Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160518062840/@comment-14138255-20160520024157

Kirito Rose wrote: I think HIS back story for Rhea ALOT better than mine. It gives the reader a better description of what his life was like, and doesn't make him so cliche. Yes, I admited that my character's story was cliche.

PS. It takes alot for me to suck up to something like that. It shouldn't. If you want to continue to make OC's, you have to be prepared to accept criticism and see what we see in the character.