Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-27234079-20190413013142/@comment-37471367-20190416005100

As for the OP, I like Star Wars too, but that’s a little too on the nose. For me, a couple of things come to mind.

1.) Probably would start off with a black screen. We hear the radio chatter as Manta 5-1 docks, not exactly friendly. Hear the sounds of footsteps approaching, a door opening and Atlesian troops sounding surprised (They have received no communique from Argus about a hijacked ship) and then the sound of guns being readied. Open up to see Atlesian troops with weapons raised at the heroes. What happens next comes down to three scenarios:

A.) We get a possibly comical attempt at explaining why the passenger manifest is so inaccurate and then get jailed.

B.) Ironwood or Winter appears. Situation is momentarily diffused.

C.) Jacques is waiting. The outcome of which I am uncertain on.

2.) We see Cinder and Neo engage an Atlesian patrol to silence them. Why? Maybe I’m overestimating the writers attention to detail, but Neo’s Semblance is only visual illusions. At what point did they think airborne radar wouldn’t see through that and give the signature of an Mistrali ship? Wood and whatever their gunships are made of are VERY different This patrol is on intercept. Neo and Cinder cut off radio communication if they’re not out of range already and we get an aerial battle to shut them up and get a legit ship. Or we just see then slip past with no problems somehow.

3.) Open with Tyrian and Watts infiltrating the border, probably in a fashion Tyrian likes. Maybe include some specialists so it’s not a total curbstomp. We get to see what that new tail can do.