Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150910235150/@comment-25396609-20151020034811

You know, you CAN copy paste instead of quoting. In fact it's preferable.

Generally we try to have first name fulfill CNR but I'm not going to stress it because a few of mine slide by on surnames.

Remove the Semper Fi tat, I get the sentiment but doesn't fit the setting.

Not a fan of wolves (tend to be stereotypes), not enough information to determine if it is problematic.

Scars make sense in context, honestly a little bit generic for a soldier though.

Outfits you should replace the section with the outfit, a fill the blanks tyoe deal.

Generic rogue soldier master sniper, simple as that. lone wolf type but kind of makes sene for a sniper.

Seriously, there are improbable aiming skills and then there's never misses with any projectile ever, and that is seriously annoying. Every weapon is different, different calibers of gun have different recoil, different effective range, then you factor in crossbows and traditional archery, thrown weapons (totally different skillset) and that is going on 10 years of practice to master them, as he is a soldier not a huntsman he wouldn't have been in training that long. Assuming minmal age to serve is the same as the United States (18) he is the worlds best sniper with 6 years of applicable experience. Number don't add up kid. Gonna have to dial it back quite a bit. He's a soldier so he would be trained primarily in firearms, so call it sniper rifle and sidearms for total mastery, maybe begining to learn the other skillsets, plus hand-to-hand.

Need to tie the semblance to personality a little better, other than that acceptable.

(FYI, i am comparing this guys aiming skills to my own master sniper character who is a 40-something year old former huntsman, and even he can't make every shot like that with every missile weapon known to man, despite training near constantly for almost 30 years)

Please no partials on the stats, those are for our reference and have specific number values for a reason.

tl;dr:

generic lone wolf sniper, seen better seen infinitely worse

scale back his aiming skills a massive amount and limit effectiveness with non-primary ranged weapons to account for experience