Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-25857155-20150409220816

I have to agree that you overdid it a bit, Phantom. ^.^; A little too cool and not enough practical. Also, no explanation for the nickname?

Madninja,

be very careful about having relationships between your OCs and the MCs, especially when it comes to romantic interactions... it's fine for your character to have a crush on a MC, but not so much for it to go both ways, since it might well be crushed by upcoming canon. It is also not a very good idea to have your character be a close childhood friend of a MC, for similar reasons. You might consider rebalancing some of your weapons... three of your characters have dual-wield weapons, after all. Also, you failed to make any mention of ammunition storage for the machine-gun gauntlet (which is a bit much in combo with the other, given the utter lack of range limiters), and your chain weapons are OP with elemental effect added to polarity semblance. Get rid of either the polarity semblance or the Dust.

Props on the cane weapon; surprisingly unused given it's presence on 2 MCs. Rough work on the staff; work on it a bit, or have each half fold in half again. Otherwise, not too bad - just needs a lot of refinement. =)