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Winston is, overall, a good character. Averaging out his stats is a great way to show general skill as he studied for so long, but I would change around his technical skills a bit. If Winston's main weapon is a bow, he should have more points in mid-ranged that other weapon skills.

His personality is a little contradictory. How can you be both shy and the "strong-silent" type? I would reassess the character's personality. Based on his backstory, he began more as a timid and skittish character. As he experienced losses and new frightening encounters, Winston's resolve to better himself increases. I may be wrong, but I see a golden character for growth. Personal growth in the protagonist moves a story. They never lose their flaws, but through trials a character can learn to cope with their issues. You have to decide where Winston is on the track of timid to "strong-silent." How have his experiences moved him to become better and build his resolve, or have they hindered him? The best advice I can give for OC building is to dive deep and make your hero you.