Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24573226-20160623204034/@comment-14138255-20160827033536

Arrias99 wrote: Phantomlink959 wrote: That is the most blatant gary stu bullshit I have ever seen.

"i have a macguffin so everybody wants a piece of me"

No offense intended, just calling it like i see it.

Take it from someone who's been stupid enough to write that kind of stuff before; burn it to the ground, throw away your characters, and start over again.

You'll be glad you did later. Dude, will you chill out? I just an idea I made up, it's not going to be in the story.

Also, if somebody has an item that has been thought as a myth, wouldn't it be realistic if the whole world goes after you?

Naranja's sword is not the only powerful artifact around, there's like nine other transforming swords, and it goes all the back to the days of myth.

One more thing, some of the most critically acclaimed animes uses macguffins, doesn't it? Forgive him, he's a cynical man who has little patience for dumb things. He is however a valued member of the community and he was not wrong about  the character you made. The fact everyone is literally fighting for your character is over blown as is, but the fact that he found a priceless, powerful artifact is too much as well. The thing with OC's is they must not surpass the main character of the source material, otherwise they will not be percieved well (there are exceptions, but name one fan fic that does it well).

Name a series and I'll tell you (don't say HunterXHunter again, I haven't gotten around to it).