Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20151120024732/@comment-1292715-20151126044038

I had posted my OC on a blog recently, which I understand was not the best idea. I had made a few major changes to him from that blog, mainly his name: it was originally going to be Blood Moon which I admit is far too edgy of a name for someone who isn't exactly that dark of a character, really just quiet with a temper. So I decided try and go with a name that better suits his fighting style, and something a bit more creative. I came up with Mars McNight, though I'll admit I'm not 100% sure of it.

1)Basic info 2)Appearance 3)Characteristics 4) Trivia a) Weapons b) Semblance c) Combat Info d) Statistics
 * Name: Mars McNight
 * CNR explanation: Mars is the Roman god of war, and the planet named after him is the color red. McNight contains the word ‘night’, often associated with colors of the night sky.
 * Species: Faunus (wolf)
 * Age: 18
 * Gender: Male
 * Symbol: Crescent with a howling wolf head.
 * Handedness: Ambidextrous
 * Physical traits: Wolf-like fangs and retractable claws. A set of tri-claw scars across his face.
 * Misc traits: Carries a white star necklace that he keeps in his pocket.
 * Occupation: Second Year Shade Academy Student
 * Aura/Effects: Swirls of crimson energy.
 * Height: 5’8”
 * Weight: 150 lbs
 * Eyes: Teal
 * Skin color: Tan
 * Hair: Crimson, wavy, neck-length locks.
 * Combat Outfit: A black shirt under a navy blue leather jacket with a red moon on the back. White open finger gloves. Khaki pants. A black belt with a wolf head buckle. Brown leather boots. A red chain necklace with his symbol as a token.
 * Background: As a kid living in Vacuo, Mars use to be carefree and always eager for adventure. He and his younger sister, Luna, had always dreamed of becoming Hunters, Mars for the adventure and Luna to protect people. Mars often took his sister out exploring around the fields of Vacuo. Unfortunately, one of these adventures strayed too far into Grimm territory, and the children were attacked by an Ursa. Mars managed to escape with not but a large scratch across his face, but Luna wasn’t so fortunate and got devoured by the Ursa. Mars blames himself for his sister’s death, and has become quiet and reserved ever since. Not to mention angry, both at the Grimm for existing and at himself for getting his sister killed. He attended Shade Academy to become a Huntsman to fulfill his sister’s wish to protect the people, and to help prevent such a tragedy from ever occurring again. To this day he still carries his sister’s white star necklace to remind himself why he fights.
 * Personality: Most of the time Mars is very quiet and reserved, usually only speaking when he deems necessary. He’s a bit of an enigma, not wanting to let anyone know what he’s thinking. While he tends to come off as cold to most people, he’s actually a pretty nice guy once you get to know him, and has a strong sense of honor. He also has a short temper, and while he shows a good level of restraint, he tends to lash out physically when you irritate him enough. This temper can sometimes get the better of him, especially in combat situations where his Semblance can cause him to go berserk if he reaches his boiling point, and it becomes difficult to calm him down until the object of his rage is destroyed/subdued or his Aura drops dangerously low from overexertion.
 * Likes: Steak; privacy; peace and quiet; people who respect others for who they are; combat
 * Dislikes: Grimm; people who judge others based on appearance and/or first impressions; White Fang for giving Faunus a bad name; ignorance
 * Notable relationships: Luna McNight (Sister, deceased)
 * Notes: If he were to meet Ruby Rose, he’d have a soft spot for her because she reminds him of Luna.
 * Name: Warwolf (pun on werewolf)
 * Type: Dividable Shotgun Claymore (DSC)
 * Short Description: When strapped to his back, it takes a red rectangular form with black gunbarrels in the middle and a blue rectangular handle with a noticeable seam down the middle. When drawn, it takes on its claymore form, where the red parts expand slightly and reveal two long blades on either side, giving a two pronged appearance at the end. The claymore can be split in half into a pair of longswords. Both longswords can then convert into shotguns capable of firing buckshot pellets or slugs.
 * Name: Fury
 * Short Description: Converts anger into power; the angrier he gets, the stronger he becomes. Caution: The more power he channels, the more at risk he is at losing self-control, and the faster his aura drops.
 * Visual effect: A crimson wind surrounds him. Grows more intense the more power he channels.
 * Class/Position: Berserker
 * Landing strategy: Either grabs onto something with his retractable claws, or uses the shotguns to soften his landing.
 * Fighting Style: He lets his opponent make the first move to assess their abilities before rushing them down, attacking relentlessly and giving them no chance to counterattack. When using Warwolf’s claymore form he uses the momentum of its weight to his advantage. When using the twin longswords, he trades power for speed. He uses the shotguns as if they were pistols. He’ll occasionally use his retractable claws to attack or throw kicks if he needs to. However, taking damage or becoming annoyed by his opponent tends to make him angry, translating into his Fury Semblance, and he goes berserk and acts on primal instinct if his semblance goes out of control.
 * Strength: 3
 * Agility: 2
 * Aura reserve: 2
 * Aura manipulation: 1
 * Dust Manipulation: 0
 * Dust use: 1
 * Weapon Skill (Primary): 3
 * Weapon Skill (General): 2

So what do you think? Do you think the character's name is better than the one I originally had planned? Are there any flaws you think I should fix? Any advice on how to improve this is welcome. I'd appreciate it.