Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-25396609-20190616185358

So, I've been working out lore for a group of characters. I'd like some opinions on the overview.

Atlesian First Enhanced Infantry: Callsign Rejects

The Rejects are a fireteam lead by the Specialist Callum Abate, with aid from his 2IC Benton Redwood. The other members of the squad are enlisted men and women with the Atlesian military who, despite being qualified Huntsmen, were not granted the rank or title of Specialist due to various circumstances.

They act as a forward-assault and point-defense team working in hot zones too dangeorus to dispatch traditional units. They were founded in the wake of the Fall of Beacon as an experimental unit to offset reliance on mechanical troops due to fear of another wide-scale hack on Atlesian technology.

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">The members of The Rejects are:

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">-COL Callum Abate: unit CO, one of two actual Specialists in the unit; sniper, stealth Semblance

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">-LTC Benton "Sheriff" Redwood: 2IC, the other Specialist: uses robot horses that act as mobile armories for non-transforming weapons; Semblance is Angel's Glow, a healing ability. Technology specialist, in particular programming/hacking

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">-Stein Grau: Former White Fang (before they turned evil), has a big-ass prosthetic arm with retractable armor shredding claws and a Dust system built in; Semblance lets him hulk out a bit, causing him to temporarily develop more animalistic traits (is a Faunus).

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">-Asche Stauss: uses a pair of combat knives with triggers that control the Dust release system on his gas mask; Semblance lets him convert the contents of his lungs into thick smoke, his gas mask is equipped with a pump to allow him to release the smoke he generates in a concentrated stream and augment it with Dust.

<span style="color: rgb(220, 221, 222); font-family: Whitney, "Helvetica Neue", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px; font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: pre-wrap; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration-style: initial; text-decoration-color: initial; display: inline !important; float: none;">-Hadrian Nightshade: rewrite pending on weapon, has the selective control of bodily functions thing I posted the other day. Can be creepy as fuck sometimes but is also the most level-headed and charismatic of the bunch owing to his ability to modulate hormone and pheremone production.