Thread:CarusELumen/@comment-16406151-20130907003639/@comment-4123264-20130920021717

Go, Weiss!

Fight well!

Yeah, represent team RWBY!

Ruby! I'm trying to focus!

Oh. Umm... Sorry.

All right. Let the match... begin!

Ha-ho! Wasn't expecting that, were you?

Hang in there, Weiss!

Bold, new approach! I like it!

Come on, Weiss, show it who's boss!

Oh-ho! Now what will you do without your weapon?

Weiss, go for its belly! There's no armor underneath-

Stop telling me what to do!

Bravo! Bra-vo! It appears we are indeed in the presence of a true Huntress-in-training! I'm afraid that's all the time we have for today. Be sure to cover the assigned readings, and... stay vigilant! Class dismissed.

Sheesh, what's with her?

Weiss!

What!?

What's wrong with you? Why are you being-

What's wrong with me? What's wrong with you?! You're supposed to be a leader, and all you've been so far is a nuisance.

What did I do?

That's just it! You've done nothing to earn your position. Back into the forest you acted like a child, and you've only continued to do so!

Weiss, where is this coming from? What happened to all the talk about "working together"? I thought you believed in acting as a team...

Not a team led by you. I've studied, and trained, and quite frankly, I deserve better. Ozpin made a mistake.

Hmm... Now that didn't seem to go very well.

Is she right? Did you make a mistake?

That remains to be seen.

Professor Port!

Ahh, Miss Schnee! And to what do I owe this fine pleasure?

I... I enjoyed your lecture!

Of course you did, child. You have the blood of a true Huntress in you.

You really think so?

Most surely! Hmm... Something's troubling you.

Yes, sir...

Dear girl, confess to me your strife!

Well... I think I should have been the leader of team RWBY!

That's preposterous.

What do you mean?

I mean it's only been one day. Ruby... I have made more mistakes than any man, woman, and child on this planet. But at this moment, I would not consider your appointment to leader to be one of them. Do you?

Excuse me?

I've believed in Professor Ozpin for many years, and the man's never once led me astray.

So you would just blindly accept his decision, even after seeing how exceptional I am?

With all due respect, your exceptional skill on the battlefield is matched only by your poor attitude.

How dare you!

My point exactly. I see a girl before me who has spent her entire life getting exactly what she wanted.

That's not even remotely true. Well, not entirely true...

Being a team leader isn't just a title you carry into battle, but a badge you wear constantly. If you were not always performing at your absolute best, then what reason do you give others to follow you?

So the outcome did not fall in your favor. Do you really believe that acting in such a manner would cause those in power to reconsider their decision? So instead of fretting about what you don't have, savor what you do, hone your skills, perfect every technique, and be not the best leader, but the best person you can be.

You've been burdened with a daunting responsibility, Ruby. I advise you take some time, to think about how you will uphold it.

Weiss! I-I-I was studying, and I fell asleep, and I'm sorry...

How do you take your coffee?

I... I don't...

Answer the question!

Uhh, cream and five sugars!

(sighs) Don't move. Here.

Um... Thanks, Weiss...

Ruby, I think you have what it takes to be a good leader. Just know that I am going to be the best teammate you'll ever have. Good luck studying! That's wrong, by the way. Hey, Ruby?

Uh-huh?

I always wanted bunk beds as a kid.

Most of it looks fine & I only really changed what I thought which ending periods/commas/question marks/exclamation points were appropriate according to their tones, but while the bolded stuff is definitely changed from what I heard, I'm working fast & there might be some other stuff I didn't have time to highlight, so search well, & best of luck. (& no squiggly lines! I guess you can use those for script, but I've yet to see a "~" have a place in any serious dialogue. No offense meant in the slightest...)