Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20151120024732/@comment-27295331-20151222181814

SpiritedDreaming wrote: It's really hard to tell anything right now, since they are so unfinished. Though reading through, I did like Violetta's whole 'sneaking aroun dbehind her parents back to study at Haven, since they wouldn't let her study at Beacon' thing she has going on. And Vedran is right, a fan character (as in a character who is a fan and idol-worships one of the main characters legitimately) could be interesting. I think it would work better if she was a year younger than Pyrrha, but I can see why you made her the same age.

My first piece of advice would be to find last names for them, Cara. The last names don't have to have a colour associated with them, since you covered that with their first names, so you can pick whatever you like.

Oh, thanks. They had last names, I only found them as not very fitting. If you have any ideas to make the charactes better, just leave a comment on my profile page