Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-14138255-20170320024103/@comment-14138255-20170422024209

I really agree with the sentiment, especially the criticisms of Pyrrha. I'm trying to get things to be more action packed as well, even breaking some of Dark Souls' mechanics. I can't really change the setting mid-fic I'm afraid (of course, I can just abandon this fic and work on the PMMM/Bloodborne idea I had, but that's hardly sporting, espescially when I can just write better on the current fic).