Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-25396609-20171129233545

Majora, that character's design is utterly terrible in a "trying way too hard to be edgy" way.

There's these things called accent colors and you need to use them. He is wearing literally all black and has absolutely nothing interesting or memorable about him.

Having no backstory for the sake of being "mysterious" is incredibly lazy, and if you're struggling to write a backstory postpone posting them until you figure out SOMETHING.

The personality is pretty much as generic and terrible as it gets, he's a walking stereotype which doesn't even ATTEMPT to subvert or otherwise avoid the tropes and cliches of his archetype.

His weapon is stupidly thought out to the point of being useless, being lightweight utterly defeats the purpose of a claymore (which is big and heavy for crushing through armor by brute force.)

The semblance is passable AT BEST, and at worst betrays the lack of originality and thought that went into him as a whole.