Talk:Remnant Timeline/@comment-24573226-20181127154558/@comment-181178-20181210024528

Well, I made changes adding all the plots that converge in the battle of Haven:


 * Adding that once Yang gets her confidence back, she leaves for Mistral. (it is now relevant plot\history-wise)
 * Adding that Ozpin orders Oscar to go to Mistral. (explains why he's suddenly mentioned)
 * RNJR fights Tyrian and kill the Nuckelavee. (huge gap between "targets Ruby" and "gets to Mistral", might as well put the two relevant parts of the journey)
 * Weiss is shot down above Mistral, and ends up captured by the Branwen tribe.
 * Yang finds the Branwen tribe and Weiss, and Raven invites them to join, but once they refuse, she sends them to rejoin RNJR.
 * Adding that RNJR (plus Oscar and Qrow) were in Haven as the assault started.

Yet I was reverted. Sure, not every beat of the plot is necessary. But dropping facts without cause and consequence makes it a bit hollow.