Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25936766-20160701133235/@comment-25936766-20160714201556

Now Phantomlink's Garen Waldgrun.....holy damn the lack of space.

-Basic Info: 13/15 I've already spoken my stance on color names. -2. Everything else looks good. I would've questioned the team name being Gagarin, but I searched and there is both a crater and an asteroid named after him, so it works in my book.

-Appearance: 15/15 All looks good.

-Backstory 17/20 (...next time, let's make a rule that participants must use the Enter button, please) I find the appearance of a true forest warrior guy in this competition creative. The idea of using simple weapons as well. I find that part where he killed a man who conveniently turned out to be a wanted criminal....well, convenient, but given what he was doing and Garen's reasons for killing him pretty sure Garen would've gotten a Not Guilty verdict anyway, or at least light punishment.

That said, I don't like much the use of something as fanfictious as World Tree. On the other hand, you kept it's role in his backstory at a minimum, thankfully enough.

-Personality: 10/10 Pretty good.

-Likes/Dislikes: Most of it doesn't flesh out his character much. His hate of canned food makes sense. Though it does flesh him out a bit that he likes Chewing Gum and hates Games of Chance (and chocolate, such heresy). (Now let him meet Rousett). +1

-Notable Relationships: 5/5, not much to say beyond that.

-Weapon: 10/10 I got no idea how to pronounce those things. I always say "Dick-Tung-Splatter" and "Stall-Scatten" respectively. Both weapons feel Simple, Yet Good, and serve as examples that one doesn't need to go over the top in RWBY weaponry.

-Semblance: Hang on a second. His Semblance is the exact same as Inika's Ekaitz. Sure, they vary in the most specific details, but they got the exact same name, type, and basic effect, the similarity is uncanny. This may require some inquiry, since it's against the rules to use someone else's creations without public permission. Besides that, I would give it a 10/10.

-Combat Info: 9/10 I got no idea what you mean by "4th edition Invoker". DnD? Cause if so, my knowledge of DnD classes it's limited. His fighting style is simple, but works.

Overall Points Excluding Semblance atm: 80. With Semblance: 90.