Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-26018514-20150405184336

22xander wrote:
 * Name: Charcoal Stone
 * Physical traits: Devilishly handsome, he seems to always have a certain charm about him even though he has 'crazy eyes'. People get creeped out by him, yet somehow women still feel attracted.
 * Height: 5'11"
 * Weight: 164lb

bolding corrected words you misspelled... and weight to height ratio seems really off.... is this guy anorexic or something? Am I wrong or shouldn't a healthy weight for any guy over 5'6"(without much muscle) be like 180lbs? with 5'11" being like 200-220lbs. 22xander wrote:


 * Face: Somewhat angular features, generally somewhat handsome
 * Hair: Black
 * Physique: generally fairly slim
 * Combat Outfit: In combat he wears a gray jumpsuit, with a multitude of little hidden pockets.
 * Casual Outfit: He sometimes wears a poncho and slacks, but usually just wears his combat outfit
 * Personality: Charcoal is ruthless, with a general pretentious air about him. He takes most things in stride, and generally he's a complete psychopath.
 * Background: Charcoal was born to a single mother who didn't really care for him at all, she didn't even name him until he was half a year old. He was a delinquent, constantly doing things and getting in trouble. While spending time in prison he was taken out of general cells and put into solitary because of his psych review and a specific incident with one of the other boys.

5) Trivia: semblance seems like it could be a little OP... otherwise seems OK... looks like I will get o Lives other characters in my next post....
 * Landing strategy: He generally just takes out the tambo to get him down.
 * Weapon: He has a ton of razors in various pockets, which he uses as his main weapons. These are in addition to a tambo staff which uses a dust system allowing him to lob fireballs and other things at ranged enemies.
 * Semblance: His semblance suppresses the will of weak-minded human females, which allows him to superimpose commands that remain in their subconscious until they carry them out. This only works with human females who trust him, so he has to charm them a bit first, and it is only useful in combat when he is on the same side as some of these charmed females and he can uses these commands to carry out a mission flawlessly.
 * Fighting style: He generally fights using the little razors, cutting small cuts and slowly getting someone down, but he is forced to use his tambo and liberal amounts of explosive dust when fighting larger grimm.
 * Relationships:
 * Notes: This is the first of four, I want to put them all up and se if anyone can tell me who their supposed to be. In any case, I'm not going to explain their inspiration just yet.