Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-3965075-20170602225213/@comment-27144409-20170623225805

PisceanWaterbender wrote: I've gotten back from work, eaten, showered, done laundry, vacuumed, helped my mom get out the door, and apologised for mispeaking. Time to start as the community appointed judge.

1: Oh, I have a soft spot for this name. The SR-71 is a favorite of mine. Waiter doesn't make sense given how busy even 1st years are If you had said they worked in say, the school cafeteria, I might have let that slide, but I'm going to dock a point there. I've made characters that entered an academy late, so that's fine. 9

2: Quite dark outfit. I would lose the negligible grey stripes or make them bigger, and make the tie silver to better distinguish from Junior's crew. 16, 10 if there's no good reason why he's wearing fine clothes and a silver watch.

3: Antisocial people are so targeted for bullying. -2 Orphanages funding years of combat school seems unlikely, but they do it consistently, so only -1. A 15 year old waiter makes enough to pay for four years of attending a Huntsman Academy in two-three years of work? Nope. -3 points. 24

4: Not a bad song. Nothing wrong here. 5

A: Form 2 should be listed under features. 13

B: Boring, but useful for the character. 12

C: Nothing wrong. 5

I: Inconsintent tense on the waiter position. The whole training to be a Huntsmman thing doesn't belong in this section. No points

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