Thread:TEOR-MMMM/@comment-35691777-20190919030902/@comment-35455126-20191002031559

Some thoughts:

1. How do these people know what the Pandora are called? They’ve never been to the Pandora’s universe of origin.

2. I noticed that some of your sentences have quotation marks at the end even when a character isn’t speaking. May wanna fix that.

3. I’m just checking...but you did read the Pandora page, right? Sorry, just checkin’.

And 4. We have a separate thread for in-character roleplaying. Somebody send them the link.