Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-30530552-20170401005801/@comment-25936766-20170415020137

PisceanWaterbender wrote:

1-Overall, I’ll say that I wouldn’t really classify her as a villain. She wants to do good, she just works outside the rules and wants to rectify what she sees as a problem, and she does it in horrible ways.

2-Interesting side characters. Basically, we have a male Emerald (to some degree) and a kinda creepy fox-girl. I can get behind that.

3-Though your ending to the Fidda piece seemed a little bit force. “Then she died.”

4-One question, when she was passed out during her coma, was it still affecting people? I’m going to assume no, since most of her followers up and left.

5-Combat Info: 4 / 5 - I would still think they would've taught her a landing strategy...

1-I've said it once and I'll say it again: I suck at writing Evil villains. Which in hindsight, using the word "Antagonist" seems more appropiate by definition.

2-I'd say he's more of a Neo, ability-wise. Backstory-wise he's like if Jaune grew up with Pyrrha as a sister, left from the sheer level of jealousy and resentment, and then ended up like Emerald.

3-Well, she died.

4-Look at it this way: Imagine someone was burning you with a flamethrower. Then at one moment, they turn off the flamethrower, but you are still burning until the flames snuff out. Then you are likely left with some burns and memories of what happened, but you're not forcefully being burned even more, at least not for the moment.

It was more or less like that. The Semblance stopped pushing them towards adoring her, that effect decreasing gradually. But they still remember what happened. So it stopped affecting them entirely, eventually, but they were still able to decide to support her by their own will and for their own reasons.

5-Yeah, I was almost certain I wrote something there. Though in hindsight it would've been along those lines anyway.