Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20150719111502/@comment-25396609-20150721153834

Commander Ghost wrote:

1) Basic info:

His personality is a bit skimpy, and you didn't give him a background. his weapon is just a generic sniper rifle, but he's an assassin and was never trained as a huntsman so that makes sense.
 * Name: Farran Braddock

still not sure how i feel about the shadow control thing, but that's personal preference more than practicality or believability.

Overall he's decent as a character outlie, but a bit bare-bones or an actual character. maybe spend some a day or two working on his backstory, making sure all the grammar is correct, make sure it's consistent, that sort of thing.