Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180806132759/@comment-37411075-20190725174403

GoldenGear820 wrote: Phantomlink959 wrote: I am being brutally honest: I am not continuing to deride it, I am not issuing personal insults, I mean no malice; I am simply stating a fact.

There are numerous issues in regards to grammar, spelling, and punctuation which drag down the potential quality. It is rendered mediocre by questionable execution; but could be improved with little difficulty.

Also, the dragon grimm was officially given the name Wyvern some time ago. There, I bolded it. And you meant Deride, well that's not good:

Deride

VERB

express contempt for; ridicule.

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And what does contempt mean?

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Contempt

NOUN

"the feeling that a person or a thing is beneath consideration, worthless, or deserving scorn."

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You should look up definitions before trying to use big words to sound intelligent. In case you didn't see it.