Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20190627122349/@comment-27144409-20190818010626

It takes time to look these over. Be patient, and don't post more if you're looking for a reply/analysis. It makes it less likely that the first one will get looked over.

The first one trying to be too much at once. You need to trim some features. I'd recommend the glaives, since dual-wielding those is wildly impractical.

Don't use arrows made entirely out of Dust, it's expensive and overkill. You should be fine with the just tips being Dust.

This feels more like Crocea Mors than Gambol Shroud. Just scaled up to a BFS. It seems like there should be 3 forms since the sword attaches to the large blade. not sure what you mean by true blade,and I don't think it's big enough to be a wall. Especially since It won't have Aura to reinforce it.