Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160201223522/@comment-24993958-20160215084533

Aside from making sure to keep the wolf prevalent in the backstory, well...

Mention the average time the father goes on a mission, which should be about 1 month provided he doesn’t do any Qrow like missions.

Mention they two goons were spying and waiting, preferably by Otineo while he explains things to him.

And remove the part where Otineo tried to assure the kid the goon wasn’t dead by wolf  but dead by emotions…it just…doesn’t mesh well…

