Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-33160573-20171126182143

HookshotHotshot wrote: ok heres the answers Ok. I don't know why, but I thought the lie was just "She's fine", which made me question why he wasn't surprised when he couldn't contact her. Although contact would still be an issue. How old were they when she died? I doubt his mother could've hidden the death of a friend from him for more than a month tops.

little under a year he was 13 at the time. Which character is yours and which is his again?

ember Ok, so the anger is a little more justified. The way you'd laid out the backstory it kind of came out of nowhere. The anger still feels a bit extreme; maybe "abusing power" can just be his biggest dislike instead of causing him to go into "Kill Everything" mode (my definition of 'going ape$hit'). Maybe.

oh no its not kill everything rage its more like baddly beating rage, ember is murder everything I'm trying to work on giving feedback on more aspects of the character, rather than just the things I have issues with. I was saying that, while nothing special, the weapon didn't have any glaring flaws. Simple is fine. AC Is right regarding Forging the weapon at the school, but if you want a simple weapon, go for it.

ok hne idk how to do the split quote thing.