Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160225194034/@comment-27768007-20160229234602

HuntsmanRick wrote: Phantomlink959 wrote: Remove any and all references to canon student.characters, just to be safe.

His name is just "shade" really? That's about as emo as it gets.

I am getting strong self insert vibes, might be a false positive. Yeah...about those self insert vibes...I guess trying to make it more relatable made it more self inserty...ugh...at least the main reason for depression(bullying) is something everyone goes through...time for a new draft...again...f*ck

Anyway, I just don't think I can write a Bully or a girl with an unrequitted crush without going into wangsty/Mary Sue territory.

I will cut the Ruby thing...but Cardin being his bully stays period. And yes, I am kind of going for a slightly less emo-ish personality than what turned out, but this is only the SECOND DRAFT. I'm bouncing it off of this forum and making improvements. And the name was picked before there even was a backstory. I just felt like going for the color black and just randomly thought up shade.