Board Thread:Episode Discussion/@comment-5430952-20200104163125/@comment-30575510-20200114150839

ChishioKunrin wrote: Mopopri wrote: I think the Jacques scene could have been handled way better. For example he could claim that the footage Weiss had was fake just like the Penny video. This would create confusion among the group especially when you consider the footage contained a supposed dead man. This would all eventually come around to Robyn actually using her semblance in a meaningful way by forcing the truth out of Jacques. This would have been more rewarding imo because it's his own damn fault for inviting the woman into his home to begin with. In this rewrite he essentially played himself. A lot more satisfying than what we got. That would've been good, and it wouldn't have even extended the seen that much at all, so CRWBY wouldn't be able to say "Well, we didn't have time."

Literally, just

Ironwood: *Tells Weiss to pause the video*

Jacques: *Stands up in fake outrage* This is ridiculous! That video is clearly doctored, just like they claim the footage of that robot girl to be!

Robyn: Alright, I'm tired of this. If you're so sure that video is fake, take my hand and prove it. *Heads over to Jacques*

Jacques: I...

Robyn: *Holds her hand out*

Jacques: ..... *Tries to flee*

All they would have to do is rewrite one small piece of the scene, just like that scene in Volume 5 where Jaune just randomly already knows about Raven. That could've been fixed with a small change too!

Lionheart: Raven.

Ruby: *Gasp*

Jaune: Who?

Ruby: Yang's mom. I'll... explain later.

Boom, change two lines of dialogue. Why isn't Chishio on the CRWBY yet? She fixes poorly written dialogue, and notices the stuff that no one else pays attention to. Like ffffff uwu