Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24994749-20190202234704/@comment-35455126-20190310001701

Anyways, here’s my attempt on rewriting BB:

So at this point, Yang is still mad at Blake for leaving, and that talk with Weiss didn’t exactly settle things. We get a new scene where Blake and Yang are sitting on the train while Ruby and Weiss are chasing eachother. (Because that’s fucking adorable) Blake tries to start a conversation due to the awkward silence, but Yang isn’t feeling very talkative, with a hint of bitterness.

So we get the scene with RWBY in the dorms, however Yang, instead of reading a book, or whatever that was, is sitting there, brooding. Ruby senses the tension between the two, and suggests they all play a video game. Yang goes to get her stuff, Blake tries to help her, and we see Yang getting slightly annoyed by this. Ruby and Weiss look uneasy, but otherwise the scene plays out as normal.

will post more later