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I'm working on a villainous OC for a story I'm writing. So contributions and critiques would be helpful.
 * Name: Viridis Nedoras
 * Team/occupation: Former huntress/Escaped convict
 * Species: Human
 * Traits: Long (waist-length), curly, bright blood red hair.  Shining emerald eyes, sparkling with traces of insanity.  Insanely beautiful
 * Other:  MAKEUP: black eyeliner done in a winged style.  dark, midnight blue eyeshadow. sinfully red lipstick.  JEWELERY: Wears a pendant around her neck; a gold chain with a large, round, glowing emerald at the end which hangs just above her bosom.
 * Age: 37
 * Sex: Female
 * Handedness: Left
 * Height: 5 ft 9 in
 * Weight: ...average
 * Physique: Curvy & Buxom
 * Combat Outfit: Same as casual
 * Casual Outfit: She wears all black.  A black satin corset top.  She wears long, fingerless, gloves-- actually detatched sleeves-- that go up to her shoulders (Along with her top, it forms the image of a complete top)(NOTE: there are intricate, green lines etched along the sleeves-- green "air" elemental dust imbued into her clothing).  A long mermaid skirt with a slit where the right leg sticks out.  Beneath her skirt, she wears leggings and thigh-length boots.  She wears a long cloak with a bushy fury collar propped up around her neck and shoulders (I should mention, she has a sort of flair for the dramatic).  Finally, she has a fedora which she wear tilted downward over the left side of her face.
 * Personality: EXTREMELY Sadistic
 * Aura/Effects: Her aura manifests in a bright green color.  She uses her aura to manipulate the air and wind around and through her body, enabling her to move and attack faster, and even allow herself to levitate and fly.  Her aura also activates the green air dust, which she uses for offensive purproses (she can conjure and fire powerful blasts of winds as an attack.  She can also create wind barriers around herself.  Her greatest ability is that when she spins rapidly, she conjures a powerful whirlwind around herself).
 * Semblance: Given that her aura and her dust element revolve aorund wind/air, her semblance is teleportation. (I still need A LOT OF HELP on the dust/aura/semblance thing)
 * Weapon:  Her weapon is based on a polearm or spear type weapon called a Partisan (google it).  Viridis' is double-sided (a spearhead at each end), and she can detatch it into two separate, and smaller, spears which she dual-wields.  Her weapon is called "Malvagio"
 * Fighting style:  She's very "magic" based (for lack of a better word).  She'll use her aura to activate her dust and attack from a distance.  However, she will shift into physical attacks if her opponent gets too close.
 * Background: Viridis was once a huntress along with her older sister, Scarlet.  One day, the sisters went on a joint mission with a younger Ozpin, Glynda, and Ironwood to handle a large Grimm infestation.  During the fight, the two sisters got separated.  In the ensuing mayhem, Scarlet was killed when a tree fell on top of her, crushing her to death.  Viridis arrived too late to save her.  Despite not being there and not knowing what happened, she believed that Ozpin, Ironwood, or Glynda could have saved her sister-- and she blamed them for her death.  She became reclusive, shutting herself out from the outside world. Leaving occasionally to handle a mission; she used these missions to vent out her anger and agression, but it just kept building and bubbling under the surface, until one day... she finally snapped.  During a "friendly" spar, Viridis almost killed Glynda, resulting in her being expelled from Beacon (I feel like Beacon wouldn't have been around at that time.  Did Ozpin create Beacon?).  The anger at Ozpin and Glynda, the greif for her dead sister, and the agression she constantly tried to bottle up drove her insane.  Years after her expulsion, she attacked Ozpin and Glynda as well as the city of Vale.  After an intense fight (until it's officially stated otherwise, let's say this fight is why Ozpin walks with a cane), Viridis was subdued and arrested.  Given the threat she posed, she was placed in solitary in a Maximum security prison uner heavy guard... but she's been waiting quietly, biding her time and building her power.  Now (during the present), she's finally ready.  She has broken out of her prison and is coming to get her revenge.  And she won't stop until Ozpin, Glynda, and Ironwood... and anyone who dares try to stand in her way, are dead.
 * Notes: Most of the characters in RWBY are based on, inspiried by, or allude to fairy tale, mythology, or folk tale characters.  Given that Ozpin, Glynda, and Ironwood are all based on characters from the same body of work (L. Frank Baum's Oz books), I wanted a villain to match their symbolism.  So, Viridis is based on the Wicked Witch of the West.  Although I do feel I could have made it much much subtler.  "Viridis" is the Latin word for green (in many popular TV and film adaptations of the Oz works, the Wicked Witch is portrayed as having green skin.  Her eyes and aura are also green).  Her last name "Nedoras" is Lithuanian for "wicked."  Her weapon's name is another translation for "wicked;" "Malvagio" is the Italian translation of the word.  Even her traits are attributed to her alusion as the Wicked Witch.  For example, when she uses her aura to fly through the air, she sits on her weapon as she does so (Only she sits on it like one would sit on a chair as opposed to a witch riding a broom).  Her sister is an allusion to the Wicked Witch of the East.  In the 1939 MGM film, the Wicked Witches of the East and West are sisters (in the books, they are merely members of the same coven).  Her name, Scarlet, is also based on the 1939 film-- the Wicked Witch of the East's RUBY slippers (Ruby and Scarlet both being synonymous with red)