User blog:Gundam Legilis/Extracurricular In Depth- The writing

Hello everybody!

In this episode of In Depth, we'll talk about the writing.

First off, Team CRDL is actually shown to be a competent team of fighters. It's Cardin who messes up everything.

I like how they write Mercury as smart and calculating, and Blake as overstressed. It adds another dimension to them.

Oh, and Jaune? He kills me.

Jaune also improves from time to time in combat, and realizes many, many reasons of not promposing to Pyrrha - He still has his sights set to Weiss, and he thinks that Pyrrha will have legions of boys after her.

And Cinder really has a plan worked up, incapacitating all the strong students, and defeating everyone else. I still hold firm to the belief that the dance will go horribly wrong, because of the lines "we're going to have a fun weekend".

Stay tuned for next time, where we talk about the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis