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Well hell, I'm gonna give this "OC" thing a shot (gotta keep my writing skills sharp).


 * Name: Eliott Marshall


 * CNR Explanation: Eliott reminds me of light and/or Eliphas or Ephidel (from Dawn of War and Fire Emblem respectively), two dark beings (so darkness). Marshall can be linked to Mars or March (via the french spelling Mars), but is also the last name of William Marshall (the best knight to have lived) I am so not used to color names and bending over backwards to justify it, please help.


 * Species: Human


 * Age: 18


 * Symbol: White Cross


 * Handedness: right


 * Physical features: nothing that stands out as per instruction.


 * Misc: Prefers darker clothing, but simply out of habit and can wear whatever feels natural.


 * Nicknames: (none come to mind.


 * Occupation: Huntsmen-in-Training (second year at Atlas Academy)

2) Appearence


 * Aura Color: White


 * Aura Effect: Body glows and pulsates aura color around body.


 * Height: 5'9


 * Weight: 230 (w/out armor), 305 (w/armor)


 * Eyes: Hazel


 * Skin color: White (slightly tanned)


 * Face: rounded, with


 * Hair: Black colored and kept unkempt and at medium length.


 * Physique: Physically fit but unrefined, with muscle hidden by skin.


 * Combat Outfit: Sports Western European medieval armor (gauntlets, plate boots, closed bascinet (or hounskull) helmet, chainmail with black surcoat (with his symbol on it, think the Knights Hospitaller).


 * Civilian Outfit: Standard Atlesian uniform, but weighted more than his armor to give him better use of his armor

Gadgets: None besides scroll.

3) Characteristics


 * Background: Lived in a traditional military household. Fascinated by the armor the soldiers would wear, Eliott decided to make the best he could while making his weapon, putting most of the work into the gear to assist in his defense if his aura ever broke.

4) Trivia
 * Personality: While seemingly aloof at first glance, Eliott is actually easy going and nonchalant, eager to make aquaintence. Eliott is unconcerned with excellance or ambition, thus being a follower rather than a leader.
 * Likes: Enjoys food to a worrying extent (with teammates questioning the effect it would have on his skills. Also enjoys a good conversation and debate on goings on within the kingdom, calmly and eagerly explaining his point of view despite reactions of those he's talking to. This earns him the ire of a fair selection of people, for reasons obvious to everyone but himself.
 * Dislikes: Dislikes the White Fang for endangering humanity and terrorizing the populace. Is adament about their being brought to justice, even to extremes shocking even those with otherwise similar standpoints. Also follows Atlas' regimentary system with little joy, but with complete compliance.


 * Notable Relationships: Loyal to his team and to Atlas.


 * Notes:

Hunter Extension

I) Weapons


 * Name: Dome Wall (Dome being Middle English for Doom)


 * Type: Tactical Multi-Form Longsword and Shield


 * Short Description: Broadsword and Kite Shield Combination (form 1). Large Arming Sword (form 2, shield optional). Arming Sword covered by shield to create a long chainsword (form 3).

II) Sembalance


 * Name: Colossus Stride


 * Short Description: Grows several times his size (size varies depending on strength, most used size being a 2 story house).


 * Visual Effect: Obvious, but also drops to the ground (in mild pain) and glows.

III) Combat Info


 * Class/Position: Tank/Knight, Heavy Support if needed (Class/Position is kinda vague).


 * Landing Strategy: Positioned over an area then hid behind shield and crashlanded. Lost 30% of Aura.


 * Fighting Style: Prefers to keep guard up until opponent is vulnerable and then makes quick strikes with his broadsword and repeats. Occaisionally uses his Arming Sword when a situation needs more damage and defense is unimportant or if he wants a challenge (or sees none). Uses Chainsword in truly desperate or demanding situations. Is surprisingly agile in his armor, covering distances with speed and dodging effectively with time to spare. However, Eliott is also reliant on his Aura to maintain his strength, after that is depleted he becomes encumbered and moves painfully slow (though his armor protects him from some attacks until help can arrive or his aura regenerates). Using his Semblance, he becomes more brute force focused, and uses his shield more offensively (using it to blows gusts of wind or slamming it to the ground).

IV) Statistics

Levels are from 0 to 5, with 0 being nonexistent, 1 being low, 2 being below average, 3 being average, 4 being above average and 5 being high.

First year students should not have more than 3 stats at level 5, and no more than 45 points spread over the statistics.

@) Physical Statistics

-Strength: 5

-Speed: 3 (with Aura), 1 (without Aura and with Armor)

-Agility: 3 (with Aura), 0 (without Aura and with Armor)

-Stamina: 4 (dangerous at short distances XD)

&) Aural Statistics

-Aura Reserve: 4

-Aura Manipulation: 1

-Semblance Manipulation: 3

-Dust Manipulation: 1

$) Technical Statistics

-Dust use: 2 (on sword)

-Weapon Skill (Primary): 4

-Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 2 (with gauntlets and Aura), 0 (without Aura)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;">-Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 5

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;">-Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 3 (Arming and Chain sword has reach, otherwise 0)

<p style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;">-Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 0