Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-209421-20150223034730

Zinox, I wouldn't say he's narrow minded at all. The problem is that the story foundation, when broken down to the extent you did, comes across cliched. For example, Yang running away in guilt after being involved in somebody dying or an attack? Been done already. Referring to the event in the initial summary as "that day", likewise.

Now, back to working on Perchance while I wait for DayZ to download onto my new hard drive.