Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24573226-20160623204034/@comment-27447621-20160827024832

Phantomlink959 wrote: That is the most blatant gary stu bullshit I have ever seen. Yeaaaah...

I would suggest, not throwing away the character but changing the overall plot. I think the character may still be workable (But I don't know because I still don't have anything to read about Naranja, please post the link to the OC), but a plot done that much...You're on shaky ground my friend.