Thread:CarusELumen/@comment-15108745-20130926222759/@comment-15108745-20131006053915

I'm not sure if you saw my earlier post...but I went ahead and wrote some extra stanzas into the song. If you have any suggestions to make it better, I'd like to hear it. Recording will probably take place next weekend for me once I get a bunch of exams over with this week.

''Red like roses fills my dreams and brings me to the place you rest... ''

Here's Ruby Rose, thorns prickling with her gun-scythe,

Chopping down on shadow monsters, going in to slice-and-dice.

Pull the child's hood down, raise the crimson cloak up.

Let the Red Hood make 'em scream like wolf cubs.

Though that all be nothing to those bruises on them thugs

Who just robbed some Dust 'cause mommy never gave 'em hugs.

Save your sympathy, it's time for mass-destruction.

Let loose the power of this bloody evolution

Disrupt the crime, chase Roman and his flaming bitch,

Up to the roof and to get saved by Glynda Goodwitch

And aftewards Ozpin asks, "Y'know with all that beatin'

Would you ever consider skipping some years to Beacon?

So Ruby attends at last, our hero ascends fast

To a position of great responsibility

Can she hold it fast? Of course! Do you think she's daft?

She's our one and only team leader Ruby

(The board is set and the players are ready...)

It's time for the test of death-defying already

For these fighters and the silver-eyed newbie,

Come and witness all the girls representin'

our one and only favorite Team RWBY!

(RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...)

Don't be shy; make some friends and say hi!

(RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...)

Don't mess with the best; the Grimm can truly attest!

''White is cold and always yearning... ''

Here's Weiss Schnee; she's white, see, and all kinds of

icy. Singing of a mirror when a giant appears to

kill her and cleave her body in two, but she's ain't

havin' any of that so what do she do?

Fire up the Dust blade, sound off the air raid

You just signed a death warrant so come on out and get made

Nothing's gonna stop the ice queen now

Just watch as she dusts off, curtsies, and takes a bow

Coming into Beacon, showing off some attitude.

Never hestitatin' to call Ruby out on being rude.

A spoiled little heiress with a shady rich daddy.

Thinkin' she be snide, but she didn't even think twice.

Smartest girl she says and I wonder if she dreamed of seeing

eye-to-eye with Ruby and then ending up being on her team.

Now they're friends, and you can see her icy shell is wrecked!

Snow Angel tries to be the best, though she's too far from perfect

(Chorus)

''Black the beast descends from shadows... ''

Here's Blake Belladonna, black beauty fauna

Weilding a sword that she just pistol whips

so ninja fast you can't even hope to see,

The break up of the riffraff who can't compete

Now the sword, gambol shroud, takes the crowd

On a spin, going loud doing it the hard way, everyday,

With a movement so dramatic you won't even try to stand it

Turned those automatic droids into a pile of steel and static

But she turned from that way, choosing to live a new life

At a school where her stares are sharper than a steak knife.

Despite her distance, Ruby's willing to persist,

'Til they bond over books and how much Weiss can get pissed.

Not really missing like you thought from the Initiation

Only heightenin' up the fans' anticipation

Showin' up to save Yang from a nasty Ursa

And ending up stoppin' her raging flaming inertia.

(Chorus)

''Yellow beauty burns gold... ''

Here's Yang Xiao Long, she's the gauntlet girl on fire,

Everdeen, step aside; her yellow flames are brighter

A the little sun dragon in absolute radiance

making your combustion absolutely spontaneous.

Stepping in the club with Deadb3ar spinning up some dub

Making heads turn in this hub before she blows this whole joint up

Amidst the techno-holo lights and the flash of evil swords,

Even the club owner gets busted by her golden burning force!

Now she and her sibling are gonna learn some real moves,

Like flying over treetops and choosing a pony without hooves.

She approves the plan to move out with their clan rather than

Pan the bird and scorpion with the back of her hand!

Nonetheless, her fists give it a bite to eat

Before Ruby goes to work making heads obsolete.

Staring at her ascent, she can't help but feel some pride

As her baby sister rises to end this giant Nevermore's life!

(Chorus)