User blog:Gundam Legilis/What if the Yellow Trailer was better?

Hello everybody!

Today we'll be talking about the Yellow trailer.

Okay, so the trailer establishes Yang as a Hard Drinkin Party Girl. But it doesn't really show a lot of it.

In the original trailer, she doesn't go there to party, but to interrogate Junior. Her way of doing serious business, along with the first parts of the dialogue, not only conflicts her attire, but also the intent to first establish her as a party girl, while slowly revealing her Mama Bear traits later on.

Instead, it seems that her personality seems to flip-flop at random times during the trailer, from serious, to playful, to serious, instead of being a smooth and gradual change.

This video perfectly took the words right out of my mouth and illustrates what I mean.

So to change all that, we will have Yang come in, mingling with the crowd, dancing and whatnot.

Then she orders the drink. When she interrogates Junior, she plays it as subtle and as calm as possible, with a laid-back attitude. No threats. Then she punches him, smiling as she does so, which maintains her blood knight personality, while sending the message that she really wants to find her target, and triggering the fight that happens afterwards.

Then, we can have the locks of hair fall, and have Yang smile angrily. This indicates that she's pissed, and the angry smiling indicates how happy she will be to land the final blow on Junior. And we need a hint for the reason why she gets angry when she loses strands of her hair - besides it being an awesome and comedic moment, so that it makes sense, plot-wise.

Again, helps to indicate her Blood Knight nature. When Ruby arrives, we'll assume that Lindsay has improved her voice by this point, so there won't be much change here.

Stay tuned for next time, where we take on Ruby Rose (episode).

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis

P.S. The purpose of these blogs is to identify the flaws in the execution of the plot points that Monty and co. created. That's why the title uses the word "better" instead of "good."