Talk:The First Step/@comment-226878-20131120072428

A scene that made me sad because I just thought it could have been so much better had the crew thought about what they wanted to do is when Jaune is walking by Ruby and her voice cuts off: That's absolutely- Jaune: Ridiculous!

The problem here is that Ruby is in very close proximity to Jaune when his voice suddenly overrides hers. This shatters suspension of disbelief in my opinion and it's not even a point that should have needed suspension of disbelief. The fact is there is no reason Ruby's voice should have cut out. We should have continued to here her voice say something... The only time it is acceptable for a character's voice to suddenly cut out is if something occurs to shut them up or we cut to a scene in which they are no longer present. This isn't even considering the odd fact that Ruby and Yang continue to be present onscreen as Jaune slowly makes his way down the hall... and they are frozen in place. Both could have made another motion or two to make the scene look more realistic, but the crew didn't bother to try.