Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160711184711/@comment-25936766-20160813145353

@Baja: First of all, don't make such a clustered mess like that...either add a line to separate each Semblance, or at least put more space between them.

Compressed Oxygen Bombs: 1-Name sucks, plain and simple.

2-"Likely friendly fire" is not really a limitation of the Semblance, as it is not related at all to the Semblance itself.

3-Tier 1 can make up to 4 spheres, Tier 2 up to 8, and Tier 3 up to 20? The jump in quantity between T2 and T3 seems very big.

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Lock-On Sight: 1-I feel the name also sucks, though not to the same extent as the previous one. This one at least has some attempt at creativity.

2-I cannot understand at all how a person could focus on multiple people, even less 12-36 people, at the same time unless they were all clustered together. If there's a lamp on the right side of your vision, a guy on your front, and a car on your left side of your vision, if you focus on one, you won't notice the others. At best, you see them blurred because they are at the corner of your vision.

If you asked me, I would just make it so his vision goes greyscale and he sees everyone's Auras, like some sort of thermal vision.

3-The passive ability....seriously unnecesary. Aster could just memorize the color, or write it down somewhere.

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Goetic Construct: 1-The name is good. Though the construct's name, Astaroth.....it hurts me, because of how unfitting it is of the real Astaroth. He sounds like wolverine with fur, when Astaroth was a naked man with wings, a crown, riding a wolf and holding a snake. But this is more of a personal reason.

2-I assume from the effect's description that he can only make that single construct?

3-Passive Ability sounds more like simple lack of control over the Semblance than a real passive ability.