Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-14138255-20170320024103/@comment-25936766-20170422025636

WC-83 wrote: 1-I'm trying to get things to be more action packed as well, even breaking some of Dark Souls' mechanics.

2-I can't really change the setting mid-fic I'm afraid (of course, I can just abandon this fic and work on the PMMM/Bloodborne idea I had, but that's hardly sporting, espescially when I can just write better on the current fic).

3-To be perfectly honest, Pyrrha wasn't terribly interesting  to begin with. She was just generically nice and perfect. 1-Be careful with that. Dark Souls focuses more on being prepared and careful, much slower and paused, instead of frenzied and quick like RWBY. Making things more action-packed than nerve-packed can be good, but remember: It's still Dark Souls.

2-You could start once you finish this one, either under a pseudonym or with the same account. Use what you learned making this one to make another one.

3-Which kind of makes me feel she would be more sympathetic than she was to Greirat.

Also, a question: Multiplayer. Invasions, or lending a helping hand. I mean, she could get attacked by someone, or she (maybe after becoming a Sunsis, since you want her to get the Sunlight Spear) could go to someone else's world.

...Of course, Sunbros in DS3 can also get medals by invading, not just helping.