Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-30159794-20161115081536/@comment-30159794-20161115233622

SpiritedDreaming wrote: Hmmmm. The rhyme that is in the verses seems more of an ABAC rhyme, which is unconventional. I'm not so sure such an unconventional rhyme fits Taiyang; he seems like a very down to earth, standard sort of guy. Well, I made it like that because the rhymes usually have a greater emotion impact on the listener as they get caught uo in teh rhythum and teh last line also has a big impact so Iwanted to have the greatest emotional impact.

That and I feel less constricted with that style. If it gets in teh way of the rewrite I have I can change it but look at the rewrite first.