Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150910235150/@comment-10301320-20151018034055

Alright well, I'll get to it eventually, I think for a lot of things I just haven't conveyed things the way I mean to (For instance dark side while dealing with criminals is more that he just doesn't like them and acts differently because of that, just like if in real life people are stuck talking to someone they dislike then they act less uhhh...nicely). It's a problem that's been present in my writing for awhile so I'll work on that.

I could argue reasoning against a few of your points, but the issues you brought up about Ozpins personal interest and bad portrayal are probably spot on. There's just a lot I don't know about regarding Remnant, like is there a way to become a huntsmen without joining an academy? after you pass the course are you then tied to that specific academy? Is there an age limit.

I will point out that in my mind his semblance fits if by a very flimsy connection (Former criminal so a semblance that takes something and gives it to him fits thematically, but I can see that not being his personality per se), but then Yang's semblance (In my opinion) doesn't tie all that much into her personality (feel free to prove me wrong on that, I'm probably just not seeing it).

I think I forgot to add a reason he was raised by criminals because I cbf (or again just didn't convey things), might go with the street urchin that eventually gets hired by the mob approach. Sorry for the late reply I went to sleep minutes before you posted.

Btw thanks for the patience.