Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25857155-20150111054847/@comment-25195920-20150113175526

Yep. But thats why you always have at least one person you can talk to about your writing. You bounce ideas, your helper shoots em down and helps you turn the wreckage into something good. I bounced my lightning power idea at my sister a while back and she sent it back to be with a laundry list of reasons why it was too powerful and we kept doing that until we got to the version listed above, with a very clear timeline on how long it would take to get to the point everything can be used effectively and without shorting out (bad electric pun).