Talk:Adam Taurus/@comment-25396609-20190404003321

You know... I think if Adam had skipped the monologue about Blake hurting his death would have been a LOT more impactful.

Why, you ask? his Semblance.

The brand on his eye and his Semblance say enough about his past, him going cheesey yandere kind of ruins it. He has clearly had a pretty shitty life, and his Sembance serves EXACTLY one purpose. To avoid being hurt; and to punish those who hurt him. He didn't really need to say all that to convey it, a much shorter "You hurt me, Blake" combined with the contextual elements would have been a much better execution.

I think it would also make it easier to understand just how obsessed he was with her, too. Like, he has a fucking brand on his EYE but his girlfriend dumping him sends into a murderous rampage? Damn, dude.

Way to spoil it with the generic monologue.