Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-26955524-20160612203912

Hey guys. I wrote a fanfic a couple days ago, and I'm looking for feedback. I wrote the story based off a theory I had about the show. I explain, in author's notes, exactly what that theory is. The more...romantic elements of my story I don't believe happened. I wrote those purely for my story.

But, like I said, I'm looking for feedback and critiques, I find they really help. I'm not the proudest of how I ended it. Reading it again, it feels incredibly rushed and forced. Also, I'm worried about some of the language I use. In my head, I can visualise what happens so clearly, but when I attempt to put it into words...it just falls short. But yeah...what do you guys think?

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