Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160612040111/@comment-27450328-20160614182748

In response to Kiroto on another blog post :

Kirito Rose wrote: Couldn't agree more.

PS. Does Ilu have ANY problems? (He's the one in blue, wields a gun that turns into a ninjato, and has a snowflake for an Emblem (Second to last OC on the thread)

http://rwby.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:378543 Less cliche and edgy than the former "DarkSasukes" of your early days on the forum, but he lacks a spark, something that would characterize him. He have a quite common personality, stereotypical of the easily-relatable character. With that said, his personality, as well as his dislikes may need some deepening. You also need to give him a few flaws, which helps to give the character some personality : nobody want to hear about someone who is falwless and succeed in everything. Here, try reading this.

His story is also redundant of the young huntsman who want to kill monsters after a traumatinc experience. That is not bad, but it needs to be worked on to make it special.

For the weapon, pretty basic here. But meh, classics can work

For the Semblance, it fits the character well, but it seems quite basic. Maybe give it a more offensive ability with a blizzard form : adding bigger and nastier frost attacks with razor-sharp ice bits.

By the way, I'm not a pro OC analyser, so there might be some small parts that need work that I didn't saw. But yeah, better than your early OCs.