Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27447621-20160506030046

Blu3 Fir3 - V2.0 wrote: HookshotHotshot wrote: Nothing intentional, but we posted our characters one after another, meaning that one or both are going to be at least relatively ignored (as is sometimes the case on this thread).

You're fine, don't worry. Jason looks fine though I'd recommend changing the 20' (which stands for 20 FEET) on his weapons to 20" (For INCHES). Also, lots of little grammatical and spelling errors, but I'm kind of a stickler about that, and I understand that not everyone is as anal about that as I usually am. For the relationships section, I'd worry about that after posting the other bios. (Unless you already have, and I missed them in the recent flood of tangents this thread went on, apologies). Once you've got their bios mostly figured out, it should be relatively easy to figure out how the loner (Jason) will interact with his teammates who may be such common villain archetypes as tricksters, brutes, and aggressors. Thanks, Blu3!

I ran it through a word document for spellng and grammar check and fixed what I wanted to fix (Tann is spelled T-A-N-N, it's my Leatherface character's last name, but I fixed everything else...) and I changed feet to inches. I haven't posted my other characters yet, mostly because I don't have the names for my Candyman character or my Freddy Krueger character yet, but they aren't your "Brutes and Aggressors", they're more akin to Sun or Roman, sure of themselves and full of swagger, but now sporting their very own god complexes and homicidal urges! Joy!

For anyone else who's working on a reply for my OC, if you'd wait a few hours so that I can post my character again after Lucas's has been sufficiently looked at. It'll just save us some confusion. I can wait my turn.