Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160524033118/@comment-25396609-20160530151649

192.30.97.56 wrote: This is a team of Atlas Specialists that I came up with. I haven't completely fleshed them out yet, but I wanted input on what I've got so far:

 Noir Chevalier:  It is said that the armor of the AK-130's was based off the ebony plate worn by this imposing individual. Quiet but dependable, he has taken it upon himself to protecting the Huntsmen and Huntresses of the next generation - but when it comes to criminals, he has no sense of mercy. He is typically sent to eliminate particularly strong and dangerous outlaws. He wields Crimson Justice, a longsword that can be converted into a laser-shooting spear. His Semblance allows him to attack his opponent's nerves, causing temporary paralysis that he can usually maintain unless his concentration is interrupted.

two things;

1: use the template

2; no, you are not making a character and saying "the Atlesian robot army is based on this guy" because that is basically guaranteed to be shot down by cannon at some point.