Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-2601:8C:4400:DF00:8474:F2F2:6CAD:6C71-20191201050641/@comment-5717877-20191201053512

Ooh, I like this fanfic:

Pros:

-Some of the author's predictions in this story turned out true in the main show

-I like how the author makes things pretty large scale in terms of events. I kinda wish the main show had some pretty large scale battles

-Lot's of pretty neat character interactions and dialogue

-There are some parts that really pull me in and keep me engaged and emotional

-Some of the OCs are pretty interesting, tho I'm glad that the author doesn't let them overshadow already established characters too much

-Some original ideas for this story could fit well in Remnant

Cons:

-Length can be a little off putting for some, and lately, I'm getting a little fatigued at how the author goes into excruciating detail of a fight scene, or just general background history of a person, place, thing, etc. I still bear with it tho

-Early chapters kinda show how much the author hated Pyrrha's death and it sometimes bled into his writing. Lately tho he's been keeping pretty level headed

-Some of the strong language can be toned down a bit for some characters. I dunno, RWBY has some mild cursing here and there, but anything to the level of "shit" and "fuck" would probably feel a little out of place. That's just me tho lol

-The author stated that he doesn't watch the main show anymore, so some ideas that were presented in this fic could conflict with what's going on rn. Tho I'll admit, some of his ideas and theories were written before being shown off in the main canon