Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-30159794-20161115081536

Well, I'm posting this here for both attention and, more importantly, criticisms. Seriously, there has to be a way to make this better.

Sleep tight, my precious treasures

Everything will be alright

I will bear any pressure

so you may dream.

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Since the day you entered my life

Things have never been the same

When faced with fight or flight

I shall fight to the very end!

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How can I possibly,

ever put into words,

and say what you have done for me

just by being here?

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How could I ever say-

Thank you.

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I have lost so much

in these long years

You have all been my crutch

allowing me to stand so tall.

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Through the burning pain

and the chilly grief

Strength I've had to gain

for your sake

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When I could not stand

wallowing in my misery

You grew so grand

unlike me.

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How can I possibly,

ever put into words,

and say what you have done for me

just by being here?

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How could I ever say-

Thank you.

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Now you're out of my hands

ready to face the world

Making so many plains

For what lies ahead

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Just know one thing

before you go

That after everything

I will always be by your side.

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How can I possibly,

ever put into words,

and say what you have done for me

just by being here?

-

How could I ever say-

Thank you.

-

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How can I possibly,

(Never)

ever put into words,

(Not Likely)

and say what you have done for me

(So much)

just by being here?

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How could I ever say-

What You have given me?

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How could I say-

Where you have lead me?

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How could I say-

For everything

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Thank you. 