Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25555436-20150323000526

22xander wrote:

Name: Nero Alexander

-Name does not fit the CNR in any way.

-Manipulating ''probability? Chances? Being able to fucking dodge bullets''? Make his bullets always land? Dude, remove that, remove that entirely, I don't fucking care if he's a gambler, that thing is fucking OP.

-Only 1 Faunus Trait. You can't have ears and tail, either one or the other, but not both.

-Also, foxes are not black. There are no black foxes. Foxes are orange with white tips, not black with white tips.

-Background is not really impressive.

-All that and he's just 16? Yeah fucking right.

-"He is able to whatever he wants and somehow get away with it". So, this cements it: He's a fucking Marty Stu. Send it to the void, that thing should not exist.

-Also, the way you organized the paragraphs and information, was painfully horrible, even a kid would do it better. What, no one teached you about the Enter button?

Overall Score: 1 out of 10, needs to be killed, burned, sent to the void, and never be seen again.