Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170424154014/@comment-26397825-20170511041215

Kirito Rose wrote: ◦ -Name: Jayden Skilder

◦ Means painter in Afrikaans

Painter is a profession, not a colour. The name has no clear CNR connection, and is too stretchy to count.

◦ -Occupation: works as a painter

How original. A painter called Painter.

◦ Wears a type of helmet that controls his semblance

Wut. That's not how semblances work.

His father was working on how to replicate and manipulate brain waves for possible AI units. Using this knowledge his father mad him his semblance nullifier and director. That's not how semblances work.

His mother made home his spear that combines paint dust and micro bots that he can control using his semblance. Rather than being controlled by his semblance, why not just have the helmet be a control for the nanobots and have the semblance be a completely separate thing.

◦ -Personality: Severe bi polar disorder, adventurous, reads between the lines, emotionally driven

I'm not seeing anything even remotely suggesting any sort of bipolar disorder in his backstory or personality.

◦ II) Semblance:

◦ -Name:Technopathy

◦ -Short Description: Ability to astral project his brain waves into anything electrical

◦ -Notes: If unchecked his semblance can project feelings onto others and this can harm other people because of the randomness of his brain, his severe bi polar disorder is at fault for that one.

Projecting emotions into others has nothing to do with technopathy. Either he's an empath or a technopath, not both.

He has a lot of unfinished sections that really need fleshing out before more can be reviewed on him, but that's the biggest flaws I can see so far.