User blog:Gundam Legilis/Painting The Town In Depth - The writing

Hello everybody! Today We'll talk about the writing.

I still think that there needs to be a little bit of time for Ruby to process this information, not in a few seconds.

It's pretty clever that Junior avoids conflict with Yang. It's also clever that the henchmen simply close the doors and cringe at her reputation.

We now see why the WF wear masks. Grimm masks too. And I understand that Adam keeps his recruit mask for sentimental reasons. Higher ups are more concealed, as they're more valuable targets.

I am genuinely pleased with the speech Roman gives out. Not sure if he is being sincere with the Self Depreciation. But it is quite fancy.

What I don't comprehend is why Roman, a human blinded in night, manages to do something about Blake and Sun, and is the only one to recognize them in the room. It's compounded with an entire battalion of night vision Faunus in the room, where they could see Sun and Blake more clearly.

It's good writing and shoutouts when Team RWBY makes shipping based maneuvers to fight Torchwick.

And seriously? Eating ramen while your friends are left to fight the robot alone? I still don't stand for this. At least help a little.

Stay tuned for the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis