Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160626203649/@comment-27265101-20160705175900

VedranTheII wrote: LucasVerBeek wrote: 3)Characteristics

-Background: Ouranos Kedros can't remember a day he lived outside of Vales forests and wild areas... Can’t remember a day he lived outside of Vale…so he always lived inside of Vale? Shouldn’t there be another negation there?

Also the dog kind of comes out of nowhere… I mean, he goes alone, comes back with 2 girls and then leaves them in the care of a dog? I feel like I missed a step here.



Fixed it so overall how is the character?