Talk:RWBY 2/@comment-27234079-20191013161705/@comment-27144409-20191014014416

Her waking up days later from her power's recoil KO days after has very different implications and tone versus walking home on her own power. Tai would be far less worried about Ruby, same with them casually waving goodbye at each other as opposed to her leaving on her own. These are some meaningful changes.

Blake leaving on a dingy for Menagerie is just plain stupid, and how is she supposed to be jumpy and paranoid, while not worried about the covering the distance. How was Sun supposed to be shadowing her from Beacon to Menagerie that way? Also, she didn't change her outfit by the time she reached "the sea of Menagerie" Not exactly hiding then.

How about showing Ooblek and Port being around when we've never had any idication that they met or heard about Ruby or Yang before their time at Beacon.

And these are changes that didn't need to be made. We know Ruby was rescued from the tower by Qrow, and we can reasonably infer that he used is bird form to get up there and use a landing strategy on the way down before hoofing it to a transport. We don't need to be told how Ruby got recovered and brought back to Patch. Instead you could show Tai caring for his bed-ridden girls with a heavy face, Ruby looking back at home with a sad expression as she leaves.

And that's before getting to Raven's little gossip fest aout her late leader or the sympathetic Adam paired with the naive Blake. How about having Yang spook a horse while smirking? She could have handled a cantankerous bull. Too easy for symbolizm? Maybe, but putting a rowdy animal in its place is better than spooking a horse unrovoked.