Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180806132759/@comment-25396609-20190622195758

Your description could use some fine tuning but I'd say it now falls within acceptable bounds.

Original:

A grimm that combines humanoid and corvid features. The majority of its body has human characteristics. They posses a large talons in place of feet that shred through almost anything. They have wings that resemble paper fans. On their hands they come equipped with massive bone nails that the use to attack, the nails are perfectly pointed and extend roughly 7 inches from their hands. They posses a griffon- like mask atop a feathery neck. They stand 7 feet tall.

Revised (example):

Tengu are humanoid grimm standing 7' tall and possessing distinctive Crovid-like features; as well as wings resembling paper fans and a mask similar to that of a Griffin. Their feet are avian with powerful talons capable of piercing through heavy armor with ease, while their hands are tipped with razor sharp blade-like claws.