User blog comment:Zathronas/Analysis by an author - Ruby Rose/@comment-25405817-20160406203229

Vale is one of the kingdoms, but not the place where the war ended. That place was Vytal, which though it technically belongs to Vale, it is very far off-land to claim that.

Also, I find it odd that you switch focus from Ruby to Pyrrha's sister having a crush on Jaune.

Other than that, I really liked this analysis. Keep it up.