Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20170201003940/@comment-26397825-20170323031140

Kirito Rose wrote:

Hunter Extension

 I) Weapons



-Name: Carmen (on his right), Caleb (left) (Vampires from twilight and the Family Fang) and Dracula

-Type: Dust-Sickle-Chakram-Crossbows (DSCC(Disk, no pun intended)

 -Short Description: a pair of half Chakrams that can attach to each other and be thrown. Charkrams are re-attracted to Nathan via two powerful magnets in his gloves. Chakrams can also turn into farming sickles for close quarters combat or to cut down small plants. He prefers the Chakrams as a close quarters weapon to the sickles. Chakram blades are infused with Wind Dust. Chakrams can also extend/unfold into crossbows

 Dracula is a Colt 45 semi-auto laser-sight pistol which fires Dust rounds.

Why is crossbows in there? I can't find a single instance of crossbows being a thing in the weapon other than an arbitrary mention at the end, but he doesn't have bolts or even an element that could be shaped into bolts on the weapon. Not to mention the crossbows aspect makes the pistol redundant. Either keep the crossbow, state that he has a dust type that can be shaped into bolts (so a 'solid' element like earth or ice, not a gaseous element like wind) or he carries around bolts to load and fire and ditch the gun, or keep the gun and ditch the crossbow.

If you're ging to keep the crossbow function, I would like to see some firing mechanisms and maybe a picture of the crossbow form to see how it works.

And when you say it becomes a farming sickle, I assume you mean the blade detaches from the handle on one end and becomes a half circle above the hand?