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RayStrikeAbius wrote: Character looks decent to me. The relationships with canon characters is always super-iffy territory, but if it's a WF OC then it's partly unavoidable. Just don't have them playing too too big a role.

Weapon and fighting style are a bit simple, but there's nothing wrong with that (though personally I'd find something more specific than just "brute force". Because just "brute force" inplies there's no discipline or method to his attacks beyong mindlessly swinging his axes at a target, which doesn't sound like something such a 'skilled warrior' would do). Semblance looks like it was ripped out of Dragon Age, but so long as it functions appropriately.

I will say that the Landing Strategy is far too simple. You realize he's falling from a huge distance, which would cause considerable damage to his Aura on landing normally, if not deplete it entirely. He can't even use his Semblanc to reduce the damage, because it draws from the earth around him, and he'd be high in the air (and wouldn't have enough time to draw enough material in the time between when he gets close enough to the ground and when he hits the ground). Unless his Aura reserves are downright huge, it'd be best to think of something else. I'll admit he's one of my weaker OCs. Didn't have much of an idea for his weapons and Sembalnce. No idea for his landing style either since he's hardly flug into battle or anything. The idea for his Semblance actually came from Darksiders, where War would use a similar ability. The wepaon in turn was orignally twin tomahawks that could convert into pistols, but I didn't think that they'd fit his character. Any ideas on how to improve him?