Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20150605221100/@comment-25799194-20150606133614


 * Holds up hands* Right. Got it. He sucks. Don't write in the future. I'll just, eesh, don't know. Rewriting him will be a pain. And I know about the colour name rule. It's just really hard. I'm already bad with names as it is. I thank you for the criticism though, I should have realised the Gary Stu-ness, but unfortunately, as there is no actual set definition for Mary Sue or Gary Stu, it's hard to detect. For me, at least. And if there is a difference between the two rather than just gender names, then I could not actually detect a Gary Stu at all. It's not really a problem I've come across in writing before because basically you could say everything has an element of Gary or Mary.

Again, thank you for the criticism. The only thing I can't change is when I ship OCs with main charaters. I've just been, isolated, you could say with my creations. I don't do it all the time, but you know, if it happens it happens. Haven't really had to change it before. Hard for me to believe that so much detail could be put into a Gary Stu, but I suppose I shouldn't be surprised. Again, thanks for pointing this out. *Goes back to drawing board*