Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-4830106-20131019032823/@comment-7622429-20131019215122

Ajrep1994 wrote: Adam Green (ajrep1994)

Occupation: Huntsman

Affiliation: Beacon Academy (3rd year student)

Team: ARCK (pronounced Arc)

Team allies: RWBY and JNPR

Team Duties: Leader, Weapons Maintance, and Team Auto Tech

Origin: Chicago, IL, USA, North America, Planet Earth

Species: Human

Color: Green

Skill/Attribute: great leadership skills

Symbol: Green Fireball

Weapons: Green Rage (Battle Axe/DMR/Rocket Launcher)

Apperance:''' He has brown crew cut hair, blue eyes, and a scar that is over his left eye. He wears a green t-shirt, camo shorts, and black gym shoes. On his waist he wears a belt that has all of his extra ammo for Green Rage as well as his symbol.'''

Skills: Has great leadership skills and he is also skilled in auto maintainace

Abilities: enhanced strength, speed, and sight

Aura: Green and his Semblance increases his strength

<p style="line-height:20px;">'''Personality: Adam is level headed. He can think of plans right on the spot. He is always there for his team. He hates to see his friends get hurt and hate bullies.'''

<p style="line-height:20px;margin-bottom:0px!important;">History: '''Adam is from Chicago, IL, USA, North America, Planet Earth. He came to Vytal when he was 16 because he wanted to become a huntsman.'''

I hate to bring this up,but you can't be from North America. Or even Earth. Vytal is the planet,and there are only four main areas where a character can come from. Maybe you ought to edit parts like that. Also,we're trying to keep as separate from the main canon as possible whilst using it as a guideline for what we CAN consider canonically viable in our series. You might wanna try to either make your character's past background unknown or un-affiliated with the mainstream canon. Just a suggestion. New people are always welcome. Just try to keep your character close to our canon and away from RWBY's.