Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25405817-20160511154306/@comment-45.37.20.83-20160518100131

Cyrania de Bergerac wrote: 45.37.20.83 wrote: WC-83 wrote: It sounds all over the place and basic, the sort of thing I'd write in Elementary School (but that's a personal thing, I got competant at writing in Middle School). It just a basis not the whole thing but do you mind elaborating a little Well, creating a romance between two main characters from seperate worlds who have loves already sounds like you're making Jaune a Marty Sue, so that's something that might better be dropped since it sets automatic red flags to people unless handled extremely well by a master writer.

If you remeber the show at all, you should know that Wendy's old guild, Caitshelter, dissolved after the walking city was destroyed since the old man was a spirit who had made facsimiles of people to create an illusion that Wendy was at a guild.

The way you structure and articulate your ideas here are Elementary-ish and that along with imprecise nature of the majoriy of your suggestions causes people to give little credence to the idea.

Also, we have a seperate thread for Fanfic suggestions . This is a thread to come up with general rules for how different fandom worlds would interact with each other. I meant when I said he was in Wendy's old guild I meant have him there wails is was around and join fairy tail at the same time as Wendy

Ok how about lisana or Mira as the main love interest or something

And dude it's a basis nothing more so of course it is basic