Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160225194034/@comment-27963514-20160314172350

Gonna skip the critiques that have already been mentioned, but for the record I agree with Vedren, Shadow, and Cipher 100%. Moving on...

Black trench coat, black shirt, black jeans? And his name calls up the color red... I'm guessing this is because he took the red pill.

Red aura effect with blue wings and feathers? No offense, but that's eye rape. Red and green are complimentary colors, albeit kinda Christmasy. You could also consider a warmer color on the same side of the color wheel.

He's naturally a badass, and his semblance is to be badassier. His only weakness is unarmed combat, which you've made sure is never, ever, ever going to happen. I'm surprised he's not hiding a Paladin in his back pocket. Your Marty Sue is in desperate need of some nerfing.