Thread:Alhazad2003/@comment-24032889-20190120081745

Thanks for some of your refinements to the section. There were some ways your edit conveyed the story better than mine. I did change some, only minor, details about it, most notably the punctuation. You don't need to put a comma before "and" most of the time.

As a rule of thumb, you only need to add a comma when the words that follow "and" can stand as their own sentence. Most of the time, that works, but I'm sure sometimes it's not the case. But it's a good rule to go by. 