Thread:Arkantos95/@comment-14138255-20170310034514/@comment-28288412-20170313232451

Hi, didn't think I'd find myself on a fanfic making thread both due to general lack of interest and also minimal knowledge of Dark Souls.

That said, I gave the first chapter of this a read and I have to say I'm impressed so far and also interested. I also have some comments to make which I am reluctant to do using my gmail account due to containing my actual name. If you wouldn't mind me commenting here though...

The estus flask. I believe it is anyway, at the end of the chapter. A glaring thing to me personally, despite it being fairly minor I suppose, is what she did with it. Is she taking it with her? Leaving it there? Reason for either? Just seems like a detail that should be included as it seemed to glossed over after she noticed the sword and shield.