Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-24993958-20160503202457

Not sure I’m a fan of the tone you used with the page (I’m more a fan of staying informal) but that’s not a gripe with the character.

Your character is solid. His appearance checks out, his background is main character-ish without a chosen one overtone and I like the weapon combo even if I have some trouble picturing it completely.

One thing I would look into is giving him an actual quiver with some spare arrows. Semblances take time to discover for one, and semblances last as long as you have aura. It’s not out of the question he’d be arrogant enough not to bring one, but is it out of the question her mother made him pack some?