Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25266931-20161112032800/@comment-28345522-20161113181847

If people don't understand or are too impatient to interpret what you're saying, it's detrimental to the arguement.

About Ruby, she's only like for the initiation arc and when Weiss gets pissy about not being leader. After she pretty much fits in besides being a lil' immature.

Valid points, but we're here to talk about your works. We're talking about stories in general that do or don't follow the Hero's Journey formula. Yourself isn't helpful because we don't know where your works are and you have a certain bias to them. It's a lot more useful to use examples that more wider and/or can quickly talk about what made them good or bad.

My question to you is: Does a work automatically detract its quality/worth if it does take time to for a hero to hesitate? Do yo believe all main protags should be mature adults who should always act heroic? Do you believe stories should be focused on the plot instead of the character? Because that's what I'm getting from you. And honestly that little sounds like it gets dull pretty quick.