Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160524033118/@comment-27082610-20160531045924

Okay, to start with, no one who's 6'4" and 234lbs is going to be described as lean. That's overweight on the BMI, which means this one's either a serious lifter or a total fatass.

I'm not detecting anything really wrong with the background, but why does she dislike the White Fang? It wasn't justified in her personality or background, and you already had enough things in there that throwing it in for padding doesn't make sense. Also, and this is just a personal nitpick, maybe switch boredom to something like down-time or inactivity.