User blog:Gundam Legilis/DDI In Depth - The writing

Hello everybody!

Today we're talking about the writing, and it is... okay, I guess.

The love triangle is finally complete, as both Jaune, Neptune, Weiss and Pyrrha get character development. But they should really make clear on their script; their ambiguous wording has pissed off some really sensitive people.

However, the main thing I am having trouble with is why Cinder had to go to the CCT at Dance night. She couldn't sneak in on any other night? And she had to do it when there was security around, too, and to be seen by Ruby as well. She also escaped with ease, and there is no explanation of what her Semblance is....

Stay tuned for next time, where we cover the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis