Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160331235054/@comment-26397825-20160412040326

Gideon Aurum wrote:


 * Notes :  I based his entire character off of Juuzou from Tokyo Ghoul, but i adapted and changed some things to make him fit the story, and look cooler.


 *  Character Basis :  The young artist from “The Psyche” by Hans Christian Andersen, and Juuzou Suzuya from Tokyo Ghoul (mostly Juuzou though).  (yeah...not the best choices…)

Basically...you ported Juuzou from Tokyo Ghoul in, made a few modifications (like, 4 references to the fairytale with maybe a few stylistic things here and there) and called it a day. What was that rule again?
 *  Weapon Derivation : Juuzou Suzuya’s coat/shirt from Tokyo Ghoul.  I just gave them to a different character, and added a hammer.
 *  Design : Black, straight handle that tapers out a bit at the end.  The blade is a double bevel on each side, the entire knife is the blade, meaning that there is no spine or non-beveled space on the blade.  Like this  (also, this the outfit.  I put a different person into Juuzou’s clothes, and mixed their minds.)

 5) No reality shifted characters (That means no bringing in Goku as a Hunter.) 

Sorry, but everything about this character pretty much states that it is a reality shifted character. I am terribly sorry to say that you have been disqualified.