Close up of Nora's face

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">37. Kerry: Oh this scene.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">38. Miles: Ohh, my god this was another,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">39. Monty: Finally more Nora.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">40. Miles: Every single time we could {Monty: Look at Yang!} we would love to put it. Th, I love this. This lunchroom scene, shows the characters perfectly.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">41. Kerry: Yeah.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">42. Miles: Jaune has chicken nugget, no sorry uh, they're uh, Beowolf-shaped chicken nuggets.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">43. Kerry: Yeah.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">44. Miles: She's got a salad, Ruby's eating her cookies, Weiss just doing her nails, he's just got his tea and stuff. It's just like, I love it. Blake's readin, I love it.

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<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">45. Kerry: Yeah, it's uh, I think this scene is just a really good representation of, how they all, work together. Some of them are off in their own little world, some of them are worried about other people but at the end of the day they're all... One like, I guess they're two cohesive units. (Monty laughs) But they're also one (Talking over each other for a moment) Yeah.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">46. Miles: They're just group friends. It's funny, y'know that was one thing that like. Ohh,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Team CRDL bully Velvet

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">47. Miles: Look at them meanies.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">48. Monty: Hey it's Velvet.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">49. Miles: Poor Velvet. Oh yeah we never, that's the, is that the first time we said her name?

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">50. Kerry: I think so. {Miles: That's Velvet} I don't know the rest of her name. {Miles: Yeah} Her name's Velvet.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">51. Monty: Yeah. Played by Caiti.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">52. Kerry: Yeah.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">53. Miles: Umm,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">54. Monty: Caiti Ward.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">55. Kerry: That is her last name.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">56. Miles: Totes forgot what I was gonna say.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">57. Kerry: Something about teamwork I dunno.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">58. Miles: Something dumb.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">59. Monty: CRDL. Being bullies.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Cardin bullying Jaune montage

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">60. Kerry: (Miles laughs) Ursa.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">61. Monty: Smacking it out of his hand.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">62. Miles: Shout-out to uh, (laughs slightly, followed by Monty) I can't even, Arrested Development. (just before Jaune) "Oh come on!"

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">63. Kerry: Yeah, you didn't even do that intentionally I think you were just doing "Oh come on." But you had like one take in there and then when we had to get some (can't understand word) it was like "Now let's just have you do it for everyone of them."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">64. Miles: (laughs slightly) Yeah.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">65. Monty: Oh these lockers were pretty important. I mean would,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">66. Miles: Rocker. (laughs slightly)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">67. Monty: We'll get to them later. Rocket propelled lockers,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Carding pushes Jaune into locker

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<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">68. Monty: (breathless) Jaune, the hunter can't slap into frame to get in the locker. (No longer sounding slightly breathless) But also, to have ordinance pods which I think will, be pretty important later down the line.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Back to lunchroom

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">69. Miles: I was so happy when you told us that we were gonna have rocket propelled lockers. 'Cause it was like, what's a bully thing that Cardin can do that's not super cliche? Uh, 'cause shoving lockers,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">70. Monty: (laughs) {Kerry: Yeah} "Let's break his legs!" I love that line!

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">71. Kerry: (whispers) "Let's break his leg."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">72. Miles: But, y...

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">73. Kerry: Yeah, it it,

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">74. Miles: You're going to get shoved in lockers.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">75. Kerry: It's our version of that. {Miles: Yeah} Which is he gets shoved in a locker and then rocketed into space. (Miles and Monty laugh slightly) And by space I mean lower orbit. We're not mean.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Cardin pulling on one of Velvet's bunny ears

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">76. Miles: Aw Velvet.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">77. Monty: Poor Velvet.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">78. Miles: She's not as strong. (gets increasingly higher pitched) She's a huntress but she's still a huntress in training, she gets picked on. For her Faunus heritage. (normal voice) "Atrocious." You, you say it Pyrrha. (laughs slightly, followed by Monty)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">79. Kerry: Do I have the same haircut as the... squinty-eyed one?

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">80. Monty: Uh, no.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">81. Miles: Yeah {Kerry: I think I do} you totally do. (laughs)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">82. Monty: Yeah you would! (Miles laughs over Monty)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">83. Kerry: I don't even remember his name.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">84. Monty: (laughs) You need to go to bed.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Cardin watches Jaune as he leaves the lunchroom

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">85. Miles: "Mmm, look at that fine boy."

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">86. Monty: (laughs slightly) We've had a few conversations about CRDL.

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:inherit;">Part 1 ends and Part 2 begins

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