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Also, I don’t mean to come off as an attention hog, but...

Glitchee123z wrote: Glitchee123z wrote: Anyways, here’s my attempt on rewriting BB:

So at this point, Yang is still mad at Blake for leaving, and that talk with Weiss didn’t exactly settle things. We get a new scene where Blake and Yang are sitting on the train while Ruby and Weiss are chasing eachother. (Because that’s fucking adorable) Blake tries to start a conversation due to the awkward silence, but Yang isn’t feeling very talkative, with a hint of bitterness.

So we get the scene with RWBY in the dorms, however Yang, instead of reading a book, or whatever that was, is sitting there, brooding. Ruby senses the tension between the two, and suggests they all play a video game. Yang goes to get her stuff, Blake tries to help her, and we see Yang getting slightly annoyed by this. Ruby and Weiss look uneasy, but otherwise the scene plays out as normal.

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I’m back with the rest.

So Chapter 5 rolls around. The episode plays out as normal until the scene with Yang and Blake. Yang sees a hallucination of Adam, asks if he’s still out there, and after some other dialogue Blake says she’s not gonna leave Yang again.

But here’s the twist.

Yang scoffs, and responds sarcastically. This is when Blake brings up the moment when she left Yang. After some other shit, Yang outright snaps and tells her to shut up. Blake is left in shocked silence. The two go back to the house without another word, and that’s all the BB Interactions that episode.

I’m thinking of putting in some more character moments between the two in both chapters 8 and 9, but I haven’t thought of ‘em.

....however, i’m thinking maybe Ruby talks with Yang about how the latter is just projecting her feelings about Raven onto her. So that happens, and then the rest of the episode plays out like it did in the real RWBY.

So chapter 10 rolls around. Yang drops Blake off near the radio tower, and we get yet ANOTHER Bumblebee moment between the two before Yang drives off.

And now, chapter 11. Blake barely survives her fight with Adam. Yang arrives on the scene. She freezes, trembling in fear as she recalls what happened during Beacon. Adam fights her, but like back in Beacon, she struggles against him. Yang manages to gain the upper hand, but then things take a turn for the worst. Adam charges his Moonslice Semblance. Blake yells out “NO!” Yang freezes once more. Adam strikes, but Blake jumps in just in time to take the blow, but she receives a nasty injury. (I’m thinking either a severed hand or a large gash)

Blake is left screaming and bleeding profusely from the wound. Adam taunts Yang. This is where Yang basically explodes with anger. Powered by her Semblance, she easily gains the upper hand and breaks his aura, but doesn’t stop there. She begins beating the ever-living shit out of the poor dude, to the point where (maybe) Blake runs over to calm her down. We get yet another BB moment where Blake apologizes tearfully before she falls unconscious.

So after the incident with the Leviathan, Ruby’s party is arrested for stealing military property and endangering the citizens of Argus. They are to be transported to Atlas to await trail. Yang is separated from Blake, who is hospitalized aboard the airship.

Whaddya think?