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Ok, I thought of uploading this guy to Fanon just to see their reactions, but first I need to see you guys's opinions about him.

Name: Sayten Cielo

Male, 42 years old, Human. Right handed. Yellow eyes.

Outfit: Whatever clothes are closest to him when he's going to get dressed, not counting clothes that don't fit him nor woman clothes.

Landing Strategy: Stab his katana on the closest tree or wall to slow down his fall or even stop it.

Fighting Style: Unleash a flurry of slashes with his Katana, then some quick shots with his Dust-Powered Pistol. Defensively, evade and counter if possible.

Semblance: Accuse. He points his finger at the target, then his Aura becomes a "thread" that quickly travels towards the target, until reaching their chest or back, at which point it "enters" it and reaches the heart. Once that happens, Sayten accuses the target of doing X, and the target will carry it out.

-He can only accuse 1 person at a time.

-While accusing someone, he loses all benefits granted by Aura.

-Duration of the accusation depends on the distance between him and the target, and his current amount of Aura when accusing someone. Minimun is 2 seconds, max is 14 seconds.

-Max range is 30m at 100% Aura, and decreases if his current amount of Aura decreases. At minimun/1%, it's range is of 0.2m.

-Can't accuse someone of doing something to themselves directly (as in, can't tell them to shoot themselves in the head, but can tell them to walk off a cliff). Also can't accuse them of doing something they don't know how to do (like tell someone to drive a car when they don't know how to in the slightest) or can't (like tell a guy with no hands or feet to shoot a gun).

-Effects of the accusation on the target fade away inmediately once the duration ends. The thread dissapears and must be formed again, and must reach the target again.

-Beings with Aura can resist the accusation, to a point. If they are strong enough to fight it completely, they can cut the thread, which leaves Sayten slightly disoriented for 2 seconds.

-Doesn't work on Grimm, beings with no soul or mind, nor inorganic creatures like robots (so Penny's safe).

(Alternative names include Temptation and God's Law).

Backstory: He was born into an Atlasian family of Detective Hunters. His family got the same training as Hunters, but didn't use it to fight Grimm, but to effectively catch criminals and "less-monstrous" beings. They made sure however, that their existence stayed secret. So, he worked as a professor at one of the Hunter Schools in Atlas.

Sayten never liked the Faunus, never trusted them. He always made his opinions about them be known to the other members of the family, but they didn't pay attention to him. He eventually got tired of this, and as such decided to take one of the cases to prove he was right. A dangerous one...apparently, there was a murder, a horrible murder. Victim was a young human female. No one saw the killer, nor the victim before they were found, no witnesses, no concrete evidence....but there was something: A feather. A White Feather.

The "crime scene" was in horrible shape, like if something came and simply destroyed it. He knew this could mean that this case, could be his last. He investigated, and finally, apparently, found the killer, and the 2 fought. However, the fight didn't last, and the killer caused a small "Dust-accident". The killer escaped, while Sayten barely survived. As a result of the accident, his skin became pale-blue, his eyes yellow, and he became extremely paranoid and more-or-less insane. His lungs also got damaged somewhat, giving him respiratory problems.

The Cielo family sent him to an Asylum, and recovered his sword and pistol. While he could be calmed down, nothing at the moment was capable of "healing" his mind. However, this wasn't the end. He knew this would likely happen, and as such he beforehand sent a coded message to one of his students: Rayoh Light. He deciphered the code, and found out through the letter that his professor was gone.

It was then that Rayoh decided what to do: Become a Detective Hunter. He trained and polished his skills, and developed a fighting style based on Sayten's, and later his own Semblance. He decided to help the people, and bring justice to whoever deserves it, if necesary hard justice. But most importantly, he wants to find and kill the killer that Sayten Cielo was looking for.

Aaaaand I just realized I made a superhero.