Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170424154014/@comment-27447621-20170522040834

Thanks, man! Great to be back! I've just been way too busy in the past months. College gives you no free time, but with a year of it already under my belt I can probably find more time to drop by the treads.

As far as your character is concerned, I have a lot of points, but I'll only put a few in each post, because otherwise it'll be way too long. Here are my Three biggest concerns.



First off, more regarding Audrey's Semblance. This looks exaclty like a Maiden's ability; with the only potential differences being the Aura Cost and the level of control over the flames. Is there a difference I'm missing?

Second, "...once Audrey had reached Black Belt, they started training together". How old is she at this point? You say this is before she enters Mistral's version of Signal, which would (I assume) start schooling when the person is 14-ish (Ruby's 15 when she says she has 2 years left at Signal. I'm operating under the assumption it's a 4-year school, meaning they start schooling at age 14). It takes about 5 years to become a black belt- did she start when she was 9?

And third, as a branch off of that, the lower level combat schools are designed to train fighters before they enter the upper level academies. Audrey doesn't particularly need any training before going into Mistral's Lower-level school. And if she did, why did she graduate Mistral's lower-level combat training school 'with difficulty'?