User blog comment:Hidden Scorpius XI/Volume 3. Hypeness and Skepticism./@comment-11188061-20150623090113/@comment-25405817-20150624033544

@Zolnir:

"But the 'Raven Branwen is Yang's mum' twist has already been decided in Volume 2"

-facepalm- Seriously? "Decided" is a pretty strong statement. It means that it has been confirmed and this outcome is absolute. Let's see what evidence there is to support your claim that the "Raven=Yang's mom" twist has already been decided in Vol. 2:


 * We know that Raven appeared in two insatnces of the entirety of Volume 2.
 * One instance was when Neopolitan was about to finish Yang up, but Raven poped out of nowhere and scared Neo so much her eyes turned white.
 * The second instance was in a DREAM SEQUENCE (based on the slowness and unnatural ambient), where Yang saw the same figure that saved her. This figure then removes her mask and reveals a face that is very similar to Yang's face.

Wait, there's something wrong in here. This evidence is inconclusive to prove that the "Raven=Yang's mom" twist has already been decided in the last two chapters of Vol. 2. But how could that be? If the twist has already been decided?

Oh wait, NO IT HASN'T! This isn't decisive evidence that proves Raven's identity! These are "HINTS"! Painful, unsubtle hints, that pretend to be clever foreshadowing but that fails miserably because of the inexperienced writing (Miles, Kerry, nothing against you two, but honestly, you really need to fix these problems).

And no, Zolnir. As Live said before, having problems solved so quickly is not better. In fact, it was point NUMBER 1 ON THIS SAME BLOG!!!! Shows how much you paid attention.

If we are "real people" living in a "real world", you'd find that problems like crushes, bullying and even teenage angst aren't resolved in two days. In writing, it shows inability to handle this problems (Miles, Kerry, I am really sorry, I "rage" because I care).

The fact that you can't understand just how much this issues are hurting the Show only makes me think that you'd be more satisfied with a "Happy Madison Production", rather than with a cleverly wrote piece of fiction.