Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25266931-20161112032800/@comment-25266931-20161116053904

Story posted. It's above my rant about Shinji a few posts up.

I think you'll find a more clear example of what I mean when I write.

Decisiveness. Unconventional events. A bit of nostalogia (in this case a kinda Tim Burton-ish-ness). And a story that gets to the point with filling itself will filler scenes or fodder characters or needless drama. The only drama that happens is what is needed for the story.