Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-24068534-20180111025623

HookshotHotshot wrote: If you feel like you've gotten all the help you need.

He looks good. A tad underweight, and nothing stands out to much, but there aren't any character-breaking flaws there either.

If you think you can go from here, and you've gotten all the help and discussion you need, feel free to post another character. If you have any more questions or concerns about Satevis, ask away. Well for Satevis, I was worried his personality might seem too generic as pointed above. Any possible tips to fix that maybe and a possible semblance suggestion?

Once that's done, may I ask for advice on a story elemen for him?