Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160607185611/@comment-27447621-20160607205903

So, my very first OC team was based on demi-immortals (a team that I have killed with fire; the cliches alone made me want to tear my eyes out), but I wanted to see if this was salvageable.

 -Name: Armor Master

 -User(s): Has since been killed with fire.

 -Type: Physical

 -Purpose: Utility

 -Short description: The user can manipulate metal so long as it doesn't have another person's Aura in it.

 -Activation Cue: affected metal glows with a whitish-yellow light, as if the metal was white-hot (temperature doesn't actually change)

 -Range: Personal

 -General limitations: Cannot manipulate metal with another person's Aura in it, cannot create more metal to work with, affecting metal without his Aura in it (ie metal without imbued Aura at all) takes considerably more time and effort, physical properties of the metal will stay the same until fourth tier (user can't make steel weigh as much as tin foil, for example). In later tiers, he must have a knowledge of the inner workings of what he's creating.

 -Passive ability(s) (if any): He's a whiz in the forge.

 -Active ability: Tier One: The user is able to alter the shape of metal he's touching into simple forms (nothing mechanized, nothing requiring small moving parts; basically no guns, no robots, no windup figures, etc. etc.)

 -Active ability: Tier Two: The user is able to create simple moving parts (user can create simple shapes from Tier 1 and small, simple clockwork figures)

 -Active ability: Tier Three: User is able to create semi-automatic handguns on top of what is described in Tiers 1 and 2

 -Dust interaction (insert dust type here): Ideas?

 -Notes: (for trivia you might want to add about the user of the semblance)

Constructive criticism is welcomed.