Thread:TEOR-MMMM/@comment-35691777-20190301062152/@comment-35455126-20190304051733

TEOR-MMMM wrote: Well, for one thing ELOR is never wrong on these things.

How about this, you change it to something else:

The Assyrians long ago believed in a myth, and some time ago, long ago they learned of the secrets of aura and semblance, but because of their rare ability, they were not always utilized. Chanters also learned that all of their kind, of any kind, all possess a different kind of magic that each one has, and thus they came to a conclusion, could their be an ability similar to semblance, and also be like magic: not relying on some power source to have it, and just be there, like it was born with them. They are thus called The Source Wielders because there is a source of power within them that is naturally granted to them, and that this energy that creates these powers is called the source energy. It is a power not from souls, or anything. Its just there, but since when there are those who are born with it, then it means something, some energy made from something great. Just change it to this, this is the best I can make it, if you want to make any better changes to it. Okay, here is how I think you should change it to:

“-GLITCH PROVES THE THEORY OF THE EXISTENCE OF THE SOURCE WIELDERS, THOSE WHO USE THE POWER OF THE UNKNOWN SOURCE! He takes a deep breath. “-The Source, The Unknown Source, a mysterious power that comes from neither magic nor soul nor genetics. But this is pure energy, where all things come from, there are these beings who are blessed from this power that is made in them, these beings who wield this power, which can come from nowhere else but an unknown source. Or as the Assyrians referred to this theory as the Source Wielders. As such, we have dedicated ourselves to studying this energy called “Mana”, for its description matches that of the original theory of The Unknown Source.”

Kay, changing it.