Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27425734-20160506024827

HookshotHotshot wrote: Nothing intentional, but we posted our characters one after another, meaning that one or both are going to be at least relatively ignored (as is sometimes the case on this thread).

You're fine, don't worry. Jason looks fine though I'd recommend changing the 20' (which stands for 20 FEET) on his weapons to 20" (For INCHES). Also, lots of little grammatical and spelling errors, but I'm kind of a stickler about that, and I understand that not everyone is as anal about that as I usually am. For the relationships section, I'd worry about that after posting the other bios. (Unless you already have, and I missed them in the recent flood of tangents this thread went on, apologies). Once you've got their bios mostly figured out, it should be relatively easy to figure out how the loner (Jason) will interact with his teammates who may be such common villain archetypes as tricksters, brutes, and aggressors.

To Lucas:

Alex looks good to me, and his character actually fits very well to his inspiration. Though, I will say that he does fit his inspiration a little too well, and you might want to tone down a little on the Don Quixote and balance it out with a little more of Aslan's character outside of just looks. But, that's just me nitpicking like usual :P