Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25936766-20170930010515/@comment-25936766-20171028182109

Now, Spirit’s Jonquil Bones and Celadon Megalodon 

Part 1: Basic Info:

Celadon: -So…her symbol is like some Quetzalcoatly version of a lowercase Delta?

-“Celadon = Green”. “Akajou = Brown”….WHO MAKES THESE STUPID NAMES THAT GIVE NO INDICATION ABOUT THE STUPID COLOR THEY ARE A SHADE OF?????

'''Points: 9.5pts out of 10. '''



Part 2: Appearance:

Jonquil: …Em, what do you mean by “calves” here? I doubt he’s carrying baby cows with him everywhere he goes, tied to his pants.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">'''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 20pts out of 20. '''

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Part 3.3: Misc.Traits, Likes, Dislikes

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Celadon: (Dislikes)…Wait. She hates stockings….yet she literally wears Class-C(+) stockings (yes, socks count) with her school uniform. Even when stockings are not reglamentary. Then…why does she even use them?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">Or do you only consider Class B or A as actual Stockings?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 5 + 4 = 9 / 2 = 4.5 out of 5pts 

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Part 4.1: Notable Relationships

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Jonquil: He’s fine. His “friendship” with them is in line with his personality.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Celadon: Fine here too…though what kind of name is “Orla”?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">In Common: Also fine…what breed is Spook though, feels weird that you didn’t mention that (or anyone’s races beyond J&C’s families). He’s supposed to be of a breed that wouldn’t feel useful for a Huntsman, so I cross out breeds like Rottweilers, Bulldogs, Cockers, Terriers, Dalmatians, Great Danes, Shepherd Dogs, Siberian Husky, and so on.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">But there’s still a ton of “small and inoffensive” breeds. Is he a Chihuahua, Poodle, Yorkshire, Corgi? Some mixed breed? ….Or is he a Shiba, wearing a hawaiian shirt and sunglasses? Raddest thing in Remnant.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">It’s a minor thing, but hey. It’s just 1/2 word(s). Stuff like “Orla is a whale Faunus” (Unless you want me to assume Celadon is the only Faunus among those 2 teams), or “Spook is a corn dog”.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">'''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 4pts out of 5. '''

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Skills: ''Women can cook. REAL women can cook with open fire.''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Allusions: …Huh. I never noticed that. I see some small similarities between Jack and Jonquil (Whitey white; like scary pranks). Not as many between Sally and Celadon though (then again, Jack was the real star of that movie. I don’t recall Sally to perfection, but I will never forget Jack).

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Notes: Onus Academy was Signal level, right? That I don’t mind at all. Only 4 Huntsmen Academies around the world, but multiple Combat Schools here and there, was what we were told in this regard, IIRC.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Granted, Atlas used to be a Combat School, so it probably doubles as one ATM, though the story isn’t set in Atlas, so that’s mostly-irrelevant.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 5pts out of 5 

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">1-“Heavy Sword: D <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language: EN-US">ual edged stiletto blade broadsword, 26 inches (66cm) long and 3.5 inches (9cm) across at base.”….Broadsword…ah, damn you classification of swords. Is it a Basket-Hilted Sword of sorts, or is it a claymore? Both are called Broadswords.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">I’m assuming Claymore, in which case this thing is practically half the usual size (140cm vs. 66cm). It sounds less like a Heavy Sword and more like a Big Dagger or a Shortsword.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">2-So, it opens up like a scissor, then the blades can be separated? That’s how it changes to Dual Sword/Dagger mode? …Doesn’t that mean it has 3 forms? “Swordo mode”, “Scissor mode” and “Dual Swords mode”?

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">3-Mmm….just how heavy is this thing more or less? You called it a “Heavy sword”, so I doubt it’s light, and logically the weight would cut in half in Dual Sword mode, but just how heavy is it? Due to the shape, I imagine it’d be denser than usual Broadswords, have the weight more concentrated, and probably have less momentum.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">The design is sound, it’s cool and simple, but the way I imagine it, it’s a Shortsword too heavy to be a good Shortsword or Scissor. Also, does Canlan mean anything? Or is it “Resplandecent” in Chinese? And if so, which Chinese?

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Shotgun form is fine, but…I have a seriously hard time picturing just how does it turn from a shotgun into a shield. Let’s see if I understood:

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">First, the pump unfolds and covers the barrel above it. Then it unfolds in different pieces, rotating towards the end of the barrel until it kind of looks like a starfish. From the way I picture this, it would end up with lots of empty space, which could be covered by Cyan Dust or something, but it doesn’t seem to be the case here.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Then, the barrel splits in half, flatten,   and then the one on the outer end of the Shield flattens until it looks like some sort of pair of rectangles painted over the Shield, while the one on the inner end does the same on it’s end, and the handle “changes form” (in the most vague way possible) until it turns into the Shield’s handle…somehow not having fallen out due to the barrel splitting in 2 and flattening.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">…That’s the “good looking” way I see it. The alternative is that the barrel splits and flattens, but remains horizontal and all. Which would make the thing look like some sort of weird giant power plug.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">The Shotgun form is good, it’s fine, but the Shield form just confuses me. I feel it’d have been better if it was like some cylinder that covers the end of the barrel and opens up like an Umbrella to become a shield. Or just use Cyan Dust.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">'''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 4. '''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Total: 10 + 4 = 14 /2 = 7pts out of 15. With Canlan, even with all those questions I raised, I could at least picture how it worked and switched forms, and it worked fine. With Forio…I can’t.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Jonquil: Shrek. ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">1-…You know, with a description that short, you could’ve used that as the Introduction and called it a day there. Which….you have done before, IIRC.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">2-I see quite a lot of redundancy here. ''“Description: User emits a high-pitched shriek. Auditive Cue: A high-pitched shriek”''. I’m not a goldfish, Spirit, I’m not part of Piscean’s distant kin.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">3-“Fight or Flight response”…so, I assume it includes Freezing up? FoF is not simply “Fighting or running away”, Freezing is also a common response, especially against threats that make you afraid.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Then again, people always forget that.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">4-Wait, so, if he uses it in an Area form, it can paralyze (As of T2) but if he uses it specifically on a single target, it cannot, despite being more focused? …That makes no real sense to me.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">5-“ <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">The Grimm-affecting aspect of it is inspired by the Grimm being stated to fear the Silver Eyed Warriors, meaning fear is an emotion they can feel.”

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Yeah, the only time we were told that was when Qrow literally was telling Ruby the LEGENDS of the SEW. And Legends always glorify and romanticize stuff and make them sound a million times more badass than they actually were.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size: 11.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";mso-ansi-language:EN-US">If we took the legends Qrow narrated as if they were facts, then the SEW would be so damn OP against Grimm that we shouldn’t have a plot to begin with. Obviously, that’s not the case.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">The SEW’s powers are effective against Grimm. But that’s where the facts end. No Grimm in the entire show has feared Ruby at all, so they clearly don’t fear Silver Eyes as much as Qrow said. The rest of the inspirations are fine and reasonable though.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 13pts (Since the effect itself is fine).

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Celadon: Marionette….specifically, a buffed up version of the one you posted almost a year ago in the 10th Semblance thread, for Cini Taolana.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">1-User can control objects and willing people from the get-go, and there’s no time limit. Originally the user could not control people from the start and even at the point they could, it had a time limit.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">2-Visual effect is more dull and uncreative than the original “Marigold Infection” visual cue of the original version. Though at the same time it’s more directly-fitting.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">3-Most notably, nothing about controlling Grimm…unless they count as “Living bodies” or “Non-living Bodies”.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">On it’s own, I like the idea, it’s fine and creative, though it makes her feel like Discount Pyrrha combat-wise.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 14pts 

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">'''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Total: 13 + 14 = 27 / 2 = 13.5 out of 15pts. '''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes"> ---

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Part 7: Combat Info:

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Jonquil: (Landing Strategy): …How does he create an ice path? Stabbing his weapon into stuff I can see, but how does he make ice paths? You said one of his blades had Ice Dust, but, that doesn’t really tell me how he could make Ice Paths good enough to slide down safely.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">At best, an ice trail in front of him as he slashes, but it’d be too light and fragile to really slow him down. Also, how does he use his Fire Sword as a jetpack, of all things? We’ve seen Fire Blades before (Adam), nothing says they could be used in such a manner.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">(Fighting Style): More or less just like I pictured him fighting.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Celadon: (Gadget): So…it’s a Dust gun-mace? A…less cheap version of Cardin’s Dust Mace? It’s cool, simple and cool.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">(Fighting Style): Simple, fine. It’s similar to using the Ghost Sword spell in Fable while fighting with your Bow, right? Though I expected something else on top of it. Like, wielding the mace and using the Shotgun as some sort of backup drone with her Semblance.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Together: (Range): “MEN SLASH, WOMEN SHOOT”? ''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">(Fighting Style): Good teamwork. No fancy Team Attack though. Nothing like, say, Jonquil giving his blades to Celadon so she spins them quickly around herself for a few seconds. Or Jonquil throwing them somewhere and Celadon using her Semblance so they return to his hands like boomerangs.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal">'''<span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Points: 7pts out of 10. '''

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes"> ---

<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto; line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language: ES-VE;mso-no-proof:yes">Total points: 9.5 + 4.5 + 20 + 10 + 4.5 + 4 + 5 + 7 + 13.5 + 7 = 85pts