User blog comment:Phantomlink959/My OC's (team GMBR/gambler)/@comment-25555436-20141127023433/@comment-25555436-20141127032215

Well, "Varzan's rebels" sound better. To be honest, that whole war gave me an idea for a story. Of course, with some stuff edited.

"Queen Lizzie of Fanonia. A sharp-tongued, cat-loving, but stubborn woman. She came with her troops to Logicka, and with a surprise attack, conquered it. Though she mostly leaved it to rule itself, and when she decided to do something it was mostly useless or unhelpful to Logicka.

One day, she found out about a certain incident that had occured a few weeks ago. Apparently, some of her soldiers were killed somehow. Although the incident had already been forgotten, and the bodies already buried, Queen Lizzie decided for some reason to bring it up again. This reignited the flame, but it was only the beginning, of the rebellion.

A man amongst the crowd, knight Varzan Deodunm Beldinm, stepped to the front, his eyes meeting the Queen's, and spoke his thoughts on the matter, mainly against what Lizzie was doing at that moment. The Queen however, simply dismissed his accusations, and antagonized him, and since Varzan was infamous for his rude attitude towards others before that day, many sided with the Queen, even those who disliked her attempt to bring back an already-dead subject.

Others, however, knew better, and sided with Varzan against the Queen. And so, the flame of rebellion was ignited. Although it began with small conflicts in a small area of Logicka, it eventually escalated into full-out war, with some innocents caught between both sides.

In the end, Varzan and the Queen fought again in the battlefield. Varzan had the upper hand, having more skill and experience with combat than Lizzie. However, he soon found himself betrayed by a former comrade, Lauren Darkmore, who turned out to be a spy of the Queen. Varzan died...but not yet. He spent 1 week in the abyss of hell, fighting his way out with nail and teeth, and eventually returned to the land of the living.

Once he returned, he decided to put an end to the war once and for all. He traveled across the nation as he made his way towards Lizzie's Castle. In every city and town, he spread his word, causing more and more people to join his cause. With this new army, he was able to defeat Queen Lizzie and end the war.

Queen Lizzie was exiled, and no one in Logicka heard about her again. Varzan regained his knighthood, and Lauren, while he still kept his status, lost a lot of respect from the people of Logicka"

So...how was it?