Talk:Cinder Fall/@comment-25555436-20150324005506/@comment-25617798-20150325104523

From what I can tell it is a greatly romanticized BDSM story. True BDSM freaks people the hell out and the first person I heard about the story from was my Chemistry teacher in highschool. This man was old enough to be my grandfather and his wife read it. If it was true BDSM she would have probably been horrified.

I am a writer as well, with most emphasis on RWBY crossovers currently, and chapters take months to write as I am constantly revising trying to get the perfect detailing for how it looks in my mind. However, specifics often get overlooked which is why proofreaders are needed for every writer in my opinion.