Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-50.37.30.133-20150217081148

50.37.30.133 wrote: I recently wrote a RWBY one shot. It's my first foray into the RWBY fanfiction archive. Honestly, I'm looking for feedback really. Did I capture the characters properly? Is my writing good? Is the story good? I'm looking for critiscisms to help me improve. Any help and feedback would be obliged.

The Ring Hey. It's me again. There was some craziness, and the story ended up getting deleted (it's a really really really long story). But, before I published it again, I edited it a bit. So here's the new link.

The Ring