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Agent ND wrote: Core Info

1) Basic Info

Name: Odin Sanchez

CNR Explanation: Odin means inspiration, rage, frenzy. Rage brings the thought of red to the mind. Sanchez is derived from Sancho, which means honest, saintly, holy. Holy brings the color white to mind.

Species: Human

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Emblem: Fireman's Cross with Flames Surrounding

Handedness: Right

Nicknames: N/A

Occupation: Leader of Team ONCS

2) Appearance:

Aura Colour: Blue

Height: 5'11"

Weight: 175

Eyes: Hazel

Skin Colour: Fair

Face Shape: Round

Hair: Brown, Buzzcut High and Tight

Physical Traits: (Faunus features go here, as well as scars,tattoos, basically parts of the characters body that standout)

Outfit: Faded and Torn Brown Baseball Cap, Black Zip up Jacket with Internal Kevlar Lining, Blue Jeans, Black Steel-Toe Boots.

Accessories: Chrome and Air Force Blue Watch, Small Gold Chain Necklace

Gadgets: Small Tactical Knife

3) Characteristics:

Background: Raised in a small town on outskirts of Vale, raised by semi-strict parents. His father was a career fireman, and mother stayed at home. Both parents were in the Vale Air Force, so they both preferred order to disorder. Attended Signal instead of average high school, and worked as a part-time firefighter alongside his father. Grew up with a tight core of very good friends.

Personality: Generally lighthearted. Has moments of extreme anger and rage. Goes through periods of self-doubt.

Misc Traits: Can be extremely irritable at times, as in periods of high stress. Can even become angry at the smallest things at times.

Likes: Video Games. Combat. Off-Roading. Humor. Reading. Rock Music. Puns.

Dislikes: Grimm. Snotty Personalities. Snowflakey People. Losing. Modern Music Such As Jay-Z, Miley Cyrus, and the like. Puns.

4) Trivia

Notable Relationships: The rest of team ONCS, Team RWBY (Ruby in particular), Qrow Branwen (Formed sort of mentor/apprentice relationship with him as a student at Signal)

Skills: Singer, ATV Rider, Video Gamer.

Notes:

Hunter Extension

A) Weapon

Name: Shadow Stalker

Classification: High-Powered Sniper Sword (HPSS)

Short Description: Sword (Similar to Qrow's) that turns into sniper rifle, with sharp edge of sticking into ground

B) Semblance

Name: Short Range Teleport/Cloaking

Short Description: Short Range Teleportation (15 ft max), cloaking does not render user completely invisible, but, if not being directly searched for, works well enough.

Activation Cue: For cloaking, the obvious would be becoming transparent, for teleportation, not really applicable.

Reflection of Personality: Not always wanting to be seen, wishing could be everywhere at once sometimes.

C) Combat Info

Preferred Range: Close

Landing Strategy: Strategy A (Preferred): Firing rifle to slow decent. Strategy B: Teleport upwards just before impact, causing a slow fall to the ground.

Fighting Style: Dependent on situation. Head on if location known, sniping if not.

Civilian Extension

A) Day to Day Life

Expanded Occupation/Business Details: Firefighter

Certifications: N/A

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Optional Statistics:

Levels are from 0 to 5, with 0 being nonexistent, 1 being low, 2 being below average, 3 being average, 4 being above average and 5 being high.

First year students should not have more than 3 stats at level 5, and no more than 45 points spread over the statistics.

@) Physical Statistics

Strength: 4

Speed: 3

Agility: 2

Stamina: 2

&) Aural Statistics

Aura Reserve: 4

Aura Manipulation: 2

Semblance Manipulation: 3

Dust Manipulation: 1

$) Technical Statistics

Dust use: 1.

Weapon Skill (Primary): 5

Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 4

Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 5

Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 2

Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 5

Total: 43 / Can anyone give me some advice on my OC?