Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27447621-20160508230102/@comment-24534644-20160517162107

If the team name is derived from ferrum, wouldn't FRRM be a batter team name?

As for the character itself, kinda have to push myself here since I have this ingrained habit of looking away every time "wolf faunus" is mentioned, but I'll try.

Emblem seems a bit too... I guess special is the word I'm looking for (because it's Remnant's moon, which is shattered for as-yet-unknown-but-likely-extremely-significant reasons, and the Omega symbol, which I understand can be a reference to wolf packs and their alphas, gammas, and omegas, but the symbol itself still means "the end of things"). I won't complain though, because it follows the conventions.

Initially I was a iffy on the backstory, slightly because of making a noble family (which I realize is acceptable so long as they're role in the world isn't TOO huge), but primarily because there sure as f*** wouldn't be any recognized noble faunus families, and a faunus being born to a pure human family is also OOTQ. But then you had her be the illegitimate child of her mother and what was likely some random faunus worker. So I instead give my thumbs up to that. My only question is, if her father was angry enough to disown his wife for this, why wouldn't he disown her as well? Cyana isn't related to him at all because of this, and if he cared for her at all then he would have treated her better over the course of her life.

Other than that, things seem good. Weapon and semblance have already been discussed by others in the appropriate threads, so I won't touch on those.