Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160425022934/@comment-27265101-20160427084457

Blu3 Fir3 - V2.0 wrote:

SpiritedDreaming wrote: Yeah, that's normal. It kicks everyone out and puts it in read-only mode.

Personally I am not a fan of your story, since all I can think of is the sheer amount of negative emotions that accompany such a group, which in turn leads to Grimm attraction and destruction of the town/hideout/wherever the group is at the time...but whatever.

ACWeapons wrote: I have an issue with your story. Actually a few. She doesn't exactly strike me as a high class criminal. It's dark I'll give you that, but this kind of dark story doesn't fit the tone of RWBY. It just doesn't mesh. This sounds more like the work of the Dollmaker from Arrow. Okay, thanks for explaining. The story hasn't been written yet, so the group dynamic might change.

Never heard of the Dollmaker.

Keep in mind, the story has yet to be written, and these are just initial concepts. Concepts that will likely change, or be discarded entirely once the story actually starts. The backgrounds you're reading are just filler info, stories to take the place of whatever is actually written. Will the themes be the same as the show? Maybe, maybe not. That's up to me, and if it goes against the themes of the show then it goes against them. That's fine by me, but you're welcome to disagree. Wait...you DON'T know who the Dollmaker is...I worry for your sanity dear friend if you invented that all on your own. I do have to say though in that situation I would have loved a Grimm to come in tear all the basra to pieces and put those poor kids out of their misery...or maybe send in Oro, oh would he have a time and a half making her pay for what she had done.