Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170424154014/@comment-27450328-20170503080721

Alright, I'll rewrite the backstory with Garnet taking the mission solo to prove himself. His dad was following him with a team, trying to stop him but he arrived too late and the monster had already crushed Garnet's arms with his tentacles. I may not use what you proposed because even if Garnet was an ass, you don't throw your boss' son to a dangerous Grimm just for that. They are not bandits nor stupid people. But nice suggestion, it just does not fit right with the Idea I have of the company and its members.

For the Chateaunoir company's sector of activity, yes, that makes more sense. And I'll delete the "electronic" parts of the Semblance.

Alright, thanks for the review, I'll work on that.