Talk:White Fang/@comment-27234079-20190927222410/@comment-29684190-20190927223159

Huh? ...Oh, My comment... I guess yeah.

maybe making the opening paragraph more condensed, the history section seperated into major chapters for Ghira's, Sienna's, Adam's, and Ghira? maybe something for the hierarchy, different ranks, (level one goons, soldiers, yuma and his assassins, whatever the fox brothers were, the royal people) different locations like the royal hall...