Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-27447621-20180111195028

Hmmm...

I do agree that his personality is pretty generic. As Phantom mentioned, there's nothing inherently wrong with that, but it's boring. I have a few things you may want to try to add a bit more to him.

First, how does he interact with his teammates? That can help give us a bit more depth and context for your character.

Second, if you're basing your character's personality off of a character like Kakashi, I feel like he's not going to be all that interesting by default. From what I've seen of Kakashi, I'd describe him as bored, relaxed, and apathetic. There's nothing wrong with that, but there's nothing too interesting about it either. I get wanting an introverted tactician character, but I would take some of that and use it as a basis, building a few more interesting traits in yourself. A less than interesting character is o

I'm not sure where you want to take this character, and I'm nowhere close to an expert, but there's my two cents.

 As for a Semblance, there are plenty of ideas regarding an analytic nature, from visual slow motion to a built in zoom-and-enhance.

 Lastly, what do you mean, "Story element"?