Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20190630171456/@comment-35455126-20190803200251

I mean, the general concept is fine. One question: does it create an Aura-like shield over the target’s Aura or does it replace said Aura?

The main problem is how it’s written. Just look at this.

EmBELLEm wrote:

-User: basically they unlocked their semblance when they protected their friends from an attack

This is for names only.

-Introduction: basically gives your friends an aura liek shield

Poorly explained.

-Description: they travel with normal humans and

Just...what is this?

-Range: at the beginning they had to hold their target, but now they can stand a few feet away.

You can just put in Short, you know. The ‘few feet away’ thing is just a tier.

-Visual Cue: atm it just looks like aura. still making it different

-Auditive Cue: atm it just sounds like aura. still making it different

No comment.

-Tiers:

1: grabs two firends. one in each hand

2: can just touch targets, and they can touch another target. max 3 people

3. up to 5-6 people, can stand a few feet away

Nerf the second tier.

-General Limitations: much more fragile/weaker than actual aura. caster has to be close

-Notes: doesn't work on people with aura? I think if it could buff people with aura it would be op?

So wait, it actually replaces Aura? Oh, well then I take my first statement back.

Why not just make it so the user gives their target(s) an additional Aura over their own?