User blog comment:PerhapsTheOtherOne/RWBY: The Manga - Ambitions, Ideas, Etc./@comment-16774229-20130904175159/@comment-4830106-20130909223739

I like everything about the character, but perhaps you could be a little more specific about his personality? Right now, he just sounds like an organic version of TOMM. Perhaps TOMM could be like Andy (the sentient bomb in RvB) and you could be more like GLaDOS.