Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160101143127/@comment-25396609-20160113002836

I notice he is missing his right hand, but his hand is alos covered in scars. May want to fix that.

Pull the aura transference thing, huge can of worms right now.

How exactly can his gauntlet use dust in uniwue ways? Dust is pure elemental energy, and the gauntlet being infused with dust is effectively the same as putting an elemental damage enchantment on it.

Don't care how you try to justify it, an explosion able to destroy a building would kill him, no two ways about it.

Looking down further, i see more and more writing cliches that just kind of pile on with no proper resolution, and I feel like you were trying for a generic anime/video game style protagonist more than a RWBY character.