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Time for the sixth competitor, Maki Kuronami’s Dahua Jiang.

1)  Basic Info: 18/20 Hrm.  Not bad, Misc traits is misused (minus one) – CNR is questionable (minus one; I still like the name).

2) Appearance: 19/20 -  Ok.  What kind of brown pants, though?  Minus one.

3)  Characteristics: 29/35
 * Personality(13/15) Alright.  This is perhaps the best personality detail I have seen.  The only thing really lacking is a likes/dislikes list or section (minus two).
 * Background (16/20) Now this, right here, is a GOOD length for a background.  Not too short, not too long, and cut into smaller chunks to keep things interesting and separated.  Maybe a bit too many small chunks though.  (Ahem – getting back on track.)  What’s his ship’s name? How’d his close relations handle his drinking? (minus one for the combo) What kind of ship is it? (minus one)  Where’d this huntress come from? Who is she?(minus two)

4) Combat Info: 10.5/25
 * Weapon: 3.5/7 Bonus for creativity.  Reduction for details.
 * Semblance: 2/11 Big minus for lack of detail.  I can tell you ran out of steam on it.  It’s the start of a potentially good idea, but that’s it.
 * Fighting Style: 5/7 Alright, this is actually quite good.  It’s refreshing to see someone who does not fight much that still has fleshed out details in this section.  True, I’d like to know how he does fight with it, but it’s good to see leadership.
 * Landing Strat: reassigned

5) Trivia: Plus one for relationship and other details.

These things combine to give Maki Kuronami’s Dahua Jiang a total score of 77.5/100.