Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150910235150/@comment-24993958-20151017091618

Leslie E. Isa wrote:  

1) Basic Info

Name: Wolf Ramtry (Based on the gray wolf)

1)Basic info:

Wolf faunus being a wolf goes against current canon. Fox is not a fox faunus and Velvet is not named rabit, nor is Blake named Cat. They have stated they will not name a faunus after their animal, because it would be redundant. You need to find another name.

2)Backstory

How do you receive poor grades by staying in a library all the time…while having more physical strength…is this pokemon cause I think I’m in a trick room... You need to clean this section up. You claim he spends all the time in the library, and then claim he learned multiple martial art…while not spending time learning them, because he was in a library…I don’t care how gifted he is if he doesn’t work that natural physical strength, there won’t be anything to show for it. As a side note, mention what books he read, preferably not school related if you want his grades to tank.

3) Closing

Making him the founder of the wf is just asking for trouble…I mean what are you going to do if we ever get shown a picture of the dude? I can guarantee you he won’t be the same and your character will be left…with a 0 chance to exist, I’d leave him as a spy and remove any canon correlations, even the tricking lagune part, because that back-story will get frowned upon by anyone with a remote headcanon on the wf leader identities…but if you really want to go with this ou need to go AU