Thread:PisceanWaterbender/@comment-26397825-20170726023133/@comment-30530552-20170726154230

UGH. I should've saved it, because the Wiki decided to eat my long-winded post. Thanks, WIki...that was real helpful. Guess I'll be short and sweet with it this time.

CNR is noted on page.

Appearance is fine, noted both in the character profile box and outside it.

Personality is fine, with no major contradictions.

Weapon & Fighting Style work well, and while the weapon does a fuckton of things, as I noted during the competition, most hardlight weapons do (looking at you, Red Velvet Aussie Bunny.)

Semblance is fine, and does not lack demerits.

Biggest difference is that we place our backstories/history ON the same page, but since you have a history tab here, I'll be treating it as if it were on there. Length would be the big issue with this, since most reviewers don't like long-winded backstories, but for me it's a bit easier since you were concise and clear with both formatting and actually putting things together. Plus, it kinda helps I've read that backstory before. I also don't think Vytal Festival teams compete against teams of the Same kingdom, but I could be wrong there, and it's not huge either way.

Overall, me personally I'd probably either accept it (which is more likely here for me), or tell you to change those quick things I outlined, followed by a rejection and then an askance to resubmit to pending once you fixed those issues.