Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-33160573-20171125224511

ok thank you hookshot for some actual feedback.

for the theme thing i didnt know there was suposed to be one so sorry if there is but there isnt

thanks for the help with the weight and the name of the academy

he went to vale after he finnished school at atles academy

raven was young, his mother knew and didnt want to upset him so she lied and got everyone else to lie about it to. (the lie being that she just went away)

the fact that 2 of my characters go ape shit is mostly because the person who helped me make raven was my brother. me and him have slimier thoughts and ideas so thats why mine and his character both have it. while ravens anger comes from his life experiences and embers comes from a short temper that he got from his father. as for why he gets angry he grew up in a small house with not alot of money, in a kinda shitty part of atles. no one got any help from charities or people with money even though all the people there were working there asses off to at-least get food. his anger comes from people abusing there power, which someone who grew up in those circumstances wouldn't like sense he has the power but isnt using it for something good.

the weapon is meant to be basic, remember raven doesn't have much money, having a complicated weapon isnt gonna be cheap so thats just what he has.

the activation cue is mostly me not understanding what it was asking but as for visuals the thing he touches has a pulsating black aura. and its only with his hands