Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20151118083252/@comment-26397825-20151210024140

It sounds slightly OP...but.

If the person frozen is attacked, which counts as force, do they become unfrozen immmediately? And by "more powerful', do you mean that the freezing aspect can be undone by pure physical power/circulating excess aura (basically overloading the body) on the part of the person that is frozen? And I'm guessing it only freezes their movements - it doesn't stop their heart/brain from functioning and therefore killing them. In that case, they'd still be able to see and hear and think.

Also, I'm guessing in Tier One the user doesn't have the ability to undo her work, so if she hits an ally by accident she can't undo it until she hits Tier Two. Is there a visual effect to go along with her throwing the power, so enemies can see it and get out of the way if they are quick enough? Like, a ball of light flying through the air? That would make it seem more balanced, as it would be a clear visual indicator and dodgeable.

The criteria for Tier Three sounds a bit iffy though. Is it based on what she thinks, or what the person being frozen thinks? IE, if she thinks Cinder is a student and throws it at her, will she be frozen, or will she not be frozen because Cinder doesn't think of herself as a student? And is it still a straight firing line in this aspect, or does it become a circular area of effect?

I think it could be interesting the have Tier Three as a circular area of affect, which is why she gets the criteria aspect, but keep the area of effect version at 20 seconds. Then she can have the 'beam' version', which gets upgraded to lasting indefinitely and causes objects to explode. Basically separate it into two separate abilities because of the criteria aspect, which could make it OP.