User blog comment:CarusELumen/THE RWBY RAP/@comment-15108745-20130926061552

I felt the syllables were somewhat off. I dunno, I don't really rap much so that's probably why. Here's what I have as a kind of rewrite: Here's Ruby Rose, thorn's a-pricklin' with her gun-scythe,

Chopping down on shadow monsters, going to slice-and-dice.

Pull the child's hood down, raise the crimson cloak up.

Let the Red Hood make 'em scream like wolf cubs.

This all be nothing to those bruises on them thugs

Who just robbed some Dust 'cause mommy never gave 'em hugs.

Save your sympathy for later, it's time for mass-destruction.

Let loose the power of this bloody evolution

Disrupt the crime, chase Roman and his flaming bitch,

Get saved from the boomstick by Glynda Goodwitch.

And Ozpin the Headmaster asks, "Y'know with all that beatin'

Would you ever consider skipping some years to Beacon?