Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-27447621-20171126213624

I'll give you feedback, but for future reference, we do have a template up top. Please use it in the future.

Sinjoh wrote: I'd thought I'd get some feedback on some characters I'm creating. The team name is AGAT (from the gemstone agate). So far, I've got one character finished, with the rest closed to finished.==Core Info== Emblems are only one color and negative space. You can make the wisps negative space or something, but just use one color.
 * Emblem: A purple mountain peak with three white wind wisps.

Appearance
BMI's Normal, and the features all look fine.
 * Physical appearance: Aki is considerably a tall, standing at 6' (1.82m), and weighing about 140lbs (63.5kg). She has pale white skin, a heart-shaped face, deep blue eyes and has straight chin-length black hair. For formal events, Aki wears her hair in bun hairstyle.

What color Orchid? I Googled "orchid" and got at least three different colors of flower; white, pink and purple. Everything else looks fine for the outfit.
 * Outfit: Aki's everyday outfit consists of an orchid colored t-shirt...

Characteristics
I think what you mean to say here is that the grandmother persuaded the Father and Aunt to let them go to Beacon? I mean, persuading the kids to go to Beacon is fine, but they still need tuition money and transportation, which would come from the caregivers, right?
 * Background: Aki is a sixth generation Huntress from Yamayuri in Mistral. One of her ancestors founded the village, and used her abilities to defend the village from Grimm, thus cementing the Ishiyama family as powerful and prestigious in Yamayuri. From an early age, Aki, her brother, Kohaku, and cousin, Manami, were homeschooled both for their academics and their Huntsmen training... Despite her father and aunt's protests about tradition, Aki's grandmother was able to persuade her children to attend Beacon Academy.

Weapon
Looks fine. How long have these weapons been passed around? I feel like a hollow metal pipe (collapsible + hollow Dust Ports on the end) may have seen some damage after a few generations, but that's a small nitpick.
 * Name: Kaze Denryu and Kiryu
 * Classification: Short ranged/melee bo staff and long ranged tessen fans
 * Description: Kaze Denryu is a collapsible iron bo staff used for short range and melee style combat. Kaze Denryu has Dust ports on both ends of the staff to allow them to expel it at opponents. Kiryu is a foldable iron tessen fan, typically thrown at the opponent from a distance. The blades of the fan can be tipped with Dust, though Earth and Ice Dust make Kiryu more of a blunt weapon. The two weapons can be combined to allow the user to have a short range bladed weapon, though this prevents someone from using the Dust ports while in this form. Both weapons are heirlooms of the Ishiyama family, passed down officially to the oldest child once they are 18, and are primarily used in conjunction with the family Semblance.

Semblance
What's the range of the wind bursts? How far and how fast can she control the winds? Also, we have the problem present with all Elemental Semblances; Anyone can do the exact same thing as this Semblance with Wind Dust. It's fine, but it's not recommended to have an elemental Semblance.
 * Name: Aerokinesis
 * Description: Allows the user to manipulate air.
 * Activation cue: Movements from either the hand or Kaze Denryu and Kiryu. (For example if Aki moves her hand or weapon towards from left to right, a gust will also come follow that direction.)
 * Reflection of personality: Despite her Semblance being hereditary, it reflects Aki's versatility, being a balance of brain and brawn in battle.

And there you have it. Again, Template's up at the top if you could use it.