Thread:Maki Kuronami/@comment-31619071-20170328143256/@comment-25396609-20170328145405

You do realize Jaune, Ruby, and Sun are all people who could be deemed not suitable leaders, right? Jaune is inexperienced, Ruby is immature, and Sun is... Sun. The position of leader is about more than who is the best at taking charge, it's about who can learn from it the most; and whos potential is best utilized by having them lead.

A borderline sociopath wolf faunus... that's as cliche as it gets. like, straight up, cliche as hell, and borderline mary sue. all it's missing is a katana and black trench coat.

Plus basing it off of someone else's OC from a different fanfic, which is just lazy.

It being your first character isn't an excuse that's going to last for long; we're not going to pull punches on criticism and analysis, because it's the kind of character we've seen a couple dozen times already.