Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160225194034/@comment-27764012-20160315000639

Dragon I know that you really want your character to be a badass but all you seemed to do was take out one of his weapons and that's only fixing one part of the slew of problems people pointed out with your character. Like the fact that your symbol is two different colors, which isn't really a thing in the show. Or the fact that despite only being 16 he still has 46 points, something that I saw a few people contesting when you originally posted him, the backstory itself with the deus ex adoptions as Cipher pointed out, still 3 weapons, why not just have two? He really shouldn't have master over three different weapon types at the age of only 16 and it seems really OP. The weirdness with his semblance wings and aura color being blue and red and that effect being, as crownrook put it, eye rape. Not to mention that Phantom had an issue with angel/bird wings as a semblance effect in the first place. His semblance is.... I don't know, it seems like the eight gates from Naruto but I'm not sure if that should really be a semblance, still deciding on that one. Basically he has a lot of mary sue traits and fixing only one issue out of the list does not make him "fixed." Try to balance him out a bit more, feel like an actual balanced person with both flaws and strengths and see where you get from there, I really want to see this character chissled out of the generic mold he seems to be placed in.