User blog comment:Gundam Legilis/If you were Monty Oum.../@comment-4010415-20141213231358

- Put Jaune's development on a back burner for now, considering how much he has gotten already, with most of it actually annoying some people because 1. His arcs make him look like a douche, when he is kind of a sweet nerdy guy, 2. He hasn't gotten consequences for his actions or behavior.

- In volume 3, start doing some development for Weiss, trying to show us what she's like when she's alone (Such as when she practiced smiling in the elevator) and some stuff about the Schnee Dust Company and her relationship with her family.

- In volume 3, put some focus on Ren and Nora because damn they need it. Maybe tell us how they met and what their childhood was like.

- Try to actually represent the fact that getting hit chips away at your aura. Show when a character is worn down. All we got in that sense was Yang getting smacked by some Nevermores in the volume 2 finale.

- Lower the intensity of the main characters' badassery. Please. Ruby Rose, Players and Pieces, and The Badge and the Burden Pt 2 can stay the same because Ruby wasn't too badass, it took entire teams to take down the Nevermore and Death Stalker (plus, part of the Death Stalker's death was falling into a canyon), and Weiss' fight with the Boarbatusk was in a controlled classroom setting. But their beatdown of the Paladin made them look overpowered and/or made the Paladin look weak as shit, when it's supposed to be a combat mech. Blake defeated Torchwick a little too easily in No Brakes, though I know he was taken off-guard by her suddenly using elemental clones for the first time.

- Give some focus on Cinder where she isn't just some plain, flat character. You don't even have to reveal anything about her plans. Just tell us about her.

- Maybe in volume 3, bring up why Sun moved to Mistral. Also, make a Journey to the West reference by having him say the easiest way to get to Mistral from Vacuo was to go west, so that's the route he took.

- Better portray the discrimination that faunus face. Apparently, Torchwick's view of the faunus is normal among humans, but we haven't been shown that, so many assume that this is a trait pretty exclusive to Torchwick. We need more than just a bunny girl getting her ear pulled, two men (Torchwick and Cardin) acting prejudiced, and Blake saying that the faunus are discriminated against. Maybe have Sun taking a walk through Vale, ignoring various dirty looks, prejudiced remarks and taunts, and various pushes and shoves.