Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25936766-20160701133235/@comment-25936766-20160714142147

Now, Ahpolki Inika's Ekaitz Lamont

-Basic Info: 15/15 Looking good so far, though I wonder why he got mortared. So, his name means basically Storm Cop?

-Appearance: 14/15 Holy damn he's tall. And yet his weight is average...pale white skin.....Slenderman? The outfit is good, but I can't stop thinking of japanese high school students everytime I read it.

-Backstory:14/20 (So he is Storm Cop...) I can't see how his interest in the way society has changed led to him becoming a politician. If he was interested in that, he would've chosen Sociology, which is the study of social behavior or society, including its origins, development, organization, networks, and institutions. His backstory also feels a little hollow. Like, what was his life before becoming Storm Cop, when kid?

-Personality: 8/10 His movement from a black-and-white view to a grey one makes sense, as it does his dislike of Faunus. Though his mistrust of Hunters, not so much, given that if he mistrusts them because "some are hired for despicable things", then he would mistrust anything, since that's not exclusive to Hunters. Not sure how the fall of Beacon would boost his mistrust on them either, since from the PoV of the world, Atlas included, they were invaded by Grimm and attacked by the Atlesian army, and while granted, preventing the former is their job, the latter was out of their control.

Although, you do say people think he's paranoid, so I won't mind it too much.

-Likes/Dislikes 0/0: Nothing too impressive, except for the "chaos, disorder" part, which is pretty redundant.

-Notable Relationships: 5/5 Like it overall. His mistrust of the SDC makes kind of sense. His doubts on the Atlesian soldiers a bit less but still. Though that's 3 "Unknown", I expected to see some more names.

-Weapon: 8/10 I don't know about you, but that weapon seems a bit too strong for a police officer. Especially for someone whose job asks that firing a gun at someone is the very last resort, since a shot nearly-anywhere can kill one way or another. Sure, freezing someone could be good to capture escaping criminals, but since it's still a bullet being fired, it would likely only make it more dangerous. It does make more sense for him to use it after he becomes a Politician however, given the dangers.

-Semblance: 8/10 You first say it makes tangible threads but later say it makes chains. Which one does it make? I'll assume chain since it's the most fitting and sensical, but still. I would like to know how they bind though. I mean, if you simply throw a chain, it's not going to bind anything. So I can't see how it could be used to bind people with objects, unless Ekaitz himself went there, beat them up, then binded them with it like in the Old West.

-Combat Info: 7/10 While I can see him as "Support", he sounds more precisely like a Ranger of sorts, without the animal/forest part. His fighting style seems more "aggressive" than what it's expected of cops, especially of one that plays by the rules.

-Civ Extension: Oh, so he did study some sociology. Still can't see how it all led to politics, but it's better than nothing. +2

Overall Points: 81