Thread:JadenLan/@comment-26882656-20160417123026

Episodes:

Yellow Trailer:

"Whether the image used is an accurate depiction of the character or was simply a placeholder is unclear." I think it's pretty clear.

Ruby Rose:

"This is likely a reference to Fullmetal Alchemist." That is 100% a reference to FMA.

The Shining Beacon:

"Ruby reveals that all students at Signal forge their own weapons." That's a story element.

"This is the first episode in Volume 1, and the entire series, to show character silhouettes at the ending credits" Meh

The First Step:

"When Pyrrha pulls her weapon out of Jaune's hood..." Pyrrha used her Semblance. Big deal. Do we mention every time when someone uses their Semblance?

The First Step Pt.2:

"Although mentioned by Ruby, Blake does not make an appearance in this episode" Should we write which characters appear in every episode in the trivia? It could be written better.

The Badge and The Burden. Pt.2:

"There are maps and Ursa trophy heads displayed..." That's a lot of text that could be shortened to simply: "There are taxidermy recreations of Grimm in the classroom".

"The color of Weiss' glyphs changes again from the "White" Trailer..." We don't list every new glyph that Weiss makes.

The Stray:

+It could be added that Sun recognising Blake references Sun Wukong's ability to see trough illusions.

Black and White:

+The bowling pin sound effect is heard during the fight. Not only is it not in the trivia, it's in the trivia for Best day ever.

Best day ever:

"This noise is also hidden in the episode "Black and White" when Penny Polendina knocks down a group of White Fang members." Why is this in another episode's trivia section.

Welcome to Beacon:

"This episode introduces the new military-style airships and gunships of Ironwood's faction." Eh.

Painting the town:

"This episode reveals that Ruby has an aversion for rats or rodents in general..." She does? Either way it's a really weird sentence.

Field Trip:

"When Weiss exclaims, "...in the mail!?", her facial expression is the same..." That's how animation works. People have a limited number of facial expressions.

"Ruby and Yang's father's name is revealed to be Taiyang..." This is not trivia.

+"Zwei is the first non-Grimm animal to appear in the show" It should also say "Not counting the crows from the trailers".

Search and Destroy:

"At the beginning of the episode, Weiss' eyes have changed from their previous state at the end of "Field Trip"." What was wrong with her eyes?

"This episode confirms that the "Birdie" seen in "The First Step, Pt.2" is indeed a species of Grimm, shown when Blake is attacked by a flock of black ravens." One: this should be written on the page of the episode it appears in. Two: The same sentence calls it a Grimm, a raven and a baby Nevermore. Ravens are not nevermores. Three: Is it really worth mentioning?

No Brakes

"This episode marks the first battle that Yang has lost..." I get it, but shouldn't battle related things go on the battle pages?

Beginning of the end:

"At the end of the episode, Mercury is shown using a Phillips-headed screwdriver on a flat head screw." I like this trivia, but isn't it technically an inconsistency?

PvP:

"One of Junior's Henchmen appears in the audience again (the first time being "It's Brawl in the Family")." This sentence references something that happened in another episode. Shouldn't it also be written on that episode, then?  