Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150910235150/@comment-25396609-20151018163314

Remove ALL direct relation to canon characters, kid.

For the love of god, the WF started as PEACEFUL and it is currently accepted that ADAM is the leader who turned them violent.

Making your own characters the parents of a canon character is as Mary Sue as it gets, NEVER do that. EVER. It is, without a doubt, the one thing that will guarantee their status as fucking terrible.

I would also like to onceagain adress your choice of character names. Orochi, Yue, Pheonix, these are all names that cannot be used without invoking Mary Sue traits, it is as simple as that.

The whole character needs to be stripped down and reformatted to not be a massive pile of poorly thought out wish fulfillment.