Thread:Vengem The Rogue Assassin/@comment-13488655-20160404190827/@comment-25396609-20160410232848

First observations;

Sukki

Sukki is a mecha pilot. The only mecha in Remnant is, as far as we have been shown, the Paladin, and they're brand new.

So, bit of a canon break right there.

pretty vague on the cybernetics, may want to provide details on their functions.

is she some sort of slave? says something about being sold/bought.

are the blades lasers or plasma? i suggest making up your mind on that one, significant functional difference.

you say captives instead of captors on several occasions, minor nitpick.

how are her cybernetics EMP proof? if they have any sort of integrated circuitry (Which for cybernetics to be practical and not massive, they need ot have) EMPs WILL have some effect.

if she is not mute, why does she have a voice synthesizer? or just pushing the cyborg thing?