User blog comment:Moussman360/Volume 2 production diary 4/@comment-18396318-20140614161638

Everything seems better overall, except maybe the writing. There's some good stuff in there (sisters, friends, Weiss), but I'm also seeing some cringeworthy humour. Yang's pun wasn't funny, and its unfuniness wasn't funny either. I'm really hoping it's an overall improvement from Volume 1.