Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-29100953-20160717034954/@comment-29100953-20160717160225

ChishioKunrin wrote: I'm gonna have to nitpick a bit here (especially since I know someone else likely will anyway, and they might not be very nice about it), um...


 * Silver* eyes. Not gray, silver.


 * Helicopters? We actually haven't seen any helicopters, just airships.


 * At the end of Volume 3, Qrow said that the trail to their enemies leads to Haven Academy, which is in Mistral. Ruby, Jaune, Nora, and Ren made it pretty clear that they decided to go there to find Cinder's group. So, they're searching for Cinder's group in Mistral, not Vale.


 * The robots aren't hacked anymore. The hacking ended when Ironwood's ship crashed.


 * Again, Qrow said that Cinder's group went to Haven Academy, which is in Mistral. They definitely did not stay in Vale.

Thanks for the feedback! Oh, yeah, true, well, I have the robots still hacked in this ending because I thought "hey, what if, they are still jumpy for the robots?" and, so I did, and I said that helicopters because some seemed preety legit to me, and, an aircraft is a bit too big for the concept... I guess? And also, true about the Aura, but, what if it was the amount to break the whole 100%? That's the idea I tried to reach, but, will change it anyway so it actually fits with the track of the story.
 * Why would the bullets be able to break their Aura and kill them, unless they only had, like, 5% Aura left? And if that was the case, they reasonably would've been resting somewhere and wouldn't have told Penny they were about to go looking for Cinder and the White Fang.

Thanks very much for the feedback!