Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25555436-20150320010432/@comment-26018514-20150323024204

Madninja324 wrote:

Species: Half Faunus, mother was a dog Faunus who married a human, he has no outward Faunus features, but he does have night vision, and has been told by some full Faunas that he constantly smells like dog

Traits: one blue eye one brown eye

Other: a scar around his blue eye from the implantation surgery

Eyes: Right eye is brown, left eye is blue and an artificial construct designed to replace his left eye which he lost as a child when some bullying went too far

my problem with this are:

1. another body implant... these characters all have aura, why must all of your OC's have body parts missing?

2. different colored eyes, this wouldn't be a problem for a dog-faunus ancestry... but one eye is fake... and you want him to blend in... so why?

3. does this eye do anything? it might be a good place to store dust

Madninja324 wrote:

Semblance: Evaluation, He can assess angles and distances down to less than a centimeter in one glance, this is always active

Weapons: Izanagi, a ninjato heavily infused with lightning Dust,

Rampage, a gauntlet that can sprout three six inch metal claws, and has a built in shuriken launcher above the claws' slots

he always has at least five, and up to two dozen kunai stashed on his person at all times, even while asleep

explosive tags made from Dust unfused paper, several of all the common Dust types (Fire, water, wind, earth, ice, lightning)

He also sports a one hundred foot coil of high tensile wire, which, while he rarely uses it as a weapon in its own right, he does use it in conjunction with his other weapons, shuriken and kunai especially for various tasks, such as slowing falls or tying people up from a distance seems like too many weapons...

otherwise this he seems OK.