Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20150927024310/@comment-26397825-20151121000751

Wow. Wayyyy too many abilities with that semblance. I see weapon generation (the number and different styles could work, as he could make the weapons from his imagination), manipulation of said weapons (which ties into the generation, as there's no point in generating them if he can't use them) as well as teleportation, and how do the generated swords become strapped to metal wings? How do the wings float? Cut the teleportation, and lose the wings, instead specifying that he can manipulate them as they are pure aura. Also, cut the number back from 13 to  or 7 as a first year; as he grows stronger he can go up to 13 or more.

Also, cut the fact that the summoned swords are real, as that's impossible in RWBY. He can make weapons out of Dust or aura, but he will not be able to summon real swords that belonged to people he knew, and he won't be able to resummon swords that he has used before - even if he uses the same Dust, it will be a new sword simply because the Dust will not reform in the exact same way every time.

A katana is able to be used in a dual wield style, but if you extend it to twice the length it will be too long to dual wield, which means he won't be able to wield it in conjunction with his double edged sword. Also, what kind of double edged sword is he using? It'd have to be a single handed sword, simply because trying to use a two-hander in one hand is almost impossible and will be impossible with a second blade in the other hand.

SO, to summarise. Cut the teleportation, reduce the number of swords he can summon for now (he can get more as he gets stronger), cut the metal wings and just make him able to manipulate the summoned swords, cut the 'real' aspect of the swords and make them just aura, and keep in mind that he won't be able to dual wield with the katana when it is extended to full length.