Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26417457-20190922000524/@comment-25337617-20190922060424

Madladmad wrote: Is this satire? If it is, it is quite possibly the best thing I have read in my entire life.

If not... you have some serious work to do. All of the characters are incredibly OOC (I mean, there has been one swear in the entire show, and yet you chose to include bitch, shit, fuck, thot, whore, and the n-word), and that's only skimming the surface of the incredibly numerous issues this piece has. However, if this is in fact an improvement from your previous work, then good job! Because I can't imagine something even worse than this (although I'm sure it exists), and I would absolutely love to read it.

Regardless, please keep improving. Whether your goal was comedy, or, somehow, a legitimate story, you can only go up.

Are you referring to when Tyrian called Ruby a bitch after she cut off his tail, or when Yang told Raven, “Send me to Qrow dammit!” After she arrived at Raven’s bandit camp?