Thread:Alhazad2003/@comment-24573226-20161229144637/@comment-5430952-20161230113152

Hello,

I'm not trying to pump up the drama anymore, not with that Taiyang edit anyway, I admit "disheartened" is much accurate than "disgruntled." As for Raven, I doubt she told anyone of her plans, or else Tai would've tried to stop her. And yes, your description of Ruby being antagonistic towards Cinder is definitely more precise. As for Ozpin, if he still had his own body he wouldn't have "moved on," so to speak. It just seemed like common sense that he lost his old body hence why he's now in another. Wasn't trying to be overly dramatic, just trying to read between the lines. A good story doesn't need to beat its readers over the head with the facts, if it's done properly the readers can deduce the truth without it being shoved in their faces. Metroid Other M was an example of really bad storytelling, where it feels like the writers are treating us like idiots by making things too obvious. Thankfully RT isn't doing that, and I'm glad. Thanks for the input, and have a wonderful day. :D

Alhazad2003 (talk) 11:31, December 30, 2016 (UTC)