User blog:Darkcloud1111/Good Idea, Bad Idea~Mountain Glenn



So I didn't make one of these last week because I didn't find anything particularly wrong with it. If I had any complaints it would be that the Grimm are still not treated with respect, as they managed to destroy a city but 4 Hunters in training seem to be doing well. That completely grey backdrop when Blake first takes on her Grimm, but that is minor. Everything else I liked, but that was last week and this is this week, so lets get started.

Good Idea
Establishing character motivation.

Bad Idea
Taking their sweet time about it.

Reasoning
So this isn't a complaint, so much as time management. At the end of the last episode, despite the various answers WBY gave to Oobleck, they explain to each other that it was only part of the answer and we learn the full answers in this episode. However I feel like this scene would have been much better at the end of the last episode or just have this conversation and remove the other. Putting it here just seemed to take up a lot of time. However we do learn more about Ironwood which is nice.

Good Idea
Going into more detail about the failure of Mountain Glenn.

Bad Idea
How does this timeline make any sense.

Reasoning
So this could just be me, but I feel like the underground city doesn't fly. Oobleck explains that people looked for shelter in the larger tunnels to hide from Grimm, but if they are trying to build a shelter, what is with the huge apartment sized buildings? How long did this evacuation process take that they could build an entire city inside caves? Even more confusing, why didn't the subterranean Grimm need an invitation to invade?