Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-24993958-20180412105219

Can't say I'm overtly impressed. The template was not made for you to write mini fanfics about a character, but to design a character up to a point and have us see if we can spot plotholes and such in them in order to improve on them.

I don't even feel like pointing out that his [CLASSIFIED] is inconsistent with rwby because [CLASSIFIED]...In case you can't tell I don't find your [CLASSIFIED] amusing or interesting, and as a serious note i'd ask you to replace all of them with vague but helpful stuff:

- Don't tell me his age is [CLASSIFIED] tell me it's "unknown;appears to be between 20-25 years based on size and proportions"

- Don't tell me his eyes are [CLASSIFIED], tell me "unknown; is always seen with a gasmask on"