Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-26397825-20190313094240

The thing is, Adam has a reason to hate the SDC. They literally branded him. Your OC has no reason to fly solo in his quest against the SDC, and every reason to instead join up with the White Fang properly and move up the ranks, aiming for harsher dealings with the SDC but overall pushing for better Faunus treatment.

And I'm still going to point out that a lance is not a sneaky weapon, so unles she uses martial arts for stealth attacks it doesn't make much sense. Since he didn't make it himself, you could have him make a new weapon that is more suited to his personality and fighting style once he hits Haven? Then you could go a more sneaky type of weapon.

Also, that is a sure-fire way to make people dislike your OC. People don't want to roleplay with Adam 2.0. Most fans hate Adam. They want to roleplay with an original character, who stands as their own thing rather than simply being an objectively 'better' version of a canon character.