Talk:Weapons/@comment-84.184.155.113-20150208211049/@comment-25555436-20150208230506

Ok...I see 1 Mary Sue/Marty Stu trait in there, and at least 2 signs of uncreativity.

The premise sounds rather similar to the show's. Someone targeting the kingdoms from the shadows, Oh God where have I seen one before?

And under-age people getting to Beacon Academy ahead of time.