User blog comment:Blake Belladonna RWBY/Blake Belladonna's Diary/@comment-186.188.82.1-20140703014257

"my team mates found out my secret that I was from the white fang"

Change "i'm" for "I was". "I" is always capitalized.

We are a team not, just some kind of curcis

Add coma. What's a "curcis"?

"Should I hide it from everybody else? Or reveal it?"

"Everything" refers to objects, from which you don't need to hide s**t. Reveal.

On another note: THIS WIKI IS NOT FOR FANFICTION!! GET IT ALREADY PEOPLE!!!

HSXI