Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27447621-20160506021128

So, this is the first member of a team of Villians I've had for a while. This is also my first Villain. I'm new to this, so...here's hoping I don't suck!

Core Info

1)Basic info

-Name: Jason Redwing

-CNR explanation: Redwing... REDwing...

-Species: Human

-Age: 24

-Gender: male

-Symbol: 2 crossed Machetes; the one in the back is solid red and the one in the front is just a red outline.

-Handedness: Ambidexterous, Favors Left

-Physical traits: N/A

-Misc traits: Prefers denim jeans

-Nicknames: Jase, Stones (a reference to his demeanor)

-Occupation: Murderer

2)Appearance

-Aura Colour: Pale green

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Aura Effects: Mist effects emerging from his body

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Height: 6'4"

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weight: 253 lbs

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Eyes: Mud Brown

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Skin color: pale

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Face: Oblong/oval

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Hair: reddish- brown, buzz-cut

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Physique: Highly muscular

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-(Casual) Outfit: Black short-sleeved t-shirt, khaki Cargo shorts, a chain necklace, black tennis shoes. Brown leather strap from right shoulder to left hip with his machetes sheathed on his back.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-(Night Out) Outfit: Black short-sleeved shirt and jeans, thick faded green jacket, Denim Jeans, leather machete sheath, black tennis shoes, ka-bar knife strapped to his left thigh.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Gadgets (if any): Scroll

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">3)Characteristics

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Background:

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Jason was raised in a good household in Mistral. His parents weren't saints, but they did the best they could to raise their son. He was the best part of their world, and they showered him with as much affection as they could. But as the years ran on, the Redwing couple began to realize that Jason was acting oddly; he was antisocial and quiet. But the couple pushed these aside; after all, it wasn't like anything was really wrong with the boy. So when Jason expressed his desire to go to Sanctum Academy, his parents couldn't refuse him.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">While at Sanctum, Jason didn't make many friends, simply because he didn't want to. Jason was a good study on the art of combat for the first three years of his education, and all of his teachers said he had a bright future ahead of him. But it was then that the trouble started. On the day he started his fourth year at Sanctum, he found an injured lizard on the edge of school grounds. He knew he should help the creature. But he didn't want to help it. As he gazed at the little creature he felt a sense of dominance and control. This is what he'd been lacking his whole life; he was sure of it! Acting almost on impulse and drunk with this euphoria, he played with the lizard for nearly an hour before killing it with his bare hands.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">He knew how his teachers and classmates would react if they found out; they would try to 'help' him, 'fix' him. But he knew exactly how to fix himself. He had just done it moments before. Jason continued to harm animals he came across, but in Mistral, these were few and far between. He continued to mask his...tendancies...from everyone, feigning sanity with astonishing ease, an act he kept up even throughout his days in Haven.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">While in Haven, Jason was made leader of team JSPR. He felt comfortable being around them, moreso than he had around anyone else. He quickly noticed the act his teammates were putting on, it was an act he knew all too well. Behind closed doors, he confronted his teammates and found that these others understood him; they and they alone knew what he felt. It was at his suggestion that the team decided to experiment with arson and animal abuse, trying to find the rush he had felt that day in Sanctum.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">But as the years dragged on, he began to realize that killng animals, like any drug, was wearing off. In the second semester of their fourth year, team JSPR was on the run for murdering a family of five while on a mission. And it was on that day that Jason realized that this was his rush, his purpose! He couldn't stop; he had to kill again.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Personality: Psychotic, cold, down to earth and matter-of-fact. Very smart and manipulative, can easily hide his own emothions. Unable to Empathize with anyone outside of his team.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Likes: Murder, inciting fear, a chase, children, sports

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Dislikes: firearms, escaped victims, olives, lakes and oceans.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">4) Trivia: Redwing is based off of the fact that the hockey mask that Jason Voorhees wears is a goalie mask from the Detroit Red Wings.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Notable relationships: Sawyer Tann, ...the other 2 members of team JSPR... (Candyman's and Krueger's names are giving me a bit of trouble).

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Notes:

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Hunter Extension

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">I) Weapons

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Names: Requiem and Mater (Please give me suggestions about these names.  I'm not great with names...)

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Type: Huge-ass killing machetes (HAKM)  What do you want from me? they don't transform, so I just have 'machete' to work with XD

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Short Description: A pair of one-and-three-quarter pound machetes that are 20' long from hilt to tip and have a small, swordlike hiltguard. Able to channel Dust through a slot in the handle.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">II) Semblance

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Name: Lazarus Regeneration (Name may change. It's late at my house, cut me some slack...)

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Short Description: The user's Semblance regenerates at a much faster rate, and the physical body heals and regenerates at an absurd rate.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Activation Cue: Ghostly green mist swirling around Jason, and wounds physically sealing up.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">III) Combat Info

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Class/Position: Leader, Regeneration-based Tank, Brutality-based fighter.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Landing strategy: Take the hit to his Aura; it'll regenerate.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Fighting Style: Jason is a tank, through and through. His main plan of attack is to take hits to let the opponent wear themselves out and dish out some damage when he can, going in for the kill when his enemy is weakened.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">IV) Statistics

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">PLEASE REMEMBER ALL STATISTICS ARE OPTIONAL. IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO WRITE STATISTICS FOR YOUR CHARACTER, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Levels are from 0 to 5, with 0 being nonexistent, 1 being low, 2 being below average, 3 being average, 4 being above average and 5 being high.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">First year students should not have more than 3 stats at level 5, and no more than 45 points spread over the statistics.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">@) Physical Statistics

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Strength: 5

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Speed: 3

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Agility: 3

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Stamina: 5

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">&) Aural Statistics

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Aura Reserve: 5

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Aura Manipulation: 4

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Semblance Manipulation: 5? I guess? it's a mostly passive ability...

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Dust Manipulation: 2

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">$) Technical Statistics

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Dust use: 2

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weapon Skill (Primary): 5

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 4

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 5

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 3

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 0

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Overall Total: 51

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Civilian Extension

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">A) Day to Day Life

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Expanded Occupation/Business Details: Extortion and Murder.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Skills: Murder, Combat, Wood Carving.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Certifications: (certificates, doctorates or the like that the character has received)

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">-Expanded Relationships/Family Life:

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Parents- Severed ties with his parents; parents are trying to find, diagnose, and cure him.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Wow. It feels kinda good to finally get Member #1 of team JSPR (team name may change, trying to fit Freddy Krueger into the letter P is proving tough...) up on the thread!

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Now, Rest assured, I in no way whatsoever wanted to make an edgy character. In fact, I tried to do everything to STOP him from being edgy. However, this is my first villain, and I may have missed something. If so, tell me and I'll fix it. If my character just sucks in general, how can I improve?

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;">Feedback is greatly appreciated!