Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27450328-20160505214831

Blu3 Fir3 - V2.0 wrote: Outside of a few spelling and grammatical errors, I think this looks fine. Maybe a bit more on the relationships section, but that's just nitpicking since I prefer to keep a relatively consistent length for each section. Thanks, and sorry for the spelling mistakes (not my native language). For the relationship, I didn't elaborated he hing because there are nothing else to say on my point of view, there are the equivalent of JNPR in the RWBY show, but more background-ish, so not developped. I may need to work on it though.

VedranThell : I don't mind at all, I came here for reviews and clarify what is undevelopped. For the name, it's a reference to her clear eyes, the way she light up with her semblance (though she discovered it after being named), the whole "light up the night" thing (with her being a DJ). And Dafunk is from Da Funk, an album of the Daft Punk (DJs).