Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160721222431/@comment-24993958-20160822053402

Your main problem lies in the setup for the suicide. Aura has been described by Miles and Kerry like an HP bar, and a graduated hunter will naturally have a bigger health bar that ...for the sake of making a point I'll exagerate and go as far as to say bigger than 4 students combined. What I'm trying to say here is that any crash that would kill the graduated hunter, would kill the students instantly. I'd definately change that part so the crash kills one of his teammates.

Also minor gripe but that has got up there in terms of unimaginative semblances, particularly since I can think of at least 2 characters that can replicate it's functions by focusing, talking about Ren and Cinder here. I'd rather you expand on it if possible.