Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-27447621-20171125234031

Senketz wrote: for the theme thing i didnt know there was suposed to be one so sorry if there is but there isnt Ok. Just for the future.

thanks for the help with the weight and the name of the academy NP

raven was young, his mother knew and didnt want to upset him so she lied and got everyone else to lie about it to. (the lie being that she just went away) Ok. I don't know why, but I thought the lie was just "She's fine", which made me question why he wasn't surprised when he couldn't contact her. Although contact would still be an issue. How old were they when she died? I doubt his mother could've hidden the death of a friend from him for more than a month tops.

the fact that 2 of my characters go ape shit is mostly because the person who helped me make raven was my brother. Which character is yours and which is his again?

...ravens anger comes from his life experiences...as for why he gets angry he grew up in a small house with not alot of money... Ok, so the anger is a little more justified. The way you'd laid out the backstory it kind of came out of nowhere. The anger still feels a bit extreme; maybe "abusing power" can just be his biggest dislike instead of causing him to go into "Kill Everything" mode (my definition of 'going ape$hit'). Maybe.

the weapon is meant to be basic, remember raven doesn't have much money, having a complicated weapon isnt gonna be cheap so thats just what he has. I'm trying to work on giving feedback on more aspects of the character, rather than just the things I have issues with. I was saying that, while nothing special, the weapon didn't have any glaring flaws. Simple is fine. AC Is right regarding Forging the weapon at the school, but if you want a simple weapon, go for it.

the activation cue is mostly me not understanding what it was asking but as for visuals the thing he touches has a pulsating black aura. and its only with his hands Sounds fine.