Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27425734-20180301024049/@comment-35098489-20180327222624

SomeoneYouUsedToKnow wrote: Tyranaconda wrote: How about this one?

-Name: Iron Shadow

1) it can turn into an armor and help the user fight enemies.

2) electric attacks may harm both the clone and the user.

3) Applications: With the clone and the user fused together It's basically just a clone Semblance, only that the clone is made of iron, right? It's simple and it works fine. Just don't expect the clone to be a ninja even if the user is.

That said:

1) Turning into armor for the user is more of a completely-different power, one that doesn't even have any sort of relation with the original ability. It's unnecesary, just leave that part out.

2) The clone feels pain if the user does, that much makes sense. But what do you mean by this, by electric attacks harming both? I mean, if you mean "the user gets shocked, the clone gets shocked", then it's just redundant.

3) What the heck do you mean by "fused together"? 1 I'll probably remove that.

2. i'll change that.

3. i'll change that too.