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Here's an old OC I made and I decided to fix his template.

1) Basic info

-Name: Shen Jiang

-CNR explanation: Jiang is derived from the Chinese word translated to "Great River". His color and clothing reflect water associated colors.

-Species: Human

-Age: 17

-Gender: Male

-Symbol: Stylized cloud on a fishing line.

-Handedness: Right

-Physical traits: N/A

-Misc traits: Wears a scarf over his shoulders that covers his lower half of the face.

-Nicknames:

-Occupation: Haven Academy Student

2 )Appearance

-Aura Colour: Jade

-Aura Effects: Small rippling of light from where he walks.

-Height: 5' 7"

-Eyes: Green

-Skin color: Fair

-Hair: Black

-(Type of) Outfit: Casual: A large pale blue zip up windbreaker jacket with loose sleeves, blue-green shirt underneath. Wears one sleeve over his left arm with the other tied around his waist like a sash. A black belt on baggy dark blue pants. Wears black shoes with white soles. Has a large belt over waist to hold weapon and grenades.

-Gadgets (if any): Dust grenades carried on his belt.

3) Characteristics

-Background: Shen Jiang originally hails from a small town in Mistral. This town's locals are generally calm people and very well self taught. Shen spends his free time fishing at the town's out of the way lake. He loves the tranquility and silence while he fishes as it makes him feel at peace. He doesn't always catch fish, but finds the act itself relaxing. From all the time he spent at the water, he tapped into his Semblance through the serenity and intense concentration. Unfortunately, with all the time he spent alone, he came under a disturbing revelation. He had nothing left for him in his town of silence. It got to him and started to invade his peaceful thoughts. All he did was fish and sit in silence alone, with no one to interact with, nothing to see. During the occasional Grimm attack on his town, he saw the fighting back as a the solution he was looking for. He thought he needed a pace of change to such an extreme, he was willing to break away from the town and go far away. As a Huntsman, he could go places where things would never be dull, full of life that he could live to the fullest. Shen went to a local combat school to train and become ready to apply to Haven. This was not so he could only fight the Grimm, but to prepare for the negativity they bring with them. His combat skills grew immensely and learned to use a calm mind to fight. As for his academics, he also read and studied the various strategies and leaders of Remnant's history to apply their skills to himself. After a few years, he felt ready and got accepted to Haven Academy.

-Personality: Generally laid back and mild mannered, Shen likes quiet and relaxing. He is passive, calm, and believes things work out in the end if you pace it instead of forcing it. Surprisingly sharp minded and observant. Almost to the point of unsettling, he has a happy demeanor that leads him to make fun at other people as well as playfully tease them to see their reactions. Mainly due to prolonged isolation, he developed an extreme annoyance in boredom, seeking to do more, but not so repetitively. In serious situations, he adopts a commanding disposition. Is a believer in being prepared for any situation, however impractical.

-Likes: Fishing, sleeping, fruit salad.

-Dislikes: Unreachable itches, super sugary stuff, ghost stories.

4) Trivia: Based on Jiang Ziya, the famous strategist of 11th century China.

-Notable relationships: Late father.

-Notes: Hates horror films and scary stories since an incident watching a movie at night in the theaters. Shen ended up having anxiety attacks.

I) Weapons

-Name: Tai Gong

-Type: Flexile Ranged Flailing Rod (FRFR)

-Short Description: A flexile metal fishing rod that can also be used as a flail/whip. Can be used to hook onto objects to move or throw them.

II) Semblance

-Name: Splashdown

-Short Description:  Creates a volume of water between the user and the point of impact.

-Visual effect: Shen walks with a glowing green ripple effect from each step he takes in water when Semblance is active.

-Reflection of Semblance: Has a calm personality that is still and unclouded, similar to a lake. Reaction is responsive to subtlties like the surface of water is to anything moving on it.

III) Combat Info

-Class/Position: Strategist

-Landing strategy: Uses water to soften the impact.

-Fighting Style: Mid range fighter. Strikes heavily at the opportune moment but fights while keeping careful watch of the situation. Fights the opponent accordingly.