Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25229725-20150128010644/@comment-25555436-20150206032507

Alright: For starters, "Majikal", which I asume is a cooler version of Magical, does not allude to a Color. Fail there.

Also, don't expect me to try to figure anything out. You'll have to spell it out for me. Yes, this includes the Color Names.

Myron Segen

-Sounds rather cliché personality-wise. Or rather, a combination of small clichés.

-Make Fatebreaker a Long-Range Revolved, like Deadly Chaser's Silver Bullet from Elsword, and remove the "can predict actions to an extent" part of the Semblance, and you got all you need.

-So...he's bi.

Jay Westwind

-"Red Oni with Blue Oni Pairing where the Blue Oni and the Red Oni are almost complete oposites personality-wise" Cliché.

-Cold Sniper Cliché.

-Reduce the "Devastating" part of the Semblance to an "Strong" and you're fine.

Kayla Burne

-Used to have ears? Don't tell me she had abusive parents that tortured her.

-You know, when a woman tells you to not ask a woman her weight, it means they are, or think they are, fat.

-I want to throw her a beachball. Just to see her reaction.

-So, just a bow+ Dust Arrows, and a simple Knife that shouldn't be able to kill anything bigger than an Ursa....boring, but practical.

-The "Throwing Blades/Arrows" part of her Semblance feels unnecesary, as Dust already allows you to do both. All she would get from this, is a less-limited amount of Neutral Arrows (because using it takes Aura, and it doesn't last forever).

Laerie Sangestre

-Shrinking Violet Cliché. Or more precisely, a very cliché Shrinking Violet.

-That weapon name, so emoish.

-Buffing allies and debuffin enemies is fine in my book. But capable of stunning Grimm, which I assume includes things as big and bigger than Goliaths, and even capable of a Complete Lock on the enemy and even an Area Stun and simulate a Hastega spell? Hahaha...keep dreaming.

-She's obviously lesbian. Characters like her always end up lesbians.