Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-1828188-20150107020725/@comment-173.58.251.107-20150116021328

I just want more focus on the title characters and a development of the plot that doesn't take half a year, in addition to it being laid out clearly beyond "oh we're gonna be heros dat save the world kuz were like totally the simple souls dat song mentioned", it has to be more like "there is a threat, it's the White Fang, it's Roman, but we don't know their motivations, we need to find their motivations, and see if there's someone else doing all this, and then contact the proper authorities to helps us, leading into the confrontation". I will not be amused if this next volume involves spending half of it with Jaune whining about Weiss.