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LiveandSound wrote: ...Anon's: Chloe Ione......

-Oh, she's an old lady....called, Fool...she must have made "more mistakes than any man and woman in this world" I admit, for the names I just looked for "Ancient Greek" and CNR, "Fool" was more something she was often called out of hand, not quite the type of permanent nickname used universally I seem to have given the impression of.

LiveandSound wrote:

-Damn, she's tall. I'm not sure just how heavy "260lbs" is, but sounds heavy...muscular. Considering her weaponry.... You answered yourself there.

LiveandSound wrote:

-Sounds like you were aiming for a soldier of sorts. Armor at the chest, with a green vest on top. Though there's so much green in her clothes...a green cuirass, with a green vest, and a pair of jeans that I'll assume are blue instead of green. With a tank top instead of the cuirass, she would look good...but when you put a green muscle cuirass with that green vest....the idea just gives me some nausea. (Total points: 18 pts). I meant like "oxidized bronze" green(like the statue of liberty) for the armor and a verdant jungle green for the vest, remember the armor isonly worn when she is "ready" for battle, which is rarely as she lacks foresight.

LiveandSound wrote:

-Loves animals, makes excuses often, and doesn't think much of the future.....that's all? Seriously? Those 3 things that barely take more than 1 line of text?

-So her sister is named Daphne...I think you were trying too hard for "Nature", Anon...

Yeah, I was lazy as I said, the first names are Greek, for CNR, and not really there for other allusions.

LiveandSound wrote:

-"Fiery Uranium Core Kopis"......Wait, you're telling me she sold Uranium to both sides of a war? I find that hard to believe, considering that, being Uranium, I'm sure that if someone tries to get Uranium, it would be the government itself, from itself or a corp that works for said government, instead of having to buy it from a third party. Especially if that government is Atlas.

means..."Fiery Uranium Core sword"

-Based on the rest of the tale, she apparently made weapons using Uranium + Burn Dust....cool, but the radiation...would actually explain her moment of stupidity that got her killed. But definitely makes me wonder how did the Faunus win?

-So Daphne got herself killed trying to get Dust like if she was fucking Ezio. Conveniently, she had a will and a fake transcript that allowed Chloe to become a Hunter...and...that is all.

Her sister's story was kept short intentionally, in short, she was in a position to obtain it(and was ahead of the field in the same scale as Ironman after his first gen suit technology)... until Chloe F'd up and had no "FUCK's" left to give the ones funding/supporting her operation, while Daphne was too short on "burn" dust in the middle of a war where the only recourse to obtain more was illegally, which ultimately failed. These weapons were essentially war crimes to use, for missions in which the wielders capture was a true liability, the radioactivity I am assuming aura would protect against and limit the deadly half-life significantly, especially in such small quantities.

Only 2-3 others exist at this point, One lucky FUCK because someone absorbed/dissipated the radiation to nothing before it went off, also the only incident someone survived a failed mission with one, and an opponent survived the direct combat. The other 2 were essentially shelved as a nuclear reactor and used to power other things, not used in combat, all the others either saw destruction in combat or blew from meltdown conditions amplified by dust.

Using a will to get a stooge War criminal into a prestigious field with no fuss and no criminal sentence is a pretty monumental accomplishment of foresight... especially if that war criminal's a fool... but I never said that was Daphne's entire intention... Chloe isn't dead yet.

LiveandSound wrote:

-...Wait, so she's a low-ranking Hunter, at 45 years? ...I feel like her sister is displeased. she is foolish, to gain rank as a suicidal fighter who is a fool is tough, and technically only 28 years as a huntsman/recluse LiveandSound wrote:

You really didn't focus on this, did you? Put more effort into it man! (8 pts).

Nope, not feeling Greek history atm, focusing on new job this week, I put more effort in the joke(her sister died because she had no FUCK's to give...) than the character itself. LiveandSound wrote:

-The kopis, a radioactive flaming sword....ignoring the risk to the user from the radiation, where do the flames come from? I mean, I get it, Dust allows one to create flames and such out of their ass, but they have to be activated, and they only last as long as the Dust keeps providing the energy (I seriously doubt they last forever, otherwise Weiss wouldn't need so much Dust of the same kind). But with that weapon, it sounds like there is no Dust there to start with. I can see Fire Dust being used to forge weapons like that like a blacksmith would, but I doubt that they would give you a permanent flaming sword.

Also, are you telling me she carries that flaming sword all the time on her back/hips? While wearing a cuirass/jeans? Damn, I feel sorry for her.

Not permanent flames, dust embedded in flame shape, user activates/deactivates, radiation extends the effect while the energy from the radiation extends the dusts useful lifespan indefinitely through processes known only by Daphne. When deactivated/sheathed minimal to no Radiation is emitted, all the energy is converted by the sheath to electrical/heat energy in a safe form.

LiveandSound wrote:

-So...somehow, her sister...

again, omitted her story LiveandSound wrote: -Wait, so they also cause nuclear explosions in a range of 50ft, leaving radiation in a range of 100ft? Remind me again how the fuck are the Faunus still alive at this point?

....Wait, that's the only weapon you're describing? I thought you were going to describe the spear too, and the sword (not the kopis). With all this, she sounds way too heavy for her own good. The sword's weight, plus the kopis's, the spear's (even retracted, it doesn't become lighter, just easier to wield and with a different weight distribution), and the shield's, the cuirass's, plus her own's.

Sounds very dangerous, and impractical. The variety of weapons gives her versatility, though. The blades were a limited run, and a lost technology with Daphne's demise, her own weapons are uninspired due to a lack of foresight, Chloe is almost always unprepared.

the explosions only happen once per weapon. LiveandSound wrote:

-Now, the Semblance: ....So, she just creates a green mist, from which she can see things, and can teleport to said mist? And becomes dumber the more mist there is? ...Would help with her speed and agility issues, though you could have explained it more. Can she create mist only behind her, like Blake's clones? Or can she create it in a specific location away from her? (7 pts). The "mist" is like a super speedster's blur, or like Riddick's Foe's ability uses, it exists only where she was, starting from where she is now, ending where she started using the semblance or a minute before the current "now". LiveandSound wrote:

landing strategy... yep, rushed. LiveandSound wrote:

I see a certain resemblance between Promy and Daphne there; Daphne using Fire Dust-imbuded swords and selling them. She tried to steal the fire, and was punished, in a more kid-friendly way.

-So Chloe, named after Demeter and Io, is based on Epimetheus...."Hindsight", "After-thinker"...sounds like a reckless person that acts first, thinks later. You could have added that to her personality. "The being who represents nature, in the sense of materialism. According to who "thought" comes after the thoughtless bodies and their thoughtless motions". In other words, natural instincts. Which is exactly what her Semblance makes her do...funny. (+2 pts).

Yep, I felt it best not to go into detail on exactly how Daphne was punished/killed... it wasn't meant to be pretty. LiveandSound wrote:

Total score:20+18+4+8+3+7+1+2=63.

You....may already forget about winning, bro. Tbh... I didn't expect it to go that well, I consider it a success for what I had to work with(Epimetheus) and how little effort I could muster for this contest.