Thread:D374-trap/@comment-13488655-20150226101151/@comment-25857155-20150226101437

Sounds like a cross between Jaune and Pyrrha's backstory, with a hint of Weiss. XD

Not too bad, but you need to flesh it out a lot before I can really get a good judge. You know - who is this mysterious character? How do the fight? How do they act around other people? :)