Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-70.164.251.83-20180411173532/@comment-26018514-20180412074235

SomeoneYouUsedToKnow wrote: 1) For starters, I would show actual fights. -

2) I would not send everyone off into a series of 1v1s... --

3) Regardless of whether we went with Teamfight or 1v1s... ---

4) When Yang runs off to the elevator...

5) I would have Cinder pay more attention to Ruby... ---

6) With the White Fang, I would have them putting more of a fight... -

7) With Raven vs Cinder... Raven would still win...

And during the fight, when Raven is being choked by Cinder's arm, have her attack it to break free....

8) Change Yang's reaction to seeing Blake during the fight...

9) Have Merc, Emerald or Hazel try to attack RWY while they're distracted by Blake.

10) Show an actual fight between Adam, Blake and/or Sun....

1-4. Agreed, tbh, I would have had Ruby Blast through simultaneously, show Emerald's blades capturing her foot simultaneously with Merc catching Yang's other arm, then show Ruby re-direct into an attack on Mercury Emerald try's deflecting with her other weapon(to prevent the Scythe killing him) only to reveal at the last second that Ruby goes for a kick(with her free leg) as Yang disengages her arm while launching herself past Weiss's newly forming Icewall using her remaining weapon.

5. agreed 6. I would have had more WF on WF violence too, with some WF trying to kill deserters and others like "dude!, WTF are you trying to do killing Jerry just for dropping his weapon?"

7. A. I would have just had Vernal "die" in a more believably survivable spot... like under a branch that serves as an overhang to the door(perhaps 2 that act as a natural trellis).

B. Agreed

8/9. I might have just cut that meeting entirely if Blake didn't stay anyways, maybe show Blake glimpse them across Haven, then Yang see her while looking back from the shaft as she reaches it.

10. Agreed