Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27425734-20160505164117

Looks good; except Vale doesn't have a standing army. Only Atlas has this, the other Kingdoms just draft soldiers if the need arises, so Eve's father being an officer in Vale's military wouldn't make sense in the canon. Also, there appears to be an error in her Personality section like you tried quoting something, and then cut it off partially.