Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160518062840/@comment-14138255-20160519201727

Not sure how to feel about posting another person's character that you edited. On the one hand, it could help it be accepted, but on the other hand it's technically plagarism and it might not even help Kirito.

As for the character, it looks alright at first glance. Has a much improved backstory (where despite his efforts, he still failed).