Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-33816423-20180101001645/@comment-33816423-20180124230747

Next up is VedranThell with Sanson Auguste!

1) Basic info: 10

Solid, thanks for recognizing that even ambidextrous people have a hand they favor. I have to ask, does his strength lower when his hair gets cut? (bad joke I'm sorry)

2) Appearance: 20

Practical outfit and body build, can't find anything glaringly wrong with color coordination or the like. Cream is definitely an aura color I didn't necessarily expect.

3) Characteristics: 25

I loved the evolution and attention to the relationship between the two brothers very much. The only real problem I have here is the fact that I didn't get a real feel to his personality organically by reading through. Which sadly I consider a big loss to the feel of the story and the organic nature of it.

4) Trivia: 5

Good follow up on the relationships here, and you gave me a section of history to go read up on.

I)Weapon: 12

Bringing the widening of the blade down to the crossguard would be a great improvement to the weapon overall, as currently it is very much off balance and would likely be unwieldy to use in it's final form. One point off for still having things set as TBD.

II) Semblance: 15

Eugh that would definitely freak me out if my opponent suddenly started sounding like a terrifying beast in combat. Definitely inventive and reflective of both the feats and specializations that fighters can take both too intimidate and disrupt spellcasters, in this case Dust users.

III) Combat info: 5

I love the fact that he uses his semblance strategically and as a way to create openings, definitely makes sense as it has diminishing returns in usage so he'd want to maximize the opportunities he has.

I) Day to Day Life: 2

I'll give you the two points here since you've at least introduced the fact that he works at Sanctum. Little more detail and you'd have more.

<p style="font-weight:400;font-size:16px;">That brings your Grand Total up to 94 as well, tied with SpiritedDreaming!