Talk:The More the Merrier/@comment-35455126-20180710035712

My revision to the confrontation with Raven. (Up to Cinder and her goons arriving)

It starts here.

Qrow: “You have the Spring Maiden.”

Raven: “Yes....I do.”

Qrow: “Then hand her over, and let’s work together! We can beat Salem!”

Raven laughs.

Raven: “All this time spying for Ozpin, and you STILL don’t have a clue! There is no ‘beating Salem’!”

Ruby: “You’re wrong.”

Raven turns to glare at her. “Oh, really?”

Ruby: “We’ve done things that most people would call impossible-“

Raven: “-LIKE WHAT!?”

Ruby: *shocked gasp*

Qrow glares at Raven.

After a short while, Raven speaks again.

“...hmph...that’s what I thought.”

She then creates a portal where a fireball hits Ruby, sending her flying backward.

Yang: “Ruby!”

Qrow: “Kid!”

Yang and bird boi rush to Ruby’s aid.

Then Cinder and her goons step out of the portal.

“Hello, boys and girls.”