Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-70.164.251.83-20180411173532/@comment-25936766-20180411204944

1) For starters, I would show actual fights. Not a small tease that is cut off after 3 seconds and is over by the time we return.

The fights don't need to be spectacular, they just need to be at least at Yang vs Bandits level.

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2) I would not send everyone off into a series of 1v1s. It's supposed to be a fight between heroes and villains, a freaking Teamfight.

Everyone should be trying to help each other, like Emerald and Mercury attacking Yang together and Jaune blocking the hit. Stuff like that.

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3) Regardless of whether we went with Teamfight or 1v1s, I would enforce the addition of some explosions and shots flying in the background, along with a decent amount of noise.

The room is not that big, and everyone is supposed to be fighting, and having stray shots and such in the background helps present the idea that they're all fighting at the same time.

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4) When Yang runs off to the elevator, and Emerald and Merc try to stop her, I'd have Emerald actually trying to throw her chain-sickle at Yang to catch her like she did with Ruby. Then, either Yang avoids it, someone else blocks it, or someone attacks Emerald outright to prevent her from doing it.

That way, Yang still gets to the elevator to face her mother, and Emerald still fails to catch her, but does so in a way that does not make her look like a total imbecile forced to be a total imbecile by the incompetent writers of this show.

5) I would have Cinder pay more attention to Ruby. She literally went with that plan just to take a shot at Ruby, so it's unbelievable that she spent the entire fight without even looking at her, instead focusing on Jaune and for a moment on Weiss.

It doesn't need to be an outright Ruby vs Cinder fight, even the ocasional "look at Ruby and attack her from range, then go back to Jaune" would've been fine.

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6) With the White Fang, I would have them putting more of a fight. They were fighting freaking peasants, who had never even wanted to fight before, and couldn't have been trained for more than a week.

Of course, the WF would still lose; it's a bunch against an army. But at least show them actually KOing some of the Menagerians, or show a bunch of KOd Menagerians in the aftermath.

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7) With Raven vs Cinder, I would remove everything involving Vernal giving a last shot at Cinder. She had already been killed, and even if she wasn't back then there's the fact that giant rocks fell all over the floor, and Vernal was too injured to even stand up.

Raven would still win, but it would be in a different way, much more believable. Speaking of which, I would also have her throw an actual Iceball at Cinder to freeze her, instead of just flashing her hand and Cinder already freezes out of nowhere.

And during the fight, when Raven is being choked by Cinder's arm, have her attack it to break free. Maybe cut it, maybe electrocute it, whatever, as long as it was at Cinder's Grimm arm. We got a big break from the fight to point out that it isn't protected by Aura, yet it never led to anything, which is disgusting since that's one of the basic rules of writing.

8) Change Yang's reaction to seeing Blake during the fight. That derp-face she makes ruins the tension.

9) Have Merc, Emerald or Hazel try to attack RWY while they're distracted by Blake.

10) Show an actual fight between Adam, Blake and/or Sun. Not having him KOd with his ass pointing to the sky after a simple hit in the back that he should've been totally capable of blocking or avoiding given his performance in the Black Trailer.