Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27450328-20160502133537

SpiritedDreaming wrote: Not particularly beyond a few grammatical errors, but that's fine. An actual landing strategy would be cool though, even if you keep the note about people thinking she just used her money to land somehow, such as through being picked up by a Bullhead. Alright, I'll work on it, thanks for the review.