Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161205132101/@comment-14138255-20161219030827

Families are always lenient, even if they're stricter than most. I'll appreciate their comments, but I am still wary when it comes to feedback, since they might be holding back. Essays I'm less worried about (since my mother is an English professor) but I sill take it with some amount of salt.

That said your character still has some promise to it, you just have to work out the implications of his character as well (if he enjoys hurting bullies, what does that say about him?; if his rebellious actions get his team into trouble, how will his team see/approach him after?; if his stubborn hot bloodedness gets his love killed, will he be the same? etc.).