Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-27447621-20171202203906

Shiyilang wrote: Again, hope i'm not interrupting

Part 2 of the Fay ladies:

Core Info

1) Basic Info

Name: Invidia Sangria

Some things I noticed

Sangria would, I think, be fine for a CNR connection, but I personally wouldn't use envy as a CNR tie.

Teams are typically formed without much regard for what each individual member wants. Your partner is the first person to make eye contact with you, and your other team members are the ones who randomly grab the same relic. I can understand a character wanting to be at the top, but I see no reason for her friends to stop accepting her for events beyond anyone's control. And as shown by the relationship between RWBY and JNPR, people can be friends outside of teams.

And most of your story and personality seems to be based on this. Her rise to the top and subsequent violence and sadism are all based on her a) not making any friends within her team and b) her getting mad at events beyond anyone's control, unless her friends just ditched her after she wasn't included on the team with her.

I actually came up with an idea very similar to Somnus (and even called it that at one point) for my Freddy Krueger inspired OC, but I think the ability to cause a coma in targets is too much.

I believe the absolute max is 70, so it's not absurdly OP as far as stats go, but I wouldn't go too much higher, and it may be a bit too high for age 37 if you'd like to keep that in mind.