Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27447621-20160508230102/@comment-26397825-20160510054630

Point2600 wrote: Jacob MK2 of ACJU/ JUNG (name pending)

Core Info

1) Basic info

-Symbol: A black suit on a Golden Background

Same problem applies. You can't set the background colour, as people aren't always going to make sure it has a gold background. If it was displayed on, say, a tv screen like the Vytal Festival was broadcast on, it would have a blue background.

Also, what kind of suit? Do you mean he literally has a picture of a suit as his symbol? Or do you mean a specific suit of cards?

2) Appearance

-Aura Colour:   Gold

-Aura Effects Causes his clothing to Glow the colours corresponding to his aura (I know only the audience can see but I love the glow effect

-Height: 170 cm

-Weight: 65 kg

-Eyes: Green

-Skin colour: Olive

-Face: Gaunt with high cheekbones (like Romain Grosjean)

-Hair: has long flowing red hair like shoulder length

I'll say it here, since someone is bound to mention it. What ties his physical appearance to his name? Practically everyone has a physical trait that fits their name, even those with colour last names. Personally, I don't have a problem with not having a tie between them, but I know a few people will nitpick it.

II) Semblance

-Name: Silvertongue

-Short Description:   When he talks or sings he can choose to charm or lull the hearers into a sleep.

(One or two short sentences describing the semblance)

-Activation Cue: Causes his clothing to glow Gold again but the gold seems to discolour ground giving it golden sheen and shining flecks

Okay, so he lulls people sleep...by charm to mean they are susceptible to his suggestions? A better name would be Hypnosis by that description, as Silvertongue is more talking them into something than charming or lulling them to sleep.

Looks okay. Background is a bit odd to me though. Why does his father stare at his stick while talking to him?