Talk:Breach/@comment-74.98.36.98-20141031071442

Things that where missing 1. Scene highlighting how helpless regular people and even police are against the Grimm, with even the military just barley holding their own. 2. velvet saving Cardin's ass By creating a burning tornado by mixing different dusts from her box. 3. Team rwby fighting till there weapon's run out of dust and struggling onward. leading to 4. Yang deliberately taking damage to power up, going berserk and flaring up to the point that most of her hair is burnt away by her own energy. 5. Tiayang, in town to surprise his daughters, see the festival, and question them a bout a bill for damaged vending machines(best day ever), tearing through Grimm Like a Dynasty warriors character through nameless peasants(on easy) to reach his daughters. And carrying the whole team to safety, one under each arm one on each shoulder. 6. Someone demanding that Ironwood, the foreign general, explain how his weapons got into the hands of people attacking vale, although it could be argued that they just don't know about that yet. 7. Tiayang considering pulling Ruby and maybe Yang out of beacon for their own safety. In my version they'd be asleep in the infirmary during this. 8. I'd have had dr. oobleck Sacrifice himself to seal the tunnel, or at least seem to. 9. The team sets down and faces the facts that they've killed people, even if the fang troops survived falling off the train the grimm would have killed them. I also would have probably split this into 2 episodes. 1,3,4, and 9 are the important ones still great ep though.