Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160825171839/@comment-25936766-20160901234003

Sentry 616 wrote:

1 -Name: Ferr Isati

-CNR explanation: Ferr means inferno (or hell) in Albanian, Isati means fire in Amharic

-Symbol: a building

-Team Acronym: FIRE



2-Weapons/ -Name: Fire



3-Semblance/ -Name: Meteor Storm

-Short Description: Spamming quite destructive Aura missiles.

-Reflection of Character: He is wholly committed to wiping out Grimm to clear a path for Humanity's expansion.

I literally have no idea if you're trying too hard or too little.

1 and 2-Name's kind of edgy, though my main issue is the symbol and team acronym. With the former, you say "a building"....which explains nothing. A house is a building, a hut is a building, a tower is a building, quite a lot of things are buildings.

While for the latter, while "Fire" in itself follows the rules and all....it just feels horribly uncreative. It's not even stylized, like "FAYR" or "FYER", just....FIRE. Ditto with his weapon, which is literally called Fire despite the potential for quite a lot more than that.

3-"Quite destructive Aura missiles" is not really descriptive enough. If it's just firing multiple Aura projectiles, quite sure that's an Aura technique anyone can learn how to do, like with Aura Slashes.