Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-203.177.28.219-20160113025211/@comment-203.177.28.219-20160113070919

Sigh....me to. I wanted people to critique the quality of the story itself not if the elements were completely true to canon (canon which is very much blurry). I'll make one final point for any who misunderstand the nature of the story. My characters hardly interact with the main cast. Nevara is just one of Cinder's fallen villains. Ember has the potential to be the nemesis for Ruby. Everything about Ash and Dust are specifics to make Ember's story stand out. I don't mean to say that Ash makes Grimm-human hybrids. It is a mysterious substance derived from a Grimm virus that give strange abilities. Cinder shows you can get powers from the Grimm with that glove in her possession. Stopping these experiments renders concerns about Ember destroying lore. It is the same as the X-Men: Day of Future Past. Mystique is built up as the catalyst of a dark future. But she is no longer a problem, and the story moves on to the real villain, Apocalypse. So in the end, no harm, no foul. Ruby is still the main character. Ember fades into obscurity. But for the briefest of moments, the audience can see what could have been.