Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160425022934/@comment-14131673-20160425034530

SpiritedDreaming wrote: I cannot provide feedback on this. Sorry, I just won't be able to. It violates so much canon, has so many Mary Sue traits and just all around makes me cringe that I cannot do it. Ideas for changes? I want the character to assume the identiy of Nero Angelo while he has to deal with the fact that the 2nd, 3rd and 4th year students are aware that Ciaran Sapphiron is dead, forcing him to don the hood and make his interaction with Ozpin's group and Beacon's staffs awkward as they have to pretend that they do not know each other prior.

Let's just say he can never walk alongside with anyone he knew or reveal his face in public.