Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160402201256/@comment-27082610-20160422023444

VedranTheII wrote: Arkantos95 wrote: 1)Basic info Jet also stands for jet black fyi.
 * Name: Jet Yin
 * ... They gained fame and wealth the world over as the best there was at what they did, and as a result became Knights. ...

Sorry to nitpick on this but, when you make a character world famous you run a high risk of canon discontinuity. For instance if someone makes an oc about being the best detective of Vale that knew the city inside and out, then you need to explain why he wasn’t able to find the faunus gathering Roman was at, when it took Blake and Sun like 5 minutes.

What I’m trying to say is town down on the self ego boost mate, character can still be cool even if they don’t do it as good as the canon characters.

Lastly,  I’m unsure why the weapon is such a bi barrier to you…you did sort of make him obsessed with blades so why not make like V1 and give him a flaming sword?

-I knew about the black thing, I just thought it was obvious enough that it didn't merit explanation.

-My bad on that one, I'll scale it back a lot, maybe just have them gain a reputation within the guild or something. Possibly move the whole thing to an AU.

-I'm sorry if it came off as an ego boost, although if it makes you feel any better he's not really going to be all that relevant to the story outside of character interatctions with the main cast of the fanfic within which he is placed. I would just like to emphasize on that one that I'm referring to my OC team, not the main cast of the show. Distancing myself as much from the entirety of the Hunters and main continuity as possible on this one, not taking any chances.

-I'm not sure what you meant on that last one, when I said I wanted suggestions there I was talking about the name. Although I did just notice that I didnt' put the Dust slots in the description, so that's probably on me.