Talk:Jacques Schnee/@comment-148.252.128.96-20180131223549/@comment-34633327-20180209001730

If you are talking about Hazel, its the execution that is bad writing. Yes, losing Gretchen was bad. But he has allied himself with Salem, who we currently are under the belief is aiming for the genocide of humanity, all to get revenge for one person. It comes off as disproportionate. Now, had they made Hazel out to be manipulated or made Ozpin look like he was lying about Gretchen's circumstances, it could be better. But at the moment, it just comes off as Hazel damning humanity for the sake of revenge on one man who was tangentially related to his sister.