Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24534644-20160802001817/@comment-27144409-20160823234336

RayStrikeAbius wrote: Alright folks, sorry for the delay. It's now finally time for me to start handing out judgements for these lovely characters you've all sent in. Again, first time doing this, but I certainly like to think of myself as a fair and honest judge... sometimes to a fault. We'll see how that goes. So let's begin! First up on the chopping block is Sentry616 with his OC Portokall Rooi.

Basic Info: 14/15.

Appearance: 16/20.

Characteristics: 26/30.

Trivia: 4/5.

Weapon: 9/10.

Semblance: 9/10 I'm gonna go ahead and interpret this as operating akin to Byakugan, just much more limited. All in all it works well. If the Semblance is based off a fusion of her natural intuition as well as her familiarity with water, then it works well for her character. Only nitpick is that the range seems a bit too short to be useful most of the time, assuming that the range you mentioned is for out-of-water only.

Combat Info: 10/10. Yes, I can certainly see how she'd be crowd control with those weapons of hers, XD. The weapons happen to be perfect for giving her a landing strategy, and the fighting style is just... well, appropriately vicious. Crabs can be brutal.

Overall Point Total: 88. Pretty good, but most point reductions same from lack of information in areas. I didn't realize I was supposed to explicitly say that there wasn't anything to note. I will remember that for the future.

I can have trouble trying to describe things at times. I'll try to figure out a better description for the armor, but the idea was something along the lines of smooth organic looking segmented armor.

I keep forgetting these little details. They live on a tropical coast. I forgot to decide where though. Vaccuo works I guess.

Whoops. She's a first year who enterd later than usual. I've had problems with implausible time lines before. I was trying to head that off,... and I forgort her combat outfit. That was stupid.

I should have aced this category. I'll learn... eventually. Pretty much any Dust type would work, and I held off from saying anything about steam (particularly the planned jets for steam jets that would cook Grimm alive), but water would be the primary.

I was trying to balance the range, and I had to guess. It would be useful for identifying objects to salvage in murky submerged rooms.

YES!

I could have done better, but I'm improving.