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Bajarias.josef wrote: First OC


 * Name:Carmine Pleiades


 * Team/occupation:CBRG Leader,Weapon specialist,Berserker,former White Fang test subject


 * Species:Faunus(grey wolf)


 * Color:Blood Red


 * Symbol:A Crosshair/hard wired circle with seven smaller circles in a pattern


 * Age:14


 * Aspects:Electricity,Echolocation and lack of prescence Wolf ears and tail(both are hidden)


 * Sex:Male


 * Height:5,5


 * Weight:180 lbs
 * Physique:Average,looks 3 years older


 * Handedness:Carmine uses his right hand primarily but he is actually ambidextrous


 * Eyes:Carmine has sky blue eyes whose pupils appear lupine,they glow once he is agitated or is in a dark area


 * Hair:He has long hair(enough to reach the bottom of his neck),very messy and is white with a red tint his wolf ears are laid flat there to conceal it.

Personality:Carmine is first seen as rude,stubborn,cold,impatient,sarcastic and unforgiving, he has a bad habit of sneaking up and scaring people with his lack of prescence and also hates racists,although he has a softer side to animals,people that he considers close is altruistic as a result and respect other's desicions (he does respect the teachers),he is willing to risk his life to save somebody,matter of fact the harsher aspects of his personality is actually a facade to hide his sadness as a white fang test subject,in spite of that he can form a strong strust in people and believes in equality,greatly disliking the term "the strong rule over the weak",he also is sensitive to stuff regarding relationships (ie:kissing,hugging etc).ironically he has no sense of shame in carrying a girl.Another thing is he is always in a bad mood once he wakes up and will not hestate to bite or(even worse) electrocute somebody who annoys him in that peiod of time.When he's in his RIPPER state he Has no sense of friend and foe and will attack anyone in his path with maniacal laughter and a crazed smile.


 * Landing strategy:He'll just envelop himself in his red aura and simply crash(he always survives that although he feels a bit numb)another stategy is go parkour on the nearest object he can find in the environment


 * Aura: Carmine has actually two kinds of aura as a result of being a test subject

Red:Increases the density of anything wrapped with,it in other words it makes the object harder and heavier,Carmine usually prefers to use this over his other in hand to hand combat

Blue:Makes the molecules vibrate at an extremely high rate.increasing cutting ability and making it the body lighter,Carmine uses this when he needs to soften up stuff,it's weakness is that he can be easily blown away by a massive enough shockwave

Semblance: Carmine uses electricity as his semblance,the sparks are blood red,he's mastered his semblance enough to condense it to a small bomb,release it in a nova(what he usually does when somebody annoys him in his morning)or even operate machines and charge gadgets by just touching them.His weakness is that he has limited range underwater (he can restrain it not to harm others though) and can be attracted by a lighting rod

Natural ability: While not really a semblance Carmine is born with sonar vision instead of night vision that leaves him with an enhanced respiratory and vocal system,able to focus his voice to a paralyzing roar or use it for echolocation in a short (and cute)bark


 * Weapons: Carmine in fact is an arms master,able to use several weapons to maximum usage although he has two primary weapons though

Bloody Carmine

This is a HCSS based from Ruby's Crescent Rose although there are  differences between these.

First is that it has two blades that are positioned beside each other for more offensive purposes.

Second it's Gun mode is more akin to a Barett M107 sniper.

Third it is completely Semi auto to fit Carmine's fighting style

It's actually a more offensive Crescent Rose but it is still in it's prototype stages and  has a chance of breaking apart

Pleiades 7 shot

A 45 cal revolver with a high amount of firepower ,Carmine usually wields this in conjunction with Bloody Carmine for faster fire rate.He only uses this when he has to recover Bloody Carmine and there are still enemies in his way


 * Fighting style: Due to being under Qrow(his foster father)he learned to use a scythe,his attack style though is more offense based and reckless,more akin to a berserker than Ruby.He can throw his scythe like a boomerang and has no problem since he has self taught himself several fighting styles from games(armed and hand to hand) his main focus in hand to hand is usually his legs,albeit to jump high or give a devastating kick.
 * Code RIPPER:When enraged his stats go up high.When completley enraged he becomes his past self,the experimental White Fang subject known as Codename RIPPER,his body in engulfed in a black substance as his faunus traits appear and his hair flows out more.he seems to grow out a large pair of clawed tentacles from the back of his waist.,in this state he has gone completely berserk and will attack anybody ,the only way to calm him is via person who he has formed a very close bond with.
 * Although reckless,Carmine can plan strategies in his mind  and expain them during the heat of the battle
 * Although reckless,Carmine can plan strategies in his mind  and expain them during the heat of the battle


 * Wardrobe:

Battle Outfit:Carmine is usually seen with a black/white t shirt under a black/red hoodie he wears dark grey jeans,black/red sneakers,a pair of gloves he designed himself for computer stuff (which you will find out later) snd he is almost never seen without his black headphones,and a grey scarf with his emblem.

Casual:Carmine wears a fatigue shirt with a 7/7 printed on it,he also wears dark red cargo pants,his shoes gloves headphones and scarf are stil present (although she scarf is wrapped around his left shoulder). Note:his tail is always hidden in his pant sleeves

Backstory:

Carmine was born as the youngest of the 4 Pleiades kids,his Dad is a White Fang admin,all alife seemed easy until he reached 7 where he was selected as the 76th candidate for Project RIPPER,a project to create a bioweapon of mass genocide,coined by a scientist,Carmine was forcefully taken away by his dad where he was subjected to horrible expereiments,his body was infused with that of two Grimm the organization captured,a Fenrir and a Seiryu,.the rest of the subjects died but Carmine managed to survive but was losing his sanity.Unable to see their kid brother die at an early age,the other siblings broke him out with another admin who was a relative to them.Carmine,managing to remain sane also glimpsed the Seiryu and Fenrir beak out as well.The siblings left him in a wolf den where he was raised up there(by a wolf pack of course) and paid him visits every week,surprisingly Carmine managed to recover.One day as he was exploring around in winter,he saw a young girl dressed in red about to be killed by beowolves,feeling a desire to protect another person he brutally killed the ones attacking her and chased the rest away,the girl gave him a scarf in which he wears until now.Some days after the ordeal a man named Qrow discovered the siblings and decided to adopt them.Carmine learned to fight properly but longed to say thank you to that same girl.

Now as leader of the newly formed team CBRG in Beacon Academy will he find the girl while protecting the people??


 * Notes:

Carmine has a fear of large snakes due to the lead scientist of Project Ripper being a python faunus,although he manages to restrain it against a king taijitu

Carmine also has a sweet tooth,and is usually seen munching on cookies and sweets nearly everywhere even in battle for sugar rush.

Carmine has a dislike to ice which is especially why he wears a scarf 24/7

He may have a similarity to Ruby but they are different in fighting style and personality and he may look op overall but he is kinda mediocre in the defensive department. I made a few changes but do correct me though