Talk:Hazel Rainart/@comment-75.241.136.106-20180415053518

i think the main thing hazel needs to be a really compelliing character is elaberation on his back story. i mean was his sister like 12 years old when she died or better yet was she 15 with silver eyes; then maybe we open up the possibility that the training mission were she died was an attempt by ozpin to unlock her eye powers. this would give him some justification and an interesting moment with yang because she would make the paralles to ruby.

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