Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160721222431/@comment-27447621-20160724134638

Kirito Rose wrote: Kinda like, make it someone from an offsceen story, or an alternate future, or just straight up a Maiden we havn't met yet. Such as, the Spring Maiden, as an example.

PS. I have to go to bed now.

PPS. Please look over the charcter I posted above us. (Leathan Addams(guy in a red coat) I would advise against it, personally, and here's one reason why. Making OCs is cool because there are so many different ways you can go with a single OC. But seeing as Amber and Cinder showed similar powers, and the fact that the powers of the Maidens are designed to be passed down as they are, the powers of, for example, the Winter Maiden are the same or, at the very least, incredibly similar across all Winter Maidens. Seeing as we have no idea what the powers of any other Maidens are (save obvious assumptions like "the Summer Maiden can manipulate Fire"), if you did make a Maiden, the particular powers they would have and the extent of those powers would be subject to change. I just don't think we know enough. I suppose you could make a Maiden, but I would say let that topic be for now, until we know a bit more.

Regarding your character, It looks pretty good overall, but with what's there, I have a small issue with his weapon.

As I learned when working on Sawyer Tann, my Leatherface OC, Rotary Saws and buzz saws are cool ideas as weapons, but they have a drawback- if they hit something they don't cut through (Armor, another weapon, etc.), they're likely to bounce off wildly. It's still workable to use those weapons, but they can be dangerous and a tad unpredictable. As long as you're OK with that, you should be ok, though. Also, what's the middle of the thing made of; wood, steel, or something else?

I don't see much else wrong with the character so far, though.