Talk:Blake Belladonna/@comment-36530241-20190605005049/@comment-5430952-20190610073315

@Skull King Sug

Erm, I just finished your planned rewrite, and I am finding a couple of serious logic flaws in your scenario.

"Blake was left as an orphan on the streets."

Somehow I severely doubt it. If Blake's parents were murdered by human extremists than Sienna would've taken her in and striven to avenge Ghira and Kali, since their deaths would clearly galvanize the WF's efforts as a whole. The old High Leader and his wife, murdered by humans? Oh Sienna would be out for blood in that case. Not to mention Blake and possibly Ilia as well, the latter know what it's like to lose her family. So Blake wouldn't even think of becoming a Huntress at that point, she'd be all on board for bringing down the vile human oligarchy, Adam wouldn't need to do a thing.

"Adam was the High Leader all along."

No, just no. Sienna clearly stated she would never serve him, so her agreeing to be his decoy is a no go from the very start. If anything, he would be her decoy if things got heated enough, I daresay you're giving him far more credit than he deserves.

These were the major ones, minor ones ahead:

Not to mention why would Velvet abandon her team just to help Blake? She's not as carefree as Sun, she's more likely to stand by strong people for safety, like Coco or Yatsuhashi, she wouldn't drop everything for Blake's sake.

Along with completely screwing up Yang's story after V3C11. If she doesn't get sidelined by Adam then she never learns to control her temper and thus is destined for an even worse downfall later on, one she might not survive because she never learned to overcome her faults.

As well as changing WF HQ to Menagerie instead of Mistral for... what exactly? Sorry, but I can't really take this seriously because it requires too much suspension of disbelief for my tastes.