Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20180712124300/@comment-26397825-20190915033808

The originally described personality does not mesh with this portrayal in a believable way at all.

She's an often deadpan girl who wants to make friends, unfortunately, it's often undermined by her permanent glare. When she does have friends, she's basically .... a cinnamon roll. Oftentimes, she operates simply on right or wrong. If she sees someone in need of help, she'll help, if she sees someone in trouble, she tries to help.

As Gomu desires friends, her semblance kinda works like a passive that for any person she considers a friend, her stats and aura count out right DOUBLE her rather average statline This is your original outline. Someone who is cripplingly shy in the way you portrayed her would be too anxious to help or try to help as you planned she would. Either state that you are changing her original outline, or write her believably within the already planned parameters instead of trying to shoehorn your other OCs into the story in a 'mentorship' position.