Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160319212213/@comment-24993958-20160328191100

Arkantos95 wrote: Any comments on the Pet I dropped further up the thread? Nice choice of birds, I’d have give it a mini semblance

DeletedContent wrote: PLEASE READ BEFORE EXAMINING OC: This OC is a heavy WIP, and may undergo serious changes from version to version. Certain parts of the backstory are placeholders, and will likely be altered in the final version.

-Name: Legere Nebulosus

Misc trait is still not a misc trait.

Veins that glow with his aura color…again, what veins? If it’s the real ones I guarantee you most people won’t notice.

Arthurs dentity is not expanded, what was he.

…I am not repeating myself again…so instead I will quote myself… VedranTheII wrote:

How he lost his arm is unexplained......our character STILL got the drop on him AND the entire group he used to ambush him in the first place despite being injured and teamless, and this time he not only managed to do it without lethal force, but he somehow managed to cripple the mentor for life?...also you seem to be under the impression willingly permanently crippling someone won’t send you to jail? Who do you think you are, Nora?...sorry, no, you do not get to have him without any downtime in prison, in fact by all accounts he should stay there more since now the teacher can press charges.

Look, either admit your oc performed a criminal act, jail him, wait till he gets out and THEN decides to get a job, or have him be a runaway gun for hire…I at least don’t think you can have both, in Remnant or otherwise. and with that out of the way:

WC-83 wrote:

 Name: Altan Verdun

His physical appearance could be expanded to make him a little more physically memorable.

Aside from that what you got works fine...now to make that weapon.