Thread:CarusELumen/@comment-15108745-20131110174103/@comment-4123264-20131114012847

Yeah, usually I check my messages, but college, as usual, destroys all free time. Heck, I'm supposed to be revising a paper right now, but the last thing I want to do besides make you think you insult me is for me to insult you, so here we are with my reply.

WARNING: It's a long one, even for me. Skip to the end if you want to spare your eyes & mentality.

First off, be sure to give my highest compliments to Miss Laws - I could barely discern the level of quality from that of the original Casey Lee Williams voice, yet she had something of her own to make it truly incredible - but yeah, thanks for not posting just yet.

While it's true money isn't our... well, your interest (Weirdo! Also, kidding!), I'm still fearing the day SOPA or even the Williams family themselves could sue our butts. Heck, I feel I take too much a risk with this rap as it is, so if we can limit the lawsuit, I'd appreciate it immensely.

But you're absolutely right about the beat guy, & I still have User:Da1337wolf's email at "the1337wolg@gmail.com". As the actual creator of this rap so far, you can contact him, but he contacted me first, so if you don't want to, I'd be happy to say:

"Hey, Mr. Wolf! If you don't remember me, I'm Carus, I wrote the RWBY'' RAP (seen here), & I'm now seriously working with this awesome guy Sorario to complete the project I had no idea would progress beyond a blog post. I think we're about 3/5, maybe 2/3 of the way done, with the first half of the vocals perfected, but according to my amazing lyricist, we need an equally-amazing beat guy, & your offer from once upon a time was top of the list!.. & bottom, because it was the only name on there, but the point is, we'd now LOVE to work with you for this project if your generosity still stands. From what I've gathered, unfortunately, I don't think we can pay in actual currency at this time, so we're mainly crossing our fingers that your name in the credits & an eternal debt of gratitude would be enough to have you mix something awesome for us. If the offer is rescinded due to lack of interest for an extended period of time, we'd understand & look for someone else, but if you're still as understanding as last time we talked, I hope you'll find it in your heart to contact me back.''"

So yeah, if I don't think I can fit another twelve or so verses into a minute, the Part 2 might have to be a reality, possibly using parts of Red Like Roses Part II as the beat for that one. (If Wolf is willing to, of course.)

I'll be keeping a Microsoft Word Document open this weekend for both a full Part 2 rap and the potential last verse, &, because I didn't immediately say this before my flow of boring, thank you for making me feel important to this after that crushing blow to my sense of usefulness the other night in the form of your hard work & dedication. (If I used emoticons, I'd go " XD " to show I'm not being entirely serious.)

Oh, & one more thing to torture you with? I notice you said nothing about my terrible attempts at saying my original stuff in a musical rhythm, & I don't blame you for trying to wipe it from your memory if you actually listened to it, but while I love the edited lines, it made me wonder wonder why you couldn't/didn't do the faster parts. I don't know how it'd be hard for you, seeing as you did a spectacular job with the few "ninja quick" places in your version, but if there's a reason, I could use it for future reference & note what your rapping strengths & weaknesses are. NO OFFENSE MEANT WHATSOEVER!

Summery: Singer's great, don't use a copyrighted song please, I'll get the beat guy & work on the next set of lyrics, but is there anything I shouldn't do?