Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27425734-20160421183829/@comment-25936766-20160601002624

So, I got this idea thanks to Big Order. On paper, it sounds OP, even if I try to limit it. It would be rejected on sight in the relevant thread, so at least the proto-version will be posted here. My objective is to make this thing...not OP.

-Name: King's Word.

-Type: Psychic

-Purpose: Utility

-Description: The user can create and sustain a field around them with their Aura. Every living, conscious, organic thing within the field can be given orders by the user, which they will carry against their will, fully conscious of their actions meanwhile.

-Activation Cue: The user's eyes glow and (not particularly fast) spear-headed tentacles of the color of their Aura appear from their back and fly towards the targets. The ground within the field shines purple. Affected targets have a white cross in their eyes.

-Range: Medium-to-Long.

-General limitations: 1-Orders must be delivered vocally or written, and the target must receive it and understand it.

2-Can't order someone to do something it cannot do, otherwise it will do nothing.

3-People with Aura can resist the orders. Strong-enough Auras can reject them.

4-Grimm are inmune.

5-The orders have limited duration. For the most part, until the target carries out the order. Otherwise, it may last minutes, hours, or even days, depending on how strong the target and their Aura are. If the target wanted to do what they were ordered to, it lasts longer.

6-User must be aware of the target.

7-Aura cost gradually increases as the field does.

8-Tentacles can be cut and destroyed before they reach the target.

9-The user cannot directly control or alter their targets's bodies, only issue orders. So no Heart Attacks galore, no injuries can be directly inflicted, targets can't grow limbs, and so on.

10-Hard-enough hits to the user, from any source, and the field dissapears. Any order that had not been carried out yet will vanish as well. "Hard" in this case being either too painful or applying too much force.

11-Cannot order someone to kill themselves directly.

12-If someone somehow breaks free from the order, they can't be re-ordered for 10 minutes.

-Active ability: Tier Two: The user gains the capability to control or otherwise influence thoughts and emotions of affected targets, becoming less People Puppets and more Mind Control. Like with normal orders, Aura can provide resistance or even nullify this.

-Dust interaction: None.

-Notes: For a megalomaniac, or a very goddamn ambitious and entitled person.

Unlike the power it is based on, this does not allow one to bend the laws of physics and reality to their will. No gravity or air manipulation, to mention some examples.