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On a seperate note, here's a revised background for my character, Shen Jiang. I'd like your guys' opinion on this if you want.

Background: Shen Jiang originally hails from a small town in Mistral. This town's locals are generally calm people and very well self taught. Shen was a boy that spent his free time fishing at the town's out of the way lake. He loves the tranquility and silence while he fishes as it makes him feel at peace. He doesn't always catch fish, but finds the act itself relaxing. Shen's parents weren't always around during a large portion of his life. Though they love and support him, they are away due to their jobs as Huntsmen for high-profile missions. They have to leave for extensive periods of time elsewhere, leaving Shen alone and becoming self-reliant with no other friends or family to be with. He didn't talk much with the others in his village and had so much time that all he did was fish and study in solitude. With no one to interact with Shen lived a life of isolation, longing to go out in the world. During the occasional Grimm attack on his town, he saw the fighting back as a the solution he was looking for: becoming a Huntsman and no longer living a life of loneliness. Shen went to a local combat school to train and become ready to apply to Haven in a few short years. His combat skills grew immensely and learned to use a calm mind to fight. As for his academics, he also read and studied the various strategies and leaders of Remnant's history to apply their skills to himself. This was not so he could only fight the Grimm, but to prepare for leaving the lonely existence that had haunted him for years. Currently he attends with Team FBHJ.