User blog comment:Videorule/I'm Creating My Own Webseries!/@comment-24094460-20150223002944

Well I appreciate the advice, regardless of how it was presented. I will not be looking at this page anymore as it has served its purpose. I meant to get input on my video as it's the only way to improve. It is smart to get counsel from multiple people.

I will be marking my next two videos as private so people I know can critique it. While I don't think I need to take a retreat for several years just to get a little better, I will spend more time on my next two trailers.

One more thing: SasTGamer, thanks for your input. I will be improving my voice dynamics(and clarity) as well as making the videos more...interesting. And while Yuto may be one-dimensional, I already fleshed him out on paper and just didn't feel the need to show all his colors, as it were, in a trailer.