Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-14138255-20130809144315/@comment-14817061-20130916004652

PerhapsTheOtherOne wrote: MakiKuronami wrote: Bigbadwolfman wrote: good thinking.

So...I guess we start the episode with Maki giving orders to the white fangs. Stuff like "get into position, I don't want to see a single one of them without a red dot on their forehead!" Our heroes can to nothing but just shift sheepishly in their seats and her team takes point and she starts talking again. "seeing how I hold all the cards here, I'll give you one way out of here. If you all tell me everything about the ship and your bosses, I'll go and never come back to this rathole pigsh*t town again. I think it's in you best intrest to just let me win here, after all I am a maste- (starts going into her crazy speech of anime villainy here).

Does this sound good? That sounds legit enough. Here's a few lines I hope someone manages to insert around episode 2.

"That's cute. But my niceness have expiration dates. And it just expired for all of you ago"

(If they manage to win against White Fang)

"Oh you goddamn lazy chicken shit! If you wanna get a job done, you gotta do it yourself!"

(If they're being defeated by White Fang)

"Sheesh, I feel embarrassed to get captured by a bunch of chucklefucks like you guys!""

"The captain always falls with his ship! Blow shit up, bastards!" Well,can we also insert a few "blah blah blah" monologue moments as well,like I suggested earlier? I feel like "EP2: Put Your Hands Together" should be mainly more comedic moments and character/plot reveals before starting the real action. "EP3: Forest Firefight(ers)" will be full of comedic action,dramatic action,and revelationary action!

I just wanna say, when we get to the action scenes I can handle it. :) Feels like i'm not doing enough for the project.