Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161205132101/@comment-26397825-20170131232132

Kirito Rose wrote:

Bunny: What the fuck to bunnies have to do with this? I don't see the comparison

Background length: Lately I've been trying to give my characters as much detail and description as I can. I feel it gives them a little more soul than I've previously given. That's exactly what the bunny thing has to do with it. He provided an example of what you used to do (the first example), then an example of what you should do (the second example), using a bunny kid as his example. The third example is what you do now. It's long, it's rambly, and it's completely unnecassary. Keep that sort of detail and length for the actual fanfic, and give a brief but descriptive overview for the character sheet.