Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150910235150/@comment-26843414-20151018131114

Thanks Vedran for the insight on this stuff, not familiar with the ins and outs of RWBY, fan fiction, character naming, etc. Definitely gonna go back to rewriting the character since there are a lot of problems with the character (too many things he's good at, gary stu, no personality). The character I had in mind was man who was bullied, fought back and realized that the strong rule the weak and as such lived by that philosophy. Of course he changes over time (through the academy, the Faunus Revolution, friends, etc) and believes that the Faunus can live side by side with humans. Still wanna stick with him being poor so he does not fight with any weapons and instead fights using aura. As for his semblence, I think its relatively balanced and allows for plot twists in whatever fan fiction I plan to write. As for people's distate in Wolf faunus, I really don't see why people are so putoff by it... I don't care much for Twilight or whatever other literature uses wolves, but I do like the Wolf in sheep's clothing/Little Red Riding Hood reference. As for his mother, his mom is a sheep faunus. Anyway, thanks for the criticism, I'll try to work with it.