Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-24993958-20150401212851

Let’s see…

You can add: who uses the Nicknames and when or in what context, length of hair or a general indicator (like short or long).

Your semblance could use a small buff. It balances itself out with the fact that it still creates a shadow as well as the short duration AND respirte period between uses…no need to pull a kill condition on it as well; aura exhaustion will leave her as dead weight anyway.

…not related to her but you might want to take out the Romanian letters from Roșu Dezlănțui…wow…I wonder if this how French people felt when they heard about Jaune…anywho replace ș with sh which is pronounced identically in English(So he’d be Roshu) and find a way to do the same with the second name, being acurate is one thing, but being pronounceable is another.

Other than that she looks fine.