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You've got a fair point right there, but i've wrote down a small bit of character development for Adam

Ahem

''Adam was shocked at what he had just done, his actions had gotten his brothers and sisters in the White Fang arrested, and Blake was so weak last time she fought him this time she had gotten him down in a few measly hits "Maybe it's time I change.." Adam said to himself.''

And so the Redemption Arc begins.. I'm pretty new to story writing though it would help if you gave some pointers