Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25025248-20150719005825/@comment-109.156.105.181-20170115100935

If I had a chance to do anything different about the show it would be the volume 3 ending.

I would have had Cinder aim her arrow at Ozpin (either incapacitating or killing him) after she realises she wasn't fast enough to stop Pyrrha recieving the other half of the maidens powers (giving Pyrrha and Cinder the reason for facing one another I think was lacking)

But I'd ultimately have Pyrrha lose (her death was planned from the beginning) because Jaunes in the middle of the conflict and she's forced to protect him...

I would have Ruby (after Ren and Nora tells her Jaune and Pyrrha are missing) witness signs of the conflict and arrive to see that Cinder is about to kill Jaune (who doesn't want to leave Pyrrha even though she's gone) and unleash her silver eyes to save him.