Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160825171839/@comment-27648673-20161023071808

I have no idea how to fix this - I wrote it and copied it to an external program, as it didn't post when I originally hit submit, but when I pasted it in the spaces disappeared and the color changed. Sorry.





Core Info

1)Basic info

-Name: Oliver Black

-CNR explanation: Oliver sounds like "Olive", a shade of green. "Black" is black. Oliver uses both, and his main color is Olive Green, although he prefers black over green.

-Species: Human

-Age: 16

-Gender: Male

-Symbol: A dagger with roots coming from the bottom, curling up to frame the dagger and connecting at the top.

-Handedness: Right (although sufficient with the left hand and attempting to become ambidextrous).

-Occupation: N/A (Student when turns 17 and applies to a School)

-Team Acronym: N/A (will be O, K, A, and X, but haven't decided on a team name yet)

2)Appearance

-Aura Colour: Olive Green

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Height: 5'5"

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Weight: 117lb

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Eyes: Dark Green

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Skin color: Fair

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Face: The links wouldn't open for me, so, uh... face-like?

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Hair: Black, short and side-swept.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Physique: Lean/wiry?

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-(Type of) Outfit: (add more than one if exists: Combat, Casual, Job, Formal, Informal, Sport, etc)

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Combat Outfit: Black fedora with gray stripes and a snazzy olive green trim. Black long-sleeved jacket, usually zipped up, with multiple inside pockets and jagged edges which slope down into a point on the sleeves and bottom - green border. Underneath is a green flannel. Olive green fingerless gloves. Dark gray pants with olive green patterns that tuck into worn, light brown combat boots. Two braided leather bracelets, one on each wrist. Emblem on the back of the coat. Relatively simple, casual outfit, doesn't like to get too fancy, and doesn't like to carry unnecessary weight or items that can get caught and snag or tear.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Formal Outfit: Gray suit with a black tie.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">3)Characteristics

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Background: Raised in a poor family with an older sister in the Residential District of Vale, Oliver's life has been uneventful, which fuels his desire for adventure and exitement. He's always had a love of fantasy and become quite interested in weaponry, eventually enrolling in Signal Academy. Though he favored the dagger and foil, he found it unfortunate that he should only ever use those two weapons, and thus decided to modify his fighting style into using the abilities of others to his advantage so he could round out his skills. When he turns 17, he applies to Shade Academy, because he favors the environment of Vacuo, it being much more wild and exciting than what he is used to, but instead is accepted into Beacon (assuming you can apply for more than one? If not, he's forced to apply into Beacon because of its credentials, as he is an extremely successful student. Either way, he hopes to go to Shade but does not).

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Personality: Sarcastic. Blunt, pessimistic, and constantly has something to complain about. Tries to act tougher than actually is. When particularly passionate about something, will stay on said topic for a long time. Finds it difficult to get close to people, but is extremely loyal to those he is close to. Doesn't care much of what others think. Will do things required to do, and will put extraordinary effort into tasks and assignments, even if he does not want to do such things. He does not enjoy peace, and some say he is rather addicted to conflict and combat, as he has always lived an easy life, which he despises. Though he does express all of these negative aspects, he changes when in his comfort zone or around people he enjoys being around. When seeing something that interests him or he finds cute (like, say, a puppy), his attitude takes a 180, and unlike most sullen characters, he doesn't find his change in attitude embarrasing, because he doesn't care what other people think of him. Enjoys jokes, puns, roleplay, and has an interest in animals - in addition, Vegetarian. I'm really trying to stress the depth in this character and how he is not your typical "I'm depressed and OP" person.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Likes: Dogs, chocolate, coffee, rain, literature, "evil" characters, fog, nature, animals in general, mythology/fantasy.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Dislikes: His hair getting messed up, wasting resources/killing with no purpose, meat, injustice, the sun, uncontrolled movement (has motion sickness, and thus is not comfortable on planes, busses, cars, etc), stereotypes.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">4) Trivia:

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Notes: V under-developed character. I'm wondering what kind of improvment, additions, or changes you all think I should make to this character.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">Hunter Extension

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">I) Weapons

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Name: Proton and Neutron

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Type: Multi-Blade Compact Daggers

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Short Description: Two daggers, one which breaks into three like a mini-trident, and the other which extends into a rapier.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">II) Semblance

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Name: Roots

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Short Description: Allows the user to cling to surfaces.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Activation Cue: The legs would obtain a wood-like texture in a gradiant form. It looks like wood, but it's not. Clothing covering the legs also have this effect.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Reflection of Character: Oliver has a hard time accepting and adjusting to change, and once connected to something, has a hard time breaking that connection. Somewhat down-to-earth.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">III) Combat Info

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Class/Position: Thief? That's the best desc I could think of.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Landing strategy: Using semblance to cling to object he lands on.

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Fighting Style: Uses opponent's offense against them. If fighting a human, will typically steal their weapon and use it against them. If fighting a Grimm or a disarmed human, will use their attacks to injure themselves - having a human drive their fist into a wall, having a Grimm accidentally attack another, etc. Will also use weapons if necessary, of course, especially when fighting Grimm, but typically less when fighting a Huntsman or Huntress unless the opponent's weapon is attached to their body (like Yang or Mercury).

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">IV) Statistics

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">@) Physical Statistics

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Strength: 2

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Speed: 4

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Agility: 5

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Stamina: 4

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">&) Aural Statistics

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Aura Reserve: 4

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Aura Manipulation: 2

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Semblance Manipulation: 4

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Dust Manipulation: 0

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">$) Technical Statistics

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Dust use: 0 (but will likely use dust either in weapons, clothing, or tattoos later)

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Fighting Skill: 5

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 3

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 5

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 3

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 3

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Overall Total:  44 (wow that was close)

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">Civilian Extension

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">A) Day to Day Life

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Skills: Fencing, Archery, Marksmanship, Climbing, Analysis/Observation, Literature (writing)

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">

<p style="margin-top:0px;margin-bottom:0px;font-size:12px;line-height:normal;font-family:Helvetica;color:rgb(69,69,69);">-Additional Notes: (this was probably meant for the pet section but whatever) Some people say he's addicted to conflict, judging on the amount of skills he's proficient in.