Talk:Round One/@comment-9464517-20151026000702

(copy-pasted from discussion thread)

So, Ruby visits Summer's memorial, Team RWBY has a fight... and that's about it.

The pacing was glacial, the exposition was fairly clunky, the dialogue was poor (someone really needs to have a word with these guys about what "on-the-nose" means).

I will say that the fight scene was better than I expected, it was pretty funny at times, and the initial scene was quite poignant. I especially liked the way in which the sunlight shone onto Ruby and off her cape.

Also, I feel really nasty saying this, but Neath doesn't sound anything like Monty. It felt a bit jarring, especially given how much dialogue Ren had in this episode. They didn't really have any alternatives, of course.