Thread:Sorairo/@comment-4123264-20140522233730

Before doing anything else, I figured the fruit of my labors this whole time would be a good start. Yes, I didn't edit the lyrics I was working with to fit yours, but when I showed this to fellow RWBoYs and JNPRs, they said the FIRST version before adding a last verse should be as short as possible. On the upside, there's finally a last verse. Some of the ones before that are changed a bit, but it's mainly the same.

Italics are epic echoing vocals, bold are those extra comments rappers make in the middle of songs, & the last bit is just some extra crap for laughs.

(Red like roses fills my dreams and brings me to the place your rest...)

Here's Ruby Rose, thorns a'prickling with her giant gun-scythe, Chopping down on shadow monsters, going out to slice and dice! Pull the child's hood down, raise the crimson cloak up, And let Little Red Ride these beasts 'til they scream like wolf cubs! It's nothing compared to the bruises she gives these poor thugs Who go and rob Dust shops 'cause their mommies never gave 'em hugs. Sympathy's for later, it's time for some destruction; Let loose a Huntress-in-training's bloody evolution! Disrupting the crime, now chase Roman and his flaming b*tch, Saved from his boomstick by the magic of Glynda Goodwitch And Headmaster Ozpin's like, "With all the bad guys you've beaten, "How'd you like to skip some years and head on over to Beacon?"

(The board is set, the players are ready...) It's time to give them a test of death-defying already. With these young warriors and their silver-eyed newbie, We've got all the girls to represent our one Team RWBY! (Rawr!) (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Don't be shy; make some friends and say hello! (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Just don't mess with the best; our heroine and her fellows!

(White is cold and always yearning, burdened by a royal test...)

Here's Weiss Schnee; she's white, see, and all kinds of icy, She'll sing of a mirror when a giant rises up to cleave Her body in two, but she won't have that today, Give her a scar? You just signed your death warrant - now come and meet your fate. Despite her Dust blade powers, she's not prone to being very nice, Anyone tripping on her bags will pay one heck of a price! A spoiled little heiress to a rich daddy with a dark side. Gives out remarks that're snide - her bark is worse than her bite! Smug with her own smarts, but she never would've dreamed She'd see eye-to-eye with Ruby and end up becoming a team. Now she's forced to befriend her, and inside the whole plan is wrecked! This Snow Angel tries to be the best, but she's far from perfect.

(The board is set, the players are ready...) It's time to give them a test of death-defying already. With these young warriors and their silver-eyed newbie, We've got all the girls to represent our one Team RWBY! (What!) (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Don't be shy; make some friends and say hello! (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Just don't mess with the best; our heroine and her fellows!

(Black the beast descends from shadows...)

Here's Blake Belladonna, the beauty fauna among the flora, Wielding a sword that pistol-whips like a weaponized plethora! Leaping on trains, fighting bots along her part-time partner, Adam. Their synced strikes against the system makes spiders sentries scream "Ah, damn!" But she leaves the beastly guy to go and live her normal life At a new school where her silent stares are sharper than a steak knife. Despite all her distance, Ruby's oh-so-willing to persist, 'Til they bond over books and how they get Weiss pissed. She slays grizzly Grimm from shadows like a ninja of love, Then they find the temple relics as Ruby drops in from above. Bow all for twitching, but her concentration is totally focused, 'Cause now we're gearing for a fight - girls, get locked and loaded!

(The board is set, the players are ready...) It's time to give them a test of death-defying already. With these young warriors and their silver-eyed newbie, We've got all the girls to represent our one Team RWBY! (Boom!) (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Don't be shy; make some friends and say hello! (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Just don't mess with the best; our heroine and her fellows!

(Yellow beauty burns gold...)

Here's Yang Xiao Long, she's the yellow girl on fire, Everdeen, step aside, because her flames are even brighter Than the techno-holo lights and the flash of enemy swords; Why, the club owner's club gets busted by her burning force! Now she and her sibling are heading off to learn some real moves Like how to fly over treetops and choose a pony without hooves. She approves the plan to move out with their clan rather than pan The giant bird and its stingy friend there with the just back of her hand! But her fists give the winged menace a blazing bite to eat, It crashes and is trapped while she helps launch Ruby at the beast. Staring at her ascent, she can't help but feel so much pride At her baby sister rising higher until she ends this Nevermore's life!

(The board is set, the players are ready...) It's time to give them a test of death-defying already. With these young warriors and their silver-eyed newbie, We've got all the girls to represent our one Team RWBY! (Yeah!) (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Don't be shy; make some friends and say hello! (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Just don't mess with the best; our heroine and her fellows!

(Victory is in a simple soul...)

Here's RWBY formed with JNPR under the rule of Jaune Arc, But this sneaky leader's blackmailed by the bullies of CRDL! Still, he stands his ground by slicing off this giant bear's head For the sake of his friends Nora, Pyrrha, and even Lie Ren. Then Vystal Festival riff-raff makes Weiss angry at the gang 'Til Blake reveals her cat ears and ties to the White Fang! With wild Sun to her left, a lucky Penny to the right, A case of clearing names turns into the greatest fight of their lives! Amid explosions and nunchuks and lasers galore, Weiss becomes a teammate the Faunus could've only hope for. Many battles still remain, shadows will step out from the past. "QUEEN HAS PAWNS", Uncle Qrow? Well, we've got our main cast!

(The board is set, the players are ready...) It's time to fight in the war against the monsters already. With these young warriors and their silver-eyed newbie, We've got all the girls to represent our one Team RWBY! (Sing!) (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Don't be shy; make some friends and say hello! (RED, WHITE, BLACK, YELLOW...) Just don't mess with the best; our heroine and her fellows! (One more time!) (YELLOW, BLACK, WHITE, RED...) A darkness is coming; they'll have to fight these new threats. (YELLOW, BLACK, WHITE, RED...) But that'll come in Volume 2 - until then, keep calm and eat cookies, my friends!

'''Haha! Finally done! Finished this thing just in time, too! Shout out to [EVERYONE INVOLVED], and especially Monty Oum, the Williams family, and all the c*ckbites at Rooster Teeth. You guys rock, seriously! Here's to the future of RWBY, dear listeners! Hey. think this'll get put up on Twitter? Fingers crossed!'''

Now onto the apologies. Yes, I know my absence was inconvenient (not the best word, but the only one I can think of right now), but besides my Internet connection which was only fixed a few weeks ago, I needed time for college & couldn't focus on anything besides that. Turns out it was for naught, but it's the thought & effort that counts, right?

If you're still interested in working on this project before Vol. 2 drops & you can forgive me for not contacting anyone for months, I'm willing to apologize by a sign of trust that will make any further communication easier on both of us: My email address. No more rambling threads of message walls, though I will ask that you delete it from your wall as soon as you get it down. If you'd like to be a partner on this again, it's the least I can do to show I'm sorry.

Assuming you're pissed off like anyone would be, though, I can try to find someone else in the community to work with & hope they're as collaborative as you.

Also warning: If I can't find someone who can rap on my end to sample how I'd like the words sung, I'll have to do it myself. I am so, so sorry if that's the case, but at least I'll be putting an actual beat to it once I master these, so it might not be as ear-grating as last time. 