Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24573226-20160623204034/@comment-14138255-20160830030518

HazelQuill7445 wrote: I did look at it more than once, actually. I just didn't think I had enough feedback yet to comment and put it off until a more thorough reading.

Not much to offer, but I'll offer it now to fill the void: I remember being confused about an intro of her coming home followed by her leaving home. Then I figured that was on purpose and I'd just missed the point in my first scan. I assume people didn't notice because no one commented either here or on my DOC, but thank you.

Are you able to see the comments? It says the intro chapter wasn't finished, I never could collect ideas for it so I put it off to get more of the story written.