Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27447621-20160428221352/@comment-26397825-20160618014848

Ah, I was actually talking about my own sentence. Your sentence is perfectly fine.

Hmm. I feel like that may be a bit too vague, if you know what I mean? Like, Ptolemy is probably a great guy to base a character off, but shooting stars are only a teeny tiny portion of him, and basing a character off the practise of wishing on shooting stars doesn't really offer much in the way of allusions other than maybe making the character a daydreamer or ungrateful for what they have and always wishing for something else, or envious of other people.