Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-27447621-20171127140546

ACWeapons wrote: I don't want to sound rude but is there anything amiss with my character? Overall she looks pretty good. I do, however, have a few issues. Some of these are larger, some are smaller problems

I'm operating under the assumption that the heels are 3 inches high (a nice average heel height according to Google), which puts her height without heels at 5'6" and her BMI at "Overweight". If the character has a more muscular build, that should be fine (muscle weighs more than fat), just thought I'd let you know. But if the thing about this character is that she can fly, you may want to cut that weight just a bit.

I suppose an appropriate question to ask is; how old are her Grandparents? How active a role were they in her combat training? Were they mentors or sparring partners?

If she's the last generation of her Family Name, does she have a brother? We've seen nothing to suggest Remnant's customs regarding Surname are different from ours, in that one member (typically the bride) takes on the other's surname upon marriage. Is it customary for her family to do it differently, or…

And besides fixing her family's social standing through forging connections, how is she "Preserving" the family name?

Team CIPR? Explain. The closest thing I can think of is "Cipher", which doesn't really bring any specific color to mind.

How much can she reduce her mass by?

Why does she prefer Midrange? Those fans are close-range weapons.

Just as a personal nitpick, those sleeves are going to be kind of heavy because they have to support the entire weight of the character without tearing. Which means a shoulderless top may not be the absolute best idea as the sleeves have less support when the wings are stored. But I may just be shooting in the dark here.