Thread:Derrmann/@comment-24038207-20130721234035

You're really doing the OC really well. The art is pretty great so far. And there's really some minor changes that I would like to be done. The rope part of the sheath could be extended a bit more, and to show this you could try and just extend it so it's off the image. The edge of the sheath could be extended a bit more. I just feel it would fit the Vergil type of character a bit more, but you'd do me good if you extend it just a bit more. And the edge of the blade, you can take out of the razor edge lines. It's fine without it. As we both notice the blade isn't very straight at the end but, you can just extend that off in a straight line.

The hair is fairly well, and the face is a little bit weird, like it needs a little bit more of that Yuri Lowell face, but this part is just me. You don't have to change it, i'm just saying. It's really only this part that doesn't matter if you change it or not, the first part is what I'd like you to change if you can. 