Thread:OxMr ConflictxO/@comment-25958301-20150305122721/@comment-25555436-20150307125506

JayHart wrote: Kirito isn't a shit character, he's just used and written shittily. XP At first, he was cliché as heck, already a Marty Stu. Marty Stus are shit. However, at first he was like Sora and Shiro from No Game No Life: Marty Stu, yes, but tolerable for the most part.

However, then started the Deus Ex Machinas....and then came Aflheim Online. He was flanderized in the worst of ways: His Marty Stuish traits were multiplied, and his other traits were decreased severely. In other words, while he started terrible, he could have easily become a better character if he was written better. But the writting present at the end of, and after SAO, turned him into the shit category.

Seriously Jay, anyone can see that. He's almost identical to any Marty Stu Cliché-as-Fuck RWBY OC that gets all the women, nukes everyone with their super-hyper-mega-broken katagatlingzookanipershotgun, and has the most cliché personality. The only difference he has is a more interesting backstory and not being from RWBY.