Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-30530552-20170401005801/@comment-30530552-20170422220537

And last but certainly not least, we have Cyrania de Bergerac’s character, Pewter Athena Palladium.  Sorry this took so long, I’ve had an unusually busy week, and even most of today and yesterday I was forced to help clean house, because my mother’s dead set on it.

Basic Info: 9/10 - All looks good except for the emblem shield. Did you mean that the fancy “P” is also colored silver? Or is this referring to the Wiki background? That was a bit unclear to me.

Appearance: 18/20 - Appearance is good except for one thing - what exactly is a “steel scale mail sheath?” Google hasn’t exactly been helpful with that.

Backstory/Characteristics: 24/30 - I looked back and saw that this was a character you mentioned in your previous competition entry for SYUTK’s theme...which was cool to see, actually. The murderous rage seems a bit much, though. Also, in my book of opinions, the mispronunciation of words like the ones you’ve listed doesn’t count as a Misc. trait, since most people tend to mispronounce words pretty often, myself included, even if they’ve heard it many times.

Trivia: 5/5 - As with pretty much everyone else, you neglected to mention what the color allusions were here...that annoys me a bit. Let’s see: Lily and Arbutus are both types of flowers (usually found in white), Sora is Japanese for “sky,” Argyrus is “silver” in Greek, Griselda is “grey battle” or “Christian battle” (I presume you went for the first one), and Platinum is itself a color. The allusion is all good.

Weapon: 10/15 - Shield has got a neat history, and both weapons are definitely functional...I just don’t see anything particularly special about them. It also lacks range, which is fine, but that would be a good potential upgrade. The reference to Palladium is neat.

Semblance: 10/15 - This seems like a time manipulation Semblance to me...which is fine in it’s own right, but I feel like it lacks any significant demerits to it, which is key for balance, as time powers have always been a touchy subject. You also said it was a cone in the beginning, and then throughout most of the description you call it a pyramid. Which is it!? At the very least, it works well with the personality.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#cccccc;font-weight:400;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">In the following post, I will announce our winners.