Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-24068534-20180111223750

HookshotHotshot wrote: Hmmm...

I do agree that his personality is pretty generic. As Phantom mentioned, there's nothing inherently wrong with that, but it's boring. I have a few things you may want to try to add a bit more to him.

First, how does he interact with his teammates? That can help give us a bit more depth and context for your character.

Second, if you're basing your character's personality off of a character like Kakashi, I feel like he's not going to be all that interesting by default. From what I've seen of Kakashi, I'd describe him as bored, relaxed, and apathetic. There's nothing wrong with that, but there's nothing too interesting about it either. I get wanting an introverted tactician character, but I would take some of that and use it as a basis, building a few more interesting traits in yourself.

I'm not sure where you want to take this character, and I'm nowhere close to an expert, but there's my two cents.

 As for a Semblance, there are plenty of ideas regarding an analytic nature, from visual slow motion to a built in zoom-and-enhance.

 Lastly, what do you mean, "Story element"?

Sure, I'd be willing to hear the ideas you've thrown around.

As for story element, like a character arc: At one point, I wanted Savetis to encounter Adam.I was thinking that when Adam learns he has Faunus parentage, he tries to get Satevis on his side to prove a point that someone has to either choice Human or Faunus and they can't reconcile them. And Savetis at one point actually starts to feel that maybe Adam does have a point as Adam points out the lack of progress in human/Faunus relations and it was a system made by humans which had made Satevis suffer. How does that sound?
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