Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25229725-20150128010644/@comment-25555436-20150205160939

Madninja324 wrote: Yes Gem's sword is based off of Sasuke from Naruto, it's the same kind of sword he uses and creates basically the same type of flames Sasuke can produce with his Sharingan, and is named after those flames, admittedly it was a lazy call, but I'm not too worried about it, nothing else about the character is based on anything but my imagination Alright, personal dissapointment aside, let me ask you this: what would cause those Black Flames, in Remnant? And don't even think of saying "Black Dust", because a) it wouldn't necesarily mean "just" black flames, and b) There's no single evidence in Canon nor by RT that such a thing exists.

Now, regarding your OC team...

Lloyd Desmond

-What color does that name allude to? Color Naming Rules, they exist, use them dammit.

-Can he move on his own in "ash form" or would he get pushed by the wind against his will and he would have to use that to his advantage?

-How would a shotgun turn into a katana?

Indigo Aoi

-Well, weren't you creative with that name.

-Wears dresses, makeup, is upbeat and positive, the life of the team, and it's just kinda girly? What do you consider full girly then?

-So her Semblance is do be able to do, what anyone with some Ice Dust can do as proven by Cinder: Create and fire blue cristals, only difference being hers are tougher... Well at least it will be more economic this way.

Tenji Li

-No expert in japanese, so mind telling me what color does that name allude to?

-So he's calm but becomes a Blood Knight when the battle begins? These kids just keep getting weirder...

-Ok, what the heck is his Semblance, that wasn't clear. Does he increase the force-on-impact granted by the momentum when he touches something? Does he increase the force received by the object? Is it just moving things easier?

Kali Merle

-All I know about that name is that Kali is some goddess from Hindu lore. Explain the Color Naming (again).

-NOPE, NOPE, NOPE! Seeing 3 seconds into the future? That's OP, add some flaws goddammit. Why? Because think about it: She sees 3 seconds, sees the attack, evades, then sees the next 3 seconds, evades, the next 3, evades, the next 3, evades, repeat. Again: ADD FLAWS!

-Why not just a pair of guns with the knives attached? Like some guns do in Real Life and fiction.