Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160825171839/@comment-25396609-20161005043811

HighCastle67 wrote: Core Info

1)Basic info

-Name: Jacinta Fujimoto

Any particular reason for mixing the Spanish and Japanese names?

It's mostly just a pet peeve of mine, mixing naming styles. pretty much entirely a nitpick.

hm... i don't really see any explanation for her eyes being a different color from what they are naturally? mighth ave overlooked something.

armpit length is an... interesting way of phrasing that. I can't help but wonder why she doesn't dye her eyebrows if she likes purple that much.

gonna skip over outfit stuff since that's not really my area of expertise...

Aha, was expecting this.

The White Fang didn't go militant until 5 years before the show; she is currently 17. the White Fang would not be evil/ready to attack a real estate firm  at the drop of a hat like that.

I am pretty confused, you say stuff about knights, but she is a samurai. knights and samurai have fairly different moral codes; for example a knight who fails his duties isn't obligated to commit suicide.

"Mistral Academy" is called Haven, btw.

more confusion of knight vs samurai

you mention her being a mix of western and eastern knights, but I am seeing 100% European knight and 0% Japanese samurai.

weapon:

You've got two totally different weapons and are treating them as a single unit; which is an extremely confusing read. Ask anyone, not a fan of katana, but this is actually a bit confusing so my immediate dislike for the concept is more than that.

The Kriss Vector is not a small gun, way too big and too awkwardly shaped to be used as the hilt and guard on a katana without seriously interfering with use.

Wakizashi flamethrower seems alright, i suppose.

Not sure how I feel about the semblance...

morem ention of knight, only one passing mention of samurai.

I'm honestly not sure what you're going for. you say she's a mix, but beyond equipment her entire behavior is more knightly, and you use the term knight far more often.

One major difference between samurai and knights is that, while knights are loyal to their king, they are also expected to be somewhat independant.

Samurai are expected to be blindly loyal and follow orders without question.