Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25266931-20161112032800/@comment-26018514-20161114160422

KNN005 wrote:

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EXAMPLE: RWBY as told by KNN005 in one long season of 25 episodes each 30mins long. A brief overview.

1) Ruby has graduated Beacon, works with Jaune, Ren, Blake, Weiss, Yang, Nora and Nikos as international hunters

2) Cinder does her plan in Vale working with Torch, Neo, Em, and Merc.

3) Ruby's and friends do detective work to discover who Cinder is and her motive and start hunting her down

4) One by one their Rogue Gallery (Em, Merc, Neo, and Torch) bite the dust but bought Cinder enough time...

5) Cinder gets her other half of the Maiden power and hauls ass

6) Qrow goes with Ruby's group to chase Cinder down but Glynda, CVFY and other Vale co-stars protect over run Vale. Ironwood fans out his army to protect other cities in case Cinder's plans to repeat the process at other towers.

7) Cinder accidently leads Ruby's group to Salem having no where else to go, Salem sics Grimm swarms and her head hanchos(Watts, Tyrian, and Hazel) on Ruby's group.

8) Ruby's group fights well but Jaune, Nikos and Weiss die. Ruby runs off, but Blake find evidence of Salem's intentions (books, lab reports, amoral shit)

9) Ruby makes it to Salem enraged and unfocused due to Weiss' death, loses. Qrow saves her, and dies.

10) Salem escapes. Ruby depressed but decided to make it right and as reinforcements arrive (all the heroes converge on the Salem's base) Ruby finds Salem on the roof, final battle, she wins

11) Fin Not gonna lie, that sounds terrible...  I mean why would they even be together?  Are they randomly neighbors like "friends?"  Because none of the MC's sound like they should be teammates post college(beyond squadmates... but even then that's more due to relationships like Arkos and Renora)

Jaune really shouldn't die(incompetent as he may be, luck of fools and all that)... and Weiss dying just sounds stupid... the only reasons to kill her are to stick it to Jaune or cause "Ice flower" drama.

Plus you have less than half a plot point per episode.