Talk:Jen Brown/@comment-68.194.1.35-20161207233355/@comment-68.194.1.35-20161210044920

The Maidens arc is a pretty big thing to pull out of nowhere. Becuase it undermines alot of important things: like what Cinder's plan was, and what the plans in the previous volumes (i.e. stealing dust, hacking the Atlesian Knights, the whole Grimm Invasion in the end of Volume 2) had to do with any of it

Also I never said Miles and Kerry never went to college for writing. I was saying that they are bad at it. Which they are. Look at the aforementioned Grimm invasion: Weiss, Blake, and Yang split from the group to defuse bombs (which aren't there since none of the train cars from this point on explode) where they get their asses kicked (why are people even on this train that is meant to crash and explode?). Meanwhile Ruby fights a mech instead of running to the front car and stopping the train (which was her plan)  When they finally get there they decide to freeze themselves as the train crashes letting the Grimm in. (These are supposed to be the heroes)  And when they have to fight the Grimm they get bailed out by team CFVY, team JNPR, Port and Oobleck, and '''​THE ENTIRE ATLAS MILITARY. '''

'''The main characters we are supposed to be rooting for fuck the mission by splitting up (in a show based around teamwork no less) which leads to people dying (presumably, there is no death on this show ever unless the plot calls for it )  Only to be bailed out with no consequence, And they don't even feel bad about it afterwards. Dosen't that writing make team RWBY look like crap? And she says she TRUSTS these guys who wrote all of this,'''

​Also, a feminist deleting opinions for not agreeing with their own, Why am I not suprised?