Thread:Maki Kuronami/@comment-26518737-20180706124629/@comment-10380701-20180706132445

Admittedly "unconfirmed" is a pretty strong word. While there's a few good points on your paragraph, there's a few that you're unsure of, and those are the unconfirmed parts.

" Her personality somewhat mirrors personality of her immediate superior, suggesting long history. "

I don't see it. Salem and Cinder have few similarities with each other.

" She appears cultured and refined, but have very few (if any) social ties and a very caustic and ruthless personality, prone to displays of dominance and gloating."

the middle part is arguable, since she does have connections with Salem's crew.

" This might be attributed to insecurities coming from background."

This one is speculative since we don't know enough about Cinder to say that's true.

Overall if you rewrite your paragraph a bit it might work so feel free to repost it once you trim out the unconfirmed part.