User blog:Gundam Legilis/No Brakes In Depth - The writing

Hello!

So, we have the plan to blow up the tunnel ceilings with interval-detonated bombs to let the Grimm into Vale. Of course, the real kicker here is the train fights.

While the Paladins are reduced to cannon fodder, they still pose some of a threat, as Ruby and Oobleck can be crushed by them if they're not careful.

It was wonderful writing when Weiss, Blake and Yang fought the Lieutenant, Neo and Roman, because they were telling a story in each one.

Weiss hates the White Fang, so she faces off the Lieutenant. Blake hates Roman, and fights him. Yang wants to kick Neo's butt. Only...

Both Weiss and Yang receive character development in the form of getting their butts kicked, forcing Blake and the Mysterious Swordswoman to save them.

I suppose the Mysterious Swordswoman will elicit a, "I swear I saw her, it's true" statement from Yang. And the gang finally arrive in Vale, bringing in the Grimm. The very concept is controlled chaos...

Stay tuned for next time, where we talk about the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis