Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-3965075-20150620202833/@comment-25857155-20150719104536

Ghost, the character looks mostly ok, but it's seriously bugging me that you keep using the wrong "too". I counted at least four different times where you used "too," which means "also" or is used in "too much," instead of the correct "to", as in "to do something" or "done to someone." You also split Aidan's name in half at some point in the Trivia section.

That's all this particular shark has for you right now, though I'm more than half asleep at present.