Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160319212213/@comment-26510495-20160320035656

Well, since I, for some reason, posted on the Semblance forum first, I thought I should post the actual character sheet for my new RWBY OC! Like I said over there, I hope it's alright to be posting here right now! I hope she isn't too unbalanced, either, but I wasn't too sure about some things, so all feedback and/or criticism is entirely welcome! '''Fair warning: The stats might be entirely too much, I honestly have no idea what I should put them at, so please go a little easy on me in regards to them. Actually, everything might be too much, I'm not entirely sure.'''  Anyway, here she is!

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Name: Tsuki Akiba

CNR explanation: Tsuki - moon   This references the color of the moon: silver/white ; Akiba - autumn leaf   This references the colors of autumn leaves: red, orange, yellow, etc.

Species: Snake Faunus

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Emblem: Crescent Moon w/Leaf in empty space

Handedness: Ambidextrous

Physical traits: No Highlights on Hair or Eyes ; Dark Circles around Eyes ; Scaly Skin around Eyes and on Arms and Legs ; Sharp Teeth

Misc traits: Wears Cloak w/Symbol Clasp on Right Shoulder, Covering the Left Side of Body ; Wears Doctor's Mask over Mouth and Nose ; Prefers Monochromatic Clothing w/Warm colors

Nicknames: Tsu ; (Ms.) Aki

Occupation: 3rd Year Student at Shade Academy

Appearance

Aura Colour: Light Tan

Aura Effects: Skin is more Alive ; Dark Circles around Eyes are Gone ; Eyes and Hair are Lighter

Height: 5'6"

Weight: 115 lbs

Eyes: Black (light grey when using aura)

Skin color: Sickly pale (peach when using aura)

Face: Round Facial Structure, Button Nose, Slanted Eyes, Full Lips

Hair: Black (dark brown when using aura), Just Reaches her Jaw, Hugs her Face

Physique: Lean

Outfits: White Long-Sleeved Blouse w/Ruffles on the Ends ; Loose Red Ribbon around Neck ; Plaid Tan Skirt (reaches mid-thigh) ; Black Stockings (reach a little above mid-thigh)  ; Brown Ankle Boots w/Red Laces

Characteristics

Background: She was born in Vale and lived with her father after her mother died giving birth to her, but was chased off by the White Fang, due to her father's past with them. He was killed as they escaped and she lost her left arm, leaving Tsuki on her own in Vacuo. She ended up joining Shade Academy to get strong enough to return to Vale and avenge her father.

Personality: Quiet ; Reserved ; Strong-willed ; Dependable

Likes: Animals ; Meat ; Cloudy days ; Reading

Dislikes: The White Fang ; Fighting ; Being unable to help ; Cold Weather

Trivia:

Notable relationships:

Ruby Rose - Ruby is the first person she meets upon coming back to Vale and she greatly appreciates Ruby's upbeat attitude and lively nature. Ruby helps her get accustomed to Vale again and they become fast friends.

Weiss Schnee - They didn't become close very quickly, but Weiss became a good shoulder to lean on as they had common interests and dislikes.

Blake Belladonna - Tsuki instantly took to Blake, feeling a kinship with another Faunus. They usually end up reading together if they hangout.

Yang Xiao-Long - Yang and her became friends almost as quickly as her and Ruby did. Tsuki greatly appreciates the sisterly way Yang sees her.

Jaune Arc - Tsuki finds his bumbling behavior charming and quite funny, and they're able to confide in each other to a certain extent.

Pyrrha Nikos - Tsuki looks up to Pyrrha a lot, finding her use of her semblance and smooth battle style amazing to watch. The two spar every so often.

Nora Valkyrie - Nora was rather difficult for Tsuki to get used to, but she eventually warmed right up to her, appreciating her erratic behavior for what it is.

Lie Ren - Tsuki fell hard for Ren, but doesn't want to speak on it, so instead cherishes whatever time they interact.

Ozpin - Tsuki is very wary of Ozpin, finding herself unsure of her original intentions for becoming a Huntress when they speak. Due to this, she tries to limit their interactions.

Glynda Goodwitch - Tsuki isn't fond of the the pretentious, snooty way Glynda seens to present herself, but can't help but to admire how strong she is.

Sun Wukong - She never knew him while he was in Vacuo, but they became very close as if she had. He is able to cheer her up faster than most of the others, and she enjoys his company very much.

Neptune Vasilias - He tried to woo her, although she swiftly knocked him out from surprise. He later apologized and they got on much better speaking terms afterwards.

Cinder Fall - Tsuki knew right away that Cinder wasn't a trustworthy person, although she had no idea what Cinder was really planning. Tsuki was always on guard when Cinder was around.

Emerald Sustrai - They didn't speak much, but Tsuki could tell immediately that Emerald was a pickpocket. Tsuki always made sure to double-check the other's belongings after any interactions with her.

Mercury Black - Tsuki wasn't fond of his uncaring attitude and apathy, finding it repulsive how much he enjoyed fighting, too. She never spoke to him.

Adam Taurus - Tsuki has a burning hatred for him, as he personally killed her father and took her left arm. Just thinking of him is enough to make her blood boil.

Notes:

Tsuki always calls people by their last name, either on its own or with an added prefix (Miss/Madam, Mister/Sir), but doesn't ask others to do the same for her.

Tsuki is a little self-conscious of her teeth, as they are a good bit sharper than normal people's are, so she took to wearing a doctor's mask to cover them up. She always lies and tells people she had bad health to explain away the mask.

Tsuki is very self-conscious of her left arm, which led to her covering it with a cloak whenever she wasn't using it. She doesn't use it nearly as often as she did when she first got it.

Tsuki's father had her take her mother's last name to protect her from the White Fang if he were ever unable to himself. She continues to use her mother's last name after his death, in respect for his wishes.

Hunter Extension

I) Weapons

Name: Sycamore

Type: Curtana

Short Description: It has a dark brown sheath and sits in one of the loops of her belt. The sword has a blunt, square end with incredibly sharp edges. Other than that, it's just a normal sword.

Name: Odium

Type: Metal arm

Short Description: A pitch black metal arm, starting at her shoulder, with extremely sharp claws. She can channel her aura directly through it, allowing her to use it however she sees fit.

II) Semblance

Name: Tendrils

Short Description: Tsuki manifests her Aura as tendrils of energy that can latch onto objects and/or people, allowing her to move them around or launch herself forward by pushing off of them.

Visual effect: Light tan tendrils of energy sprout from Tsuki's body and can curl around or stick to other people and objects.

III) Combat Info

Class/Position: 3rd Year Student Huntress

Landing strategy: Digging the claws of her left arm into any nearby surface to decrease her speed before landing ; Using her Semblance to latch onto anything nearby to come to a stop

Fighting Style: She primarily uses Sycamore with her right hand, dancing around her opponent until she can get in close and knock them out. When she uses Odium, she becomes much more aggressive, aiming to seriously injure, or even kill, her opponent.

IV) Statistics

Physical Statistics

Strength: 4

Speed: 3

Agility: 3

Stamina: 4

Aural Statistics

Aura Reserve: 4

Aura Manipulation: 5

Semblance Manipulation: 5

Dust Manipulation: 0

Technical Statistics

Dust use: 0

Weapon Skill (Primary): 5

Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 5

Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 4

Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 3

Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 1

Civilian Extension

Expanded Occupation/Business Details: Occassionally Works Part-Time at Any Place hiring

Skills: Silver-tongued ; Pickpocketer ; Information Gatherer

Expanded Relationships/Family Life:

Father: Haru Ryuunosuke : Snake Faunus : Haru - light spring  This references the color of spring: green, pink, etc. ; Ryuunosuke - dragon herald   This references his being a Snake Faunus, which he passes on to Tsuki    :    They had a very close relationship and could share all of their feelings and secrets. Tsuki was devastated by his death.

Mother: Chinatsu Akiba : Human : Chinatsu - thousand summer  This references the color of summer: yellow, red, etc. ; Akiba - autumn leaf    This references the colors of autumn leaves: red, orange, yellow, etc. :    Though they never met, Tsuki is very fond of her mother, often looking at the photograph she has of her for support.

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I hope this isn't too long, and I really hope she isn't a Mary Sue, character, but I'm not too sure, to be quite honest. I hope this character is alright!