User blog comment:SomeoneYouUsedToKnow/SYUTK's V4E7 - MEGAChristmas -Impressions/Recap/@comment-9090085-20161228142133/@comment-26018514-20161229074321

7. Don't show Qrows arm cock back for the punch, alternatively, don't show Tyrian blocking fire from a fucking sniper rifle(supersonic rounds) without even trying, or show him concentrating elsewhere, like Neon's obsession over failing at her footwork.

Show Ruby use her speed to accelerate into the danger of the falling beam, only failing to react due to her momentum.

Show Tyrian's tail moving in slow motion, simultaneously showing Ruby trying to block him ftom striking her uncle, then capitalizing on his tails new position to decapitate it, rather than stretching shit out seemingly in real-time.

8. no, that sounds terribly plot accelerating.