Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160612040111/@comment-24534644-20160619015210

My specialty is OCs with well-established themes (as I'm sure the more frequent member of this board have learned about me by now). So unless I can know what this OC is specifically based on  thematically (if anything), I can't do much to help. like I said though, based on what I can see at present, I think the character looks good (aside from the parts I pointed out, though). Improve the fighting style, because that's the main issue I have.