Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160825171839/@comment-27144409-20160902004525

I literally have no idea if you're trying too hard or too little. 1 and 2-Name's kind of edgy, though my main issue is the symbol and team acronym. With the former, you say "a building"....which explains nothing. A house is a building, a hut is a building, a tower is a building, quite a lot of things are buildings.

While for the latter, while "Fire" in itself follows the rules and all....it just feels horribly uncreative. It's not even stylized, like "FAYR" or "FYER", just....FIRE. Ditto with his weapon, which is literally called Fire despite the potential for quite a lot more than that.

3-"Quite destructive Aura missiles" is not really descriptive enough. If it's just firing multiple Aura projectiles, quite sure that's an Aura technique anyone can learn how to do, like with Aura Slashes. I'd say not enough. I've been trying to work at quickly finishing this team, but I appear to have rushed it too much.

I chose to overlook any religous meaning. I was just in a hurry. I'd say a warehouse.

The team's only theme is heavy military destruction. His brother's weapon is named Brimstone. The two were originally a matched set. I will never hear the end of this will I?

I was trying to think of something with devastating offensive capabilities. It would more or or less look like streaks varying in size and number. If Dust was used, the Dust type's color would determine the color of the streak's tip, but the trail would be red. I am open to suggestions for a replacement offensive Semblance.

At least I didn't botch the back story.