Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25396609-20150327010637

first things first, i have no idea what's up with your formatting. second, not bad. maybe explain the weapon a bit more, semblance isn't all the great but is at least balanced pretty well. bacjstory needs a lot of work, Beacon is an entirely voluntary thing, if he wants out he can literally go to the headmaster, say "I quit" and leave with no repercussions.

that's my quick scan analysis, i leave details up to the others.