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Shiyilang wrote: -Name: Paranoia Perception

-User: N/A

-Introduction: User can hear the thoughts of people in distress

-Description: When activated, user is telepathically linked to anyone who is experiencing negative emotions. Requirements is that the person is mentally stressed.

-Range: Long

-Type: Psychic

-Purpose: Utlility

-Visual Cue: The target's aura glows, user's aura glows as well

-Auditive Cue: Target's thoughts can be heard by the user

-Tier N:

1.) Can randomly hear a single person's distress when activated

2.) Can hear multiple people's distress when activated

3.) Can pinpoint specific thoughts, Semblance becomes fear-based mind reading, any fear or other negative thoughts can be heard by user, such as information that is trying to be hidden or weaknesses.

-General Limitations: Cannot hear all thoughts. Requires fear, paranoia, or other negative emotions. The tier 3 abilities are limited to only one person, though regular distress can be heard through multiple people. Damn, this is a lot like the Semblance I'm using for my current WIP RWBY OC. Though mine differs in that it's nearly always active (kind of like Qrow's) and cannot pinpoint specific individuals instead the user "feels" all negative emotions around him within a limited range. It also isn't telepathy, just an enhanced perception of other people's negativity (like a personal Spidey Sense).

As for feedback, what is the effective range of the Semblance on a whole? Like, a few feet or several yards away? Also, I think it would be more useful if the user could pinpoint the thoughts  of one person for all of the tiers instead of just the last one. The other abilities in Tier 3 are fine where they are.