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Next we have Maki with Vermilion von Ivaldi:

1) Basic info: 10 ponts. Looks like everything's in order.

2) Appearance: 18 points

I'm not seeing a mention of anything underneath the chainmail, which is not a good idea, let me tell you. And what type of light armor is this on her left arm? Leather plate?

3) Characteristics: 29 points.

Pretty solid. That said, I have to question why someone with that strong of a Darwinist belief system would act as a mediator.

4) Trivia: 5 points. Again, solid, connects all the involved characters pretty well to the source material.

I)Weapon: 13 points.

I don't really understand what the difference is between forms 1 and 2.

II) Semblance: 13 points.

I can't understand how her ideals connect to forming shields.

III) Combat info: 5 points.

Total: 93 Points.