Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160402201256/@comment-25479664-20160407175045

VedranTheII wrote: 

Name lost the link to the CNR when you had his hair graying, since that implies his hair was black when he was young and...sigh…

VedranTheII wrote:

…I am not repeating myself again…so instead I will quote myself…

VedranTheII wrote:

How he lost his arm is unexplained......your character STILL got the drop on him AND the entire group he used to ambush him in the first place despite being injured and teamless, and this time he not only managed to do it without lethal force, but he somehow managed to cripple the mentor for life?...also you seem to be under the impression willingly permanently crippling someone won’t send you to jail? Who do you think you are, Nora?...sorry, no, you do not get to have him without any downtime in prison, in fact by all accounts he should stay there more since now the teacher can press charges.

Look, either admit your oc performed a criminal act, jail him, wait till he gets out and THEN decides to get a job, or have him be a runaway gun for hire…I at least don’t think you can have both, in Remnant or otherwise. FYI now his feat is even more ridiculous since he apparently waited to be attacked first, thus completely removing the possibility he ambushed both his boss and the party.

Also, since you left the rebels alive, they ALL can testify he attacked first, so even if your character somehow kicked ALL their collective asses, crippled his mentor, and did that AFTER they attacked first, he would still go to jail. Vedran would be excellent at CinemaSins *ding*

I'm not even going to bother with the details anymore. No matter what I do, you'll find some sort of issue with it. Please stop naming the issue, and either give me a solution, or jsut stop brinign it up. And sending the character to prison isn't a solution; it goes against his character and its not the whole backstory. Of course there are going to be holes, but remember that we have little to no idea of how the legal system in Vale works, much less (so far at least) the legal system of Mistral, which remember is infamous for it's seedy underworld which probably means that corruption is a little more rampant there. I jsut odn't wanna have my character in prison for 10 years, as it takes up time and requires me to complicate the whole thing even more. *huff, huff, huff*, okay rant time over. Any other criticisms that I can actually do something about without fucking up the OC.