Thread:CarusELumen/@comment-15108745-20130926222759/@comment-4123264-20130927041508

Ooohhh, I see! While that's actually a good idea & I'm impressed with the thought, it somewhat misses the essential of a good song: Rhyming. "Ready/already" (which is piss-poor work on my part, now that I look at it...), "newbie/, & the part I was personally proudest of, " YELLOW /hello/ YELLOW /fellows". Really, there's very little that matches up with yellow, so it was a miracle in itself I could even come up with that. Still, your rendition might work, so I guess we can debate about it before your initial performance.

(Unfortunately, not right now - it's been a long & exciting day with you guys helping me on this project, so I'm heading to get some shut eye. I'll be more coherent in the morning/early-ish afternoon.)