Thread:Bluewindbag/@comment-27966940-20180416035527/@comment-27144409-20180417014718

Kirito isn't necessarily the best person to ask to look for flaws in an OC. He's come a long way though.

Give it some time for people to respond. I'm in the middle of something so I don't have the time or focus for analyzing an OC, though your occupations category has me concerned.