Thread:Alhazad2003/@comment-24573226-20160905115913/@comment-24573226-20160907121209

Hi Alhazad. Thank you for trying to get a better understanding. I think that the difference between article writing about a fiction and actual fiction writing is something you're struggling with here. As I said before, you've definitely got skills, so please don't take any of this as not being supportive of you personally.

I do have some things about your most recent edit that I'm likely to change.

Character's Full Name is fine. It doesn't need to be changed to Character's Full Name, which is what happened.

Some of the phrasing you've altered changed the implications of the content, and there's an abrupt switch to past tense.