Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161205132101/@comment-26397825-20170124120434

He feels a bit too on the nose, like everything is a reference. Is he based on or alluding to the White Rabbit? Because if he's just alluding to the White Rabbit, then I feel he needs to stray away from it a bit more. As it is, his appearance is pretty much a dead ringer for the White Rabbit, his weapon and symbol is pure Card Guards, and his semblance is a reference to the White Rabbit's famous phrase in that he makes other people late by putting them in stasis.

The real saving grace is that his later life is not White Rabbit-ish, but I haven't seen his early life so I can't say anything either way about it.

My suggestion is trim down his appearance a bit; does he really need the red coat if he's got the pocket watch and ears? Does he have to be an albino like the White Rabbit? Is there not something else that ties into his backstory/personality a bit more for his symbol than just his weapon, which is yet another refence to the White Rabbit's job as the herald for the Queen of Hearts who had the Card Guards?