Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25343309-20150430230909/@comment-24993958-20150527184130

Ahpolki Inika wrote:


 * Name: Kai Canus Doran

The point of face is to give a hint of its shape. Although animated shows will have you believe every person has the same face, in real life that is untrue. Use it to point out someone has a square jaw or pudgy face, for instance.
 * Personality: ...While his (he is) "down-to-Earth", he isn't some super-serious person....

His backstory is load of buffalo bull dung. I was going to brush past the orphanage hoping myth that I find to be quite the rarity in real life, but then you have him save his orphanage from a Grimm that tore off his arm and incapacitated TWO hunters just by unlocking his aura?...uh…no, denied, he gets my honorary “SUE” badge just for that.

He’s also overloaded in the weapon department for someone that is introduced around the same age as the cast of the show. He has 3 weapons, 2 of which use foldable tech, and 2 of which utilizes elemental dust, that by all accounts he shouldn’t even have the money to use effectively since dust (the elemental kind) has been shown to be a bit of a rarity probably due to their cost, a cost a person that lives in an ORPHANAGE shouldn’t be able to support....needs better explanation and/or cutting down some of the extra unnecessary content and wait till he upgrades the weapons to put them there.