Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-30530552-20180502010142/@comment-30530552-20180529164441

Our second entrant is Maki Kuronami with his character Nina Millaray.

Basic Info - 10/10 - Nothing to comment on here aside from the unique choice of using native languages in South America, which I find really cool.

Appearance - 20/20 - She’s quite tall and athletic, which I can appreciate. Outfits are simple and to the point, which helps immensely in visualizing it.

Backstory - 19/20 - Other than questioning how Ruben managed to obtain the motorbike so easily, the backstory is quite clear and concise.

Other Characteristics - 10/10 - Rest of it’s golden.

Trivia - 5/5 - It’s all here, nothing I have any issues with. I also didn’t even realize that’s the allusion you went for until now, and now that I see it everything makes much more sense.
 * Characteristics Overall - 29/30

Weapon - 13/15 - Typically aesthetics offer more in terms of colors. All I know is that there are lines that light up with Dust. Aside from that, it’s golden.

Semblance - 10/15 - So, even with these references, it’s a little unclear as to how it functions: by Aura disruption, do you mean they temporarily lack the capability to use their Semblance and/or their Aura in any sort of manner aside from passive? Until this is answered….that costs points. I do like how you tied it into the allusion though.

Combat Info: 5/5 - Everything’s in order here.

Now for the tally.

10 + 20 + 19 + 10 + 5 + 13 + 10 + 5

30 + 29 + 18 + 15

59 + 33 = 92

Total: 92 Points

I'm hoping to get the last one done today as well, since I'm more or less finally given a free day to do this.