Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20170131064348/@comment-27082610-20170221023005

Alright, first up is Spirit with Merla Sevan.

1)Basic Info- Everything looks to be in order. 10 points.

2) Appearance- Not seeing any real problems, although I was a bit confused as to why there's so much red here when she's named after a blackbird. Are you talking about redwings or something? I like that coat. 20 points.

3)Characteristics- Background is good, personality and family history seems to fit in with her allusion. 30 points.

4)Trivia- 5 points.

5) Weapon- 13 points. I like the idea, and it certainly would be usable in a variety of fights, but I can't see how she could use them as skates in most situations.

6) Semblance- 13 points. Solid connection to personality, but I'm not really sure as to how the dodges work. Is it a teleportation thing or does their Aura contort their body out of the way?

7) Combat Info- 4 points. I still don't understand how Dust can be expelled quickly enough for ice tracks to formahead of the user if they're not just holding their feet completely still the entire time they're moving.

Total: '''95 Points. '''A solid start to the competition.