Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160225194034/@comment-25279497-20160314160120

Everything Wrong With this Caracter, inspired by Cinemasins.

1. Hello Kirito #388, please take your seat right next to your other equally generic shonen protagonist. +1

2."Found in a dumpster" insert prom night dumpster baby song from Family Guy. On a more serious note, how long was he in a dumpster without getting sick or hungry? +1

3. His rescue sounds like an ex Machina. +1

4. So... he straight up left his adopted parent/father figure/ savior to die? Ok then. +1

5. Yeah, another adoption ex Machina! +1

6. Let see; got into one of best combat schools, got into Beacon at 16, Dust infusion, carries seven different weapons. My Mary Sue senses are tingling. +1

7. Motherfrakker a walking armory with 7 damn weapons. RWBY characters aren't US Navy SEALs dude. +1

8. Semblance makes no sense and it hurts my brain trying to figure it out. +1

Score/sentence: 8, Vedran pretty much sum up any fixes I could have given.