Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-30159794-20161115081536/@comment-30159794-20161115233911

Here's my rewrite.



''Sleep tight, my precious treasures Everything will be alright I will bear any pain and any blow so you will never know my plight''



''Since the day you entered my life Things have never been the same When faced with fight or flight I shall stand and fight with my flame!''



Look at what you have done for me

Letting me wake with such glee

I could never put into words

The joy that has occured



''How could I ever say- Thank you.''



For so long I did grieve

wallowing in sorrow and misery

We were all so happy

but life was never a fantasy

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">But even with all of this

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">You grew up before my eyes

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">So I cannot wallow anymore

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Lest you face my demise.

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Though I could not always stand

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Stricken down by life's cruel hand

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">You were there, giving strength

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">And love always at arm's length

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">''How could I ever say- Thank you.''

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Now you've both grown so much

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Beyond even my wildest dreams

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">And though I must say goodbye

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">I know you two will make the best team!

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">But just know one last thing

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">before you leave me behind

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Should you ever fall far away

<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Know you will always shine!

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">''How can I possibly, (Never in my life!) ever put into words, (How proud I am of you!) and say what you have done for me (Giving me strength!) just by being here?''

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">''How could I ever say- What you have given me?''

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">''How could I say- Where you have lead me?''

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">''How could I say- For everything''

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<p align="CENTER" style="font-weight: normal; widows: 132">Thank you.