Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20171116191014/@comment-27447621-20171129041613

So. Sorry if I missed something that explains some of these points away, I'm just really tired.

This guy doesn't have a Backstory? I get that you want him to have a more mysterious feel, but I think he needs something. The main purpose of this thread is to refine and polish characters, so it would help if we knew what happened to them. If you want him to be mysterious in his own team, or in a story or whatever, then give him a backstory and just don't reveal it.

Except for the second and third sentence on his personality, this guy comes off to me as edgy. At 19, when faced with an opponent, he would "Gladly kill [them]". Now, if this just applied to Grimm, there wouldn't really be a need for that trait as it's the job of Huntsmen and Huntresses to kill Grimm. That makes me think this extends to people. This coming from a "Very friendly guy". So we've either got a Sociopath on our hands here and he's just good at masking his murderous intent or we've got a severe case of Disassociative Personality Disorder. I'm fine with a complex character, but this big of a disparity, swinging between a guy you want to get to know and a guy who wants to murder you is cause for alarm. And we have no reason for this murderous streak because we know nothing about the character.

And if this murderous tendancy has worked its way into his overall personality it doesn't seem to be a one-time deal, so how did they let this guy continue training to become a powerful warrior?

''Notice: I'm sorry for the assumptions I made, but I did the best I could with what you gave me. I have no context for any of these things.''