Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25396609-20150326233105

from what I can tell (based on the backtory for your characters) you try to force them to fit together, you need to let them be a bit more organic, more natural. the characters you have bult are decent enugh, but they honestly don't fit together well, and trying to force them to work is a good way to waste potential.