User blog:Gundam Legilis/Burning The Candle In Depth- The Writing

Hello everybody!

The writing today is quite good.

First off, the bat, Ren and Nora are just friends, as expected. Second, it's Pyrrha who demonstrates unselfish love by giving Jaune love advice. We also have an opportunity for Jaune to transfer from Weiss to Pyrrha later on.

I also love how Yang is savvy of Blake's characteristics, and uses them to her advantage. I love the development of Yang, where we see her as genuinely concerned, and the long-awaited Ruby and Yang's backstory. Ruby and Yang once went on a mission to find Yang's mom, and was saved by Qrow from the Grimm, after their dad lost two lovers... He must be a Doom Magnet. And Yang's bottom line is to understand moderation.

Ozpin delivers great advice on the importance of nights like these, and the episode ends on a more positive note- not much evil doing is seen here, other than the arrival of Mercury and Emerald.

Stay tuned for next time, where we cover the acting.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis