Talk:Raven Branwen/@comment-2602:306:805D:8C10:A9FC:9087:2078:AC2-20180218171355/@comment-24032889-20180226042247

It wasn't that it was phrased poorly per se. I think it would have landed better if the scene's cinematography was done better. If the shot stayed on Yang the whole time, it would have been easier to understand. Instead, there was a wide shot, and it cut to Raven's face when Yang asked "Did you kill her too?" So we were kinda disconnected from Yang's message.