Thread:Phantomlink959/@comment-24993958-20150310000215/@comment-25396609-20150312231625

I'm waiting to hear back from Jay on prologue 1, you and Mad have already gotten back to me with your input. i've made a few edits so far, mostly i added visual details and edited it down so Ozpin's speech is only used twice. once Jay chimes in i can make the final adjustments and snd the updated version out for another critique