Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160101143127/@comment-26397825-20160105030441

Hey, as a first character he's got a good basis. A little bit of expanding on his backstory is my suggestion; did his father live outside the kingdoms? Were they part of a community? Did Asger always plan on being a Huntsman, or did he plan to follow his fathers footsteps to become a Hunter?

The fighting style needs a bit of tweaking, as was mentioned before. A shotgun is not really useful when try to do precision shooting but they are good at large amounts of damage and it doesn't matter so much where you hit the enemy to do lots of damage.

And then his semblance could be a Nora-style semblance. Convert an element/energy type into strength or speed or defense. Or he could have a pure aural defense semblance, so creating some sort of defensive armour or reducing the amount of aura consumed when he is struck or something.