Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20151101000002/@comment-24993958-20151108180449

Next up we have Tyson Terrell Jr by Phantom

1)Basic info: ...OH! That symbol is suppose to be a tent...got that took a while; They still aren't made with 2 colors though, so you’ll have to pick one and use black as a substitute for white. +4

2)Appearance: Multicolored auras are...STILL, non-existent as far as i know within the context of the show. Everything else looks great though and although you gave him only one outfit, it stands out with its asymmetry. +9

3)Characteristics: His background has a minor hiccup what with grimm not reacting well to being captured...or rather it would except port has kept one grimm in a wooden crate so I’ll concede they probably did the same. Love the casanova dad, sibling count and how you tied his personality to his background. The only problem here is a rather barebones like and dislike section. preventing me for giving you a perfect score here. +13

4)Trivia: +5

I)Weapon: you lose some points here for making it so he can’t use the whip without discarding the saw blades, which is kind of a big deal since it’s the weapons main long range function. +3

II)Semblance: Phantom...why you make boring semblances? It is so boring it doesn’t even have a visual effect. I should be putting you on a minus for using this as a semblance, but I’ll settle on giving you no points and just assume adrenaline helps with pumping out more aura. 0

III)Combat - What is it with you people and friendly fire murder whips? You know Zorro never needed to swing that thing at his allies to hit stuff...that and the fact you said no class means i’ll shave off one point. +4

Overall that amounts to 88 points.