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Agent ND wrote:

Agent ND wrote: Core Info

1) Basic Info

Name: Odin Sanchez

CNR Explanation: Odin means inspiration, rage, frenzy. Rage brings the thought of red to the mind. Sanchez is derived from Sancho, which means honest, saintly, holy. Holy brings the color white to mind.

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Occupation: Leader of Team ONCS

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3) Characteristics:

Background: Raised in a small town on outskirts of Vale, raised by semi-strict parents. His father was a career fireman, and mother stayed at home. Both parents were in the Vale Air Force, so they both preferred order to disorder. Attended Signal instead of average high school, and worked as a part-time firefighter alongside his father. Grew up with a tight core of very good friends.

Personality: Generally lighthearted. Has moments of extreme anger and rage. Goes through periods of self-doubt.

Misc Traits: Can be extremely irritable at times, as in periods of high stress. Can even become angry at the smallest things at times.

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Dislikes: Grimm. Snotty Personalities. Snowflakey People. Losing. Modern Music Such As Jay-Z, Miley Cyrus, and the like. Puns.

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A) Weapon

Name: Shadow Stalker

Classification: High-Powered Sniper Sword (HPSS)

Short Description: Sword (Similar to Qrow's) that turns into sniper rifle, with sharp edge of sticking into ground

B) Semblance

Name: Short Range Teleport/Cloaking

Short Description: Short Range Teleportation (15 ft max), cloaking does not render user completely invisible, but, if not being directly searched for, works well enough.

Activation Cue: For cloaking, the obvious would be becoming transparent, for teleportation, not really applicable.

Reflection of Personality: Not always wanting to be seen, wishing could be everywhere at once sometimes. Where to begin.... Forced name associations, CNR doesn't work.

He did not attend Beacon, yet he was the leader of a team?

I don't think you can be a career fire fighter AND in the military your whole life.

Signal is actually middle school through high school, not just high school.

generic and flat personality; he's moody, not really a misc trait.

none of those musicians exist in Remnant. Also, he's a bit snowflakey himself, although mostly due to being incredibly 2 dimensional.

Basic but serviceable weapon; at least it's not a scythe.

The actively named semblances we know of are things like "Via Sun" and "Killer Quartet", you know, actual names. Not just literal descriptions.

Speaking of, semblances generally have a single core ability and other abilities are attributes of that ability or using it in creative ways; teleportation and active camo are totally unrelated powers.

That does not fit with the personality you gave him.