Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160612040111/@comment-27447621-20160626184007

Kirito Rose wrote: Here's (I believe) the last member of team BRWN. Please forgive me. I'm still working on a more detaled version of his backstory. Anyway, here he is. No problem, Kirito.

What is it with Fox faunuses recently? I've got one in the pipelines as well. But I digress.

"Brown and turquoise badges wrapped around for his arms". Could you clarify that please?

I'm sensing a bit of a timeline issue. You say he joined Haven after a Grimm attack; that's fine, but, according to Ozpin, "Students must first pass a rigorous entrance exam". I get that he would have some skill throwing knives (assuming he was a knife thrower in the circus), but I think the test would be more than that. If that's the case, then did he have any extra combat training at any point? Because if he worked as a performer at the circus, he would have to be at least a pre-teen. The lower schools start training at about 13 (assuming the higher and lower level schools are both 4-year schools), which means timing may be an issue if he went to a lower level school like Sanctum. And if he didn't, he would have needed some form of training.

And now we're on the subject, how did he come to work at a circus at all? What happened? The backstory seems to pick up his life when he's in his early teens (if I'm reading correctly), so what happened before that?

"Able to bend things to his will"... Explain, please? Is he a trickster who can bend people to his will? Does he have telekinesis and belong in Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters? What do you mean?

His weapons need 4-letter acronyms, because so far every weapon in the show has had one, even if it hasn't been stated. You can use the construction material, you can use the type of knife, but it does need 4 letters.

...UZI. It's UZI, not Oozie, assuming you're talking about the Handheld submachine guns. Just thought I'd let you know.

How many weapons can Arsenal summon maximum? Just thought I'd ask because 110 yards is a long, LONG distance, and if he's controlling 15 knives to hack at the opponent during the entire 110 yard approach, that raises red flags for me, ESPECIALLY in early tiers. I would say either start with 1-3 weapons or decrease the max distance. Also, while these weapons are in existance, does Melen have to concentrate to keep them there?