Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-3257939-20150409044309

Sharing a fanfic as requested by the author in order to bring this thread back to life once more!

Notes

The only reason I'm sharing this is so you guys can have a good laugh at how similar this fanfic is to SAO.

Everyone speaks wonders about it, one of the best RWBY fanfics I ever read, loved it, write more, THE FEELS!, etc, etc. But in reality, the development, the characters, the events that move the plot, the romance... It's exactly like SAO. The characters are terrible, the romance is rushed (he even changed it so it becomes a harem with three girls after the protagonist who is somehow surrounded by women despite he was a loner just a few chapters ago), the plot and the development go from place to place without any context and finally: Jaune is a Deus Ex Machina physiologically speaking. The only good thing about this fanfic is the first chapter... just. like. SAO...

Sigh... thoughts people?