Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-25396609-20150405032449

Avalaon:

Sniper-rifle/longsword is a simple but effective weapon, the explanation for how it transforms is a bit lacking, but not bad.

semblance is sort of confusing, not really sure what it's supposed to do or how it is meant to function. the effect on the sword could be achieved better with dust than anything else, which would free him up for a better semblance.

fighting style and landing strategy are good.

personality seems a bit contradictory, proud and self centered but dislkes spoiled people. smartass and calm unless enraged are perfectly fine.

like his outfit.

decide on which symbol to use, maybe combine them.

background is fine.

next up, Scaith