Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25396609-20150323171153

for the most part his tragic backstory needs to be toned down, other than that you're pretty much safe. i'll let the others take a more critical look, I try to play the role of neutral crticism, Live is the destructive criticism specialist, i can't remember who is usually the constructive criticism expert, though.

unfortunate though it may be, destructive criticism is at times necesarry when a character is too far att the line between mary/marty sue and well made, just as constructive criticism is required for building up and over the line into being a good character,