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Not written yet…but even if I did I’m not sure that’s much of a compliment.

I like the general tone of the scene btw, that permanent sensation of it being in a dream about to end does well to compensate for the lack of graphic detail of their actions. Grammar could be better...a LOT better, but then you wrote it at 2 am, so overall, while I wouldn’t recommend it to others, I’d definitely keep an eye out for other stuff you’d write.