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Phantomlink959 wrote:

Thane Tefras

explain the name CNR,

nothing more to say other than what annon said already. not sure the purpose of the voice commands when he could just use a switch, dial, or some sort of aura control.

semblance is simple and effective, maybe explain what things look like when viewed through his semblance

background is meh but not terrible. lots of spelling errors. no specific advice

not bad for a Thanatos inspired character, they can be hard to pull off.

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Robin Sherwood

passable, but there is already a robin hood in the cannon characters.

not sure about his weapon, the explanation is a bit jittery feeling, at least that's the first word that comes to mind. how exactly do the dust arrows explode on a trigger when they are pure energy and do not have any sort of detonator/receiver device.

put undiscovered in semblance since his aura isn't unlocked, but he needs to have a semblance once it is unlocked.

landing strategy and fighting style are good.

personality doesn't seem to fit with Robin hood, but I've never actually read the story so my knowledge of it is limited.

background is kind of weird and confusing in general.

not even going to touch that last bit of his profile.

papilion in a bit Thane: -If I remember right, Thane was derived from Thanatos, god of death in greek mythology, often represented as a winged man, sort of like an angel. Rarely mentioned compared to the other gods though.

-Not sure you have the right to call out spelling errors Phantom...

-He could (and probably should) use a switch or something. Doesn't mean he has to. It at least adds variety. Impractical and in practice shameful in comparison, but eh.

Robin: -We don't have a canon Robin Hood character Phantom. What are you talking about.

-Esentially the weapon was a prototype of sorts. It's supposed to handle the Dust control by itself instead of forcing the user to use Aura, so technically the weapon manipulates the Dust arrows's energy to make them explode, though Robin doesn't know and likely doesn't care. Of course, anyone with Aura and knowledge of it's use can also explode the arrows by themselves.

-Why need? Jaune's aura is now unlocked and he still doesn't have an exact Semblance. "Undiscovered" is the same as "Doesn't have one" in this case, and just like that, it means one may get/discover one later. Same thing.

-Robin Hood's personality itself is unknown, his incarnations vary greatly. Some are noble, others are assholes. Some are good pals, others are traitors with no honor.

-What last...oh, that. What's wrong with it?