Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24534644-20170213012304/@comment-25936766-20170308005127

What am I looking at?

I assume it would be for a prosecutor or a lawyer or a dick, but it would have to be someone so in-love with their job that it became a great percent of their personality. Which is sad.

The effect in itself, replaying a memory as an illusion, is creative and fine.....but I don't think the next part of it, "to determine if they're guilty of a crime", is good, or even necesary.

Especially since, well, there's the problems if used on an animal, or a plant, or a Grimm. Not to mention the "crime" and their guiltyness depends on the community, so unless the user is an ass who forces their views down on everyone and everything, it's hard to comprehend how it would even work.

And judging one's guilt or innocence based 100% on their emotions at the moment, as it's implied in the T1 description, is just stupid.

The idea of replaying the memories of the one(s) in the Glyph, is good. The part of "Guilty or Innocent", honestly, seems completely unnecesary and only unnecesarily complicates things for no good reason.

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Besides that, 3 things:

1-How the heck does Cycero Wentworth fit CNR? Or is he from the GW?

2-"Passive ability" makes no sense, really. Mostly because it's a passive ability, something always present and always active. If you meant it as a side-effect always present when the Semblance is used, just state that in the T1 description, where it makes far more sense to be.

3-The Gravity effect.....honestly, the shackles don't make sense given the element. You should go with the much simpler, more logical "amplifies gravity to force the target onto the ground", which still achieves the Inmobilization.