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'''Hopefully the characters aren't OOC this time. Hazel doesn't dab and that's an accomplishment in itself.'''

Late at night, Jacques Schnee is sitting at his desk until he hears a knocking,

"Come in." The door opens, revealing Arthur Watts with Tyrian following along.

"Greeting, Jacques Schnee." Watts says. "Remember me?"

"Ho-ho-ho!  If it isn't Dr. Watts! I remember you from my monthly check-ups when I was constipated!"

"Those sure were shitty times." Watts jokes and the two mustached men laugh.

"What brings you to Atlas?" Jacques asks.

"We need your forces. Your bitch of a daughter and her team are going to Atlas." Watt replies.

Jacques grits his teeth. "I will be controlled by some animal!" He points at Tyrian who lunges at the desk and points his stinger at Jacques' face.

"You best follow...or else...the prey will prey on the predator..." Tyrian sneered before giggling.

Meanwhile at Salem's mansion...

Mercury is training while Hazel is lifting 500 ton weights.

"Hey Mercury, I've been thinking..." Emerald said.

"If it's about how you want to get the hell of here, I don't wanna hear it." Mercury said cutting her off.

"No it's not that. In fact it's the opposite. Y'know, I was actually considering leaving this place and becoming a hero. But then I wondered, "Maybe Tyrian is right." After all I hate that happy silver eyed girl with a burning passion."

"Atta-girl Em! I can't wait to rip her silver eyes right out of her skull, boil them, and eat em like meatball! I can almost taste em already!" Mercury slurps loudly. Hazel stared in shock at the two psychopaths.

"I can't wait to watch her optimism fade as I skin her alive! Her Grace will be pleased with me." Emerald says.

"For the umpteenth fucking time, Cinder doesn't care about you, thot!" Mercury slaps Emerald so hard she gets sent flying across the room. Mercury then notices a Seer Grimm floating nearby which he promptly flips off.

Salem sighs at Mercury's inappropriate hand gesture.

"Despite Mercury's rude gesture, I believe you three have redeemed yourself. You all will assist Watts and Tyrian in Atlas."

"Finally I get to kill that silver-eyed girl!" Emerald said rubbing her hands together while Mercury grinned ear from ear.

Meanwhile in Atlas...

Ruby, Yang, Weiss and Blake walk into a bar.

"What would you like?" The bartender asks.

"4 iced teas." Yang said. Blake slips the bartender 4 lien. The bartender pours the tea into 4 glasses with ice cubes in the bottom. Ruby, Blake, Yang, and Weiss all grab the glasses, drink in unison, and slam the glasses on the counter at the same time.

Meanwhile in a breakfast restaraunt in Atlas...

Mercury, Emerald, and Hazel are eating breakfast.

"Come on, I feel like I'm the only one eating. Try some of that. Have some eggs." Hazel said pushing a large bowl of scrambled eggs towards Emerald and Mercury.

"We're good." Mercury said, lighting up a cigarette, exhaling a puff of smoke and putting the cigarette out in a random customer's coffee cup.

"More for me!" Hazel said scarfing down the eggs. "Are you gonna finish those hash browns?"

Emerald and Mercury pushed their plates towards Hazel who gobbles them down quickly, topping the meal off by drinking an entire bottle of maple syrup.

"Is all this food necessary? I had to steal 2 wallets to pay for this!" Emerald remarked.

"Of course. I need large amounts of food to maintain my strength." Hazel replied.

Meanwhile...

In the Schnee Manor, Team RWBY are walking around until they hear maniacal laughing and brief footsteps. Weiss turns around and blocks an attack for a lunging Tyrian.

"Not this guy again!" Ruby mutters.

"We meet again Rose!" Tyrian respectifully bows. "However, this time I bought some company of my own."

Jacques Schnee steps in.

"How does it feel to have your father turn against you?" Tyrian tauntingly questioned Weiss. "Becoming a huntress to escape your family only to run into them again!"

​Tyrian broke out into laughter.

"Leave us alone." Yang growled.

"You sure left your messy head of hair alone for quite a few months at least." Yang growled again.

"Oh? It seems as if since your mother, Raven Branwen abandonned you, you've become insecure over the slightest attribute!"

Blake put herself between Yang and Tyrian.

"And you. Blake Belladonna. Whore of Adam Taurus. Trying so desperately to redeem yourself, to put yourself on a higher pedestal." Tyrian chuckled.

Yang fired a gunshot at Tyrian who intercepted with his tail. Team RWBY all charged at Tyrian but Tyrian easily dodged their attacks and overpowered them. Team RWBY were interrupted by several Atleasian Knights firing at them. Weiss glanced at her father who angrily stared at her.

"Weiss, you have crossed the line! It appears you listen to your teammates more than you listen to me. I know what I must do!"

Meanwhile...

Emerald, Mercury, and Hazel are walking across Atlas when they run into Cinder and Neo.

"Greetings, my Queen." Emerald said bowing down to Cinder.

"Hello Emerald. Hello Mercury." Cinder spoke in a condescending tone. Mercury scowled at her.

"Is there anything I can do that will please you, my Goddess?" Emerald asked.

"Bring me Ruby. You can kill her other teammates, you can injure her as critically as you please. As long as she is alive for me to finish off. As a reward, you will able to watch her death up close!"

Emerald growled. "I want to be the one that kills her!"

"You know what Tyrian said. An eye for an eye." Cinder then reached out and plucked out Emerald's left eye causing her to scream in pain.

"It's nothing personal. You just weren't worthy of that eye."

"I apologize, my queen."

Emerald then got up and looked at her reflection in a glass window. Blood was leaking out of her open eye socket.

"I kinda like this new look!" Emerald remarked before she broke out into laughter.

"Crazy bitch..." Mercury pulled out a juul and vaped it.

Meanwhile...

Team RWBY destroyed hundreds of knights until they heard a roar. Ruby looks out the window and sees thousands of Beringels flying across Atlas.

"Guys? Our problems got bigger."

Weiss, Yang, and Blake look outside the window in awe.

"What do we do?" Weiss asks.

"Weiss, you and I will deal with Scorpion man and Papa-Schnee. Blake and Yang, you two will help free the faunus."

Meanwhile...

Emerald, Mercury, and Hazel observed the huge amounts of Beringels flying through the sky. An pilot piloting an Atleasian Dropship recognized the three and flew at them. With a punch, Hazel halted the vehicle and threw it off the island.

Meanwhile...

Weiss and Ruby are fighting Tyrian. Tyrian clearly is overpowering the two. Weiss swings her sword but Tyrian blocks with his wristblades.

​​​​"My father doesn't speak for me. I'm sorry if the brand abused you-" Weiss was cut off by Tyrian's laugh.

"You still don't get it? The Schnee Dust Company is irrelevant in the grand scheme of things! The only thing that matters here is my divine savior!" Tyrian headbutted Weiss, damaging her aura. While Weiss was lying on the ground, Jacques grabbed her hand.

"None of this would've happened if you didn't leave Atlas. Look at your teammate getting her ass handed to her. You've disobeyed me for the final time."Jacques whispered in her ear. "I will go out of my way to make you suffer for your actions."

​​​​​​Ruby pushed Tyrian away and aimed Crescent Rose at Jacques. "Stay away from her!"

"You're just a kid! How dare you talk back to the president of the Schnee Dust Company-"  Jacques was cut off by Ruby firing a warning shot which grazed his shoulder, staining his white suit with his blood. Fearful, Jacques ran away from the Schnee Manor. Weiss chased after him while Ruby resumed her fight with Tyrian.

Meanwhile...

Blake and Yang approached the Faunus Labor Force. To their horror, they saw hundreds of faunus with ripped clothes, lacerations on their skin, and they were in chains. ​​

"Attention everyone!" Yang stood in front of the faunus. "Today, you're all officially free! You will never have to work for low wages in dangerous conditions again!"

The faunus cheered as Blake cut them free with Gambol Shroud. Several Atlesian knights tried to shoot them but the Faunus' numbers overwhelmed the knights, causing them to get dismantled.

Meanwhile...

Jacques Schnee was running across Atlas. Emerald, Mercury and Hazel noticed. Being an anti-capitalist Emerald flipped him off as he ran. Jacques finally stopped at the edge of Atlas, Weiss aimed her sword at him. Jacques smirked as a stray Atlesian Paladin stomped behind her and threw a punch at Weiss, damaging her aura and knocking Myrtenaster out of her hands. Weiss got up on her feet and tackled Jacques, repeatedly punching his face, giving him a broken nose and a black eye. Jacques shoved Weiss off him and got to his feet. As Weiss was about to retrieve her sword the Paladin threw another punch again, almost depleting Weiss' aura and critically injuring her. Jacques chuckled at his daughter's pain.

"How does it feel Weiss, being all alone? Your team not here to save you? You can never hope to stop the Schnee Dust Company. You spend 2 years of your life desperately trying to prove yourself to better than the Schnee name, and you failed. You failed miserably."

"She's not alone!" Jacques looked up and saw an army of his former faunus workers.

"And the company has already been stopped!" Another faunus cried out.

"Surrender now." Weiss said. "You'll be arrested, and spend the rest of your life in prison but at least you'll still be alive."

​​​​​Jacques scowled. "I've already planted several bombs in Atlas just in case that happens." Jacques then pulled out a button.

"If I can't have that power...no one can!" Before Jacques could press the button, his eyes widdened. He looked down and saw that Weiss had fired an icicle in her chest, dying his suit red. Blood began to fill his mouth.

"Surrender now and you'll be taken to a prison hospital." Weiss said.

"I'd...rather...die." Jacques pulled the icicle from his chest and dropped it on the floor. Blood leaked from his open wound as his eyes rolled to the back of his head. He slumped off the edge of the island, landing into the waters and sinking. Weiss looked over the edge before walking back to the Schnee Manor.

Meanwhile...

Ruby and Tyrian are fighting. Tyrian initally has the edge until Ruby uses her semblance, tiring the former out. Ruby aimed Crescent Rose at Tyrian's tail and fired, shattering it.

"FUCK!" Tyrian screamed. Ruby shot another bullet, this time it depleted Tyrian's aura.

"NO!" Tyrian cried out and broke down, sobbing loudly. Ruby reached her hand out in concern.

"I'LL RIP YOUR FUCKING EYES AND BATHE IN YOUR BLOOD!" Tyrian lunged at Ruby but Ruby fired a bullet into Tyrian's chest, ending him.

Soon after Tyrian's death, Ruby is approached Weiss, Yang and Blake. They get ready to fight the Beringels and Knights.

A few hours later...

Team RWBY has slain thousands of Grimm and Atleasian Knights until Emerald, Mercury and Hazel approach them.

"Sup *****s." Emerald said. (I'm not trying to be racist in slightest but Emerald appears to be black so thus she does have an N-word pass most likely,although Miles and Kerry don't have to have that.)

"If you have to die today, it's nothing personal." Hazel said.

"Can't really say Hazel speaks for us though." Mercury said exhaling a cloud of vape from his juul. "mmmm...bubblegum."

"Vaping is bad for you!" Ruby pointed at Mercury.

Team RWBY and Team MEH charged at each other. Yang punched Hazel in the face. Angry, Hazel injected himself with several dust crystals.

"That's a cute outfit, did your husband give it to you?" Yang taunted, Hazel charged at her. Yang tried to kick Hazel but he caught her foot.

"I like you! I think you're sexy!" Hazel spun Yang around faster and faster. "I YEET!"

Hazel hurled Yang so hard she went flying through the roof of the Schnee Manor and briefly reached orbit before falling back down. Meanwhile Ruby swung her scythe at Emerald.

"Remember Penny?! Remember when you killed her?! How could you?! I'm going to make you pay?!" Ruby yelled. Emerald smirked at her opponent's despair and hit her with her sickles.

"By the way, Cinder doesn't care about you!" Ruby yelled. ​​​

"You dare question my divine savior?!" Emerald shouts in pure rage, raising her sickles.

"Y'know, with a though I can make you feel nothing as I skin you alive." Emerald chuckled. "But I want to feel every bit of pain I inflict on you."

"Why do you hate me so much?!" Ruby asks.

"BECAUSE YOU'RE ALWAYS SO DAMN HAPPY! HOW COULD YOU BE SO DAMN HAPPY ALL THE TIME?!"

"Because I believe the world can change. And I will help change it, by getting rid of people you like you!" Ruby kicks Emerald off her.

"Where's the relic?!" Emerald demands aiming her sickles at Ruby. ​​​ "We hid it somewhere in this building." Ruby replies.

"Where?!" Emerald asks.​​​​​ ​​​​​

"It's in Room 69, next to Jacques' porn stash, you might find your mom's face on one of the magazines." Ruby taunts.

Meanwhile Yang falls back into the battlefield, punching Mercury in the face as she lands. Mercury kicks her in the face, creating a huge cut. Mercury then leans over and licks the blood off her face.

"Mmmmm...delicious...."

He grabs Yang's hair but Yang elbowes him away, causing a chunk to rip out. Mercury sniffs the chunk.

"Lavender."

Yang activates her semblance but quickly controls it.​​​​

Meanwhile Hazel pries open Blake's jaws like King Kong and begins pulling out her teeth with his bare hands.

"GET AWAY FROM HER!" Yang fires a gunshot at Hazel's groins.

"Argh! My hazelnuts!" Hazel clutches his crotch in pain. Mercury spins around creating a F5 Tornado, destroying most of the Schnee Manor. Blake and Yang grab both ends of Gambol Shroud and use it to tie up Hazel's legs, causing him to collapse.

"Kinky." Mercury taunts before footdiving Yang, which damages her aura. "I was only using 1% of my power during our battle at Beacon. This is 100% of my power!"

Mercury footdives her again, sending her back some more. Mercury attempts to footdive her again but Yang ducks and throws a punch with her robotic arm, causing Mercury's legs and Yang's arm to shatter. Surprisingly Mercury got up and used his upper-body strength to crawl towards Yang surprisingly fast, jump in the air, and start choking her.

"Harder daddy." Yang says.

"What?" Mercury asks, confused.

"What?" Yang taunts, taking advantage of her distracted opponent by punching Mercury in the face, depleting his aura.

"I may not be stronger but I'm smarter." Yang fires a gunshot at Mercury's groins, causing him to go into shock and die.

Meanwhile Ruby takes advantage of Emerald's missing eye by attacking her on the left side, knocking her to the ground with a strike from Crescent Rose.

"YOU'RE GOING TO PAY!" Ruby shouts as she aims Crescent Rose at Emerald's head but Emerald uses her semblance to make Team RWBY see the Schnee Manor burning. Team RWBY starts panicking until...

"Wait a minute, why would the Schnee Manor even be on fire in the first place?" Weiss asks, the illusion disapates as Emerald has used the remainder of her aura from making all of Team RWBY hallucinate.

"Nice try." Ruby taunts as she fires another shot from Crescent Rose into Emerald's good eye, causing her to scream in pain and preventing her from ever using her semblance again.

"YOU FUCKING BITCH!" Emerald shouts as she swings blindly at Ruby.

"Pathetic." Ruby spits at Emerald. Emerald countinues to run around.

"Sorry." Ruby says as she aims Crescent Rose at Emerald's head and pulls the trigger, killing her. "That was for Penny."

Team RWBY then approaches Hazel, ready to kill him too but Ruby stops them.

​"Why are you doing this?" She asks.

"Ozpin was responsible for my sister's death. He never should've let my sister become a huntress, she wasn't ready."

"This won't bring her back." Ruby says, patting Hazel's shoulder.

"Grr...I'll help you. I hated those fuckers anyway and nobody else has to die today.​​​​​" Team RWBY unties Hazel as he gets up.

That night...

Cinder and Neo approached the remains of the Schnee Manor. News has already spread about Jacques Schnee's death and there was nothing but chaos ever since. Much to Cinder's surprise, she sees Tyrian, Mercury, and Emerald all lying on the floor dead as well as Team RWBY with Hazel standing in front of her.

"What the fuck?" Cinder questions.

"Ooh, did you get a new eye?" Ruby taunts.

"Ruby, daughter of Taiyang and Summer, the whore!"

"Yeah, but you can call me Ruby the silver eyed warrior, has a nice ring to it don't you think?"

"I will burn you all alive! Everyone in Remnant will fear me, like a fat angry incel trying to pick up girls."

"Did that grimm arm come from your mom's side or your dad's side?" Ruby taunted.

"Fuck you!" Cinder shouted, Neo flipped off Ruby and Co in the background.

"Fuck you!" Ruby retaliated.

"FUCK YOOUUUUU!" Cinder fires a blast at Ruby who dodges.

"When I fucking kill you, I can't wait to shit and piss on your fucking corpse!" Cinder shouted. Team RWBY, Hazel, and Cinder all got in their fighting stances.

To be continued...(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPCLFtxpadE)

'''What's your opinion of this? Do you like it? Do you dislike it? Feel free to leave constructive criticism down below. I personally think it's a step up from my previous fanfic but I think it has a little too much cursing. If the characters are OOC feel free to let me know in the comments.''' 