User blog comment:SomeoneYouUsedToKnow/SYUTK's V4E5 - Polystralia - Impressions/Recap/@comment-28288412-20161205152605

Starts with a decent introduction but earns a pity point for the heat wave suffering = +1

Mixing up the red, nice touch = +1

MGS reference = +1

Never noticed the captain (but possibly the First Mate), neat = +1

Another random Blake facial expression (there should be a tally) = +1

Name confusion joke = +1

I've considered the possibility that Menagerie wasn't meant in as a bad away as the Faunus there seem to see it (according to Blake) as well, them being gifted it due to it being one of the furthest places away from the kingdoms that's safe, it's distance being intended to benefit both humans and Faunus due to their less than friensly history.

That said, you phrased the troubled history as a reason for Faunus interpretation of the scenario, but not how it could relate to possible Kingdoms intent, leaving no given reason as to why you think the Kingdoms would give them such a distant land even if it was a paradise = 0

Lilo and Stitch reference = +1

Alexander's introduction = +2

Last image caption of section 2 = +1

Section 3 kinda meh = 0

0 for section 4 as well, the tanned faunus hide being balanced against the knives and orifices comment.

As for the conclusion, after Volume 3 I'm personally glad to be getting more talking and dialogue as opposed to a fuck ton of fights. But eh,that's just me.

On to the score, with everything together we have a total of 10 points! Pretty good, but I feel as though it was lacking something.