Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-23790511-20150210221108/@comment-10380701-20150212000600

I said I'll read it when I get home. Screw that shit, I lied since I hit the sack far too early when I got him.

So let's get this out of the way.

I'm not huge on post apocalyptic stuff. But I am huge on post-POST-apocalyptic stuff.

You automatically hooked me when you've said shit has already gone down and New Slate had already rebuilt.

That out of the way, minus the unexplained earthquake (I'm gonna assume this is not just a random one), most aspects of the plot is actually interesting. Finding one's self-identity in a new, transformed world tends to have the same effect as a constructed world.

In this case, the audience surrogate are the protagonists themselves, as they are as unfamiliar as us to how Earth works now.

I kinda wanted more on the background story aspect (Relation of the government w/ the people for example) but maybe it's currently spoilers.

All in all, this has potential. A draft of the prologue or an early chapter would be nice down the line.