Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27966940-20170517013010/@comment-25936766-20170706023605

LucasVerBeek wrote:

"This girl is under the protection of my family. Now I know you're afraid of Ivory, I mean who wouldn't be guys build like a Karkadan with the personality to boot. But he's just make you hurt...I can make you *suffer*. Every bruise, broken bone and scar I find will be payed onto to you ten times over...and when I'm done I'm sending you back to Minx...don't worry...I'll freeze anything that comes of." Kedros Aurus. ......."He's just make you hurt"?

Also, this sounds kind of try-hard. Alright, he wants to sound threatening, but he's trying too hard.