Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160113034906/@comment-203.177.28.219-20160113124949

I don't really want him to only be judged as a plot device in my story. Until, my theories are proven wrong or otherwise, the response here will remain negative. So as a character, is his personality not fleshed out? Can you visualize his fighting style? Is his appearence too bland? Is his backstory cliche? If you can answer those questions, it would be most welcomed. As far as I can tell, what would really sell my story is not the story, but the characters. If they relatable, likable, interesting, then that will do for now.