Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25229725-20150128010644/@comment-25343309-20150204232744

JayHart wrote:

Madninja, I must say your characters seem rather difficult to believe - a little too large, so to speak. Also, one of them having no redeeming qualities to he personality kind of makes him extremely undesirable to have in your story. And how can blackfire burn something to ash if it can't spread? Not to completely debunk you, I like some of your characters' key points, but they need to be toned down a little bit, y'know? Dusk and Noir are supposed to be nearly unreasonably strong for their age, Dusk is ridiculously powerful because he's gone through crazy hellish training for basically his entire life, as well as enduring various experiments that artificially enhaced his combat capabilities, and Noir is one of those once in a hundred years prodigies, sorry if it makes them a bit unbelievable, it's unavoidable I suppose, as for Rouge, yeah, it was a mistake having him be that one sided, I still plan on him being a thoroughly unlikable character, at least at first, but he shouldn't be totally without merit or he'll get boring