Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160524033118/@comment-192.30.97.54-20160530170301

Phantomlink959 wrote: 192.30.97.56 wrote: This is a team of Atlas Specialists that I came up with. I haven't completely fleshed them out yet, but I wanted input on what I've got so far:

 Noir Chevalier:  It is said that the armor of the AK-130's was based off the ebony plate worn by this imposing individual. Quiet but dependable, he has taken it upon himself to protecting the Huntsmen and Huntresses of the next generation - but when it comes to criminals, he has no sense of mercy. He is typically sent to eliminate particularly strong and dangerous outlaws. He wields Crimson Justice, a longsword that can be converted into a laser-shooting spear. His Semblance allows him to attack his opponent's nerves, causing temporary paralysis that he can usually maintain unless his concentration is interrupted. two things;

1: use the template

2; no, you are not making a character and saying "the Atlesian robot army is based on this guy" because that is basically guaranteed to be shot down by cannon at some point. Sorry. Like I said, this is only the basic outline for these guys; I haven't worked everything out. Also, I didn't mean to say that the entire AK line was based off of Noir - I simply meant that his armor looks a lot like the AK-130's.