User blog:KuraiJack/Tell me what you think.

I would like to get your viewpoints on this character profile before I put it on the fanon wiki.

Name: Kurai Jack Jade.

Gender: Male.

Species: Bio-mechanical cyborg.

Weapon: Multi-purpose ghost blades.

Powers & abilities:Peak human strength, speed, reflexes, stamina, senses, durability and agility. Mastery of many martial arts. Genius-level intellect. Injury resistance. Quick-healing. Some skills in the use of dust.. Skilled swordsman. Cloaking ability. Can create temporary copies of himself. Due to a link between his armour and his blades he has the ability to control his blades from short distances.

Personality: He is an extremely calm and composed individual, remaining an enigma to both enemies and allies alike. As a result, not much is known of his true personality by anyone, although the has show some traits, such as a strong sense of justice, respect for his men, a strong dislike for those who look down on the fauna, an intense dislike to lose, fiercely dedicated and, borderline obsessive in accomplishing his goals.

History: He was born in a town inhabited by people who came form a long line of powerful hunters. He decided to go and study abroad for a while, but one day he saw some of his classmates about to attack a group of defenceless fauna, he defeated them in battle but the eyewitnesses thought that it was him attacking the fauna and buy court order was banned from all combat schools. Having no where to go, he decided to head back home, but when he arrived, he saw that it was under attack by the Grim. He tried his best to keep the Grim busy while the people evacuated, but was defeated and knocked unconscious. He then woke up to the horrible sight of his town, his own home, now in ruins. Then a man in a black robe approached him and offered him training alongside a number of other skilled men and women to become a hunter, he agreed, then he had some parts of his body replaced by bio-mechanics, (due to his injures,) and used his brocken blades to create the Ghost blades. Now he and his men roams through cities, using his new skills as a bounty hunter, catching criminals.

Please tell me what you think, suggestions, anything I could do to improve it. :)