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I did look at it more than once, actually. I just didn't think I had enough feedback yet to comment and put off a more thorough reading.

Not much to offer, but I'll offer it now to fill the void: I remember being confused about an intro of her coming home followed by her leaving home. Then I figured that was on purpose and I'd just missed the point in my first scan.