Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20151101000002/@comment-24993958-20151108194831

Talking about bad parents is never a fun deal, but in the realm of fiction every character, good or bad, needs to be flesh out enough to help the reader, as in me, immerse themselves with the setting. Compare and contrast what you did with what ahpolki did. Each of you had one good and one bad character respectively that was pivotal to your submissions development as a character, but neither of you detailed those pivotal characters so I couldn't properly immerse myself with either submission.

Instead of feeling mad or sad, I’m just confused, and although confusion can be good, that isn’t what you were trying to evoke from me.



