Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160721222431/@comment-14138255-20160822150347

VedranTheII wrote: Your main problem lies in the setup for the suicide. Aura has been described by Miles and Kerry like an HP bar, and a graduated hunter will naturally have a bigger health bar that ...for the sake of making a point I'll exaggerate and go as far as to say bigger than 4 students combined. What I'm trying to say here is that any crash that would kill the graduated hunter, would kill the students instantly. I'd definately change that part so the crash kills one of her teammates.

Also minor gripe but that has got up there in terms of unimaginative semblances, particularly since I can think of at least 2 characters that can replicate it's functions by focusing, talking about Ren and Cinder here. I'd rather you expand on it if possible. I never said the crash itself killed the huntsman (though to be fair, I implied it), the Grimm killed the Huntsman after it crashed (as they had bailed before it crashed), the Grimm just caught up to the wreckage. I should make that more obvious.

As for the Semblance, I've been having issues with making Semblances. Weapons I'm half fine with, but Semblances are tricky as they are already supernatural with my frames of reference and I don't know what seperates them from a Maiden's powers, my main concern is making sure Semblances aren't overpowered.