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VedranTheII wrote: ShadowFiend1000 wrote: Member #2 of Team CRBN (Team Carbon)

-Name: Redgrave Porphyrius Sigh…don’t like the character at all, hell with the way you wrote him I imagine I’ll like the other 2 just as much. And it’s not even the fact you named a kid Redgrave and gave him a red coat while using a semblance (which is even less subtle than the last ons), it’s because you completely disrespect the canon.

We as fans of the show should make characters that neither try to contradict or one up every character in the show, it is our small but significant way in wich we show that we respect the power bar set by the writers as well as the universe they created.

But your last two oc’s have no problem stoimping over canon. You have them part of Ozpin’ s group, OZPIN’S group, a place that specifically denied access to Winter IHaveConnectionsWithAllDustProviders Schnee. You have them be multi weapon users with a semblance unlocked while being SELF TRAINED, in a universe where Ruby, a canonical prodigy that got admitted into Beacon 2 years earlier confessed to being garbage until she was taken under Qrow’s wing, making her feat seem meaningless. You try have them be so good they got to do incredibly difficult high stake missions, while somehow contributing NOTHING to the events of Volume 4, you make them do borderline illegal stuff to require an alias which Qrow was shown to neither have or need, implying they do more important missions than him, and to top it all off this and the last character you posted are borderline clones in terms of backstory with some minor stuff changed between them so you can pretend they are different characters.

Overall I can safely say I’m glad you decided to drop the association. In my defense with the contribution to vol 4 part, do I have to spell everything out? That is as good as spoiling the story. As for their combat skills, my idea of changing would be the characters did not attend Signal, but rather trained under a Huntsman who fights like that.