Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26417457-20190922000524/@comment-43897075-20190924164755

P.s, it's very possible you're getting confused with Criticizm From your Revised Story and Criticizing the Transition From Your First Two Stories to This One.

We're not talking about, in any way, how you improved from your previous stories. We're talking about THIS story, and how you can make it better. Hopefully that clears up your confusion.