Thread:Alhazad2003/@comment-24573226-20161229144637

Hi Alhazad,

You are a decent writer and have an active mind, but your occasional habit of putting things not factual into articles has been ramped up lately. Your interpretation of things that happen in the show do not actually match the events that occur in the episodes. Some examples: Cinder destroying Ozpin's body; Ruby angry at learning Cinder is alive; Taiying being angry at Yang for not putting the arm on right away; Raven leaving "without a word."

Some of them are you simply getting too creative with your word choice in such a way that it twists the information into something that isn't factual or confirmed. I am not sure if this is connected to your need to "pump up the drama" like before and you simply don't recognize that your new wording is making statements of things that don't happen or you genuinely don't realize that you're drawing speculative conclusions. I think it's a combination of both.

I know that these are good faith edits and genuinely think you're good people ^.^ I am not trying to pick on you. Do try to stop and think about whether or not what you are adding to an article actually happened or was confirmed in the show. As Minomelo recently pointed out, we get over 70,000 people visiting this site every day. It's important to be accurate with our article content.

Thanks! 