Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20190630171456/@comment-27144409-20190711011259

Hollowblade19 wrote: -Name: Ultimate Cut

-User: Drake Sparti

-Introduction: The user moves their hand from the hilt of the blade outward till passing the tip of the blade coating it in a black miasma aura.

-Description: During combat the user coats there blade in a thick black miasma aura cloud making even the dullest blade capable of cutting anything it is speculated it could even be used to cut through immortality. Okay, you need to dial it way back, and understand the words you use. Miasma is not the word you should be using. It's for diseased, noxious air, not mono-molecular cutting fields. Since this is about it being stupid sharp, not poisoning and infecting people, you need something else, and not a mono-molecular field, because those are stupid dangerous.

Next problem, saying that it could possibly gut through immortality is just not okay. When you reach the stage of cutting through magic or concepts, you're usually gone too far. This isn't a setting where that kind of insanity works.

This is way too powerful.