Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-24993958-20150409212219

Phantomlink959 wrote:

…gives me a bad vibe in some places…mostly you tried too hard to make him to cool…which would be fine…but some of the stuff you did to him don’t mix well for me.
 * Name:Brenner Zilberschlag

You gave him an overly pompous nickname while giving 0 reasons for him to have them. You mention he helps people regularly and has done stuff in at least two kingdoms, so urban legend is not only vague but realistically untrue…and hero of the lost implies he saves people that are lost, which…although potentially true, I’m not sure how that would differentiate him from…every other hunter on the planet that does it…aka you made him so cool such vague nicknames could only be attribute to him.

 Then you make him both a Jack of all trades, a class balanced by being a master of none…and make him master of two stuff as well…aka you made him so cool he bypasses class balance.

Your semblance, although you tried to balance it by stating its quality over quantity, clearly lasts lng enough for him to have no need for weapons when he is LOW on AURA, so clearly it clearly has both quantity and quality…and I don’t buy that he’s to arrogant to carry some, you not only made him serious you also made him serious about saving lives, him running low on fumes should be a very big concers for him unless…again, his semblance clearly lasts long enough…aka you made his semblance cool enough that he doesn’t need weapons.

And then you even give him a rule of cool fighting style…yeah…bad vibes all around.