Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-26955524-20160619061232

@AndyH2812

Thanks. I've had a lot of... I guess "issues" would be the best word for it, when it comes to writing. They were really prominent to me when I re-read the story. For example, there are specific events I knew I wanted to happen (Salem dying, Ruby being the re-incarnation of Ozpin and Salem's daughter, etc, etc), but these events happen far apart from each other; one of my big issues is coming up with the story to fill the gaps between those events.

Another issue I have is language and translation...and no, not like that. In my head, I can see what's happening so clearly. But then I try to put it into words and it just doesn't come out right.