Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25266931-20161112032800/@comment-28345522-20161114200037

KNN005 wrote: 1) All the character development and interaction and world building would still be there. I'll say it again, that was a list of major things to happen. It was a not an indept coverage of all the subtle moments when the characters develop.

2) High castle, this is a hypothetical list of events. If I was writing the story the public would know Ironwood wasnt to blame because he never would've brought an army to Vale. He would've met with Oz and share info on current events dealing with Salem and helped Oz's group hatch a counter plan.

3) I don't believe in showing the start of every meeting or beginning of every bond. People are smart. If they hear characters talk about their lives together and...

4) But you're not reading or watching something just to see another person whine about being scared. You're watching to see justice done.... 1) You'd have to completely the overhaul the story and change it to something unrecognizable to the original story for it to work. Not a few simple plot point changes.

2) ...Once again, you fail to adress the problem Cinder and Co. are relying on the Vytal festival for their plans. Ironwood went to Ozpin to address the Cinder problem, and already brought his sizable fleet before he was charge with security. Cinder's plan, from the very beginning, was to make Atlas look like the badguys. So how is he supposed to roll his fleet out somewhere else without causing problems?

3) But you end having to dumb the characters down because their personal conflicts don't really exist now. The characters we have now are because of their personal issues they're trying to solve in school. Again the story won't really be RWBY by then.

4) That sounds like a more personal. Stories are supposed to tell a tale in however it sees fit to entertain it's audience. Whether or not it has a message, or trying to be serious, doesn't really matter if nobody will listen.