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so i removed the Glutton semblance and made a new one but i realized that people won't be able to criticize it so i'm posting it here

- Name: Remnant's embrace

- User: N/A

- Type: Glyph

- Purpose: Utility

- Short description: The user creates a 1,5 meter glyph directly infront of the user, shadowy hands appear in the area and they slowly pull anyone who enters the area into the ground

- Activation cue: The user touches the ground and a glyph appears on the ground

- Range: Short

- General limitations: the hands are easily dispatched, a simple slap will make them disappear and the opponent can climb back to the ground as if they were floating in water, only one circle can exist at a time, the hands cannot grab what they cannot physically reach, hands cannot reach outside the circle

- Passive ability: N/A

- Active ability: the user set a circle in front of themself in order to trap an opponent

- Dust interaction: N/A

- Notes: i took some inspiration from a story in Kalevala where a wizard called Väinämöinen sings a magic song that makes a man called Jouhakainen sink to the ground because they were having a magic song contest