User blog comment:Goddess of Despair/Court Royale/ RWBY tournament part 2/@comment-5999656-20130301231811

Good sequel! I really like how you improved spelling and included the canon characters, and I look forward to the next part of the tourney! However, I think you shouldn't involve the 'original" RWBY characters too much until we get more info on them, so this kind of interaction is a good amount. It could improve by changing bus to bush, but I like how everything is clean and not confusing. GJ, and I look forward to seeing more from you! :)