Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160225194034/@comment-27963514-20160315011408

Marty Sue is another male variant on the name, but basically Mary Sue is an OP author avatar. Mental masturbation, basically. Nothing wrong with coming up with a Mary Sue, I've got one and it makes me happy. But keep him to yourself or nerf the hell out of him.

As far as the wings representing paragon or renegade, you should know that inverting it is just as cliche. A good character with demonic wings or an evil one with angelic wings isn't any better. Just stay away from the wings, unless they're functional. And even then....

I see you tossed some of the weapons, gadgets, and you tweaked the color scheme. You're on the right track. Personally, I still feel that black trench coats are still a little to "Matrix," but maybe that's from being in high school when that movie was still fresh and everyone still wanted to be Neo.

His swords still only have three-letters in their abbreviation, and I have to question him being a bird faunus... I could be wrong, but I don't think there are any cannon non-mammilian faunus.