Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20150826074135/@comment-26397825-20151027035028

TheRozenQueen wrote: Name: Symphonia Description: The user releases sound waves that extend up to 15m around them. They inflict different effects on anyone who hears them, including the user. Alone, induces Mozart Effect (improves concentration).

Visual Effect: Small colored circles appear from around the user's fingers and extend outwards before shortly dissapearing. A short beat also appears. What sound depends on the user's current mood when used, though use of Dust can alter them. If no Dust is used, it sounds similar to a trumpet.

Dust Interaction: -Fire: Improves physical strength, makes one more angry. Violin-like sound.

-Ice: Improves defensive capability, makes one more sad. Piano-like sound.

-Lightning: Increases stamina and reaction time, makes one more energetic. Guitar-like sound.

-Wind: Increases agility and dextery, makes one more relaxed. Flute-like sound.

-Earth: Brown Note. Drum-like sound.

General Limitations: -Can affect enemies.

-The people affected, user included, may find the beat repeating itself on their heads for a short while after it appears. Often depends on the beat and the person.

-Can easily reveal one's position through the sounds.

-Only 1 effect at a time, effects last for up to 1 minute except Brown Note which lasts for 10 seconds. Using a beat while one is already in effect replaces it with the newer one.

-Using a beat while it's already present extends the duration, but also multiplies the Aura cost. Multiplier drops if one waits until the previous beat is gone. Really? Earth is a Brown Note and Ice is defensive? Why not use the maginifying effect of Ice when shaped properly (you can light a fire with ice after all) for improved accuracy, and have Earth be the defensive one?

Also, ten seconds of intense diarrhoea is a lot. People can die, or get extremely sick from that, you know.

Can you clarify something; you say it induces different effects on people, including the user. Do you mean it has different effects depending on the dust used, and that only one note is used each time she uses it, which induces that effect on everyone that hears it?

And...is there a reason you aren't using the template provided? Just a question. You seem to instead have gone for LivenandSounds template. I will tell you the same thing I told him: if you want the semblance to be put in the list for the next thread, please make a short description that is no more than two sentences.