Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25405817-20160511154306/@comment-26463535-20160518003422

45.37.20.83 wrote: WC-83 wrote: It sounds all over the place and basic, the sort of thing I'd write in Elementary School (but that's a personal thing, I got competant at writing in Middle School). It just a basis not the whole thing but do you mind elaborating a little Well, creating a romance between two main characters from seperate worlds who have loves already sounds like you're making Jaune a Marty Sue, so that's something that might better be dropped since it sets automatic red flags to people unless handled extremely well by a master writer.

If you remeber the show at all, you should know that Wendy's old guild, Caitshelter, dissolved after the walking city was destroyed since the old man was a spirit who had made facsimiles of people to create an illusion that Wendy was at a guild.

The way you structure and articulate your ideas here are Elementary-ish and that along with imprecise nature of the majoriy of your suggestions causes people to give little credence to the idea.

Also, we have a seperate thread for Fanfic suggestions . This is a thread to come up with general rules for how different fandom worlds would interact with each other.