Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-209421-20150209112559

Yes, this thread has been quiet, but I thought I'd chime in with something that needs help!

I started the next chapter of Perchance to Dream, and the first scene doesn't... sit right. Sure, it's sad, but it also doesn't quite feel natural to me. So, I thought I'd share it with you guys in the hopes that you'd be able to help make it vastly better.

There's going to be at least three separate scenes in this chapter, so expect more updates, probably in a separate document. All I need you lot to check is the final page.