Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24534644-20160802001817/@comment-26397825-20160825063106

RayStrikeAbius wrote:

Overall Point Total: 96. Very good, well-rounded, lots of fine details to flesh him out. Any points taken were by and large due to personal observations and preferences, but my recommendations still stand. ...Frick.

Okay, Imma address the points made in the review.

I always think of white when I think of meteors and shooting stars, because they leave a white trail behind in the sky when you see them at night.

His backstory draws from his other inspiration; the story of Falling-Star, which firat tells about his parents, and then tells about Falling-Star himself. And yeah, I could have cut a lot of out, but it does technically have bearing on him as it is his parents and I felt his background was too stubby and left a lot unexplained if I didn't have that part about his parents.

The weapon...lol. I actually made that weapon way back in May last year, when I first joined the wiki. It was originally for the last member I made for Team AMBR, but I realised it suits Shihab really well and repurposed it.

The semblance...is not his original semblance. He was supposed to have Warp, but I sort of submitted that in the last semblance thread, so I pulled out something much older that was close. The fighting style was adjusted to reflect this, as warp would let him phase through attacks, which suited his dive headfirst into things personality more.