Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25229725-20150128010644/@comment-26018514-20150206053842

Ahpolki Inika wrote:

Here's two more OCs of mine, and this time, I'll be revealing their names.

Zephyr Axel Farran
 * Gender: Male
 * Race: Human
 * Age: Late 30's
 * Occupation: Huntsman, painter
 * Outfit: Shirt w/ pocket on outside, tinted glasses, and trousers (colors being red, blue, white, orange, pink, violet, and yellow)
 * Eye color: Turquoise
 * Hair color: White
 * Height: Around 6 feet (?)
 * Symbol: Hyacinth
 * Weapon: A tool that converts between a discus (for storage and throwing) and a one-handed axe.

Kuma there's little to criticize without really reading the story, the name you have explained... it's a little odd still, but at least there is a story to it... the weapon seems like it would be better off as just an axe/handaxe or a weapon like Xena's that splits in half and attaches to bracelets(to be more like an axe for melee) or something but again... you have an explanation for that.
 * Gender: Female
 * Race: Faunus
 * Age: 6 years old
 * Hair color: burnt-wood
 * Eye color: Gold (might change it later on)
 * Features: Bear ears
 * Occupation: Orphan