User blog comment:Hidden Scorpius XI/Volume 3. Hypeness and Skepticism./@comment-25555436-20150623025407

-I'm 100% sure it's written "Skepticism", without any E before the S.

-All of the comedy? Perfectly executed? Did you erase the Crater Joke from your mind? (Can't blame you, TBH. They did fail epicly with that joke, which was sadly one of their actually-original jokes).

Ok, nitpicking aside, they seriously need to amp up their game. It's their fault so many people bash RWBY, it's their job to fix it.

-They seriously need to show the Grimm as actual threats, NOW. If only the adult ones are dangerous, then show one already. One like the White Beowulf from GE.

-They need to learn how to perform World Building. The exposition needs to seem natural instead of forced. If they are going to keep using the WoR, at least make it give actual, significative, new information. Like what does each color in Dust represent (we know some, but not all). Or what happens if you combine them.

-No more inside jokes, please! We need more original, RWBY jokes. Ones that actually are funny and make some sense. Not throw bullshit like Zwei's Reality-Breaking existence or trying to pull the Crater Joke with no crater.

-Hell yes. They need to pull Untwists, Red Herrings, Subversions....anything, as long as it makes this show less fucking obvious. I know Monty didn't care about clichés and stuff, but they could have at least tried to Play With The Tropes to make them less predictable.