Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-35455126-20190501031644

Okay, so I think I speak for everyone in the FNDM when I say the characters were poorly written.

Now here’s a good question: What problems do you have with them? How would you rewrite them? Personality changes, backstories, motivations, etc. I’ll go first with Team RWBY.

Ruby’s motivation is very similar to her canon version’s: She wants to be a great Huntress, but primarily because of Summer. A secondary motivation would be to find out how she died. She still has this positive personality and bottles up all her negative emotions and feelings and shit.

Weiss, however...is a bit more of a bitch. In my little fan-fiction, Winter was killed personally by the Eye-Brand Beast himself, Adam Taurus. Naturally, she hates Faunus, only she hates them more. Like Ruby, she bottles up her innermost feelings, but also regularly cries to herself in private.

Blake’s is largely the same, except that she wanted to become a Huntress to defend herself just in case the White Fang finally caught up to her.

And Yang? Simple, finding her mommy.

Any rewrites of your own? Thoughts? Criticisms? Let’s hear ‘em. 