Thread:Sentry 616/@comment-26463535-20160817051408/@comment-26463535-20160826151138

They look good and are really coming along. Just one thing for Ferr, how do the rest of his teammates react to him almost killing himself? You could expand more about the reaction when you write the relationships. But a sentence like " His drive has nearly killed him multiple times"  needs to have more development. And some development about how his teammates to that side of him and how in turn he reacts to their reaction would give a good glimpse in-backstory of the composition of his team.