Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160612040111/@comment-27447621-20160619192614

@Ray

Fleecy might work as either a kind name or a taunt, but other than that, I'm not coming up with many nicknames

@Sentry

So, here are the issues I found for Rozi and Kanach

Rozi

So, you say she's a full-time entertainer, and she's 17. If, as Ozpin says, "Applicants must first pass a rigorous entrance exam", she probably would have needed some form of training. But if she's a full-time entertainer, she wouldn't have been able to get that training from a lower-level combat school like Sanctum unless that Grimm attack happened when she was really young. If Sanctum is a four-year school (which is what I'm assuming), it starts teaching students at age 13, so to go to a combat school before the age of 17 when she enters this school (Beacon, I assume? I don't see the name listed…) she would have to be between 13 and 16 when the attack took place. 13 or 14 is early to be a full-time entertainer, and if she only starts learning combat at 15 or 16, she would've had to work really hard to pass the entrance exam to get into Beacon. I'm a bit confused, when did the Grimm attack happen, and when did she start to learn combat?

I must have missed Rozi's Semblance if it was on the Semblance thread, could you elaborate on the Mic and Amp glyphs? What exactly do they do, and how many of each can be placed are both questions that come to mind…

And I assume she's shooting at the ground with Stage Defender's bullets to help her land, correct? Or is she using sound?

Everything else about the character seems great!

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Kanach

So he has Camouflage outfits? Do they change depending on his background (do they change from Desert Camo to Urban Camo depending on his environment, for example, or does he have to change when he goes from Forest to Desert?

Again the issue arises of 'when is this concert?' How old are the characters at this point? Kanach lives in a village, which means he has a legitimate reason to have his Aura unlocked, but you said he had it unlocked a few years earlier, so if the concert happens when everyone's 13, I think 10 or 11 may be a tad early to have already unlocked his Aura. But that's just me…

One more Backstory problem I can see. You say he's from a village, which, to me, implies that it's outside the walls of Vale. Blake also came from a village, and she said "if you can't fight, you can't survive". Assuming this is the case, someone in the village would have had some combat training, and I assume all the able-bodied adults would, so they could help defend their home and family. Kanach could easily have taken hits for Rozi (and in fact I like that detail), but Huntsmen wouldn't have needed to arrive; the village's adults would have taken care of the Grimm threat, including that Beowulf in question. Now, his run in with the Beowulf could have taught Kanach that he needed to learn how to fight, which led him to become a Huntsman, but as it stands, there's a bit of a problem.

One more thing, what's the area of effect of Suppressor? Or does it only affect one person, making them partially invisible and suppressing sounds that they make?

And the rest of the character looks good to me.



Besides Background issues, I think the characters work, and looking at the team as a whole I think they would work well together.