Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-27966940-20190605223921

@Blue: Semblance looks a little wonky on your character, plus the backstory is a little iffy in how she started her career. First off, pirates are extremely outdated and rarely seen in modern day, esspecially on the high-seas. And besides, how does one goes from wanting to be the next Blackbeard to wanting to go to a school designed to train the protectors of the world? It's like having someone who said they hated chocolate sinc ethey were six suddenly getting seven scoops of chaoclate icecream every time they go to Baskin Robins. As for the Semblance, really not that usful unless you're exclusivly a wannabe Indiana Jones or a traveling merchant who sells curios. Might wanna go with something that isn't exclusive to treasure hunting.

@Ayu: My only real nitpicks with your character are their landing strategy and that they can be optimistic while also having suicidal tendancies. Those two charcateristics are rarely seen together. As for the landing strategy, remember that the students are falling several hundred feet in the air at many miles an hour. If it's not specified that her Semblance helped her, a simple roll isn't going to work. She'd be lucky if she just broke her back.

Hope this is helpful to you two and I look forward to what you do next :)