Thread:Arkantos95/@comment-14138255-20170310034514/@comment-14138255-20170315005737

Right, sorry. I was thinking of changing it to that but never bothered.

Explaining the Pus of Man could be interesting, and provide context to the Abyss. Maybe even namedrop Kaathe (or allude to a serpent) to set up for Yuria somehow. That said there will be a lot of loredumping (including the next chapter), and we must be careful the fic doesn't drown in it.

I am struggling a bit in giving Pyrrha things to say and think about at this point in the fic, but I am confident in her personality shining through more later, really kicking off in the Undead Settlement chapter.