Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20151012154515/@comment-25110963-20151024195621

Would it be better if she uses notes and shorter sentences like this format? :

Name:  Aella (Ancient Greek for Whirlwind) Wielder: Pearl  Sterling Maker/Smith: Pearl  Sterling Type: DAUB(Dust Applicable Urumi Belt) Weapon Derivation: Urumi Holstered/Inactive Form: Handle stored at her left side while the blade wraps around her waist. Form 1: Urumi (Whip-like Sword) Dust Capacity: All types. Ammunition: N/A Usage:  Fights with flicks, twirls, leaps, parkour,  and fast strikes. Often changes position to move around and attack from various angles. Dust adds more power to strikes. Planned/Possible Upgrades: Possibility for adding a second applyer for different ailment effects.(Poison, paralysis, etc.) Notes: Carries a secondary weapon (Dirk )on her right side of the waist.

I tried to get rid of the uneccesary information. As a suggestion, I think it would better if you called it a sash instead of a belt. It's more looser than a belt and easier to wrap over the chest. Also, don't include the dirk. There's no point unless Aelia is a weapon set, like Gambol Shroud or StormFlower. They're a set that shares the name.