Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27966940-20170406045847/@comment-27425734-20170605200944

Bajarias.josef wrote:

Too damn cheesy, but screw it, I tried Not bad. Make sure to break up the lines of dialogue as every time a different character speaks, a new paragraph should be made like so:

"Yeah, the time you forced me to dance with you" Aster replied with slight sarcasm, earning a short giggle from the brunette.

"Remember that everyone stared at us like hell froze over?" Yasen asked again. Aster simply smirked at the memory. The conversation lasted for a while as the rain went on, Unmindful of the occasional laughter coming from the car.

It was a little hard to figure out who was talking at times because of the way you formatted it. Regardless, it doesn't really matter as this thread has little to no guidelines for text organization. Anyways, I don't really have any usable OCs at the moment, so for now I won't be submitting anything.