Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-3965075-20150620202833/@comment-24993958-20150718164437

203.59.197.50 wrote: Well I feel like throwing my character into this, because I'm an idiot. Still a work in progress though.

1) Basic info:


 * Name: Hai Xun (海 迅)
 * Age: 18
 * Aura/Effects: Dark blue
 * Weapon: None (Unless you could studded leather gloves as weapons)
 * Semblance: Redirection(or Retaliation).
 * Fighting style: Xun uses many martial arts, mainly ones that focus on counter attacks, such as Aikido, Wing Chun & Jujitsu
 * <p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size:14.666666666666666px;font-family:Arial;color:#999999;font-weight:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre-wrap;">Tropes: That funny guy that you expect to be really weak, but really isn’t.


 * One year older than most people starting, but I can let that slide since people start grade school at either 6 or 7 so it checks out for the most part.
 * Missing particle effects of his aura, such as Ruby’s petals.
 * Personality discrepancy, he’s calm and in control, but get’s easily provoked into making snarky remarks…might want to remove the control bit….also he likes watching people argue over stupid things…unless he’s on one side of the argument?...i think personality needs to be cleaned up a bit.
 * Yes, that counts as a weapon, no one wears those because they keep their hands warm, they wear them because it makes people go ow when he punches them.
 * Semblance is…kind of broken. It’s a more powerful version of Yangs semblance while having none of the drawbacks. I’d balance it out by removing the storing portion, which would force him to counterattack instantly if he wants to redirect attacks.
 * …that trope and the character does not match…at all. His retorts as stated by you are triggered, as opposed to planed, and are mean spirited…the only person that would find him funny is likely his reflection.