Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-3391158-20170904153455/@comment-5.254.65.11-20170906171931

to ChishioKunrin

Yes, that's what I was talking about. I kinda see it.

to  WC-83

I just feel this is something Blake's storyline really needs. Well, I'm not a professional writer, still, even I can say that you can not waste your screen time for almost nothing just like V4 does. RWBY, with it's comparatively short episodes, just can't have the luxury of this.

I mean, come on: Blake had so much screen time in V4 - but there still are a lot of holes about her story and (mostly) motivation. As far as you've caused this problem - why not to fix it? I suppose, M&K just don't think that it's actually "a problem". But I do.

Well, I have to admit: I have seen a lot of problems with writing in V4. As far as I am a RWBY fan, it really wasn't easy for me to come through this volume - though, at the beginning I was really optimistic. Now I'm not. It's good if M&K will pay more attention to such things in future - but if they don't?

Sorry for such a depressive mood.

to 73.Anon.52

Thank you, you're so kind.^^ I'll keep practicing.

to  ChishioKunrin

5. Well, at least they could make some hints in Blake's dialogue with Ozpin. Some kind of "Does you ... family approve your intention of hiding your Faunus identity?". It even doesn't need to be answered. Just a little hint for the audience.

Thank you too, I'll keep doing my best.^^

6. Yes, that's the point.

7. I don't know why - these... flowers just looked as some tails of fish. xD Sorry, that still was really foolish of me.