Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20151120024732/@comment-26463535-20151230172329

@Jaune

Base Aura color should be explicitly stated, backstory should be more in depth, and 5' 7" would not be shorter than most classmates and there would probably always be someone either smaller, weaker, or both. If you want it to be highly unlikely, a height of 5' 0" or 4' 7" would probably work better. Also, was the whole school invaded or did she go outside the kingdom during the summer and get overun? Other than that, it's good.

@NinjaCat

Nothing too wrong that I can see. Thanks for easing my mind about giving a character the name Periwinkle though I thought Fae was old irish, but who knows. Direct relationships with cannon characters are advised to be avoided against though. Other than that, not bad at all.