Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170424154014/@comment-31673087-20170508095503

VedranTheII wrote: ... instead of dropping the kid off at an orphanage. Actually that was in the first draft of this. But that was much worse. Because the family actively adopted her and still treated her the same way as I wrote. I did think her age was a little high for this, but ended up not changing it. I probably should've before, but it's not like it's not changable.

In regards to everything else, I did see some Cinderella parallels when I was finished writing it. I feel like I could've written it better. I think I have some solid edits to implemiment based on your criticism.

Age her down, she gets adopted, Family is nice but gets kind of bitter when they see she's generally better than their actual kid, things go similarly to what's already posted.

The main Idea behind this being they spoil their biological kid (In comparison to Sirris, not a major Harry Potter living under the stairs kind of disparity) and want her to be the best, and will talk down to Sirris to make her less confident and see herself as less capable to make Candy look better.

I just realized my tragedy styled backstories rely on kind of niche psychological things occuring. Like, this one has the adoptive parents as weird bloodline narcissits with the idea that some kid they adopted couldn't be better then what they made.