Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160425022934/@comment-27082610-20160427042647

Team name doesn't fit the CNR.

You don't need to put his hair color in the physical traits, it goes in the hair slot. Physical traits are for scars and tatoos and the like.

Why would his abusive parents pay to send him to an academy, especially one that would train him to fight?

The "negative 'aura'" bit makes no sense. Elaborate on this in the personality section or discard.

Drop the flames bit from the Semblance and I can live with it.

That's too many fighting styles for one 17 year-old student to use, and I'm fairly certain kendo and kenjutsu are the same thing.

Lastly, you don't need to put ".lvl" in front of his stats. Just put the numbers.