Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160331235054/@comment-26397825-20160411025426

Number Four

JokersWitch with Dahlia Droll. Another newcomer, and a civilian character to boot! Oh goodie. =3

1) Basic Info - 10 points I like that name reference, I really do. Also, I had to double check and all I can say is that I’m glad you didn’t make her main colour scheme black. Don’t google it. >.>

2) Appearance - 26 points You get away with not having a direct tie between her name and physical appearance since her eyes are so brightly coloured and dahlia’s come in a variety of bright colours.

Goodness me, you really went all out on the outfits. I like it =3 Though the shorts over stockings combo with the laces up her legs is two very different styles, and really doesn’t fit with her lacy ruffled jacket. A skirt would have been a better fit, in my opinion, or a pair of pants. And no points for gadgets. Even a pair of specialised pruners would get her points here.

3) Characteristics - 28 points

I like that background. Very sweet, very simple. It works perfectly. And I’m glad her mother held on for so long in it, instead of dying young like most people make them do.

Backstory total: 19 points Personality is very sugary…are you sure her name shouldn’t have been sugar? :P

Personality total: 9 points

4) Trivia - N/A

+1 for giving a reason for her to carry her parasol around as well as her personal feelings towards it. -1 for not mentioning her father unlocking her aura or training her in her aura in her backstory, which is something that should at least get a mention.

5) Weapon - N/A

6) Semblance – 8 points When you say appearance, do you mean she is able to make the plant change colours? Are these appearance changes permanent, or do they fade over time?

7) Combat Info - N/A

8) Civilian Extension - 15 points

No mention of how well the business actually does in terms of earnings. No mention of whether she caters to special occasions such as weddings or funerals, or is simply a walk-in store for buying flowers, or if she sells only cuttings or if she also runs a nursery so people can buy entire plants from her.

Business details: 7 points.

Skills make sense, though I’m surprised she doesn’t have a degree in Business as well. That would help a lot more in running her shop.

Skills and Certifications: 4 points

No mention of her florist tutor, who was a major part of her life for quite a few years.

Relationships: 4 points

Overall total: 87 points

No newcomer bonus points since you scored over 70 points. Very well done!