Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25266931-20161112032800/@comment-28345522-20161116175020

It's a nice short story, but you don't have worry about the filler stuff like in novellas/novels.

He does hesitate and second guess himself a good bit, which is what I've trying to advocate for.

I liked the direction up until the end, where it got really fantastical with the production crew/agent/ parent hallucinations and suddenly shifted tone back to reality.