Talk:Blake Belladonna/@comment-36530241-20190605005049/@comment-5430952-20190612210557

@Sull King Sug

But why would Ghira go solo if the White Fang was fighting for the same cause, not to mention wasn't an extremist group as they became under Sienna and Adam? Not to mention with Ghira dead, there's no one to create a new organization after the White Fang collapses after the Battle of Haven, so the Faunus are left without a voice.

Not to mention you're changing Blake's entire life just to make this rewrite work. You change too much then it'll make it that much harder for the plot to make sense. I can't see this Blake leaving the White Fang, not after her parents were murdered by humans, teenagers are far more temperamental then you're giving them credit.

And again, you're missing the whole point about Sienna. She's around the same age as Ghira so she has much more experience in fighting for Faunus rights, why would this new High Leader choose some cocksure youth instead? She wouldn't stand for it, since she's far more suitable for the role than Adam.

Not to mention making Team CFVY main characters and then splitting them up for no reason. Team RWBY and JNPR had reasons behind their division, Team CFVY didn't. And even if they did come they'd still get clobbered by Tyrian, so what would be the point of their presence?

Same with Yang, since she never learns from her mistakes in your rewrite she's bound to suffer an even worse fate than what happened between her and Adam. And Tai won't be there to get her back in the game. So she could either be killed by Tyrian, or possibly Mercury since he has no more reason to hold back in Haven.

And you do realize that Atlas sealed its borders, right? So even if Adam survives Volume 6, how is he gonna get into Atlas? And with the CCT down, he has no feasible means of staying in touch with his brethren. So once the group reaches Atlas, Adam can't reach them anymore, so what's he gonna do? It was more merciful letting him die in Argus, since now he can't hurt anyone else anymore.