Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20151118083252/@comment-25857155-20151121015831

Am I the only one whose brain translated "D. Ripper" as Dr. Dripper? XDDD

"every motion [they] are about to execute" is a bit overpowered. I have a character with a similar semblance (Kaltis_Wahrsucher) that I had to balance. I would advise making him either able to project the trajectory of moving objects/people with astounding speed and accuracy, or letting him be very good at reading people's movements to predict them.

The visual effect is really undefined; his pupils are changing to a techno style look? I have no idea what that means, but I think you probably mean the iris (the coloured part) to begin with. When I hear "techno style," I think of music, not looks, but... be a bit more specific, maybe?

Not too bad overall though; it's a lot better than older stuff you've put up, and a hell of a lot more subtle than your normal fare. =P