Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160113034906/@comment-26397825-20160113121625

That...does nothing to explain his tattoos which are only visible in moonlight, or why his aura changes when he's under moonlight or being controlled by a Schnee (and that's a whole other can of worms there). I get that he is for your AU, but explaining these things and how they actually came about in his backstory is key, otherwise people will simply look at him and say "What?"

Also, explain what he did on his mission to result in expulsion, as they didn't even expel Yang after she 'unlawfully' attacked a visitor from another country when he was defenceless. I'm sure any mistakes in the mission would have been written off as "Doing the best he could in a crappy situation, keep an eye on him but keep him on board." And they certainly wouldn't just let three promising Huntsmen (the plural form is Huntsmen, they never use the word Hunter in the show) walk out like that. If anything, they would have been shuffled off to other Academies for a change of scene and worked into other teams there.

Explain his backstory a bit clearer, tie in his physical traits so we actually have a basis for what you want in your AU, and then he might start to look halfway decent...