Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-28345522-20190331044750

It looks like you've got the meat and potatoes of the OC, everything else can be quickly filled out however you want. If you want specialized feedback on the semblance and weapon, post them on their respective threads.

I know some people will shy away from having main characters from the plot integral to an OC's life. I would cover his rise in the military in more detail. Also, what's this struggling country? There's only the four kingdoms and you don't specify if this is before or after the fall of Beacon.