Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-25555436-20150327015015

 §   Name: Odysseus Travers

Notes: The character really isn’t based on anything nor did I derive him from any big inspiration. -Riiiiiiight. The name is just for show, not inspired at all from Odysseus from greek mythology, not at all. Speaking of his name, how does it fit the CNR?

-Why does each section of that template begin with a Sporebuck?

-You know, with weaknesses that big for using his Semblance, he may as well not have any, would be more practical. How can you "lead" your clones if with just 5 you already are unable to think or even stand straight? Plus, how can he lead those 30 clones he can potentially make, if he would die once making the 30th one? What happens to the clones when he dies?

-If his gauntlet is designed to be a defensive weapon, it may as well be a buckler or shield instead of a gauntlet. Same use, but much more effective and bigger and can have just as much potential as a weapon. Besides, only an idiot would make a gauntlet as just a defensive weapon.

-Background history up to the "found by a hunstman" part, is not the most awesome thing I've heard...but I guess it's more on the way you told it. However, his background story doesn't really explain why would he hate hunters. And who the fuck would give a man part of a group(s) like that, with a personality and background like that, the chance of joining one of the most prestigious Hunter schools in Vale? Seriously.

-His personality and character development-idea you have for him, is not the most original idea I've seen to be honest. It sounds rather...meh, actually.