Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-25396609-20150401210316

I like he whip and gun being seperate, breaking from the folding frame tech from time to time is a good way to make a character a bit more unique.

her semblance is decent, but honestly you limited it TOO much, since it is imperfect invisiblity, the drawback doesn't need to be as severe as you made it.

since you seem to be making this character original and not inspred by anything, the backstry is a BIT too generic sounding. other than that, you're good to go. (nice choice on the name, by the way, never seen croatian used to name a character before.)