Thread:Hidden Scorpius XI/@comment-5426254-20160324001154/@comment-25405817-20160324033216

Gladly, since it is clear that you can't identify the flaws and errors that the show needs to actually improve.


 * Show a visibly tired Team RWBY. They just broke through a concrete floor while on top of a speeding train, that ought to consume some of their Aura.


 * Remove Weiss summoning the ice-sword in this episode. It is a plot-point in Vol.3 that Weiss hasn't mastered summoning yet, so this part in Breach makes that plot-point invalid.


 * Show the Grimm doing real damage. Having the characters claiming that a lot of people got hurt is not good enough. Show don't tell. A lot of people forget that.


 * Change Jaune take down of the Ursa. What he did is the equivalent of button mashing. He is supposed to have gotten better, so show it.


 * Have Sun and Neptune actually doing stuff.


 * No need to nerf down CFVY's performance. They are senior students, so it makes sense that they are better. But show RWBY, JNPR and SN reacting to CFVY, even aknowledging the skill-gap.


 * Take Cinder away from the scene or change her outfit. She's trying to pass as incognito, so having her on site and with her red dress is a pretty dumb move. Either remove her or change the outfit.


 * Have Glynda sealing off the breach at the middle of the fight, not at the end after all Grimm is destroyed.

This is how you show how RWBY could be better, by identifying flaws and inconsistencies and finding fixes for those flaws and inconsistencies. Not adding unecessary stuff like "parkour" or "misoginy."