Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-10380701-20150929232634/@comment-25555436-20151012033734

Maki Kuronami wrote:

It's a good overall backstory, and I kinda like it. Just gonna say in advance that you can't keep relying on your characters dying/going missing at the end of their story. Sure, it's unique and the like. But it's gonna start losing its charm soon.

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His second weapon he looted from his sister and it's also kinda cool. Except the explanation for its bullets are kinda redundant.

Dust is already used as bullets. In her case, it's powder Dust, which I will be willing to agree on. It's just that the way her weapon is described is like Dust is not being used as bullets already.

-Do I really use that so much? The "going missing" part? I am aware I murder them left and right like Jack the Ripper. Though that's because I prefer stories that lean more towards the cynical side, and character death works for almost everything. Drama, Horror, and my-so-beloved Black Comedy, among others.

I write every character less like writing an OC and more like writing a story, so there's that. If it pleases you, I do have stories with no character deaths (not at the end anyway). I just don't use them here. Don't feel the need to.

-I thought that people used bullets with Dust, but not all of them used Dust itself as bullets. Ruby's bullets in R-Trailer certainly didn't look like Dust, yet the "Megido Bullets" still left out a dark flash on impact.