User blog:Gundam Legilis/S&D In Depth - The writing

Hello everybody!

The writing in here is actually quite good. Let's take a look.

Missions don't just involve the Grimm, but they also involve policing work.

Additionally, there's enough character development for the girls and Oobleck, revolving around the question people face in college:

"Why are you here, and what is your motivation? How do you plan to get there?"

Additionally, they introduced an abandoned town called Mountain Glen, to illustrate the World of Remnant: Kingdom's point.

Also, they introduced a new species of elephant Grimm, called Goliaths, putting them back in the spotlight as a threat. But not just a dangerous threat, no- they also made intelligent Grimm. This alone makes sure that the Grimm are at least still a threat in some way- even though the hordes of Beowolves, Ursi, and Nevermores are easily dispatched.

Stay tuned for next time, where we talk about the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis