Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-50.37.30.133-20150217042737

I recently wrote a RWBY one shot. It's my first foray into the RWBY fanfiction archive. Honestly, I'm looking for feedback really. Did I capture the characters properly? Is my writing good? Is the story good? I'm looking for critiscisms to help me improve. Any help and feedback would be obliged.

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