Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25936766-20160701133235/@comment-25936766-20160714153649

Now Spirited Dreaming's Ledovec Asier.

-Basic Info: 15/15, Looking good so far. Though calling a team "BLCK"....there's no problem with it, but it feels a bit uncreative.

-Appearance: 15/15 Spooky aura effect is spooky. Pretty tall with good weight, seems athletic. Love the outfit, colors remind me a bit of the Ayalli from Endless Legend.

-Backstory: 20/20 I like it, fits the Death Arcana, as it means change, usually through the end of a life and the start of another. And his parents died, qeue the start of another life. You mentioned an "Oasis" Academy, which normally would have made me lower you 2 points for personal reasons, but you did say it was located in a village. And as far as we know the villages themselves can follow their own themes for their academies's names.

-Personality: 10/10 I like it, and fits what I saw in the background.

-Likes/Dislikes: I expected a tiny bit more in the dislikes, but not much problem. His likes aren't too impressive, but his sole dislike does extend his character a bit. +1

-Notable Relationships: 5/5 All good.

-Weapon 9/10: You know, when you said "double bladed staff of sorts", I expected a double bladed staff, not a pair of gunswords sticked together. By the way, how do the bases of the stocks clip together? You mentioned where they clipped together, but not how they do it. Is it via magnets, or some sort of lock?

-Semblance: 10/10 Simple yet fits him. The guy should be a carpenter.

-Combat Info: 10/10.

Overall Points: 95