Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25936766-20160701133235/@comment-27447621-20160714211043

SomeoneYouUsedToKnow wrote: Hookshot's Azeiv Tafal -Basic Info: 13/15 For personal reasons too long to bother to put here, I believe that what needs And, with the ball in my court, I will return it to you with this.

True, the backstory can get melodramatic, I don't think that this is my best work personally, but when someone tells another person that they were physically restricted from forming any sort of social connection by the people who are supposed to care about them, that may bring some souls to tears, would you agree?

I think Aziev fits the reverse Tower. The interpretation I saw, as I pointed out, was "Oppression or tyranny", which is exactly what his parents put him through for his entire young life. Which translation are you following, can you post a link or something?

As for the relationships, that's fine, you're judging and you have certain criteria. Fine. What more could I have added, detail wise?

And for the Civilian Extension, I know that. I get it, and that's a rule I almost always follow, if you notice. But I always took this question to mean this; what does your character ENJOY doing so much that he has a degree of mastery over it? You don't master Chess if you despise playing Chess; you master what you enjoy. For some that's woodworking, for some it's board games; he loves training so much that he knows exactly what to do when, and how much to maximize his training regiment.

That said, 85 aint bad. I seem to be getting that relatively consistantly; 85 for Azeiv and Blaize, 90-ish for Ceanne. Aside from my HORRENDOUS experience with Cerise, I've been proud of my OCs so far.