User blog comment:IcePrincess22/Thoughts on the 1st episode?/@comment-72.92.232.192-20130720093909

I enjoyed it, and I don't want to say the cliched. So instead I'll say what I disliked.

At times Ruby's voice gets slighty out of place, starts to sound different and I feel as if maybe the audio is strange. The goons voices could be improved on but are pretty good for kids from the Make A Wish Foundation. Also the old man was a bad animation, voice okay.

The animation could be worked on a bit. At times it's awkward and things don't move right and are awkward. A prime example is when Ruby is eating the cookies and Roman Torchwicks' cigar (cigarette?). The cookies was odd and movements odd. Her mouth barely moved and the arms oddly placed. The lack of crumbs made it slightly worse. I feel it'd have been better having her eat them throughout the conversation, bite by bite and then boom. Plate empty.

Roman's cigar was out of place and moved odd. It didn't move with his mouth and when squished you could see how the cigar was going over his weapon and made for a very awkward shot.

The VA matching the mouths could be worked on.

Also sometimes the characters are unintelligible and it's looking out to be slightly cliched.

I swear if someone says, but remember, it's the first episode. I'll punch my little brother in the face and drop kick a kitten.