Board Thread:Speculation House/@comment-198.82.111.80-20160315173800/@comment-14138255-20160417155752

The concept of the "edgy" OC is a flaw in itself, especially depending on the universe (and as dark as RWBY is, it establishes that unless you're a master of combat like a Huntsmen or Huntress, you can't be really angsty without getting pureed by Grimm).

If I have to help it though my first critique would be to not make it "unknown" for race and age (and ESPECIALLY not "formerly human", whatever that means). It really is blasphemy to toy with the canon like that for an OC (unless the person doesn't care about the canon, then it'd be barely tolerated).

The edgyness and will to kill her fellow man would be fine in another universe, but not in RWBY, where killing someone practically lets the Grimm know it's time to lay waste to the surface world, so not sure if she'd be the most accepted (though with how "edgy" she is, maybe she's accepted the fact that she's not going to make friends. *starts playing Crawling in My Skin* ).

God it's been so long since I've been so critical of anything. I kinda miss it.