Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20160319212213/@comment-26397825-20160327112211




 * Spirit winces because of colours.

Light red + cotton candy pink + maroon + sherbet orange? These are roughly the colours you are mixing, with no neutral colour to ground them. My suggestion is ditch the maroon on the scarf and make it a neutral colour like cream or white at the very least, because as it is it's the only dark colour and it sticks out like a sore thumb. (And these are images I pulled off Google Image search, from the first five pictures because not all of the results are what they say they are).

And...something about her niggles at me. I feel like she's just on the edge of suedom, probably because she's golden blonde with a button nose, round eyes and full lips, and has an hourglass figure, and she's the type who sees someone and instantly wants to be their friend and always gives people second chances because they can never do evil for evil reasons, there must be a reason behind it. She's incredibly kind to everyone, and can not hold a grudge at all ever. And she snuck away from her mum to pursue her own dreams, and most likely has been disowned but that doesn't bother her because she loves her parents and she wants to go back and apologise to her mother for sneaking away to follow her dream.

You see? It doesn't seem like much, but when you pile on the traits like that, the character starts straying into suedom simply because she has nothing you could actually call a negative trait.