Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160626203649/@comment-14138255-20160630222119

Kirito, that was so blatently Raiden from Metal Gear that I was poised to break my own nose from pinching it in annoyance. The fact that it's once again edgy is just a casualty at this point.

Not to mention a dark character fueled by rage and rebuilt after an accident is the most bog-standard of Shonen anime hero and completely boring and cliche as a result (with the exception of Guts from Berserk...and he has an excuse....).

At this stage, I think it'd be best you DON"T add part of yourself to characters. Also check the Mary Sue link at the top of the page to test your character.