Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160425022934/@comment-27888871-20160425052101

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EVERYTHING WRONG WITH CIARAN SAPPHIRON IN 1600 WORDS OR LESS



Team leader of Team CRBN (Team Carbon)

-Name: Ciaran Sapphiron

-CNR explanation: Ciaran is a Gaelic male given name meaning "little dark one" or "blacky", Sapphiron is the name of the blue dragon in WoW universe. The reflects his colour scheme of black and blue (midnight blue to be exact).

–I can certainly feel the dark and edgy here- +1

-Species: Human

-Age: 18 (based on Season 1 Episode 1)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Gender: Male

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Symbol (Ciaran): A sword with an infinite symbol on the blade.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–Ripping off the infinity blade logo.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Symbol (Nero): A sword that pierces a flaming skull and three crosses underneath.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–As if we didn’t have enough dark and edgy- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Also, only one symbol per person.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Handedness: Right, Ambidextrous

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–It can’t be right AND ambidextrous, make up your goddamn mind- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Physical traits: Shaggy hair with midnight blue highlights.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–Please tell me he dyed that… oh wait…. If he did, that would still be dark and edgy, which is something we’ve seen too much of already. +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Also, you put that in the wrong place- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Misc traits: Always wear a black 3/4 coat with gray markings. Utility belt that stores ammunitions etc.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–Etc? Wtf? Please specify.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Also, I am done with the dark and edgy theme here, from now on, dark and edgy shit will be worth one more sin than the last.- +2

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Nicknames: Nero Angelo

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–After reading the backstory, this should just be placed under names, like, legal names.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Occupation: Huntsman, Teacher

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-18, graduated beacon, AND got the training to become a teacher? Calling bullshit. +2

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Also, where the fuck was this guy at the battle of beacon? +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">2)Appearance

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Aura Colour: Dark Blue

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Height: 2m

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Weight: 78kg

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Eyes: Sapphire Blue

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Skin color: Pale

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Face: Triangle with distinct angular features.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Hair: Shaggy black hair, with midnight blue highlights.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-You put it in the right place, I would take a sin off for that, but you’ve repeated what you said in the place it wasn’t supposed to go.- no change

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Physique: Lean, fairly muscular

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Teacher Outfit: Black 3/4 coat with Nero's Emblem, midnight blue zip-up hoodie that comes with a black hood, denim blue jeans and black boots. Note that his hood is always up and never pull it down.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">- Hood always up=dark and edgy…again- +3

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Combat Outfit: Same as Teacher, but with utility belt and sword strapped to the back and leather chap holsters.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Training Outfit: dark blue sleeveless shirt with black track pants and sneakers.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Casual Outfit: Black 3/4 coat with a midnight blue vest underneath along with jeans etc.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">- So basically the same fucking thing with only minor adjustments.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Gadgets: Digital watch

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">3)Characteristics

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Background: Orphaned at a young age, Ciaran is the secret adopted son of Ozpin and his apprentice.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Canon bending- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> Born with a rare genetical defect known as Blood Semblance which grants him very strong aura and early awakening of his Semblance, but at the cost of internal bleeding whenever he use his Semblance.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-What?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ozpin and Team STRQ found him as an infant in a basket along with 2 swords, there is only a card with the name Sapphiron written on it.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Dark and edgy backstory being left behind by parents cliché- +4

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> Astonished by the fact that an infant has an exceptionally strong aura, Ozpin decided to take him in to train him, he didn't discover Blood Semblance until the age of 5 when he awake his Semblance.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Having an incredibly strong aura, they never questioned why?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Team CRBN is then founded with Ozpin found 3 more orphans that has Blood Semblance across 4 kingdoms, adopting them as his sons.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Why across all four kingdoms? Couldn’t they just have come from the same one?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> As they stay in Beacon Academy, they observe the training of the other hunters in training and being trained by Ozpin, Glynda, Taiyang, and Qrow. Ozpin even called it the dream team and believes that they'll be useful for their cause of protecting the Maidens.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Why only to protect the maidens? They could do so much more!- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Also, doesn’t he have the common sense that working them too hard would kill them?-+1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> The 4 eventually enrolled into Beacon passing the initiation.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ciaran himself even claimed Vale Championship twice in row during his time in Beacon and even participated in 38th and 39th Vytal Fesitval. However, a few months after 39th Vytal Festival, Team CRBN participated in a fateful mission which ended with the death of 3 members, only Ciaran survived.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Being the only one in his group of friends to survive cliché- +5

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> The team had to hold off a large horde of Grimm invasion so that they can evacuate civilians, the team had no back up as there was also another invasion at the other area, resulting the deaths of the members due to internal bleeding.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-What other area?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Canon-Bending idiotic Ozpin is Idiotic- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ozpin changes the plan and decided to have Ciaran pronounced dead, forcing him to adopt the identity of Nero Angelo and joins the academy as a teacher.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-So that’s why he changed his emblem. Fine, I’ll remove 1 sin- -1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Personality: He was noted to be very active and mingles well with his school mates in Beacon. Talkative and a prankster with his team mates. He is fiercely loyal to friends and Ozpin's group. After his team mates died, he was noted to be very quiet and even cold by some.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Dark and edgy personality post-dark and edgy event.- +6

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">He doesn't hate Ozpin for not able to save his team as he understands their duty, he does not protest for what Ozpin has planned for him. He is also a good listener and patient with the students.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">In battle, he is calm and analytical, being regarded as the brain of the team, able to come up with strategies really quick. However, there are cases where he intentionally loses himself to strong opponents, blending his emotional state with his opponent's

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-What? How?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> Becoming a very scary Hunter and his fight style is noted to be very vicious in this state.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Define very vicious. DETAIL!- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Likes: Strawberry sundae, swords.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">- Why? Again, we need explainations.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Dislikes: Weak hunter with no potential to improve, shields.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">4) Trivia:

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Notable relationships:

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Redgrave Porphyrius: Redgrave is both his adopted brother and team mate, the two were very close and Ciaran was visibly distraught when he did not survive. Ciaran currently keeps his weapons for unknown purpose.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–Emphasis on “unknown”- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Blaec Erwin: Blaec is both his adopted brother and team mate, the two were very close and Ciaran was visibly distraught when he did not survive. Ciaran currently uses his weapons as a memento.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> –You copy pasted this from Redgraves relation- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Albion Nikko: Redgrave is both his adopted brother and team mate, the two were very close and Ciaran was visibly distraught when he did not survive. Albion’s weapon is currently planted onto his gravesite for unknown reason.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> –And I repeat both points- +2

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Glynda Goodwitch: While Glynda is not his adopted mother, due to their daily interaction, he sees Glynda as a mother figure and the two are on very good terms.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Jaune Arc: He believes Jaune has good potential and voices out his disagreement to the statement that he is weak.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">–I thought you said he hated shields, And apparently he has an extremely low bar for what to consider weak.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"> <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Hunter Extension <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I) Weapons

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Name: Sange & Yasha

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Type: Single handed arming sword (Sange) and samurai katana (Yasha)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Short Description: Holstered forms are simply the swords being put in sheathes, Sange is attached to the back while Yasha is attached to the utility belt.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-No no no no no. You need two hands to operate a Katana.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Name: Astral & Umbral

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Type: 2x Semi-Automatic pistols

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Short Description: Holstered forms are simply the guns being holstered in leather chaps. The guns are also heavily modified and uses a .45 caliber high explosive bullets.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-What even….? How even….?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Also, which pair does he use?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">II) Semblance

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Name: Spectre

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Short Description: Summons a spectral avatar that assist the user in combat.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-How?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Visual effect: Dark Blue vein like cracks are visible on face and eyes turn red with white iris.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">III) Combat Info

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Class/Position: Warrior/Assassin

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Landing strategy: Uses his tremendous aura strength to brace for the impact.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-He needs a better landing strat. Or he’d die from internal bleeding- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Fighting Style: Iaido, dual wield, MMA, acrobatic.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Way too much for anyone to handle. And he’s only 18? Double bullshit- +2

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:0.0001pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"> <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;border:1ptnonewindowtext;padding:0cm;">Civilian Extension <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">A) Day to Day Life

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Skills: Dust chemistry, knowledge over human anatomy

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-What, does this dude have an IQ higher than that of Dr. Grey?- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Certifications: Certified huntsman of Beacon Academy

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">- CIVILIAN CERTIFICATIONS! Not huntsman.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-Expanded Relationships/Family Life:

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ozpin: Ozpin is his adopted father, he loves him and has deep respect for him. He also does not protest for what Ozpin has planned for him as he trusts Ozpin’s decision fully.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-You put this in the wrong spot yet again- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-How much faith does this guy have in Oz? If he sent my three friends to be killed and have me become someone I’m not, I would have more than some suspicions.- +1

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">BONUS ROUND!!! +1 SIN FOR ALL THE GRAMMAR MISTAKES!!!! (bolded) +9

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Sin Count: 68

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-top:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:black;"><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Sentence: Johnny Griffon the Nevermore

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