Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-24573226-20160623204034/@comment-85.72.245.203-20160624213856

Phantomlink959 wrote: 85.72.245.203 wrote: I actually am writing a story about an OC without an aura. Though the first 3 chapters are cringy at best, I hope to improve my writing. Anyways the story is called 'Auraless' to anyone interested.

The OC is Jaune's twin brother, which I based off Claus from the mother series if anyone has played it. Jaune reminded me of Lucas, so I decided they have a simular relationship, where they are very close, but the OC will be like Claus, more competive, daring and reckless, which combined with his lack of aura is deadly. He is also a weapons nut, like ruby.

Anyways. I will take what was said here very seriously, and I will give credit to you guys. Honestly this is my first RWBY story, and I hope I do good. Thank you everyone.

literally everything about that screams blatant gary stu. Ooops. Can't say I didn't try.