Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20151027072937/@comment-23702983-20151030074124

@Seum Dwa21: Your ability sounds like a combination of Pain's Universal Pull/Universal Push from Naruto, and Yang's from RWBY. I like the idea a lot, it just seems like the cooldown is a bit too short. Pain's ability could deflect any attack he wished, but even it had a longer cooldown than that.

@Spirited: I don't know how to shorten the description without leaving out necessary information that may/may not leave readers with no clue as to what the ability actually does. I'll leave it up to you which two sentences to pick out from the description. I trust your judgement. If you need me to add/remove anything, just let me know.

Also, I edited my last post quite a bit because I didn't want to double-post. Go check it out. I explained where I got the idea for Standstill from!