User blog:Zathronas/Analysis by an author: What did I miss? part 3

Hello and welcome to author analysis

Well! It's been a long road but this will be my last author analysis until we get more episodes. I still have some blogs to do but it will be under the title: "Author's advice. A guide to writing stories and fan fiction." So stay tuned.

Episode 11

We are now a few weeks into the school year.

In the category of " things I'll never get an answer" how do they manage to measure aura?

When I watch Nora's dream, the tiny author's voice in the back of my head whispers: foreshadowing!!!

Could Nora be the Cassandra figure of RWBY? Blessed with future knowledge but condemned at being taken with derision when she mentions that future.

Cardin Winchester the third!! ( anybody get the referrence?... I'm getting old!)

Can't wait to get more Velvet in Volume 2. Great accent too!

Episode 12

Bartholomew Oobleck! My pick for exposition master! Past edition.

Night vision. Mark my words this is important. As Shakespeare used to say. If you will use a sword in act 3 of your play, be sure to show it in act 1. Well that's act 1.

The person who give me the name of the man who said "Those who cannot remember the past are condemn to repeat it" will get a personnal kudo from me in my next blog. I want the original quoter ladies and gents.

Way to overreact Jaune! What comes next is solely on your head!

Episode 13

Ruby has really grown into her role as leader. What? You thought that scene was about Jaune? P'shaw!

We clearly see Cardin's insecurities when he wants revenge on Pyrrha. Why else attack her? And he know he's no match for her so he tries to get Jaune to do it. That was the revenge, not the sap and stingers but that Jaune would have had done it.

Finally Jaunes stand up to to Cardin!

Episode 14

Jaune gets the living tar beat out of him until... was that his aura or did we just see his semblance for the first time?

That Ursa IS big! Which brings me back to my part 2 question. Could the reason they made the grimm weak was because they wanted to show them grow as the darkness get stronger? We see a bigger beowolf with Ruby and Weiss in the emerald forest. The ursa gets bigger and bigger. The death stalker might have grown a lot too. Hmm, food for thought.

My Aura's in the red? F*** that! I want and ursa's head on the mantle of my fireplace!

Pyrrha's semblance is black when she pulls Jaune's shield into position. That makes me think that Weiss glyph can reproduce several semblance characteristics. When her glyph is white, it pushes, when it's black it pulls. They're not as precise as Pyrrha's as she has to angle her glyphs while Pyrrha's can pull and push in any direction. But it's still makes her a fantastic support for the team.

For those who are reading this, i'm still writing ep 15 and 16. I had to rewrite this 3 time and i'm not takinga chance and lose it again so please wait a few more minutes.

Pyrrha is the wisest of them all. She let's Jaune make his mistakes but is there to support him when needed then keeps her silence knowing it would help Jaune's confidence. If she survives  the serie, she'll become a teacher at Beacon.