Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160205040608/@comment-27768007-20160225043403

Hrm. Convenient. I'm thinking of re-working Shade's backstory to have no abusive housing, just a well meaning, yet overly critical father. I'm writing him to take criticism personally, a flaw I used to have. Also removing the whole club thing, just doesn't work. How much will that improve the character?