Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20150719111502/@comment-24993958-20150722181927

Ok…Where do I begin…

Bajarias.josef wrote: Hmm.....but i never gave him a ranged weapon(boost jumping leaves him very vulnerable) so the blade semblance... There is nothing wrong with giving a character weaknesses, it helps with writing, it helps with world building, and it helps with grounding characters in reality, because no one person is good at everything. Secondly…you gave him a halberd for a weapon, and he only has 2 arms; giving him stuff he can throw does jack since he’ll need both arms to properly wield that thing, so again that sword semblance is nothing but counterintuitive…next.

Commander Ghost wrote:

Theirs probably(always) alot of grammar problems and i apologize about that...

1) Basic info:


 * Name: Ryu Tachibana
 * Physical traits: None


 * Misc traits: None

You don’t say?
 * Nickname(s): Mr. Tachibana(By most of his teachers), Mr. Hayashi(By most of his teachers)

I am not sure Ryu fits the cnr in this day and age…yes it stands for dragon, but my mind can’t settle for one…his second name helps but...to my knowledge the only time a characters first name does not fit the cnr is when it requires the full name to spell out a color…or am I wrong?

Different nicknames, same type of people use it? Either pick one or be a little more specific.

No physical or misc traits, no outfit, no physical description…there really isn’t much I can do to get an image of your character…he might as well be silouet from volume 1…

Not helped by a backstory that’s…kind of…there…you could at least make a not on how he lost his sister…heck it kind of clashes with his personality…no qualms about killing…why? His backstory indicates a pretty stable life devoid of anything that could kill off a persons innate fear of death…oh so his sister died and he blamed himself so he kills people…why did you put that in the notes as opposed to...you know…the backstory section used to justify ones personality?

...overall...add more stuff.

Phantomlink959 wrote: I really do need a better combat outfit for Kapree Corin. any suggestions? i want to to be somethign water friendly, which is why initially went with  wetsuit. so why not stick with that but remove the plates?