Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20150901031037/@comment-25396609-20150907154035

I mentioned Maki's character stayed within the rules I set for my own character.

Yours break several of them. Multiple inspirations(ever since the fenrir/jack the ripper thing. purely on principle), multi word semblance name(clunky, less memorable), weapon doesn't make sense (can't build mental model of it, which i require of all weapons i look at in order to give them a passing grade)

They may not make sense to other people, but those are criteria I apply when looking at any character.