Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-3965075-20170602225213/@comment-27144409-20170625013250

Cyrania de Bergerac wrote: 1)Basic Info   Name: Poppy Flanders 1: No problems. 10/10

2: Not the best description of overall physique. Nothing about good musculature, and she's on the heavier side, though not overweight, so the listed physique seems unrealitic when compared with BMI. 18/20

3: Oh for crying out loud, how about putting an empty line between paragraphs. I've trying to avoid complaining, but this is the third review today. Oh. So we're going for the macabre are we? At least she likes books and flowers. I would dock you for the team being uncoordinated, but I don't recall a lot of teams having good teamwork. What you have in misc. traits doesn't belong there. 29/30

4: New info and no problems. 5/5

Weapons: I think you mean rocket propelled grenade launcher. A shoulder fired grenade launcher would be more along the lines of an M79 or XM-25. Gravity has been shown to more push than pull. We have steam not smoke. Lightning Dust alone alone wouldn't cause an EMP. You could have just said the electrical discharge damages electronics, and stuns humans, but you said EMP. 10/15

Semblance: No major problems. 15/15

Combat info: Tonfa mode is poorly utilized. I try to treat form 1 as primary. 4/5

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