Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160711184711/@comment-24993958-20160814151602

Your descriptions are not short for one, so I’d prefer it if you compress your short descriptions to be…you know….short…like one or 2 lines long, and leave the details in the ability section

Reactive Atmos looks ok, I find tier 2 to be slightly out of place, but nothing to complain.

Lock on sight evolves way too much from ok to a lot for my taste, but again nothing glaring.

Not a fan of you namedropping Astaroth in Goetic Construct just to make it cool and edgy…also not a fan of it allowing multiple constructs that he can micromanage since it feels like it’s trying too hard to make the character cool and edgy…really this semblance is the definition of trying too hard in my book…WHY do you always insist on fixing what isn’t broken with Carmine? You had a perfectly good and reasonable semblance for him before…sigh…