Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25898433-20141220121855/@comment-24993958-20141223203810

Starboy35tcoos wrote: Allow me to ask this question to you all, https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10225390/1/The-Incredible-RWBY I made this a few months back and update it when I come up with some interesting idea. Tell me, where would you catagorize my story as in terms of RWBY fanfics you normally see, crossover or not? Oh, dear…a crossover…welp, I did say I would give it a shot.

*later*

...Ok…fair warning you are probably not going to like what I’m about to say but…on a scale of 1 to 10 yours would get a meh- out of me.

Ignoring the occasional grammar mistakes, the fact it’s more like a fanplay than a fanfic since you do so little description and make so little effort to incite imagery with your writing, the plotholes surrounding Banner appearing to be born on remnant but having no idea what dust is, you don’t make much use of the premise…you don’t try to marry the universes and have the Grimm or faunus connected to gamma radiations, or get one of the cast Jenifered and turned into a She Hulk, or have Bruce get an Infecton from the Grimm and have a battle in the center of his mind between Green Hulk and a Grimm hulk as Banner watches and contemplates which of the 2 he’s more afraid would win, hell you don’t even use the standard excuse for crossovers which is seeing people from multiverses  fight… so…yeah…I can’t say I’m a fan.