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Ok, I modified Clematis. How do you like this version?

User- Lavender Iris

Maker/Smith- Lavender Iris

Name- Clematis

Type- Blast Spear Rope Dart (BSRD)

Weapon derivation- Rope Dart, Hand Cannon/Bazooka (kinda), Spear

Description- a long steel spike attached to a long ribbon. The other end of the ribbon is attached to the haft of a spear. The Dart portion of the Rope Dart can be fired forward as far as the ribbon will allow, and then either retracted or manipulated with the skill and precision of a Rope Dart

Holstered/Inactive form- When Clematis is stored, the haft of the spear telescopes, reducing it to 1/4th of its usual spear length, and stored in a holster on the upper thigh.

Form 1- A 6-foot Spear.

Form 2- a Rope Dart attached to the Bo staff (with the Spearhead acting as the dart, and the Ribbon (10 feet long) is stored inside the spear.

Form 3- Clematis can separate the Rope Dart from the spear entirely, (ribbon is 10 feet, Dart is .5 feet). The haft of the spear is then telescoped and stored, to be used as a Bo staff if she’s disarmed.

Form 4- A Bo staff, 5.5 feet long.

Form 5- Nothing really changes in this step, except that a trigger folds down on the haft. When the trigger is pulled, the dart (and only the dart, not the rope) is fired with a high amount of force. It takes about 20 seconds to regenerate, or Lavender can use Dust to create a temporary spearhead (which also serves as her Dart and another round for her weapon) in a matter of seconds

Dust Capacity- any, but only one canister of Dust can be inserted at a time, and it’s inserted into the Dart/Spearhead.

Ammunition- a huge metal, ice, or stone spike...

Usage- Lavender has practiced with Clematis since starting schooling, and has become an incredibly accomplished user, highly adept at using Clematis as a Bo staff, a Spear, or a Rope dart. Lavender can attack from a variety of directions incredibly quickly.

Planned upgrades- Longer Spear, Halberd instead of spear, longer ribbon for rope dart, multiple spearheads inside the Haft of the spear (increasing firing rate)

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<p class="MsoNormal">I tried to edit everything, but I may have missed things. what doesn't make sense? what can I revise and review? What do you guys think?

<p class="MsoNormal">I eagerly await your reviews!

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