Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20170705210718/@comment-27447621-20170801201421

Ok... I admit life stealing Semblances have been done before and it is hard to come up with an original one. I'll think on that and get back to you.

I have a few other questions...starting with Anthem.

First off, what do you mean 'forged with Aura'? Does the sword itself generate Aura? If so, how far in the future is this thing? if it's far enough in the future, maybe machines generating Aura are more common, but so far all we have in the show is top-secret-cutting-edge Penny.

And that ties into my second question- swords having Semblances...is that explained in your AU as well? Semblances (with one exception; Weiss) reflect the user's personality. Swords...don't have those. You need to be really careful about how you handle this, because there's potential to just turn your character into a Mary Sue.

The last thing I'm going to put into this post is that Notable relations are nothing to scoff at, you can learn a lot about a character based on how they interact with others. Maybe just a sentance or two for each other member of Perduellion Soul?

We can get into her personality later, because I do have questions and concerns about that, but let's cover Anthem for now.