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Next up is Maki Kuronami and Amaya Kerberos

1) Basic Info - 10 points Well, I like how you used Cerberus in a non-edgy way.

2) Appearance - 20 points I’ve got no problems with any of this. It all sounds good to me.

3) Characteristics - 30 points

Background is good. Grimm attack escalation and town abandonment happens naturally for a believable reason, and I like the fact that it didn’t just outright slaughter everyone in town.

There’s something that bugs me about the personality, but I can’t quite lay a finger on it.

4) Trivia - 5 points Lol. Why is the baker so fond of meat? Wouldn’t he have been better becoming a butcher in that case?

5) Weapon - 10 points

That’s a very simple and boring weapon, to be honest. The greaves don’t even really need a mention here as they’re not even spiked. They’re just armour.

6) Semblance - 8 points

Herm. Herm. Herm. Personal dilemma. I don’t particularly like future sight semblances, especially one that gives you a full 5 seconds at tier one when in five seconds a graduated Huntsman can make at least 10 attacks and cross the length of Beacon’s courtyard. It feels OP because of that length. The strain and aura consumption balance it out a bit, as does the note that fast enough users can react to her reaction to the vision and change the outcome, but still. 5 whole seconds is a ‘’long’’ time in a proper fight.

7) Combat Info - 2 points

How does her landing strategy work? If she’s 5 seconds away from the landing, it’s not going to give her enough time to make adjustments in case it’ll end badly. And anything she’d see at that distance can be easily observed just by looking with her eyes.

And does bad aura control really mean you can take less hits from people? I thought your ‘shield’ was based on the amount of aura you have vs their strength, not your control. Jaune loses so much aura in fights because he doesn’t know how to block effectively or when dodging would be a better option.

Total: 85 points