User blog comment:Triquetra Tulip/Salutations/@comment-89.142.250.112-20151208141959

Haha. That's great.

-Relation to a canon character.... FREAKING RUBY, NO LESS.

-cat faunus (well, at least it's not a wolf)

-using jack's pink lightning without linking it.

The things missing are:

-grimm hybrid/ robot

-a scythe

-bad grammar. Your grammar is great, but I feel like you are missing commas