Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24534644-20160802001817/@comment-24534644-20160827233235

Alright, now the last two entries. The first is Phantomlink959 and his OC Kapree Corin.

Basic Info: 15/15. Oh snap, this chick's name is Corin? CALL THE HOSHIDO AND NOHR KINGDOMS, WE'VE FOUND THEIR HEIR.

Uneccesary Fire Emblem references aside, very nice name. Didn't even need to look at the basis to know what this chick is supposed to be referencing. Oldest entrant for the contest, easily, which is a nice change of pace. Also, I find it hilarious that she's a ibex faunus. Just... images of screaming goats fill my mind. Would have been amazing if that had been referenced somewhere, but ah well.

Appearance: 19/20. Everything looks good. Just about a perfect score, but a point was docked from the hair section because you told me the color, but not what style it's in (this is why the hair is worth 2 points for me). Everything else checks out though, and I like the outfits.

Characteristics: 26/30. Not sure what you meant by half-baked, I think that backstory works just fine. Basic, but when you're summarizing the life of a person with 34 years under their belt I don't expect in-depth details about every minor decision or a bunch of major events. I do like the acknowledgement of a counterproductive aspect of Huntsman life and how that affected the decision of her course in life. Her personality is nice, although aside from the responsibility and connection to her family, I don't see much of how it connects to the zodiac she's based on. I also find it a bit contradictory that she apparently likes traveling and meeting new people, but has resolved herself to staying in one place to keep helping the same people.

Trivia: 4/5. The relationship that's there is great, but a few more would have been nice; something in particular I was expecting to see but didn't was something involving her mother, seeing as both are apparently teachers. There was also nothing in th Notes section, which is fine, although putting some things there might have helped save points in other areas.

Weapon: 10/10. Ah, so she manipulates Dust and looks fabulous while doing so. Glorious. Her being a graduated Huntress extends what she can believably be capable of, so bring on the myriad of Dust types. (I'd also like to note: today I learned that the word "custodian" is apparently derived from the Latin word for "guardian". I don't know why I find this so hilarious. I just do.)

Semblance: 10/10. Now we're getting all Evangelion in this mofo. Well, sort of.... not really. I'm sure there's a type of force field-type thing that much more closely resembles this, but right now I'm just thinking of A.T. Fields. Primarily because this can also be used as an offensive tool. Sooo many possibilities with all those Dust types she carries around. Gold star.

Combat Info: 10/10. I will start by saying that the landing strategy is amazing. Screw free-falling, let's just casually walk down a set of magical soul-stairs in mid-air. Flawless, A+. THe rest of the info is explained well, and works well for her character. Nothing much else to note.

Overall Point Total: 94. More could have been done to make her resemble the zodiac she's supposed to be based on, and there were a couple issues with confusing information, but the character itself is very well done imo.