Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161030235452/@comment-26397825-20161115105942

Next up, VedranTheII with Filosa Rubble.

1) 10 points Nice earring, very unique.

2) 16 points The outfit sounds like it could be interesting, but I think you've thrown too many different shapes in there. All the different custo embroidered flowers in various colours make her sound boho or hippy-ish. The pieces themselves are pretty standard outside the stitching, and I think you could have tied it together a bit better with a set design or theme between the pieces. Or even just multiple Dst types sewn into each piece to create coloureful images that tie together rather than have an individual image for each piece of clothing.

3) 21 points That poor kid. And that's a..convoluted way to make a child. I mean, it makes sense, but why didn't Miller just agree to bare him a child but only on the condition that he'd raise it on his own? She could have disappeared into the woodwork again and not had to stick around to rear the kid if she really didn't want to; either way Tremotino would get his wish.

How is one oth involved and detached at the same time? A bit of elaboration or an example would help here. Does she put her all into something, but seem like it simply bores her? Or does she feign interest and do something, but people can tell by her blank expression that she's not really into it?

Lack of responsibility over her life..I think you mean lack of control over what she does with her life.

4) 5 points Interesting notes on her relationships with her parents, and it makes me wonder how she'll react when she finds out. There's not really anyone else that has a part in her backstory, so it makes sense it's really short.

5) 12 points Is the muzzle of the gun built into the shoe, or is it a separate piece attached to the outside of the shoe? And I'm a bit confused on how channeling the aura into the tips will stop them from digging into the ground, unless you specifically shape that aura to be a platform over the tip so it's flat against the ground.

6) 15 points Oh dear. One singular note, constantly buzzing in your ear. That would get disorientating and annoying fast. Interesting way of balancing it too; she becomes silent, but she can only hear that note while she is silent so if someone spots her they can ambush her, even if they can't hear that she's there.

7) 7 points Heh. That typo. 'Seaweed'. I know you mean sewn, but it amuses me. Her fighting style reflects her real lack of desire to actually be a Huntress, being focused around basic stuff that anyone can do.

When using her boots, does she opt for a kickboxing style of attack, or perhaps something more structured like Muay Thai, or something completely off beat like breakdancing?

Bonus points: ...There's no Halloween theming here, so no bonus points I guess.

Total: 86 points