User blog comment:KuraiJack/Tell me what you think./@comment-23784953-20130805142708

This is gonna get a bit rough, bear with me.

He seems pretty decent. Though some of his abilities seem pretty OP. We still don't know what the "peak human limit" is in planet RWBY. So it's possible that since his potential is at peak, he's far more powerful than every character shown so far. But that's just me nitpicking. Your usage of "peak human limit" may just refer to being on par with the members of Team RWBY.

Personality-wise, he's pretty decent. I don't see much of a problem.

His backstory is slightly okay. Though the "town gets burned down by the bad guys" is a bit overdone. But, eh. The way you handle it is mostly good. I actually liked the Fauna Framing Incident you had.

I'd give him a 42/50. He's a bit broken in terms of power, but since he *did* come from a line of powerful Hunters, I'm willing to let it pass.

I seriously need to finish working on my character. I wanna join the fanon wiki bandwagon these days. >_>