Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170424154014/@comment-24993958-20170430143440

Kirito Rose wrote:

-Name: Audrey Summers

Your character comes off as having multiple personality disorder and I’m not sure that was intended.

She goes off to train in martial arts as opposed to hang out and have fun or make friends when she was young, spent her time home being a blacksmith and her time away training with her mother, joined a hunter school and academy the first chance she got, yet she’s supposedly empathic, flirtatious, creative and artistic…and understanding?

Have you ever met workaholic people before? Cause your character very much counts as one given she would rather engage in martial arts than, as she lied to her parents ‘hang out with friends’, except somehow she’s not antisocial…I can understand her socializing with the martial arts class to an extent, but her personality and actions post beacons paint her as the life of the party kind of character, which is far from the truth given her backstory.