Thread:XgodwarriorX/@comment-26198573-20150314012209/@comment-25555436-20150314033320

-Geez, what's with the "CLASSIFIED"''? ''What is this, SCP Foundation?

-Adopted by Qrow, and as such has a direct connection to a main character....also has a shady past (judging from all these CLASSIFIED)....careful not to make it a Mary Sue.

"Direct connection to a main character" is basically a sin in OC-Making, in everything. And in this case, it's completely unnecesary, just make him an orphan at an orphanage, where the other orphan children were. He doesn't need to be Qrow's "adopted son".

-Let me guess...all those "CLASSIFIED" were actually your way of saying "I haven't planned what happens here yet", right?