Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-27447621-20171209060011

Ok. Let's get into this.

With regards to the team name, most teams in the show (with the sole exception that I can think of being FNKI) have names whose colors match with the color of the leader (RWBY and Ruby are both red, Coco (Cocoa) and CFVY (Coffee) are both brown shades, etc.), so that's something to keep in mind. I do like the Team's CNR connection, though.

I understand it's an AU thing, but can you briefly explain the Seer mask? The biggest problem with the mask that I can see is that it's a Grimm mask, which are strongly associated in the eyes of Remnant's people as a sign of the White Fang. And she donned this mask after she saw the White Fang razing Vale. It doesn't make a ton of sense.

Wait, she was outdone by her peers? I thought you said her intelligence and combat skills were stellar.

I feel like her heroic mindset clashes somewhat with her lust for power and control...

Include Likes and Dislikes, if not on this character then in the future. It really helps flush out a character and add depth.

…I agree with Sentry, that is a lot to ask a handgun to do. I can…kind of see the transformation working as is, but where does the wielder insert ammo? Where the heck is the chain located? I doubt any chain of reasonable length and all the moving parts for the rotation of the gun barrel can be housed in that one gear-shaped area.

You're math's right on that total, btw.