Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20150927024310/@comment-26397825-20161104092742

Hi, sorry, was busy with life.

Erm. My first piece of advice is going to be a solid No to the Zenpachi eyepatch. It's...really contrived and sort of seems like it's only there for drama purposes, not story purposes.

The bow/sword-staff sounds okay, though I am going to ask how it is strung in bow form? Are the strings contained just inside the blunt edge of the blade and connecting the base of the swords connects the arrow nocks together and allows him to pull it free from its storage space? Also, does he use standard arrows, and where are each of the swords stored alongside his quiver if he does?

And the semblance sounds like something he could do with pure dust manipulation. (Also, no, I've never played Overwatch, but you really need to stop porting things over from other series and start creating unique variations of things).