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As my character has a very specific introduction criteria (must fally from the sky), I thought I'd just write a possible scenario on how my character should be introduced...



             Suddenly, on of the crewmember yells, “INCOMING!” as an bright orange-yellow ball of flame hurls towards the planet in their direction, leaving behind a black, thick cloud of smoke in its wake. Panic erupts and the people desperately scramble away from the path of the falling object, with T.O.M.M amid the chaos trying to find out what the panic is all about, and Angren being irritated at the excessive behavior of the others. However as the ball of fire nears the surface, they notice that there is a figure within the ball just as it impacts, creating a shockwave that causes the trees to waver. Angren, driven by his curiosity, then decides to approach the crash site…



In the middle of typing this, I found that this might be too grandiose of an entry for an insignificant person like me. Thus, I’m gonna rewrite it.



VERSION 2:

             As everyone was busy fighting Grimm attracted by the previous engagement with the White Fang, no one noticed the orange-yellow ball of fire streaking towards them until it landed in their vicinity with a deep rumble, causing them all to all look at the source in surprise and Maki, who just got up, to fall and hit her head on a rock, knocking her out for a second time. However, as it fell behind the trees, no one was actually able to see it except for WC-83, who caught a glimpse of its landing. Thus, while they quickly got back to fighting the Grimm, WC-83 goes to investigate and finds a crater with a still-smoking, battered robot that is apparently dysfunctional alongside a rather small capsule. As the simplest thing there was to do was to just leave it be and ignore it, WC-83 chose to do just that, returning to help the group fight the Grimm.

A while later after incessant fighting, WC-83 gives the order to his makeshift squad to flank the Death Stalker they were having trouble with. However, after giving the order, the battered robot he has seen earlier burst from the trees and charges the Death Stalker, giving it a solid punch to the face just as it turned to face his new opponent, and breaking its two left fangs and punching the face into the earth. Enraged, the Death Stalker uses its pincer to knock the robot into the air and subsequently its stinger to stab it, cracking the robot’s armor and knocking the it into tree, shattering the already beat-up robot. However, as the shards of armor began to land on the ground, a figure in an overcoat and cap leapt from the debris at the Death Stalker and in one motion cloven off the stinger and grabbed onto of the remainder of the tail. In a supreme act of strength, as he landed, he forcefully swung the Death Stalker by its tail halfway up, letting momentum and gravity do the rest as the Death Stalker fell on its back and snapped its tail through the reflex motion. As he let go of what was left of the tail, the mysterious figure turned to face WC-83 and calmly said, “Pyrrhomaniac, at your service.”



Looking back at what I just wrote, it seems that my entry is still rather grandiose… OH WELL. :P