Thread:MajoraSolaris/@comment-32557376-20171110061102/@comment-26226441-20171110071527

All these implements may turn whatever idea you have sour and unpopular. Doesn't sound like a story that a person who enjoys a meticulous reading would enjoy, nor does it seem like a story that connects to why we enjoy RWBY.

Your average typically created Modern AUs aren't normally well written, and another thing is that the characters are just different people who happen to have the same names as the cast. What I'm seeing here are different characters that just happen to have the same names as those from RWBY.

Sorry dude, but with what I'm seeing, this will flop like a fish. Maybe with luck you'll be able to get past 50 follows after your 100k words are through.