Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20190630171456/@comment-38934077-20190711191900

Hollowblade19 wrote: -Name: Shadow Doppelganger

-User: Annabel

-Introduction: During battle the users shadow becomes a sentient being that calls its self annie similar to a twin sister outside of battle the users shadow can posses a small inanimit object like a doll.

-range: short to medium

-Type: Conjuration

-Purpose: Team work

-Visual Cue: A solid black shadow in the shape of a teenage girl.

-Auditive Cue: Laughter and conversing with Annabel.

-Tier: 1 The shadow could only remain on the object it was cast on by the light and could not speak.

2 The shadow can move about on its own if it has a vessel outside of battle can speak and its very mischievious.

-General Limitations: 1 The doppleganger can not get more than 3 meters away from Annabel even while in a vessel without having to return to her as a normal shadow.

2 If the vessel is destroyed the shadow is returned to Annabel and the vessel must be replaced.

3 while in battle a vessel is unnecessary the shadow becomes a sentient being for a short time and this process is both very aura and stamina taxing on Annabel.

-Applicatiin: 1 Easier to fight multiple enemies. 2 Someone to just chat to. 3 Someone to pull pranks with.

-Triva: Annabel is a close combat bare handed fightet still plan on using Drake as leader for Team DARK a fanmade team im making and sticking with ultimate cut but toning it down to wear it can cut steel and later after intense training possibly diamond the other members are Kane for K still havent thought up a R girl name besides Raven finally the idea behind team Dark is they all met when kidnapped do to having high aura amounts by a evil man collecting powerful semblances and yes I stole Annabel from the supposed haunted doll Annabel sue me. Gonna be honest, the semblance is...actually kind of interesting. If you scrap the edgy stuff, ditch the very obvious and lazy "Annabelle" inspiration, and polish the finer details of the semblance, it could actually be pretty good.

Also: Again with the oversharing in the trivia section. This is the semblance thread, not the OC thread.

Also also: Team DARK? Really? God, I can hear the Linkin Park music from here.

Also also also (last one, I swear):

1. Your (and I use this term very loosely)"backstory" for the team seems like little more than a weak justification to give your OCs broken semblances.

2. The "backstory" makes no sense, since your previous OC supposedly discovered his semblance while he was imprisoned, so there would've been no way for off-brand Sylar to have known that he has a powerful semblance.

3. Are you new to this? I feel like you're new to the whole OC thing, which would actually explain a lot.