User blog:Gundam Legilis/Burning The Candle In Depth - The Characters

Hello everybody!

The characters of Painting the Candle are an interesting sort.

Neptune is very sassy, like a sassy girl, or guy.

Apparently it's a tradition to be half-shirtless in Vacuo.

Yang really knows how Blake works, with her and her cat habits. Blake really follows her cat habits in a subtle way.

Nora's really more perceptive than what we give her credit for, and it's Pyrrha, of all people. who gives out the love advice.

It's good and bad for a reason - Pyrrha demonstrates genuine, unselfish love ("Love is patient... and endures..." St. Paul), but it really is self-defeating if Pyrrha wants to go anal on Jaune's booty.

Jaune is slowly, but surely learning Weiss's true intentions. Personally, I think character development should be slowed down enough so that it doesn't feel forced.

We finally get Ruby and Yang's backstory - Their dad's sad, their moms are gone, they nearly got killed by the Grimm as kids, and uncle Qrow came in to save the day. Yang does like to search for her mom, but she knows moderation, unlike Blake. Blake is then convinced, and I can feel the emotion and anguish in Yang's concern.

Ozpin delivers insight about the importance of dance nights like these - friends are forever.

Mercury and Emerald come in, and they're about to wreck havoc, in style.

Stay tuned next time for the writing.

Thoughts?

-Gundam Legilis