Talk:Ruby Rose/Quotes/@comment-11481298-20130816092200/@comment-10390252-20130816093540

They're too long, I agree; they need to be edited down to a more 'punchy' length - ideally no more than two lines. The two parts of inner monologue about partners can probably go. I think you can also start the speech to Weiss with "You're going to see a different side of me today..." without losing anything.