Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160319212213/@comment-25479664-20160328175801

WC-83 wrote: Wait, Deleted, isn't your detective the same as the one you posted? The first one on the thread? Did you change it at all? Yeah, I changed some stuff. Mostly simple stuff, but I consised it a bit, and made the backstory more clear. I also added the poker games between the former teammates, thought it might seem like a cool idea. I dunno, but I'm loving the criticism. Shame your OC got left in the dust a bit though