Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20150927024310/@comment-26397825-20151221020224

See, this is where you start to slip a little.

I was under the impression Cyan was becoming a Hunter because he felt he owed a debt to the Hunter who took him in and cared for him. But if the Hunter took him in then didn't give a crap, Cyan has no reason to feel gratitude and has no reason to become a Hunter instead of just some street punk.

Giving teenaged kids the titles for being the masters of the five fighting styles is just pure sueism, I'm afraid. If the titles is reserved for masters, the kids certainly wouldn't get it as it takes years to become a master of one fighting style, especially if Cyan's been brought to a new town and Haruryu has been off having confrontations with Grimm.

My suggestion; ditch the titles. Ditch the idea that the Hunter who took the kids in didn't care (he'd still send the kids to Signal if they wanted to go, as that is what they want to do and he would encourage more protectors for the Kingdom as it is his job as well). And definitely ditch the idea that the kids became masters of their fighting styles as young teens, even before they went to Beacon.