Thread:Bajarias.josef/@comment-26397825-20171026131404/@comment-26397825-20171207143807

It’s not that Cyan is a Gary Stu for beating her, it’s that you write her in a way that makes her seem like an idiot for not using her skills. You need to find a medium between Ruby making a mistake and Cyan being an opportunist and Ruby being an idiot and Cyan winning because of sheer dumb luck at her idiocy.