Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25857155-20150213020036/@comment-25857155-20150222012415

.... Don't even get me started, Baja. We've discussed your wolf-Faunus OC. You did make some major improvements, but.... it's not enough yet, sorry. I can't buy into it. He still has too much to him. Chernyee is probably the best of your OCs, but... that name.... >.> Also, the throwing stars are a little unnecessary. Just a teense.

Gelb sounds like he needs some toning down. Also, unless he carries around a very risky fuel tank everywhere, his weapons are a bit impractical, since they wouldn't be able to be used for very long at a time without reloading. You also need to flesh out your semblances a bit more. Chernyee's is mostly alright, if a bit on the powerful side, since by your description he is incapable of manipulating light from fires, molten stone, or other similar sources. However, you completely failed to mention the effects that your characters' semblances have on their Auras, and Pyrokenesis is incredibly vague. Is it unlimited? Does he just sprout fire from his fingertips?

Get where I'm going with this? Work on it a little more. Also, Carmine? Really? ^.^;;