Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150728223355/@comment-25396609-20150818212829

well, for one, that symbol is horribly overcomplicated.

He's really, REALLY small. i get that, chinchilla and all that, but a bit excessive.

you spelled Zuko wrong describing the hair...

yet another generic bullied orphan.

in fact, the whole backstory is a bit on the cliched side.

executed the weapon pretty poorly, would have been better going with a dust based spellsword type thing over a bow.

semblance is fairly similar to my Tether, but manifests differently.

grammar is all over the freaking place on this sheet.

class/position still doesn't make sense. ranger is fine, but 'either' means jack shit in this context.

the weapon is one that would benefit more from strength, especially if he plans to knock people unconcious with it.