User blog comment:WC-83/History of the Schnee Family/@comment-14078953-20130806025021

I must say this is a very cool theory/story, though I have a critique.

1: The events took place in way too short amount of time. In the real world it took us millions of years to invent farming and mining, in the RWBY world you have the Schnee Dust Company being founded during a time period that could be related to ancient Egypt or classical Greece. So expand the time line. Restructure the Fauna, Schnee dynasty-Democracy and Technological/Dust Evolution. Becides that it is a exellent overall idea.