Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150301171157/@comment-108.52.39.27-20150318012141

Hi, author of the cyborg here again. Thanks for the feedback, and I'll admit that the backstory needs approximately a ton of work. The main reason I made Jen from outside the kindoms is because it was easier to think of a reason why she would lose her arm out there. Yeah, I know, lazy writing, but I'm working on it.

As for the weaknesses, Jen's semblance basically gives her the ability to turn her arm into any weapon she can think of (nothing to op though), but that's it in combat. So to compare her to say, Ruby, Jen's only advantage is the sheer number of weapons in her arsenal. But keep in mind that she'll never be as good with any one of those weapons as Ruby is with Crescent Rose. So she has to rely on finding the best tool for the situation (which she won't be able to do all the time.)  Is that a reasonable weakness?