User blog comment:Varzan Deodinm Beldinm/Volume 2: Will the Fan Feedback Pay Off?/@comment-89.101.114.87-20140702124104

My only fear for volume 2 is the writing. In volume 1 the writing is really lazy and they could have given it more consideration. I feel that some of the events that occurred in volume 1 made  absolutely no sense, for example, when team CRDL (minus cardin) got scared of an ursa and ran away yet they're attending a school where they're trained to fight monsters like the ursa and worse.

Also when Cardin was bullying Velvet team RWBY and JNPR were treating  like it was discrimination cause Velvet's a fanus. But it isn’t really discrimination towards the fanus cause Cardin also bullies Jaune and Jaune isn't a fanus.