Talk:Ruby Rose/@comment-18396318-20150924201425

Okay, so regarding my edit that's being undone.

"Of course, her ability to analyze and quickly make plans is a primary attribute which landed her the position of leader in the first place."

I don't see how that's remotely relevant to her mechanical skill. Which is debatable itself, given that it's more likely just an enthusiasm for weapons, but that's neither here nor there.

It's also phrased horribly. If we wanted to phrase it objectively and informatively, it would be something more like:

"Ruby has also shown an ability to quickly make plans for her team, which may have contributed to her appointment as team leader."

So why are we insisting on keeping the sentence?