Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-27144409-20180420035439

Well since Greyrocco deleted his pos instead of editing it, I guess I'll join the critiquing of (grits teeth) Redmon Rose Pine. Heads up, I don't approve of this ship, so I might be a little too harsh beyond valid criticisms.

Well since he inherited his mom's eyes, his early admittance flies.

I'm annoyed that you felt the need to specify the hairstyle with a picture of someone else's character. You should have just said spiky hair and the only valid comment would be noting that he didn't inherit the red tips from his mom's side.

You could have probably found a better picture to convey the idea you have for his outfit, or just used your words.

Started training way too late oh, so he's only a combat school student? That's better. He's still 1-2 years behind though.

You're supposed to actually provide details about those relationships.

Excessively edgy names for the weapon.

Depressingly vague Semblance.

Neither scythes nor plasma cannons are conducive to sneak attacks. They also don't work well with martial arts.