Thread:Sentry 616/@comment-26463535-20160817051408/@comment-26463535-20160830022114

They sound realistic and reflect the characters' personalities. The only thing I might pause about is the crew cuts since it doesn't seem like that is required or highly recomended and the majority don't seem like the types to do crew cuts on their own. But there's nothing wrong with it. Maybe you should go ahead and make the others' aura color their eye color like you did with Ludgar? Their eyes definately seem like reflections of their souls.

You did great on the backstories. Eric is sort of the Kirk to Ludgar's Spock except with the positions reversed and is also the team heart, what keeps them together. You handled Richard well and imaginatively, not making his backstory super edgy or anything like that