Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160518062840/@comment-27966940-20160519042523

I'll DEFINATLY try to follow the feedback and try to fix his "Flaws". And yes, I did edit him from the first time I posted him.

PS. Could you and anyone else plz point out where I MAJORLY fucked up? If you do, I'll REALLY apreciate it.