User blog comment:HazelQuill7445/Awesome fan art/@comment-27144409-20170904005823/@comment-25936766-20170904012758

1-She needs more red and orange, and less black. Besides that, awesome.

2-I'll wait for the finished version to say if it's cool or not. With this one....I don't know why, but there's something about the depth in her legs that annoys me for some reason.