Thread:SpiritedDreaming/@comment-24857712-20150927024310/@comment-26397825-20151010024023

Uh, no. If it's going to be a translucent copy of him, you can't make on part not translucent. I'm guessing his aura colour is red, which is why the construct is red? It can't make part of the construct a different colour, as the colour is not part of his aura.

And the permanent slasher smile is too sadistic glee for something that is meant to symbolise his anger and insticts. A serious scowl, or a default look of anger might work while he still hasn't dealt with his anger, but a slasher grin is out of character.