Talk:Remnant Timeline/@comment-24573226-20181127154558

Proposed changes:
 * Removal of Yang's chat leading to her training with arm
 * Removal of RNJR arriving in Mistral
 * Editing down Weiss's lost of title to just being her loss of title
 * Adding who was pressent to defend against the assault on Haven.
 * Adding Salem blaming Cinder for the failure at Haven and ordering that she be left in isolation.

Reasons: 1. A chat just doesn't feel like its worldwide newsworthy, nor that Yang began training with her arm. 2. The arrival of RNJR itself doesn't not affect the people. Their presence at Haven to defend it does. 3. The Weiss entry feels much to plot-detailed. Also, it reads like Weiss's performance contributed to Jacques removing her title. 4. This puts RNJR's presence where it is significant on the timeline. Also, since the attackers are listed, the defenders ought to be as well. 5. The Fall Maiden being left to go rogue feels pretty major. Also, since Salem's Faction meeting and planning is included already, it's not without precedent that Salem issuing an order belongs on the Timeline.

Thoughts?