Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24534644-20170630004409/@comment-30530552-20170723022117

RayStrikeAbius wrote: I have some free time tonight, so I'll check in on another character. This one is Marie Agneau, from PisceanWaterbender.



8/10.

20/20

25/30

3/5.

12/15

13/15

5/5

I) Day-to-Day Life: Fun bonus information is fun. You get 3 points of recovery.

Point Total: 90



Overall a very nice character, although the holes in her backstory and information left out hold it back. I'll also reiterate that the character would have made a much better allusion to Baa, Baa, Black Sheep, name aside, but that's more of a personal criticism.

1) It was either that or "beloved," which too, would be a bit of a stretch by associating with red.

2) I surprised myself in making that. Glad you liked it.

3) Eh, I don't really have much to add here. Diamant was a last minute addition, so I probably could've explained that bit much better. And I would like to think that years in the field learning how to work with her weapon would be enough to get her up to that level, considering as Qrow did mention that every day in the field is worth a week in an Academy, but that just might be wishful thinking on my part, since Qrow's a Huntsman and woud deal with that stuff more often than Marie.

4) Fair enough.

I) I had originally wanted the hook separate, but then I felt like it would be too bulky and it would lose it's stealthiness I meant it to have. I probably could've done the "attached to the blade thing" but I just wanted this done.

II) Yep. It was my inspiration, actually. Personally I think Aries doesn't get enough credit, since that ability could be very useful in many situations. And yes, it does disappear after lying stagnant for a short length of time, maybe 15 seconds if not being actively maintained.

Overall, I'm pretty happy with that score, since it's my 2nd best score yet on any of these competitions.

Also, I added it up and it gave me a score of 89...just thought I'd point that out...I don't know which score you're going to use, but either way I at least want it to be right & fair.