Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25343309-20150430230909/@comment-26018514-20150514051100

SpiritedDreaming wrote: 1) Basic info: Seems good, my only concern is the semblance... it seems somewhat balanced, yet still OP, see if you can tweak it a bit... like she is kind of ticklish and the breeze can break her concentration, making her lose altitude
 * Name: Rosa Swan
 * Team/occupation: first year student, Team AMBR
 * Semblance: Float; she can manipulate how much gravity affects her body, allowing her to float. She cannot affect others though, and can be moved around by the wind. She often uses Wind Dust and the recoil of her weapon to move herself around though, giving her the illusion of flight. If someone manages to grab hold of her, they can drag her down as their own strength and gravity effects will override her Semblance.

SpiritedDreaming wrote:

seems good, except;
 * Name: Modry Swan
 * Team/occupation: first year student, Team AMBR
 * Weapon: A single-edged poleknife, four feet in length. When transforming into gun form, the handle (which is the barrel) shifts to create a stock and three foot barel and the blade moves to one side of the barrel to become a bayonette. The gun is an automatic rifle, and has a detachable magazine close to the stock. It connect magnetically  onto his backpack. Doesn't have a name yet.
 * Semblance: He can create bubbles, in either large or small quantities. Not offensive on it's own, but when combined with dust can create grenades that float until someone touches them or he sets them off.
 * Fighting style: He fights mainly with his poleknife as melee support, unless he is fighting a large group of enemies that his teammates haven't engaged yet, in which case he usues his gun, but is usually reluctant to do so as the dust rounds are expensive to have to replace, and prefers to use it in quick bursts rather than extended attacks. He uses dodges and jumps alot, rather then direct combat.

the weapon: he is holding the tip he stabs people with? and this rifle is only 4 ft in it's melee form? The point of Pole-arms is reach, that seems far too short to support a sniper who should be floating like 20+ ft up

the Semblance: what are these bubbles made of? water? gasoline? force? can he control their shape? support weight? shift/ripple the surface(like Raruto's Rasengan)? use them to distort/carry sound?