Talk:Pyrrha Nikos/@comment-32753176-20180319001937/@comment-4010415-20180328171646

The problem is, it felt like lazy writing, especially with Miles and Kerry's track record with Telling instead of Showing. Ruby cringing when Lionheart mentioned Penny getting torn apart was better. If she keeps acting like normal and just says she's been affected without really consistently showing signs that it's true, it feels inconsistent and lazy.