Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-3965075-20150620202833/@comment-25396609-20150718143302

Well, for one, his name doesn't meet CNR.

Everything up until combat is meh. a bit bland, and his personality doesn't connect with the alleged trope. Oh, and unless he's starting late for some reason he should be 17 as a first year at Beacon.

A studded gauntlet is a weapon, as a matter of fact, as it is a tool used with the intent to cause harm.

That semblance is horribly overcomplicated. I like the basic premise, but you've gone overboard on the details. The visual effect doesn't really mesh with the rest of the character, and it is pretty horribly overpowered, it has no clear limits on how much energy he can redirect, you say he dodges if it's too much, but not how much that would be. The way you've written it, if he wanted he coulld theoreticlly stop a ship mid-flight, and that's a no-go.

despite what anime may tell you, 18 is not old enough to have mastered numerous martial arts, i'd say 2 at most if he's trained his entire life if he's a master, 3 if he's just really damned good.

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