Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171207232020/@comment-31558062-20180413040116

HookshotHotshot wrote: Bluewindbag wrote: 1) Basic Info

Name: Cherry Rainbows Just a note, that combat hairstyle url isn't a link. No real issue, just thought I'd let you know.

I'm going to assume this is going to be used for an AU fanfiction or something? Cursed Blades of any kind aren't something we've seen in the canon, so…

Next, where are we? She travels towards Haven, but from where? RNJR traveled from Vale to Haven, so listing her destination doesn't tell us much.

If Cherry was given the blades that her family was sworn to protect, why didn't her mom come with her? That way, her mom could protect her family and the swords, which seems like a win/win to me.

Ok, she's not using the cursed blades as her weapon (which was a concern of mine before reaching the "Weapons" section), but what happened to them? And a bigger question; are they even really necessary? Based on what you've given us, they add nothing to the story. Couldn't you just say that Rajah was killed in a bandit attack and leave out cursed artifacts?

The classification for weapons is typically 4 letters, but that's a minor nitpick.

As for the weapon itself, are the sicles retractable? Seems to me like you'd risk damaging your own Aura with the blades on the handles you're using.

And her teammates aren't listed in notable relationships, even though Azure is specifically listed as a dislike? I was kind of in a hurry when I made this..

I'll change all of the information when I'm done with breakfast!