Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-33816423-20171202030317

Hotheaded is the most basic cop out and basically every character I know of that has any ties to fire is hotheaded, because its easy. You want to make him a "dark phoenix" allusion, which frankly I don't know of one existing at all. It seems like a reason to attempt to make him special beyond already alluding to a phoenix.

@ACWeapons is right, you need more substance to his backstory. Like how you need to develop them getting into a relationship gradually as they get to know each other.

Also please spell my name out fully, its disrespectful.