Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150301171157/@comment-25343309-20150310212029

Jayhart and Phantomlink, thanks for the reviews of The end of peace

In response to Jayhart: while the cut from the Beowulf was mostly a token wound, the same arguement could be made for Weiss' injury in her trailer, I don't believe that aura is a perfect defence, the reason it was just four shallow cuts rather than his chest reduced to ribbons was his aura, but he still got hit and should show it even if only a little, and yeah, I should spread my character descriptions out more, I provide too much at once and sometimes overwhelm the rest of the story