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This is the first original character I have so far.He may have many flaws so any constructive critique are welcome

1) Basic Info Name:Raytheon Clausewitz

CNR Explanation:Raytheon means Light from God in Greek,which is associated with silver and white.

Species: Human,but has a owl faunus mother.

Age:17 at "Red" trailer

Gender:Male

Emblem:He thinks that an emblem is unnecessary for him

Handedness:Right

Nicknames:Ray

Occupation:Student

2) Appearance: Aura Color:Grey-blue

Height:179cm

Weight:62kg

Eyes:Steel Grey?

Skin Color:pale

Face Shape:Square

Hair:Steel grey and short

Physical Traits: None

Physique:Slightly silm

Outfit: Raytheon usually wears a steel-grey hooded coat with several pockets and long sleeve and a silver-grey longer trousers.Beneath the coat is a white T-shirt.In combat,Raytheon wears an additional layer of ceramic body armor under the coat to protect himself from threat.

He hates fancy clothing,so he designed a set of plain outfit for himself

Accessories:Protective goggle,Intelligent watch that displays aura capaticy Gadgets: He has a grey-blue backpack that contains a tool set for weapon maintainance,a radio for communicating in area not covered by CCTS signal,misc items and backup parts for his weapons 3) Characteristics: Background:Even with constant threat of grimm,politics is still bloody and cold.The Clausewitzs was a family of politicans and strategists of Solitas once.Several days before Atlas replacing Mantle via a coup,A part of the Clausewitzs ran to Vale as political refugee because they opposed Atlas Academy being overpowered and respects Vale's enterprise culture.The Valeran government accepted them as talented immigrants and granted them right of abode.After the coup,the Clausewitzs left in Solitas were purged and executed as political crimes.So the Clausewitzs developed a common disgust toward Atlas and unshakeable loyalty toward Vale.Even migrated to Vale,The Clausewitzs still pays lots of attention to politics and strategy,but this time,military and huntsman-ship is added because they have to defend themselves and Vale against tynnarical and imperialistic Atlas.

Raytheon was born in Crescent Port,a growing center of R&D,education and advanced techology of Vale.His father,Tungsten Clausewitz,is an retired huntsman and an advisor of a think tank associated with Navy of Vale.(In my concept,Vale's geography-no land strategic depth,lack of plains-and its bitter history forces it to develop naval power,especially navy.Vale also have voyage tradition due to geography-City of Vale is much too simliar with Genoa and Nova Roma)His mother,Niobe Clausewitz-Rhine,is an engineer of an important industry enterprise of Vale.

Ever since he was a child,Raytheon was influenced by Tungsten's idea on politics and the idea that peace can only be ensured by balance of force and common interest.Being raised by a family related to military techology,Raytheon soon grew fond of weapons and techology,and discovered his talents on math and engineering.His parents taught him rational thinking and patriotism,also the importance of co-exist with faunus.

As Raytheon grew up,he became an owlish person that keep devoting himself in books,which made him social awakard.His interest on weapons grew stronger,especially on firearms,so he started experimenting on weapons under Tungsten's supervision.He soon learnt how to use and maintain firearms from relevant books and became a fan of weapons.

When he was 11,Grimms laid siege to all satelite cities of Crescent Port,blocking all of its land transportations.Strategos of Crescent Port mobilized milita and Hunters in Crescent Port to lift the siege.Navy of Vale also participated.Having witnessed the combined strenth of huntsman and military,Raytheon started doing research on huntsman and aura with Tungsten's help.Soon he came with a conclusion:Vale needs huntsmans' power to protect itself,but Vale should not rely on huntsman.Out of patriotism,he started considering to be a huntsman and told his idea to his parents.After a long discussion with parents,Raytheon decided to become a huntsman and fight for Vale's safety and stability of world.Then,Tungsten sent Raytheon to Navigator Academy,a combat academy located on several retired warships that still have voyage ability and has close cooperation with Navy of Vale

During his time in Navigator Academy,Raytheon actived his aura and semblance and studied on both thoroughly.He designed his primary weapon-Nova-and being know as a talent on weaponary in Navigator Academy at that time.He learnt more about huntsman,then started thinking that huntsman is an important power for national security and world stability but it has its own flaws-unorganized and lack of mechaism of supervision.In his opinion,only combine huntsman and military,but not forcing them merge together like Atlas can the national security be ensured and world stability be maintained.He researched on latest military doctrine and infused them into his combat style

After graduating from Navigator,Raytheon is ready to attend Beacon and become a huntsman with both capability and spirit.

Personality:Raytheon is a highly intelligent and rational person,being able to analyze things quickly and figure out a possible solution.Emotions can never cloud his judgement and decision because of his rationality.He has a truly vast domain of knowledge on politics and military compared to his even-aged persons thank to Tungsten.Raytheon is also very good at reasoning,can quickly discover logical flaws in others' words,so it is very hard to cheat or manipulate him.He has a strong sense of patriotism and disgust toward Atlas.However,Raytheon's sheer intelligence and rationality may harm others because he is somehow lack of emotions.

Misc Traits: Quote:"Only balance and common interest can ensure peace.Huntsman only contributes a portion"

Likes:Weapons,Math,Strategic games,History,Science,Faunus,Vale,Rational person,Calm person,Erudite person

Dislikes:Atlas,SDC,Emotional person,Hyperactive person,Fairly tales,Legends,Fancy clothing, 4) Trivia Notable Relationships:Tungsten Clausewitz:Raytheon's father Niobe Clausewitz-Rhine:Raytheon's mother Steel Clausewitz:Raytheon's uncle

Skills:Weapon designing,mathmatics,reasoning and mapping.

Allusion:Raytheon has two allusions.One is Ferrus Manus,Primarch of Iron Hands Legion from 《Warhammer 40K》.Another is represented by his last name,Clausewitz.

Notes:Raytheon is also named after a military enterprise of USA,representing his talent on engineering and weaponary Hunter Extension

A) Weapon Name:Nova Classification:High Energy Laser Spear(HELS) Short Description:A laser weapon system that can switch between two forms:a laser marksman rifle and a light machine gun-like laser gun.A hard-light projector that projects a hard-light spear is integrated into handguard.It is able to access to further upgrades easily because it has ports to access modules. B) Semblance Name:Refraction

Short Description:Bend light nearby him

Activation Cue:Misplaced and disoriented visions Reflection of Personality: C) Combat Info

Preferred Range: Long

Landing Strategy:Quickly scan the surroundings then select a clean zone to land with aura as buffer.After landing he immediately get stealthed and leave the landing spot.

Fighting Style: Raytheon prefers long-range battle and acrobatic combat.He usually uses Nova as a solution for ranged precision firepower,even sniping.When fighting Grimms,Raytheon can take down their critical parts quickly to disable them,then destroy them with hard-light spear. Optional Statistics: @) Physical Statistics

Strength: 2

Speed:3

Agility: 4

Stamina: 3

&) Aural Statistics

Aura Reserve: 3

Aura Manipulation:2

Semblance Manipulation:4

Dust Manipulation:1

$) Technical Statistics

Dust use: 2

Weapon Skill (Primary): 5

Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 1

Weapon Skill (Close Combat):2

Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 3

Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 5

Total:41