Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24573226-20160623204034/@comment-25936766-20160830225716

85.73.99.227 wrote:

1-His aura is locked. '''And he isn't able to unlock it. '''

2-So when he is enrolled into signal.... Reporters capitalize on the news without having all the info, leading many to falsely believe he has no aura.

3- In caboose's case, doesnt he and Oobleck share the same voice actor? Thats mainly the reason why I suggested it.

4-me being unsure if I can develop 4 OC's withought making them stus/sues.

5-Would it be gary stueish/Mary sueish fo an OC to be a duck faunus? '''They are a rare species because they were hunted due to a false belief that they were like actual ducks. I think that isn't too much.'''

6-ps: Having RvB cameos mostly in name only isnt that bad in a fanfic right? First of all, don't quote the entire post when the resulting post is going to be huge.

1-That sounds like bullshit, not only Gary Stuish since it makes your OC literally more than special, truly unique in all of Remnant, but also because there's nothing to suggest such a thing would be possible, for it to be impossible for one's Aura to be unlocked.

2-First, if he's literally incapable of unlocking his Aura, what the hell is he doing trying to be a Hunter? Jaune at least had the excuse of not even knowing about Aura to begin with. This guy does know about it.

And yet he still tries, and no one stops him, even though he's never going to be strong enough to use a true RWBY weapon, he will never be able to do all the crazy shit and maneuvers everyone does, he cannot use Dust or Semblance and even the weakest Grimm can tear him apart in a single blow.

Second, reporters suddenly appearing and making "that Auraless boy" appear all over the news, makes him feel Marty Stuish. Not to mention, how could they even find out about that in the first place?

3-Not really a good justification.

4-There's always the OC Thread for you to post them so others can (normally) tell you what they think it's bad (and rarely what they think it's good -_-).

5-Making a Duck Faunus is not Gary Stuish at all, it's perfectly fine. Now, making Duck Faunus a rare "species" because they were hunted due to the belief they were like ACTUAL ducks, that's not just stupid, that's downright retarded since anyone with brains can tell they are completely different from actual ducks. It depends heavily on most people in Remnant being Hyper-Retarded Literally-Senseless Cannibals.

6-It is when it doesn't fit, which for the greater most part, is the case, or when it feels forced, like it was done for the sake of doing it. Caboose doesn't fit CNR in any way, so you would need to at least make it a nickname, or give him a first name that actually does, and then there's still the latter problem, which is starting to feel like it is the case: You're adding a "Caboose OC" just for the heck of it, without purpose or need.