Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-108.23.148.194-20140118015155/@comment-10390252-20141031163827

This is purely my unexpert opinion but, IMHO, whilst Monty is a great character designer, animator and world-builder, his actual story- and script-writing are not so good. Additionally, I get the feeling that Miles and Kerry are out of their comfort zone due to the particular requirements of writing RWBY being different from writing Red vs. Blue.

I'm not saying that the writing is bad but it's average''. ''It does not always match the epic promise but little bits of brilliance sneak through like Blake's personal dilemmas and Doctor Oobleck's probing questions and personal motivations.

However, no matter how hard the guys struggle, they are going to probaby fail to make this a mighty epic in the style of Avatar - The Last Airbender.