Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160101143127/@comment-203.177.28.219-20160113022721

I wanted to create something that could actually work as a spin-off series to RWBY, with its villains and over-arching story. I didn't want it to be simply the many adventures and misadventures of my OCs. I understand many of the ideas seem iffy. So many details are subject to change. The more the show clarifies lore, the more I have to work with. Can you tell me what seems to be a plot hole or needs clarification from this story?