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Number three.

Maki Kuronami with Acqua Cristello

1) Basic Info - 10 points Heh. Name pun. Heh.

2) Appearance - 29 points Huh. Nice touch on the mask for keeping her identity secret, as well as changing her outfits enough between jobs to keep people from connecting her various personas. Oooh. I like the gadget. Though…her casual outfit is nowhere near the same as her combat outfit. >.> It’s got like, one thing in common with it, and even that’s different.

3) Characteristics - 27 points

I think you got the acronym for ocean mixed around. I mean, it works and I’m not gonna dock points, but I think it should have been OCEN, not OCNE.

Lol. I kind of like how her life went FUBAR. Overall it’s a fairly basic background with some nice tie ins to the current timeframe of the show.

Backstory total: 18 points

Personality ties in with her backstory fairly well, though I wonder where she got her foul mouth from.

Personality total: 9 points

4) Trivia - 5 points Erk. Sucky teammates. I like it.

+1 bonus point for the symbolism behind the mask, making it more than just an identity hider.

5) Weapon - 6 points Sheesh. Big gun. I’m confused as to how the laptop and gun combine to become a terminal system that makes me think of an AA gun, though I do know what Pandora is. 6) Semblance - 9 points I think you mean superheated steam with the fire aspect of the semblance. Pretty basic, nice dust combinations.

7) Combat Info - 5 points Fighting style makes sense given her capabilities, as well as the landing strategy.

Overall total: 92 points.