Talk:Haven's Fate/@comment-174.255.143.96-20180414185031/@comment-4010415-20180505010028

I dunno, maybe if Volume 6 starts out with Oscar resting, Blake deciding if she's gonna go with RWY, Ghira's group deciding what they're gonna do, and maybe showing us what's gonna happen to Haven since Lionheart's dead and the front wall of one of the buildings was demolished. Maybe show the beginnings of a manhunt for Adam.

And somewhere in there, Weiss works on arranging them transport to Atlas.

Volume 4 should've been about


 * RNJR's journey to Mistral without the fucking timeskip.


 * More focus on how Weiss' family actually interacts under normal conditions.


 * Blake and Sun traveling to Menagerie instead of teleporting there via boat and maybe encountering/having flashbacks about Faunus discrimination.


 * Yang doing her deal, actually being seen getting used to her new arm, and maybe having more quality time with Tai, who talks to her about how he, too, has struggled with depression before, so he understands how she feels and wants to support her.


 * The bad guys doing their thing.

There could've been some timeskips in the volume itself, but Volume 4 should not have begun on a timeskip. Volume 5 could've then been Blake's time at Menagerie and everyone's storylines going toward going to Mistral. Maybe RNJR arrives in Mistral during this volume and actually spends screentime experiencing their culture after/while resting from their journey.

Yeah, the Battle of Haven wouldn't have been until Volume 7, but at least we wouldn't have sat through a bunch of boring rushed shit that was slapped together in an effort to get to the "cool part" that ended up being horribly done because it, too, was rushed.