Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-31558062-20180402171939

Kirito Rose wrote: This is how you wrote it:

"Azure was born in a small family in a small village in Vale. When he was 3, his father Hiryu was a carpenter and a hunstman. He taught Azure all of his carpentry skills. After that, he went on a mission and his mother Rosea is a housewife and a huntress. She taught Azure how to cook... 

...Cherry Rainbows the leader of team CAKE, Kobe Stickz, and Eton Bliss."

​​​​​ This is how I would write it (More or less):

"Azure was born in a small family in a small village in Vale. His father, Hiryu, and his mother, Rosea, were both Huntsmen, though they each worked a side job; His father as a carpenter and his mother as a housewife. Azure learned most of his skills in carpenterring and cooking from his parents...

  ...This is where he met his teammates, Cherry Rainbows, Eton Bliss, and Kobe Stickz. With him added to the trio, they became Team CAKE." Thanks!

I have a question. Is someone gonna draw the OCs?