Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20141207154400/@comment-25555436-20141217134153

Sounds ambitious. And surprisingly similar to Judgement in some ways:

-The Quantum-verse holds a good number of similarities to Nexus.

-They are both ruled by powerful people and/or groups. In this case, Veda. In Judgement, Valhalla as a whole.

-The Quantum-verse has elements of many different worlds, just like Nexus.

-Both the Quantum-verse and Nexus have many habitants whose power is usually OP to a point.

Now, the story seems interesting, though at times hard to imagine. But there's one thing I didn't like from that long summary:

The protagonist. He sounds like the typical shonen anime protagonist. Even worse, when you described him as (eventually) a super Ichigo/Kirito. 2 of the biggest Marty Stus I've ever seen (Ichigo is everything, Kirito is one big motherfucking Marty Stu). I personally hate Marty Stus, other people see characters like them as annoying and unoriginal. Subversion of tropes may be required.

There's also the "Guy turns out to be the Chosen One that will save us all once and for all because he's the only one that can actually do something" cliché.

There's also the fact that it seems like you're introducing thing after thing after thing. Like if this was a restaurant (You see that sandwich? Good, for there's also Hamburgers! You like them? Good, for there's also pizza! Tasted good? Good, for there's also hot dogs! ....).

That part, depends a lot on the execution. Some things introduced: Fine. Many things introduced one after another, some out of nowhere like the Mania, it's risky. Done right, it adds to the mistery of the world(s), and will be probably liked by a good fraction of the fandom. Done wrong, it will feel like constant Ass Pulls by the writer, which will turn people off.

Sounds very interesting, and the backstory sounds much better developed than many animes I've seen. However, the actual premise doesn't seem too different from other shonen animes, same with the protagonist. People will still like it, but many potential viewers may be turned off by some of those things. It's hard to please everyone when you bring something original (RWBY) and then do something not-exactly-original, or not as original as expected (RWBY).