Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160207042716/@comment-26397825-20160228065636

The wording on this sounds a bit awkward to me. Any suggestions for helping to clear up wording would be appreciated.

Name: Static

User(s): N/A

Type: Aural

Purpose: Defensive

Short description: When struck, the enemy’s striking limb is left unresponsive for five seconds. In the case of weapons, effect travels through weapon to affect limb holding it for 3 seconds.

Activation cue: The struck area sparks with electricity

Range: Personal

General limitations: Cannot jump between ranged/weapons not attached and the attacker, does not give power up. Only affects strikes that would drop aura levels and due to your own punches not damaging your aura, cannot be used offensively. Only affects struck area, cannot be redirected through another part of the body to strike somewhere else on the enemy.

Passive ability(s) (if any): User’s aura affects the motor functions of the limb which struck them, travelling 30cm up the limb. Limb is affected for 5 seconds; in the case of travelling through melee weapons to enemy, duration is dropped by 25% for every 50cm of weapon it must travel through.

Notes: Gotta catch ‘em all. =3