Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20150927024310/@comment-24857712-20151221020806

SpiritedDreaming wrote: See, this is where you start to slip a little.

I was under the impression Cyan was becoming a Hunter because he felt he owed a debt to the Hunter who took him in and cared for him. But if the Hunter took him in then didn't give a crap, Cyan has no reason to feel gratitude and has no reason to become a Hunter instead of just some street punk.

Giving teenaged kids the titles for being the masters of the five fighting styles is just pure sueism, I'm afraid. If the titles is reserved for masters, the kids certainly wouldn't get it as it takes years to become a master of one fighting style, especially if Cyan's been brought to a new town and Haruryu has been off having confrontations with Grimm.

My suggestion; ditch the titles. Ditch the idea that the Hunter who took the kids in didn't care (he'd still send the kids to Signal if they wanted to go, as that is what they want to do and he would encourage more protectors for the Kingdom as it is his job as well). And definitely ditch the idea that the kids became masters of their fighting styles as young teens, even before they went to Beacon.

And ditch the idea that these fighting styles are unique to the village too, as they most certainly aren't. Anyone who comes and learns it in the past can easily go to another place and teach someone else there, which means the fighting style has been shifted a bit and is therefore no longer unique to the village. The titles for the masters wouldn't be a unique thing either, as there would be multiple adults who would have mastered it and earned the title. oh i see..so don't give em the tiles......even late story where they managed to master em in beacon???