Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150301171157/@comment-25343309-20150310035040

I'm not saying the characters are incomplete, I'm saying they're amateurish compared to my later works, I've got a human who used to be the apprentice to a now thirty year old Adam, who started hating Humans only after a Human supremecist killed his wife, I've got a Grimmshifting long lost twin brother of Blake's, a mute sniper girl and a brash and tactless archer who looks a little like a shorter Pyrrha, though they're of no relation, I actually really like those last two, but the entire team belongs in a bad fanfic, and I consider it a miracle that I haven't gotten a single negative review in it yet, I guess I'm a better writer than I give myself credit for if I can make a team like that passable, which isn't saying much, beyond my apparant gift for fight scenes I don't have all that great of an opinion about my writing