Talk:Ruby Rose/@comment-192.30.97.52-20160427133901/@comment-23799069-20160505172343

The only one that is acting unsatisfactory about it is you and RayStrike (cause of how he behaved with that response). Other than that, we aren't trying to be malevolent towards you- it's just your story idea isn't all that good- mediocre at best if anything. Akrantos pointed out a handful of errors in your draft. You can work on it from there. .w.