Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160317004723/@comment-27447621-20160329153135

OK, I'm just going to put each of the Ideas I have so far for Hesperia Chrysos's Semblance, and I'm putting explanations as to why I thought this would work before each idea, ok? To avoid a post that's insanely long, I'm only going to put one, my personal favorite of the two, into the template. If anyone wants me to fix it, I will.

Beware, this is a long post...

 -Name: Enter the Garden

 -User(s): Hesperia Chrysos

 -Type: Conjuration/Physical/Aural

 -Purpose: Utility

 -Short description: The user creates a field that empowers her team and weakens enemies

 -Activation Cue: Eyes turn Sunset Gold, and a miasma of the same color surrounds her. Landscape becomes picturesque, colors becoming more vivid, cool winds blow, etc.

 -Range: Medium to Long

 -General limitations: Field is stationary, and enough damage at the center of the field (represented by a single tree bearing Golden Apples (illusion)) will dispell the field.

 -Active ability: Tier One: The user creates a field 20 yards in diameter. While in this field, Hesperia and her team feel invigorated, tire more slowly, are slightly faster, and require less Aura to use their Semblances.

 -Active ability: Tier Two: The field grows to 40 yards diameter, the center of the illusion can take more damage without dispelling the illusion, field's enhancing effect increases

 -Notes: (The user is based on the Hesperides, and the semblance is based on Tōsen's Bankai from Bleach, Bell Bug Closing Ceremony; Final Cricket (or Cricket Final Form; Devil Cricket, depending on who you ask) )





 And here's my second idea. I personally like this one a lot better, because it seems more balanced. Sorry for the two-in-one, but I didn't want anyone interrupting me on accident...





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<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Name: Seed of Discord

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -User(s): Hesperia Chrysos

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Type: Psychic(enhances/adds/alters mental capabilities with aura)

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Purpose: Utility

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Short description: The user makes one or more enemies attack the rest.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Activation Cue: User's eyes flash, first gold, then black, and a golden miasma surrounds the affected target

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Range: Short to mid-range

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -General limitations: The stronger the bonds between the target and the ones they're turning against, the harder it is to change them. the closer the target is, the stronger the effect.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Passive ability: the user is a charismatic person; easy to trust and easy to like

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Active ability: Tier One: The user can turn opponents against their allies. Grimm are easiest; in tier one she's able to turn up to 1 Alpha, 5 mid-to-large, or 15 small Grimm (Small as in the itty bitty nevermores Blake found in Mountain Glen) against the rest of the group with moderate effort. People are tougher to convert; strong-willed people or people with strong bonds will be hesitant about attacking their friends, and require more Aura to have the same effect. anyone who distrusts their companions, is jealous of them, etc is easier.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;"> -Active ability: Tier Two: The user is able to completely turn up to one person, up to 2 Alphas, up to 7 midsized Grimm, and as many as 25 small Grimm.

<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;margin-bottom:0px!important;"> -Notes: (This Semblance is based on the story of the Apple of Discord; Eris inscribed a Golden Apple with the words "For the most Beautiful", and gave it to Paris to decide who to give it to, Hera, Aphrodite, or Athena.  Hera promised power, Athena promised wisdom, Aphrodite promised him the most beautiful woman in the world.  He chose Aphrodite, and basically started the Trojan War because of it.)

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<p style="font-weight:normal;font-size:14px;line-height:22px;margin-bottom:0px!important;"> CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY PLEASE! THANKS IN ADVANCE.