Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20151120024732/@comment-25343309-20151220171111

any suggestions for a Semblance, or just constructive criticism would be appreciated

1)Basic info 2)Appearance 3)Characteristics 4) Trivia: 
 * Name: Iris Aubrey
 * CNR explanation: an iris is a flower, it is typically purple, white or yellow
 * Species: Human
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Age: 17
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Gender: Female
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Symbol: an iris topped by a small crown
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Handedness: Right
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Physical traits: she has a tattoo around her neck like black thorny vines that circle her neck and branch up and down in several places, stopping just below her jaw and just above her shoulders, she has similar tattoos around her wrists, but those don’t branch out
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Misc traits: she has a nose piercing and a lip piercing, the nose piercing is a small silver ring, the lip piercing is a amethyst tipped stud in between her lower lip and her chin
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Occupation: student at Shade, and Leader of Team ICNT (Incandescent)
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Aura/Effects:  violet light that seems to be coming from behind her, unless you’re watching from behind her, then it looks like it should be shining right in front of her
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Height: 5’6’’
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Weight: 115lbs
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Eyes: pale yellow
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Skin color: a light tan
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Face: Seems a little younger than she really is, with slightly rounded cheekbones and large eyes, though in combat her face is set in a serious frown that dispels that illusion
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Hair: Violet, cut short and choppy
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Physique: Slim and fit, with very well defined legs
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Combat Outfit: A purple sleeveless shirt and black pants, a silver chain choker and armored gloves with the metal plate on the back of each hand including three small, flat spikes that extend past her knuckles by an inch
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Casual Outfit: A different purple sleeveless shirt than her combat outfit, which exposes a one inch diameter strip of midriff between the bottom of the shirt and the top of her tight knee length pants, wears a small amount of lilac eyeshadow at the outside corners of her eyes and purple lipstick
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Background: Iris had a fairly normal childhood in Vacuo, other than being raised only by her mother because her father died in a factory accident when she was two. Two of her best friends as a kid had parents who were Hunters, so she grew up being told about their adventures all the time, this caused her to become interested in the Hunter life, and also inspired her to learn martial arts. When she was old enough Iris applied to and was accepted by a minor combat school, despite her mother’s protests. This period of rebellion was what caused her to get her piercings and tattoos, it’s also when she started wearing punk/semi-goth styles. By the time she and her mother reconciled a week before her graduation from the combat school she attended she already had the tattoos and piercings and had decided that she liked her current style, so she didn’t change it, her mother wasn’t amused but didn’t want to start another fight over something as trivial as her daughter’s choice of clothing. Iris was accepted into Shade Academy with little difficulty.
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Personality: Blunt and honest in all things, with a vocabulary that would, and does, horrify her mother, Iris has only a passing familiarity with the concept of tact. That said she’s also an intelligent and analytical fighter, a shrewd leader, and a compassionate, if not always necessarily kind, young woman
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Likes: Freedom, Training, Punk music, and oranges
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Dislikes: Overly formal people or people who try to tell her how to act, Sushi
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Notable relationships: Her mother, they’ve had their ups and downs, but now that Mrs. Aubrey can accept that there is nothing in the world Iris would rather be than a Huntress their relationship has become more relaxed
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Notes:

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">a) Weapons

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"> <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:4pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">b) Semblance <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:4pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">c) Combat Info
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Name: Veram Libertatum (latin for true freedom)
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Wielder: Iris Aubrey
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Type: Dual Function Battle Boots (DFBB)
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Short Description: A pair of armored boots that have two modes, mode one causes small spikes to erupt from the soles on impact with a target with sufficient force, this is also the resting mode, since unless the user kicks something they’re just boots, the second mode has small gun barrels pop out near the heels, the guns are loaded with .45 caliber bullets from a custom clip that gets attached into a slot next to the user’s ankle, the guns fire with a kicking motion.
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Name:
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">User: Iris Aubrey
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Short Description: (One or two short sentences describing the semblance)
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Visual effect: (how would you be able to tell the semblance is being used if it appeared on the show)

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"> <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:4pt;margin-bottom:11pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">d) Statistics (Levels are 0-none to 3-high. First years students cannot have more than 2 stats at level 3 without good reason. Based on age and experience; older more experienced people will be stronger than young characters.)
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Class/Position: Martial Artist/Striker
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Landing: Strategy: Load wind Dust rounds into Veram Libertatum and use those to slow her fall
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Fighting Style: she uses a kick based fighting style, borrowing elements from several martial arts including taekwondo and capoeira  (I’ll find a couple other to mix in too) she prefers dodging to blocking and is constantly analyzing her opponents and strategizing while she fights

<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:11pt;margin-bottom:11pt;">
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:6pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Strength: 1
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Agility: 3
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Aura reserve: 2
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Aura manipulation: 2
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Dust Manipulation: 0
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Dust use: 1
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Weapon Skill (Primary): 3
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.8857142857142857;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size:14px;font-family:Arial;color:#ffffff;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Weapon Skill (General): 0