Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25396609-20150323201741

spelling and grammar are once again a maor issue, may want to make your characters less attractive, having all of them be that way is just bad writing, I have my fair share of attractive characters, but just as many are rough, plain, or straight up ugly. Garen, for example, my main character, is too angular, while Gauthak, leader of my B-team is attractive but only slightly, with a huge scar on his calp and excessive height decreasing his overall attractiveness.