Thread:Alhazad2003/@comment-24573226-20160905115913/@comment-26397825-20160907100035

I don't believe transcripts are the right place for dramatisation either, as they are meant to be what happens in the show directly transcribed to an easy to read format; it's meant to be very literal with no flowery phrases or extra descriptions.

I read your edit to Ozpin's Group page, though, and it looks good to me.