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@ManOfManyTales

Read through your work and left a review. I believe a single chapter one-shot could have worked just as well. Not necessarily better, as both options would have had their pros and cons. However it definately would have worked and left off with a more refined end point rather than an unrefined 'The End.'

I kind of had the feeling that in the 2nd chapter you definately had the skill but perhaps not necessarily the time or interest to devote to a more refined conclusion at the very end. It is like Edison is quoted as saying: "Genius is one percent inspiration, ninety nine percent perspiration." I think this is especially true in writing, trying to balance Real Life and inventing fiction.