Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26173711-20190509052121/@comment-3391158-20190622200633

Phantomlink959 wrote: Still a bit rambling; this line for example could be reworked.

Original:

-Tier 1: 

Own Coating:The user is able to use their aura in order to coat themselves in an added layer of protection allowing them to take hits that would normally completely break their aura but strong enough hits will damage the coat and with break with enough damage.

Revised:

Tier 1: Semblance can affect only the user, providing a secondary protective layer over their Aura and allowing them to withstand additional damage. Ah thanks for the advice