User blog comment:Goddess of Despair/RWBY User Battle Tournament Round 1:Shinu/Torrent vs Coroda Kage/@comment-24434281-20130301143421

I am confused about this part;

"He sees Torrent come into view. Smiling at his prey,"                                                       "Thanks for doing my job for me. He lifted Kage’s corpse"

It implies that he had both Torrent and Coroda as his "prey"                                                       Or is he smiling at Kage's appeareance in the next sentence?

And some of the spelling and your choices of words could use be better;                                 E.g. "He turned to leave whenever several rounds" The whenever doesnt make any sense when you look at the rest the rest of the sentence.

Other than those points, I enjoyed the fight scene! Rather eager to read the next story chapter.