Thread:Arkantos95/@comment-14138255-20170310034514/@comment-14138255-20170313234658

MiniDaggers wrote: Hi, didn't think I'd find myself on a fanfic making thread both due to general lack of interest and also minimal knowledge of Dark Souls.

That said, I gave the first chapter of this a read and I have to say I'm impressed so far and also interested. I also have some comments to make which I am reluctant to do using my gmail account due to containing my actual name. If you wouldn't mind me commenting here though...

The estus flask. I believe it is anyway, at the end of the chapter. A glaring thing to me personally, despite it being fairly minor I suppose, is what she did with it. Is she taking it with her? Leaving it there? Reason for either? Just seems like a detail that should be included as it seemed to glossed over after she noticed the sword and shield. Woops, sorry. That's another weakness of mine, might miss some details. That said, I was thinking of her putting it on one of those pouches she has around her waist and mentioning she did that when she finds the Ashen Estus flask, which she puts with the Estus Flask she found.