Talk:Players and Pieces/@comment-58.7.165.71-20140529100421/@comment-58.7.165.71-20140603085410

If you want to know what a preacher is, then listen to every single person who thinks it okay to kill a guy just because he doesn't agree with you. Then add anything to do with religion and you get the people I hate the most out of everyone in the world. Worse than Hitler, worse than Osama Bin Ladin and certainly, worse than every single F*&ker who thinks that they can shoot anything just because a piece of paper says they can. But don't worry, thats a completely unrelated matter. I'm just cynical like that.

If you want to find out how they become hunters, then fine, tell us how they become hunters. Is there some sort of test or do they have to complete a certain amout of missions. A simple sentence explanation would be enough. But either work it into the plot or make it relavent to the already boring school plot, which hasn't done anything at all.

I really don't care about Jaune. Develope him, fine, but he's not so important that he deserve four episodes devoted to him. And the way his arc went, it was cliche and has been done to death in other anime. In short, it was boring.

It lacked action. I'm not saying I would want it every episode as it needs to give us some consistant narrative. But one thing you can't deny, lack of staff is no excuse for crappy writing. New hope set up for empire strikes back, which set up for return of the jedi, but each of those films had their own plot which transitioned into the next and a general direction they had to go in. The training of Luke skywalker did take up a far chunck of the second movie, but they had a plot going on that made up for it, a reason as to why it needed to be.

I'll make the comparison: Starwars: find princess, find obi-1, get a ship, get to the death star, rescue princess, get off death star, blow up death star.

blow up hoth base, go find yoda, train with yoda, others go to sky city, get trapped, luke goes to sky city, fights vader, is defeated. So on, so forth.

Rwby: go to a shop, beat some goons up, let bad guy get away, go to school, get initiated into school, team mates fight, team mates come back together in the end.

relevence to the plot. An entire movie with a plot Vs. another movie with barely any plot. Starwars: entertaining

rwby: boring. but it has nice music