Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27447621-20160508230102/@comment-28420364-20160511124002

VedranTheII wrote: Point2600 wrote:

Her father is just good at reading people and she is jeckle and Hyde (a violent golem and a beautiful pygmalion woman( too far?) Well her semblance is atm on our deny list, as we don’t have confirmation Qrow actually turns into a crow, and the way you seem to have worded the semblance the changes last forever, something semblances don’t do, they cost aura to use AND maintain.

Aside from that her backstory is…worded kind of Mary Sue designed honestly. The beautiful and pretty orphan oc has a superpowered evil side that does mean things so the nice girl can look nicer when she takes the blame but her friends insist the 2 personalities are separate…the concept CAN work, I mean just look at her inspiration, but it takes a lot more effort to pull it off than the one paragraph you wrote.

Cool so her semblance is forbidden any tips on how to make her less Mary Sue not my intention I just wanted to maker half monster and not Jaun arc lol