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Arkantos95 wrote: Next is Piscean with Ugné Brandr.

1) Basic info: 9 points

If there isn't a damn good reason why he's called Hellbringer I'm taking a point off for that edgy-as-hell nickname.

2) Appearance: 19 points

I don't really understand your description of his skin color. Is he supposed to be a really dark brown or a really dark red, as in a sunburn?

3) Characteristics: 28 points

My God that is long. Was all of that really necessary?

4) Trivia: 5  points. Nothing wrong here.

I)Weapon: 10  points

I don't understand where the barrels are on this thing or how they "hide" in the sword normally. And what kind of broadsword is this that a bladed sheath for it would be usable for dual wielding in the first place?

II) Semblance: 12  points

Why is the visual cue his eyes changing color when he's creating Glyphs? And how big is a normal-sized Glyph?

III) Combat info: 4  points

That's not a landing strategy. That is called falling.

I) Day to Day Life: 1 point for mentioning he helps his dad with recordkeeping

Total: 88 Points Well, my last one was 77, so it was a good deal of improvement. I'm happy about that.