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Phantomlink959 wrote: Personality: Passionate would be the most apt way to describe Badami Kaur; passionate about her family, about music, and about becoming a huntress. This alone would be a solid start. You put too much in. Streamline.

Her desire to become a huntress was inherited across generations from her grandfather, and one of the last things he did before his death was to push her forward onto the path they had both dreamed of; the first step on her journey paved by the love of her mentor and idol. This is a good summary for part of her background, but we already knew it.

Being naturally emotional and soft hearted, this death was incredibly painful and she is still trying to process that grief, allowing it to drive her forward to the ultimate goal of fulfilling Ashok’s dying wish. Again, old news.

She is incredibly intelligent and that is actually useful

and learning from her grandfather how to maintain instruments and equipment needed for shows gave her a basic understanding of mechanics. Not personality, toss from here

She has spent substantial time evolving that skill and excels in the classes at combat school devoted to the development and forging of weapons, however during her second year she has spent an abnormal amount of time during those classes slacking off, secretly working on concealed headphones she wears. Background

Inside Badami’s pendant is a memory device containing audio and video recordings of her grandfather’s band; every show they had ever played since she was a child. The memory device is connected wirelessly to her headphones and allow her to listen to her grandfather’s voice and music any time the pain of losing him becomes overwhelming. redundant and doesn't belong here

She is still struggling to make new friends, as the drastic change in outward personality pushed away many of her old friends, and she is having trouble responding to those who try to befriend her in her current state of mind. Her parents, teachers, and those friends who remain loyal know it’s just a matter of time, with some gentle support, until Badami Kaur returns to her old self, as her true nature is sleeping just below the surface. unecessary, just list the changes in personality and mention that they are a result of her continued grief

Badami’s interest primarily lay in combat training, she greatly enjoys sparring and practice matches at school, and the challenge of fighting grimm the few rare occasions she has encountered them. That is useful

When she is not training, she is either studying, working on the schematics for her weapon to improve it further, or practicing guitar. I guess this can stay

She doesn’t like playing for a crowd, and primarily plays in private, sometimes slipping out of the house at night to visit her grandfather’s grave and play for him. fine I guess

Misc Traits: Gnaws on the bones when eating meat, tends to tune people out and listen to music instead of engaging in conversation. Likes: Blues music, playing guitar, listening to her grandpa play, live performances Dislikes: Pop, punk, rock, and rap music; sweet foods, being bothered when she’s playing. I think that should help.