Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20180712124300/@comment-26397825-20190903003810

I'm not a fan of vague references to "that" in writing. It doesn't peak my interest, it just annoys me. You can achieve the same effect by cutting those sorts of lines entirely and focusing more on the characters feelings of anger and need for revenge, alluding to the idea that something bad happened but not saying "Until that happened".