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SpiritedDreaming wrote: @Nightmarionette

Background is....one line. The rest sounds okay, but that background. One line. Not even a 'his parents are both alive, he has no siblings, he was born in Vale, and his childhood was happy and carefree with no tragedies'. Just 'he is from a long line of Hunters with similar semblances'. Stub background isn't even stub.

Ahhh. I get the sword you were making. I saw someone make a sword just like that in a youtube video once. Not sure how it transforms into a Spartan laser, but then I'm iffy on the details of weapons from Halo so someone else can talk about that.

Semblance is cute, but there's no point in the 'heals quicker' aspect. Aura protects you from damage. There's no healing to be done unless you run out of aura, in which case you can't use your semblance anyway because you need aura to be able to activate the 'unique manifestation of your aura'. Though the solar balls had better be a higher tier thing and not something he can do straight off the bat, otherwise it becomes OP.

That landing strategy needs work too, since healing is not a thing as aura protects you from healing. I guess he just toughs the landing out with his aura and waits for it to recharge before moving on? We don't know how quickly aura recharges though. It was a bit unclear ok. But yeah. What you said is pretty much the rest of his story.

The blades are a bit thick then you may think and the hilt has some bulk to it.

It accelerates his healing beynd even what an aura can normally do. The light almost has to be blinding for him to use it. Also Saffron hasn't fully mastered them and they sometimes literlly blow up in his face.