Thread:67.239.44.242/@comment-33293221-20160214201919/@comment-33293221-20160214203546

I should clarify.

I was mostly talking about what the characters do. For instance, the history sections should all be present tense. This anon was taking events that happen and making them past tense.

For instance, "Amber defended herself against Cinder" was the edit (not really, just making an example),

When it was previously (and it should have stayed this way, so I changed it back) "Amber defends herself against Cinder."