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First tie. And this one would have blown you both out of the water...if he had finished it. ;_;

Arkantos95 with Królewski Fioletowy

1) Basic Info - 10 points The symbol made me double check the confirmed symbols page, since I thought someone was using the power symbol in the show, but I was incorrect. No physical traits though, which is a bit of a pity. Not even a cowlick or a freckle on his right thigh? It’s not quite enough to make you lose a point, just a pity to see.

2) Appearance - 30 points Ahah! I like the wingsuit. =3 The impression you’re giving me from his outfits and gadgets is that he’s basically Batman and Catwoman mixed together. Which I can dig. You also made me google what parts of his work outfit were since I didn’t know the proper term for monk strap shoes, which is never a bad thing. Gives me a clear picture of how he dresses. And the double gadgetry is nice, and fits with his job.

3) Characteristics - 29 points

He IS Batman mixed with Catwoman. But I know the story he’s based off very well, having read it multiple times over the course of my childhood and refreshed my memory of it about a week before the contest started, so I also know that he is the Swineherd. And a very fine Swineherd at that.

I’m glad you managed to avoid stereotypical company’s such as shipping, dust, weapons and the like. And you avoided actually naming the largest tech firm, only mentioning the daughter of the CEO, so it doesn’t violate canon in any way.

All in all, I quite enjoy his backstory.

Backstory total - 20 points

Personality could use a bit more fleshing out in terms of how quick he is to anger and the like, but otherwise it’s good.

Personality total - 9 points

4) Trivia - 0 points I…oh dear. You didn’t finish him. He has no notable relationships. Oh dear.

5) Weapon - 9 points Good weapon, basic but suits him and his job perfectly. You didn’t quite finish part of the usage or notes however, so now I’m super curious. If you had, this would probably be a perfect score.

6) Semblance - 10 points Well then. I like the semblance. I really do. I can’t find a fault. >.>

7) Combat Info - 3 points Fighting style doesn’t make mention of if he mixes standard hand-to-hand martial arts with his stun attacks, though I kind of assume it does. Does he focus on dodging, acrobatic tricks and dirty fighting? Or does he straight up just box it out with them?

Total: 91 points

Can I just say, this character heavily reminds me of two characters I made ages ago; Midas and Cereza? And if only you'd finished him off, Arkantos. First contest and you get 91 points with an unfinished character. Snap.