Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-30530552-20171101175001/@comment-25936766-20171126023039

PisceanWaterbender wrote:

1-Hmm...slight-canon interaction in Parts 5-6, I’ll let it slide with a deduction because the two were  physically interacting directly with each other, but we never did see what Ironwood did in Vale after his ship crashed and he met up with Qrow and Glynda.

2-Considering how similar surfing and snowboarding are conceptually, I’ll assume she was about as bad as she was with surfing.

3-Trivia - 2/5 - I see what you mean about missing the personality section points. I might allow you to make up a couple of those points if you go through the effort to do it.

4-Nobility is very vague, CNR-wise. “Queen” is also pretty vague, on that same note.

5-Pengu almost makes up for it, but that’d seem too  trivial. Good job sticking with the theme though.

6-Weapon - 13/15 - First part is a little confusing, but thank you for trying to explain it. I think I understand it, it’s almost like having a pair of scissors, in a general orientation of the blades, yes? Everything else doesn’t need noting for anything problematic.

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:8pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#d5d4d4;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">7-Combat Info - 4/5 - “While she doesn't stumble or have significant issues with her weapon, <span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#d5d4d4;font-weight:700;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">without her weapon she's notably less efficient at it's use. <span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#d5d4d4;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">”

1-I did think twice about it, but I felt it was fine since it wasn't really major. He was passing by, quite literally, and all that is about the most personal interaction these 2 ever had. Granted, that does make him a miracle on legs in this case.

2-No. No. No. Hell no. Very hell no. As in, "do you even snowboard and surf, bro?" levels of no.

Both involve riding on a surface with a board. And that is literally the only similarity between them. Different kinds of boards, different environments, different surfaces (and that means different physics), quite a lot is different.

Snowboarding is closer to Skateboarding down a hill than to Surfing waves. And even then, pretty different, since, you know, Snow (or Sand) is pretty different from Concrete and Asphalt.

Just saying.

3-You mean, writing them here and now?

4-Purple is associated heavily with Nobility historically, as is Gold and Silver. That's why names that refer to Nobility, like "Nolan", can work.

Specifically, these names fit CNR via "makes me think of a color". Nobility makes one think of purple, in a general sense.

5-Pengu?

6-Depends on the scissors? The part I had most trouble with was the "hook", I could picture it perfectly thanks to Brotherhood, but describing it in detail was complicated.

7-.....Did I really write that? I could've sworn I had written that without her Semblance she was less efficient at using her weapon.