Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26018514-20150401033018/@comment-25396609-20150405183507

Right, I stll need to do Thane, Robin, and Papilion. oh, sorry for the lack of accent marks when I type thigns, I can never rememberthe alt codes for special characters.

Thane Tefras

explain the name CNR,

nothing more to say other than what annon said already. not sure the purpose of the vocie commands when he could ust use a switch, dial, or some sort of aura control.

semblance is simple and effective, maybe explain what things look like when viewed through his semblance

background is meh but not terrible. lots of spelling errors. no specific advice

not bad for a Thanatos inspired character, they can be hard to pull off.

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Robin Sherwood

passable, but there is already a robin hood in the cannon characters.

not sure about his weapon, the explanation is a bit jittery feeling, at least that's the first word that comes to mind. how exactly do the dust arrows explode on a trigger when they are pure energy and do not have any sort of detonator/reciever device.

put undiscovered in semblance since his aura isn't unlocked, but he needs to have a semblance once it is unlocked.

landing strategy and fighting style are good.

personality doesn't seem to fit with Robin hood, but i've never acualy read the story so my knowledge of it is limited.

background is kind of weird and confusing in general.

not even going to touch that last bit of his profile.

papilion in a bit