Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25555436-20141120010811/@comment-25555436-20141121020431

So it's a bittersweet ending for everyone. Lizzie now would be more careful when going here or enters here through another account (or maybe just pretends to be an anonymous wikia contributor). Varzan is fine and dandy. And Lauren may still keep his(her?) job but may have lost some respect from that day.

Mmm.....No offense guys, but this could work a bit for a story.

"Queen Lizzie, who had a tongue as sharp as her fixation for cats. She made a trap, for an innocent group of travelers, and it worked. They were killed, but one survived, barely. Soon, the news spread out throughout the kingdom, but died soon after. Days later, the Queen spoke her mind about the subject, despite no one no longer caring about it, which resulted in the spark being reignited. And that spark, was the spark of rebellion.

A man amongst the crowd, the knight Varzan Deodinm Beldinm, stepped to the front, his eyes meeting the Queen's, and spoke his mind, fully against Lizzie. The Queen simply dismissed his words and antagonized him, and since the man was known for his cruel, crude personality around others, many agreed with her. After a small verbal exchange with the Queen, he leaved. Many agreed with the Queen, though most disliked her attempt to bring back an already-done matter. But others disagreed with her, and soon, a rebellion began.

Eventually, it escalated into blown-out war, between the people loyal to Queen Lizzie, and the rebels who sided with Varzan or at least agreed with him, with some innocents caught in between. In the end, Varzan fought the Queen again, but this time during the fight, one of his men, Lauren Darkmore, betrayed him, proving to be an agent of Lizzie. Varzan fell, and died...but not yet. He spent 1 week in hell, fighting his way out with teeth and nail, and returned to the land of the living.

Once he returned, he decided to end the war once and for all. He traveled through the other cities in the kingdom, spreading his words to get others to join his cause, and in the end the Queen's army lost. Queen Lizzie was defeated, and exiled, and Varzan regained his Knighthood, later working his way until reaching the throne. He still kept Lauren, who lost a great deal of respect from the citizens for his actions in the war, but he kept him mostly for practical reasons, and made clear that any other betrayal would be answered with a rope."

So......how was it?