Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-25396609-20150429221533

Give me a bit to do a better analysis.

if nobody minds, I'm going to do some refining on Vadasz, I really can't help but feel like he needs more love.

Basic info: 2) Appearance: 3) Characteristics: 4) Combat info: 5) Trivia:
 * Name:Vadasz(assumed identity) Callum Abate ('real' name)
 * Team/occupation:bounty hunter/mercenary
 * Species:Human
 * Age:41
 * Sex:Male
 * Handedness:left(trained ambidextrous)
 * Aura/Effects:silvery green, ripples
 * Symbol: tuning fork with a snake wrapped around the handle
 * Physical traits:left eye has been surgically removed and replaced with an eye taken from a reptilian faunus. other parts of his body have been replaced or augmented as well, but not as visibly
 * Misc traits:heavily scarred, with a specific example being the scars around his right eye from the implantation surgery.
 * Nickname(s):The rogue hunter, silver snake, body snatcher
 * Height:6'2"
 * Weight:190
 * Eyes:left eye is yellow but fairly ordinary ordinary, while his right eye is red, snake-like, and bloodshot
 * Face:very regal if not for the scarring and specific unnerving quality it contains.
 * Hair:short, prematurely grey
 * Physique:highly athletic, ideal balance for strength and speed
 * Combat Outfit:armored leather boots, jeans reinforced with steel plates, banded mail cuirass with full arm coverings
 * Casual Outfit:business suit
 * Personality:Permanently pissed at the world, but he will put on a 'nice' face when negotiating contracts(not that he's fooling anyone) has a particular fondness for the creatures of grimm, in spite of the fact that they try to kill him (as they do with any human) and is known in the underworld as the only person to successfully keep a live Grimm in captivity, a Taijitu that is kept chained up in his base of operations.
 * Background:Vadasz grew up in Mistral being trained as a hunter, he was doing well, and at the top of his class, however he had one primary rival; A girl who had shown him up during initiation, knocking him off course during team assignment and landing him with the weakest fighters in the school. One day, during sparring class he was put up against her, and he decided to take the opportunity to eliminate an enemy by faking a weapons misfire at the end of the match, lodging a high caliber bullet near the other students heart and almost killing her. He was kicked out of Haven as a result, and the girls father, a member of the kingdoms council, had him evicted from Mistral, placing him on a ship to Menagerie where he could live with the other "animals".
 * It was during his brief time stranded in Menagerie that Vadasz took his first job as an assassin, he was hired by the fledgling white fang to kill an SDC supervisor who was mistreating the workers at a dust mine. when the faunus who hired him refused to pay, he attacked, killing the man but suffering permanent damage to his left eye, he cut out one of the faunus' eyes as payment and had it implanted by a back alley surgeon. he then took over the dust mine himself, continuing deliveries and normal operations to avoid suspicion while converting one of the fully expended shafts into a base of operations for future assassination work.
 * He keeps a live King Taijitu locked up as a guard dog to prevent the few rebellious workers from stealing weapons from his collection. In direct contrast to his normally sadistic nature, he treats the workers in his "acquired" quarry fairly well, keeping them loyal being his best option for remaining unnoticed. in order to keep his pet Grimm alive, he feeds it clients who refuse to pay and any of the surprisingly rare workers who turn on him.
 * In spite of his apparently violent nature, he has never taken a life without reason, and only kills when he is contracted to do so, when a customer fails to pay, or to settle personal vendettas. Vadasz has an extreme hatred of the white fang, as the several jobs they have hired him for ended with him not being paid, those were early in his career, however, and they now now better than to approach him.
 * Position/Class:sniper, assassin
 * Landing strategy:he isn't allowed to fly due to an incident involving a member of Vale's ruling council.
 * Weapon:
 * Mk-V Eviscerator
 * Mk-V Sliver
 * Mk-II shadow
 * various other weapons, most of which were taken as trophies.
 * Semblance: Hammerspace, allows him to convert any inorganic object into energy and seal it into a glyph. when a glyph fades after a few hours from lack of energy, all items inside will be expelled, in order to prevent this from happening, he keeps a permanent glyph on the palm of his right hand
 * Fighting style:Highly variable, he prefers to use his rifle, sword or pistol,but can and will use any number of other tools and styles
 * Relationships(hit list): Has not yet encountered any other characters(speculation and character POV follows)
 * Ozpin:My mark, I don't know who hired me, which is normal. this is my highest profile job to date.
 * Brenner:A nuisance, I'd heard about him during my time at Haven, but never expected to meet him in my current line of work
 * Garen:A surprisingly competent foe, the boy is unusually perceptive, even for an animal. that sword of his will make an excellent addition to my collection.
 * Stein:That beast could be a problem, Ozpin trusted him far too readily, almost as if he knows something I don't...
 * Solace:The fool tried to recruit me for his little scheme, if he's as smart as he thinks he is, then he should have known I don't play well with others.
 * Weiss(possible target, depends on what direction I take the story.):That little brat is proving surprisingly difficult to reach, someone is clearly protecting the girl but I have yet to figure out who.
 * Notes: his assumed name is hungarian, meaning hunter, while his real name Callum(white dove) Abate(priest) is a secret he keeps to himself, since a few highly influential entities know him by that name and want him dead.
 * his nickanme Silver Snake refers to the rumors regarding his interest the grimm, and his supposedly keeping one alive in captivity, a supposedly impossible feat, while the nickname body snatcher is based on his rather disturbing habit of harvesting body parts from customers who refuse to pay their contracts, nobody is really sure what he does with them, although his left eye is the biggest hint.