Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170131064348/@comment-27082610-20170222035245

And last but not least we have SYUTK with Fenrisulfr Hroovitnir Vanargandr (Say that 5 times fast)

1) Basic info: 10 points. Everything's in order.

2) Appearance: 20 points.

Not seeing anything wrong enough to consider taking of points, but I'm curious as to what you think a vest is if you think they have sleeves to rip off.

3) Characteristics: 28 points.

I'm not sure I buy a preteen making enough money in a short enough time to be able to pay for combat school, be held back, and then get to a Huntsman academy only 2 years behind his average fellow first-years.

4) Trivia: 5 points.

I)Weapon: 13 points.

I don't really know he'd be able to pass combat school if he couldn't make a weapon that actively hurts him when he uses one of its features. I'm also not clear on how those nails get put between his fingers or how they're launched.

II) Semblance: 15 points.

Ordinarily I would just roll my eyes at a Semblance like this, but it fits the chracter both in allusion and personality on multiple levels, with an interesting mechanic for increasing the size. Nice job.

III) Combat info: 5 points. Nothing wrong here.

Total: 96 Points.



So ranking is:

1st: SYUTK- 96 points.

<p style="font-weight:normal;">2nd: Spirit- 95 points.

<p style="font-weight:normal;">3rd: Maki- 93 points.

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Congratulations to SYUTK. Sorry this took me a while guys, I really don't have an excuse.