Board Thread:Speculation House/@comment-10390252-20130728185452/@comment-68.226.106.213-20131022033330

ImposterParrotGrass wrote: It started out ok, and I could see Ruby's darker side taking the form of a Grimm(in her dreams and mind and what not), but when you bring up the changing into a Grimm thing, it just seems out of place. And it seems all your episodes end in Ruby getting a new video game power.

You have some good ideas, don't get me wrong, but you need to focus more on  existing characters, rather than introducing new sentence Grimm. But if you like this kind of thing, it has it's place elsewhere, like fanfiction and blogs. I DO spend a lot of time playing video games, so that would explain some of my ideas.

Andmy story does belong on fan fiction, I agree

P.S. I got the Ruby becoming monster idea from Persona, which was based on a video game. Or 5