Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20170705210718/@comment-26328778-20170924233045

Wasn't sure if I had anything important to add, but here's some random comments that will  hopefully be useful.

1) I think you should change his mom to be Human. Based on his background, changing his father to Human wouldn't fit the context of the backstory. The reason I'm brining this up is because we have seen no proof that two Human parents can have Faunus offspring or that two Faunus can have Human offspring. Ilia is proof that the child of two Faunus can look Human, but we have no proof that any are actually Human.

2) I feel his Semblance would be better without that visual cue, as it doesn't seem to add anything. A sort of vapor coming off of the user's Aura would suit the "poison Aura" Semblance better, in my opinion at least. And "Touch" doesn't really bring to mind "teeth," so maybe change the name to "Viper's Venom/Toxin/Poison" or the like?

3) His weapon doesn't seem to fit his desire to be more snake-like. I feel something more piercing focused would be a better fit.