User blog comment:DuskSpiral/Developing Post V3 Fanfiction, Feedback Required/@comment-98.17.225.176-20171112214838/@comment-98.17.225.176-20171114024452

1. Its a bit wonky when you place the fanfic within the context of the whole show.

V3: Yay! We saved Vale from destruction!

V4: Yay! We saved the whole planet from destruction!

V5: We go back to small scale stuff like cracking jokes, reading comics, and hanging out with Oscar.

However, It isn't a deal breaker and it can definitely stand in its own right.

2. Everything else looks fine and I would just like to read a chapter or 2.