Board Thread:Speculation House/@comment-10390252-20141218201832/@comment-25555436-20150212014600

Which is why I don't plan on writing it. My writing skills aren't really good anyway, I would pummel that idea to the ground. And I definitely don't plan on giving it out to some random guy on FF.net, that would send it right into the planet's core.

What it needs is what every story needs: someone that can get it done right. Use tropes, maybe some character development, things like those, and more. Show that Ruby1 stills feels deeply hurt from Weiss1's death, maybe have nightmares about it too, show that in her interactions with Weiss2.

Or show that since it is a different universe, the characters from that universe won't be exactly like the canon ones (Weiss2 for example, could be more "Tsun" than the canon one, and less "Dere", due to the lack of friends, and the need to live to her family's standards and all that sheet).

Your view in that genre seems pretty 2-Sided Zolnir. It needs the "in-between" zone; good, not the most epic thing ever, but not among the 95% of terrible RWBY fanfics. That "Removal of consequences", which I guess it's a more general Karma Houdini, I honestly think it's bullshit to use, and I hope whoever takes that idea, if it's taken, doesn't use it.