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I've already posted this character, but I've made a massive amount of edits and I need advice from the masters(aka, everyone that's not me)

Here we go again... My character, again. I think I finished editing it. Might make some minor changes if you guys want me too.

1)Basic info -Name: Auburn Drachen

-CNR explanation: Drachen means dragon in German. Most people tend to imagine dragons as red. Auburn is a dark red color.

-Species: Komodo dragon Faunus

-Age: 17

-Gender: male

-Symbol: red silhouette of a dragon head

-Handedness: ambidextrous right dominate

-Physical traits: short claws, sharp elfin ears, mini horns hidden under hair, a short reptilian tail, a single intense scar near his left eye, many faint scars on his chest, tends to have burn marks from his semblance

-Misc traits: "I have a swearing habit. It's f-cking annoy-aaaaaand I did it again..." Has a massive vocal range. Always carries a torn black scarf. Would wear anything with a dragon on it, or is red

-Nicknames: Flame brain, sweetie

-Occupation: Huntsman in training

2)Appearance

-Aura Color: dark red/auburn (eh? Eh? Get it? His name is auburn, and his aura color is auburn?...nobody? I should stop making excuses for jokes? Ok fine jeez...)

-Aura Effects: temperature of surroundings heats up, faint scales appear on face and body

-Height: 5'9"

-Weight: 167 lbs

-Eyes: silver, blood red when past Tier Three

-Skin color: light tan

-Face: ovate, slightly angular

-Hair: dark red

-Physique: skinny, but lightly muscled

-(Type of) Outfit: Combat: red-dyed leather plates on shoulders, and on knees, elbows, and other important areas. Black-red cloth is underneath. The leather covers most of his body with the cloth to keep him comfy. A belt with pouches that contain a few dust crystals, and other necessities is worn. And his signature scarf tightly around his neck with the ends behind him. Casual: a red, short-sleeved tee-shirt with a black and grey jacket with orange highlights on top. Black sweat pants with a dragon pattern on the left leg are worn. The scarf is worn with the ends dangling loosely in front of him. Usually listens to music with his headphones while walking.

-Gadgets (if any): scarf is infused with fire dust and used to enhance his semblance

3)Characteristics

-Background: Auburn grew up in Patch but moved to Vale when he was 8, although during summer he would go back to Patch. This was when he met Diamond Oro, who would become his bestie over time. He was a quiet kid who payed attention to other things but mostly focused on himself and his small group of friends. He did this because he didn't want to attract the attention of more bullies. He was bullied because he was a Faunus. But his friends, real and imaginary helped him. As time went on he became obsessed with dragons and wanted to be one. He read fantasy stories for kids older than himself and easily understood everything that was written. Sometimes he would pretend to be the hero defeating the bad guys with his sword. This led him to sword-fighting. He and Diamond would go into his backyard with their practice swords and duke it out. This was when they developed their unique fighting styles. Over time, both of them wanted to be like the heroes in the books and save the world, so they went to Signal Academy to train to be Huntsmen together and that is when Auburn met the most important person of his life. Fawn Wyn. Soon, they became friends and helped each other through school. At the time, Fawn was dating Gray Braun. But an accident happened and they broke up. Auburn's feelings for Fawn grew without his knowledge until when he made his sword and had accidentally engraved her name on the hilt. Now his reason to be a Huntsman had changed. Now he wanted to protect people from harm, not be a hero from a book. After he confessed to Fawn, they started dating and helped each other through their respective problems. When they graduated from Signal, they held a party with all their close friends. But at the end of the party, everyone forced Fawn and Auburn to kiss and then...well let's just say that they did a lot more than just kissing that night. When they went to Beacon they met back up and during the initiation, ended up as partners. When the teams were chosen, they were in team AFDL (Daffodil) and Auburn was the leader. (For the stuff coming up, it involves his family and things he didn't know about until after "The End of the Beginning" when he refound some members of his family) Long before the Kingdoms, in the northwest of Remnant, on the archipelago shaped like a dragon, many clans of Faunus lived. The Faunus were of all types, but the ruling clan were reptilians. In that clan, the first and only Dragon Faunus to ever exist, was born. She had large horns, mini wings, a large tail, and scales all over her body. She was the maiden of Summer for a long period of time. She had a tendency to use fire as a weapon and could cut Grimm with her flames. Although she was a great warrior, she was very peaceful and caring. Her children got a small portion of her powers in the form of a hereditary semblance. Pyrokinesis. Eventually they migrated to the different kingdoms as defending the area against Grimm became harder and harder. Thousands of years later, Auburn (one of her descendants) was born.

-Personality: most people saw Auburn was crazy, unpredictable, and chaotic. Although this was true, once you got to know him, he was passionate, kind, caring, and only partially insane. I mean, the voices in his head didn't tell to to do too much crazy stuff. Before meeting Fawn, Auburn had started falling into a pit of insanity. He became more unpredictable and lashed out at people. But after a while of being with Fawn, she helped him learn to control his emotions and insanity. When it came to romantic things, Auburn was good at them, he was just shy. Yeah. The guy who had a habit of swearing in a casual conversation and beat his friends up with a sword was shy. Over time as he became accustomed to having a girlfriend he became less shy. As a leader, he had ingenious plans that sounded stupid at the time they were spoken, but proved to be amazing. Most of the time he has help from Diamond for these plans

-Likes: dragons, swords, spicy food, candy, meat, Fawn

-Dislikes: cold things, bullies, idiots who don't realize that their idiots (that sounds like someone I know)

4) Trivia: tried to write a book...it had 10 chapters of background information...	made his first sword out of a wooden stick. It broke when he hit Diamond's head with it. Diamond got him back though. That's why he has a scar near his left eye.

-Notable relationships: Drachen family: Auburn was close with his brothers and made fun of his brother having a girlfriend even though he had one too. His parents let him do what he wanted as long as it was within reason. When they heard he wanted to be a Huntsman, they encouraged him.

Diamond Oro: his best friend when he was a kid. They acted like brothers and would tease each other when the opportunity arose. Diamond would call Auburn "Flame Brain" just to get on his nerves, but when they discovered his semblance, the nickname stuck. When they met they weren't anything special, but as time went on their personalities became weird, to say the least. Diamond became a sort of calculating person with a crazy side and weird interests. Literally an evil genius. Auburn became... Auburn. When Auburn became the leader of team AFDL, Diamond was surprised he wasn't leader, but happy for Auburn. They would work together to come up with their stupid crazy plans. That would always work.

Fawn Wyn: his first love and girlfriend. He was friends with her when she was with her first boyfriend, but a thing happened and they broke up. Eventually he realized his feelings for her and confessed after she had been pestering him to actually answer her question of "Do you like me?" Apparently she actually liked him back (a big surprise) so they got together. They started depended on each other. She was in depression before they started dating, and Auburn's inner voices were driving him crazier than usual. They needed each other. It was a unique relationship.

Lila Lafant: the last member of team AFDL. She was a good friend of everyone else in the team and the only other Faunus besides Auburn. Because of this, she tried to flirt with Auburn, but being the clueless idiot he is, didn't exactly realize what she was doing. He realized she was complimenting him, but that was it. Later that day, Fawn pinned her against the wall and threatened her. Lila was obedient from then on. She tended to be a semi-delinquent and needed help from Diamond to get any work done.

-Notes: partially based off of Natsu Dragneel from Fairy Tail, and my own personal life.

Hunter Extension

I) Weapons

-Name: Fulligin Ash

-Wielder: Auburn Drachen

-Maker/Smith: Auburn Drachen with help from Diamond Oro

-Type: Dust-Channeling Telescopic-Katana (DCTK)

-Derivation: Katana

-Holstered/Inactive Form: a simple katana guard with a more modern gunlike handle, complete with a trigger that can be pressed to extend blade. The blade is short like a dagger.

-Form 1: A silver katana that glows the color of the dust in it. Along the blade are multiple diagonal lines, which is where it collapses from. The hilt is more like a gun hilt than a katana grip, and the guard is a red color.

-Dust Capacity: fire, ice, lightning

-Usage: when used correctly, the blade dances around the battlefield switching hands and slashing Grimm while leaving a trail of fire. The unorthodox and unpredictable fighting style confuses most enemies making them easier targets. His Semblance is also heavily used in combat.

-Planned/Possible Upgrades: easier access to dust crystals

-Notes: Fulligin is a fictional color that is darker than black, and burned wood turns to ash

II) Semblance

Name: Combustion

-User(s): Auburn Drachen

-Type: Conversion

-Purpose: Offensive

-Short description: User can generate flames from any part of their body, but mainly hands, feet, and, occasionally, mouth for dragon breath. These flames can be controlled by thoughts, or for faster reactions, movements. Other flames that come into contact with aura will be subjected to the control. The user can choose what the flames will burn and what they won't. Ex: When Auburn lights Fulligin Ash on fire, the blade doesn't melt. Yes it does heat up, but not melt. Also, Combustion can be used to heat up an object to melting point without any flames.

-Visual effect: body part generating flame glows red-orange and bits of flame come off the aura. Dragon wings of fire and horns start to form past Tier Three.

-Range: Short, medium(fireballs and dragon breath)

-General limitations: the flames tend to go wild if the user isn't focusing, if the user faints the flames will go wild, then die out. Also, the flames injure the user when they use their semblance. This can cause blood loss, and fainting if overused.

-Passive ability(s): body is a higher temperature than a normal human or Faunus, flames don't hurt them as much as other people.

-Active ability: Tier One: The user lights a single body part, or something they are directly touching on fire. Enhances attacks by burning the opponent. No burns on user.

-Active ability: Tier Two: The flames become shaped and suppressed, enabling the ability to launch fireballs and enhance speed. 1st degree burns are inflicted on body part.

-Active ability: Tier Three: Combustion produced flames will now act as a blade burning/cutting through flesh, be it human or Grimm. 2nd degree burns.

(Highest is Tier Ten, but after 30 seconds of being active, all his aura would be gone and the flames would consume him. Has not used past Tier Three in combat, but knows that he could go farther and trains to be able to withstand Tier Four.)

-Dust interaction fire: enhances flame generation ability, bypasses the need to injure yourself. Other dust changes color and effect of fire. Ex: ice would turn the flames blue and cold

-Notes: idea comes from Fire Dragon Slayer Magic, but with my own twist on it. Also Fulligin Ash will not be damaged by the flames no matter the tier. (Combustion is a form of the hereditary semblance Pyrokinesis. It was used by the descendants of the Dragon Faunus until they left for the safety of the kingdoms. Over time, from it not being used for a thousand years, it finally revived itself in the form of Combustion.)

III) Combat Info

-Class/Position: attack

-Landing strategy: slow down descent with blasts of fire then grab onto a branch and drop down.

-Fighting Style: completely unpredictable and random. Mostly based on instinct, but takes a bit from many different styles of sword fighting. His fighting style involves tossing his sword from hand to hand in mid-swing confusing his opponents. The only person not confused to death by this is Diamond. Because he helped develop this insane excuse for a fighting style.

IV) Statistics

1) Physical Statistics

-Strength: 4 -Speed: 4 -Agility: 4 -Stamina: 3

2) Aural Statistics

-Aura Reserve: 5 -Aura Manipulation: 2 -Semblance Manipulation: 5 -Dust Manipulation: combining dust with semblance 1

3) Technical Statistics

-Dust use: dust infused clothing 3 -Weapon Skill (Primary): 5 -Weapon Skill (Unarmed): 4 -Weapon Skill (Close Combat): 5 -Weapon Skill (Mid Range Combat): 0 -Weapon Skill (Ranged Combat): 0