Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27447621-20160508230102/@comment-24534644-20160515022902

1) Using a specific Pokemon as a naming inspiration. I personally take points off for that.

2) Minimum age for being a student Hunter is 17. Unless you're trying to be a special snowflake like Ruby (who is the main character of the show and has vastly hidden potential superpowers, so she can get away with it).

3) An emblem is not something that mystically appears on-and-off on the body. It is either a tattoo, or something that appears on clothing to symbolize the character.

4) Being something such as a Hunter typically requires being physically healthy. You're describing this character as though she's anorexic.

5) That's too much background even by MY standards.

6) Cold thief with a troubled past; how very original. And someone who isn't just distant with her teammates, but straight up doesn't bother to remember who they are, should not be on a team of any sort.

7) No relationships with canon characters. That is highly frowned upon.

8) Barrels on the fingertips? Where the f*** is the ammo stored? RWBY may be fantastic, but it at least bothers to keep the weapons visually sensible in how they function.

9) ................did you seriously give her two semblances? No. Just no.