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So. Finally finished made a improved version of my OC's post. Feedback is appreciated. Name: Oliver Windsong Team: ISRO Occupation: Scout Race: Human Age:18 Sex: Male Aura: Green Physique: Short, Slim Build, Dark Skin Hair: Short, Black  Handedness: Left Casual Clothes: Monk Uniform Combat Clothes: Hoodie with symbol on the center,Jeans, Armour covering his arms. Semblance: Ghosting (Astral Projection) Symbol: Tornado  Fighting style: Less aggressive version of Yang's. More focused on hit and run tactics. Uses air blast from his weapons to strike and retreat quickly) Weapons: Gauntlets (Fires special dust round called hurricane rounds. which fires powerful blasts of air) Background: Born in a small village outside the kingdoms. Oliver was one of several children that was orphaned due to Grimm attacks. As the policy of this states all orphaned children are trained under the local hunter  to be the village protectors. After years of training he grew to be a capable fighter. But he also begin to crave adventure outside of his village. His craving grew when stories about team RWBY's exploits became more and more common. Finally a representative of beacon arrived. Searching for potential hunter/huntresses. After witnessing Oliver in combat. Oliver was offered the chance of a lifetime. To become a student of beacon academy. Personality: Very adventurous, curious, fun-loving and also bit of a prankster .His childlike personality causes him to be viewed as the teams kid brother. His curiosity however tends gets the better of him. He sometimes loses track things he is supposed to do because he got distracted by a new area to explore. His semblance makes him even more difficult to keep track of. Much to the teams annoyance. He has a love for stories. Not just reading them but also telling them. He often can thinking up his own idealized version for team RWBY's adventures Character Quote: ' Come on guys, It's a mission that was mean for THE team RWBY. At least it wont be boring' Notes: Based on Aang from Avatar TLA. Also about the naming rule. Oliver=Oliver Queen AKA The Green Arrow. _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Name: Raven Shade Team: ISRO Occupation: Dust Expert, Dust Fighter Race: Fanus (Bat) Sex: Female Aura: Purple Physique: Tall, Slim Build, Pale skin Hair: Short, Black with purple Highlights Handedness: Right Causal Clothes: Long black Overcoat with hood, Jeans Combat Clothes: Oversized Long sleeve Top, Short Skirt. Symbol: A purple atom Traits: Small Bat wing behind each ear. Age:17 Weapons: Dust Pistol High Heels/Dagger heels Semblance: Fair Exchange ( Can create objects out of raw materials instantly and/or turn one object into another) Rules:(to get an object weighing one kilogram, at least one kilogram of material is necessary.) (To get a object of a particular substance you must give up someone of the same substance) Fighting style: Mainly fights using kicks and acrobatics targeting weak points for the body. Uses normal dust rounds for weaker enemies and switches to elemental dust to strengthen her attacks for stronger Grimm to .When fighting other dust users she will try to counter whatever type of dust the person is using with her own(if the person uses fire, she switch to water or ice rounds).Her semblance allows her to do this instantly often catching her opponent off guard. Background: She's a street kid. Creates most of her inventions by using scrap parts. Like Blake. She was a  supporter of the white fang. But as time passed and the white fang grew more and more violent, she became more disgusted by the group. Them interrupting a peaceful protest was the last straw in her mind. Since her former hero's fell form grace. Some else needed to fight for the weak. So she became a vigilante. Creating inventions to help her fight both the white fang and oppressors. She was doing pretty well one day she found herself concerned by White fang higher ups. She was rescued by Blake herself .who offered her a choice. Continue fighting on her own and die a mean less death or try to truly make a difference by becoming a huntress. Raven chose the latter. Personality: Very sarcastic and cynical. Says exactly what she thinks. Not everyone like her blunt honesty and it tends to do more harm than good in certain situations. She's also abit slow to trust others. But when she does she's a extremely loyal to them and is a good person to get advice from. She as a scientific mind and is very knowledgeable about dust due to experimenting with many different types. But she can come across as a know-it-all to other people when she talks about it. She is very passionate about learning more on dust, where it came from and discovering more uses for it. Character Quotes: 'Everyone knows how Opzin likes to break the rules when it comes to his golden girls' Notes: Based on Batman,    Name: Sue-ami Sundial Team: ISRO Occupation: Support, Face of the team Race: Human Age: 17 Sex: Female Aura: Blue Physique: Average, Slim Build, Dark Skin Hair: White, Long, Ponytailed Handedness: Right Causal Clothes: Blue Tunic Dress, Black undershirt and leggings ,Family Amulet Combat Clothes: Same, With armour for shoulders Symbols: Celtic cross Weapons: Shotgun Batons Semblance: Mind Guard (Metal Shield) (Can use it to protect allies or trap enemies. Cant move while the shield is up) Fighting style: Stick fighting based Background: The daughter of a village leader, Sue lived a fairly sheltered life. Until her 13th birthday when her parents were negotiating a dispute with a neighbouring village over resources. Sadly the negotiation took a bad turn and a battle broke out. Which in turn brought the Grimm to them. Her parents died in front of her eyes defending her during the attack. To make matters worse. The rest of the survivors, already having to many mouths to feed, could not afford to take her in. Luckily they met up with a traveling hunter that was willing to take her in. Eventually Sue warmed up to him and, when she showed the will and talent, was trained by him. Years later she was sent to beacon to continue her training. Personality: Very polite, and respectful. Jedi like even. She blames her parents death on people being to quick to fight so she tries to avoid conflict as much as possible. Sadly this makes her a bit of a doormat. She knows that there are times while she must stand up for herself but sometimes has trouble figuring out when does times are. However she does have a hidden manipulative side which she only uses in particular situations. Easily the most social of the group she normally does the talking which cause people to assume that she is the leader much to Inferna's annoyance. She keep up with the politics  of the kingdoms, Hoping's to some day to use her skills in diplomacy to keep peace between them. Pretty much a big sister to Oliver. Character Quote: ' Greetings.I am thankful for your much needed assistance' Notes: Based on  Obi wan Kenboi. Name: Inferna Prince Team: ISRO Occupation: Leader, Tactician Race: Faunus (Lioness) Age: 17 Sex: Female Aura: Red Hair:Long, Red, Braided Physique: Tall, Muscular Handedness: Right Causal Clothes: Tank top, Biker Jacket, Jeans Combat clothes: Full armour with jacket Symbol: Broken Shield Weapons: Large Sword/Rocket Launcher, Combat Knife/Pistol Semblance: Beast rush (For a limited time. Her strength, speed and endurance all increase. However after said time has passed her body crashes and aura levels drop dangerously low) Traits: Cybernetic eye, Gang tattoo(on her left arm) ,Claws, Sharp teeth Fighting style: Uses the sword mostly as a distraction/Intimidation tactic ( unless the enemy is particularly big) and relies more on her side arm or her own fist for actually landing blows. Background: Inferna had spent most of the early life a member of a street gang. When the groups pervious leader dead she took over. Made their living stealing and robing people in order to feed themselves. At age 12 she was caught due to her distracting the cops to allow one of her lackeys to escape. She would have been throwed in jail if her leadership skills had not impressed the local hunter who offered to try and reform her. She was trained, taught the value of honour and hard work and when her master though her worthy she was sent to Beacon. Personality: Proud, Headstrong, Arrogant, Reckless and aggressive. To outsiders it can look like Inferna can be a difficult person to work under with her constantly throwing insults at her team members, referring to her teammates using insulting nicknames (Air head, Zombie and Tree hugger) and quickness to call out their faults .However she is fiercely protective of her team and cares for them in her own frat boyish way. She likes Ravens blunt honesty even when its sometimes gears towards her. Has a even weirder relationship with the partner Sue. She mocks Sue for her inability  to stand up of herself and Sue refers to her more of a bully and a Brute than a leader. However they both have a hidden respect for each others skills over time grow as close as sisters. She insults Oliver constantly but sees him has a little brother.Their is noting she loves more than a good fight She is eager to prove herself has one of the best huntresses and constantly trains and fights to earn that prize. However this has caused her to be arrogant and her semblance has made it worse. She tends to underestimate her opponents often.This proved to be a painful mistake when during a encounter she misused her semblance and ended up losing a eye. She does try to control this with varying degrees of success. When she does take a threat seriously she is a extremely good tactician mostly due to her past. She is very good at assessing the strengths and weakness of her teammates and putting them in places where they will be most useful. During her training she was told she had to learn to sketch as a way of learning control and discovered that she had a talent for it. Since then she secretly enjoys sketching and when no one is watching she would lovely draw the more breath taking scenes she saw during the mission. Character Quotes:'Listen Punk! The ONLY person who talks like that  to a member of my team is ME. Anyone else gets PUT DOWN. Got that? Good. Now get out my sight!'Notes: Based on Guy Gardner.