Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160429075004/@comment-24993958-20160515200059

Next up we have ThatOneGuyFromNISLTsCommentSection with Neigel Marshall. Overall that nets SpmeoneThatIUsedToKnow 82 points.
 * Basic Info (9 points) Minus one point for not doing anything with the misk trait, like removing it so i wouldn’t notice it’s empty.
 * Appearance (24 points) CNR is nicely tied, like the fact he actually has a casual outfit, and the military awards are a nice touch that talk about the character.
 * Characteristics (24 points) Ow...do me a solid and try to use the enter key more often. Ok your biggest problem here is potentially canon discontinuity. Beacon obviously doesn’t use a team of 4+ medic and engineer system, and we have little reason to believe the other 4 academies would do something this different. Also the last part could have used expanding cause i had to reread it several times to figure out who the half a dozen named characters that popped up where and who was whose kid;
 * Trivia - (4 points) Still trying to figure out why Mundy isn’t helping haiden so minus one there;
 * Weapon - (6 points) On paper it sounds cool but again, you risk canon discontinuity as we don’t know if an aura regen gun is a thing (they make a big deal out of transferrin aura from one person to another after all). Personally i have an easier time accepting semblances that boost other people's aura rather than a device that shoots aura with the blood type 0.
 * Semblance (6 points) Yeah kind of like this thing.
 * Combat Info (4 points) just because he doesn’t fight doesn’t mean you should leave the fighting style open. Just give some general descriptors on how he tails combat able tanks like the tf2 medic.
 * Civilian extension (5 points) Props for not going overboard on the degrees.