Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20160113034906/@comment-26397825-20160114015826

Okay then. Thanks for clearing that up.

Honestly, I'm not so sure how much help we can be on here, since you want to keep certain parts of the story a secret until they get revealed in-story, but in order for us to actually give you proper feedback we need to know the circustances around his character, otherwise it makes no sense to us and we point it out.

I mean, he seems like he's a perfect fit for your story, which none of us have any real knowledge about beyond the overview you have given us. I personally would love to help you, but it's hard when your story does rely on a lot of new info that you have created yourself and therefore I don't have any knowledge about. All I can say is that from what I've read, he fits the role you want him for in your story perfectly, even if I have a personal distaste of some of the ways you've gone about it.