Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20150826074135/@comment-26900424-20150927184151

LiveandSound wrote: IronicStorm wrote: So you're the user? What, you think you are some glorious hero and king of legends? Calm your grains, no one is that special. This needs to be toned down.
 * Name: Grimmbane
 * User(s): Me
 * Purpose: Offensive
 * Short description: An energy field harming Grimm with a size dependent on how long ago it was used last.
 * Range: Long Range
 * General limitations: Only knocks away non-Grimm caught in the field of impact.
 * Passive abilities: Can heal allies.
 * Active abilities: Harms Grimm & Knocks away non-allied Humans and Faunus.
 * Dust interaction:
 * Lightning: Disables machines and looks yellow.
 * Ice: Traps Grimm and looks dark blue.

-Says it's offensive, yet also heals, and doubles as an EMP to top it off. Since when was Healing an offensive ability? To make it worse you say it's passive, when it wouldn't be possible, for the field is only present when activated. Unless you say it is always active, in which case it would just be brokenly OP to the point it's not even funny.

-It does too many things. Semblances so far have only been shown to do 1 thing, only 1 effect. Dust does not add more effects, Dust only modifies said effect. Blake can only create clones that vanish in 1 hit. When she used Dust the effect was still the same, the only difference was that the clones became elemental.

-Like Phantom said, extremely and absurdly specific target. Only harms Grimm, anything else is just knocked back, no explanation given for this. Also, knocked where? It's a field, so I assume it's some kind of glowing purple light on the ground it affects. In which case, in which direction would they be knocked back? Knocked back would mean it sends them upwards constantly.

-Since the range is "long range", I assume that's it's minimum range. Do note that Long Range is around the lines of what a bullet shot by an average Sniper Rifle could reach. If the field has that kind of range, then it could potentially engulf a whole city. And that is bullshit, too OP.

-And like Phantom said, the name is shit. Mary Sueish, and it just plain sucks. It lacks creativity and originality. For an effect like that I can already think of 1 or 2 names that would be more fitting and/or less boring.

-Also doesn't specify any actual limitations or weaknesses or even how much it costs on average. I'll delete it, sorry.