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Now for Arkantos95 with Sunnen Eber

1) Basic Info - 9 points

Ball & Chain? What kind of nickname is that? No explanation on where he got it either, though I can extrapolate that it is because of his weapon, and it’s a bit awkward as a name for someone.

2) Appearance - 15 points

Not sure how he’s meant to be muscular when his BMI puts him at about average weight and muscle weigh more than fat. A good thing to do with muscular characters is actually make their BMI a bit heavier to compensate for the extra weight muscles carry in them.

No shoes, no mention of an undershirt so Imma just imagine that he doesn’t wear anything (which put an...interesting image of him being all Hercules from DBZ-like at some point and going “Haha!” while opening it). Also, his robe has a hood, and then he also wears a cloak over it? Is the cloak hooded, and does he wear both hoods at once or something? And the outfit section is tiny. No mention of any accessories or pouches for storing stuff on his sash, or even just a scroll in the gadget section to pad him out a bit.

3) Characteristics - 30 points

Haha. You used the Aussie word for journey of self-discovery. I must be tired if that amused me…

Honestly, the background’s pretty solid and the personality meshes well.

4) Trivia - 4 points

What was his relationship with the previous guild leader, and what’s his overall relationship with the other guild members? Is he viewed positively by, or do they find his zen reactions annoying?

5) Weapon - 13 points Simple weapon is simple. A bit boring but it works.

6) Semblance - 15 points I remember this semblance. Works well with the character, balanced well, and a nice take on the extrovert personality type.

7) Combat Info - 3 points More information on whether he uses blocks, dodges, a structure martial art style or a mix of everything, or if he’s a brawler would be good.

Total: 89 points