Board Thread:Speculation House/@comment-10390252-20141218201832/@comment-209421-20141219153927

LiveandSound wrote: Oh, right! A part of the original idea was Yang being bullied when kid. Forgot about that part.

In the XCOM Council's defense, a student dying on schoolgrounds is something serious, and even if he had nothing to do with it, the Headmaster is the one responsible for anything that happens in the school. The council firing Ozpin for Jaune's death, makes them seem more inteligent than I believed.

Haha, it's cool. I'd kept a note on the Word doc I use for a lot of my basic note-hazing and plot ideas. Trust me, it's pretty much half struck-through at the moment. There's things I'd love to tinker with, like Jaune somehow creating a way to pass on his semblance via some kind of small item or trinket to Pyrrha, that simply would not work. Likewise with Pyrrha carrying his child (to be revealed later on) - even with the two-year timeskip I decided to stipulate in the start (they're third-year students, so two years since the start of Volume 1). Other ideas are more plausible, but you never know.

Hell, if I can manage to get get the first chapter done before Christmas, I'll link it here on my Google Docs, so people can see it and offer feedback before I dump it on FF.net.