User blog:Gundam Legilis/A Minor Hiccup In Depth - The plot

Hello everybody! Today, we will discuss the plot on A Minor Hiccup!

So, first off, Jaune plays Casanova with Weiss. Heh heh, Spruce Millis. One day, Jaune, One day. I hope he looks towards Pyrrha as a lover, not a sister or a mother. Next, we see the gang in new outfits. Everybody but Ruby looks fantastic. I question two flaws with Yang and Blake's plan. Wouldn't Blake be recognizable if she tries to infiltrate the White Fang? I mean, the bows, hair and cat ears, plus her past experience as a high ranking member could be dead giveaways. And Adam possibly being there might ruin it for everybody.

I am outright confused as to how Yang can easily attempt to get info from Junior once again. Junior won't take too kindly to Yang punching him in the ballsack, beating up everybody and himself, breaking his weapon, and damaging the club. I mean, surely everybody would have remembered the event like it was yesterday, and possibly prepared for Yang's second visit.

I cannot fathom why Ruby wants to go with Weiss so badly. I need a legit explanation people, since there are ship teases. I hope Monty and Co. aren't just catering to the biggest ships out there.

Now, when Penny arrives, things start to get a little more intense. And Weiss must really hate her family, and her social status to scowl every time it is mentioned. The file retrieval going smoother than expected may raise questions, but with Weiss's status, it is easily ignored.

The new androids are a nice upgrade from the old models. And I can see it now- bad guys get control of the Paladin, either by stealing or by sale. Either way, Ironwood is going to lose because the public will accuse him of being associated with the White Fang or by providing shitty security for the mech. Once it's destroyed, by a bunch of kids and the surrounding environment, nobody will buy anything from him again because they'll think the quality of the mech and the Elysian Knight is shoddy at best.

I am actually glad that Penny's a machine. It brings technological innovation and new avenues for creating Robot OCs, with sophisticated AIs. Here's to hoping that not being a real girl does not equal being a cyborg.

Stay tuned for next time, where we discuss the characters

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis