Thread:DragonGurlo/@comment-25396609-20150920204431

I'm going to be brutally honest, your oc is a Mary Sue, no two ways about it. It can't be salvaged because the entire premiserelies on her being a canon characters offspring, but if you want more general advice, or to try your hand at making a truly original character, you are more than welcome to swing by the OC thread on Off Topic of the forum.

I should mention, I mean no offense, but I can't bear to see people making those kinds of characters, I used to make them and looking back all I see  is shame that burns my soul like fire. 