Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-23988593-20131002064714

So, just found this forum and i'd thought i go ahead and put out some of the things that i found troubling about this series.

One of the biggest problems i've found with this series so far is this

'''Point 1:Pacing. '''I know that we are only 11 episodes into the show but there is a very large gap between the action episodes and the "story" episodes. The action episodes are quite amazing. You can tell that a lot of effort is being put into the animation of the combat, BUT the "story" episodes on the other hand are being handled very sloppily. It seems that when the character have to converse with one another, that the writers are having trouble with keeping the conversations going.

When it comes to time management, Monty isn't handling it very well. The times before and after a battle are meant for more character development.

Point 2: Information. I've found a big issue here. The story isn't providing enough information about the character and their surroundings. Now, apparently people are getting information about RWBY from somewhere (most likely monty himself of course) But that is a problem in an of itself. You soundn't have to search for info about RWBY like, weapon details, character backstory, or information about the world itself. The story should be laid out properly, not force those that want to know more to search wiki's for things that might not even be true (since wiki's aren't know for their, *ahem* reliable information) This could all be done in 2-3 episodes with just the character telling their team mates about themselves. It would also be a way for the writers to maybe come up with more dialogue than 5 minutes worth.

For those thay say, " you don't know how hard they have work to make this" Yeah, Kinda do. I'm also making 3D animations ( nowhere near Monty's level) and have experience writing storys.

I do love RWBY, but there are a lot of things that need to be sorted out for this show to shine. 