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Okay, I'll try to remember to fix that.

I'm surprised I forgot skin color. I felt that since it was a gadget save for the taser glove, and all the communications and computing seemed more like gadget, it should be listed under gadget, but okay. So I did right with the overweight? THat's good.

The mine was producing very little during those months, hence why they were lean. I thought that was a phrase people used. My bad. So more details and coverage are needed for backstory. I was going for irrational, so small victories.

He didn't actually have a specific allusion before this contest, so I edited him to have one that would fit. I thought I mentioned his relationships, but I guess not.

His brother's is named Brimstone. I created them together. There's a reason I made him huge. He carries a helicopter size rocket pod, with his hands, (I did forget to mention that bit). The drill head is used as a secondary feature for excecutions. I said that in the combat info, along with the fact that his preferred range is long. I suppose I should have mentioned that in the weapon section. The drill head covers the idvidual pods, with sections that open to allow them to fire. I did mention that last bit in the posted verison.

It's a ruggedized computer with a taser glove, and the glove is only an emergency feature for self defense (which I may remove for less confusion[possibly with other features]). It is primarily for ballistic calculations for snipers and artillery guys. Math is useful, but unless it's backed up with actual munitions, an equation won't even kill a tiny Nevermore.

Maybe I didn't punctuate correctly. The intended meaning is that they take their appearence from meteors that are in the process of entering the Earth's atmosphere. I was only trying to provide a specific description of the contructs' visuals. Nothing more. I wasn't sure how to be more specific, and I thought this might be a good place for the KIS principle. Clearly that hurt me here.

So I still suck at this. Good to know I have a long way too go.