Thread:Cyrania de Bergerac/@comment-24993958-20150828234705/@comment-26463535-20150914232107

Thanks, I'll seek to follow your advice. I'm glad you liked my weapon design, I worried it was too outlandish or absurb still. I guess violent happenings is just easy to conceive of for me. But then I get into the Deus Ex territory in order to get them out of it, as well as thinking of a certain end goal and forcing the OC to get there (the bounty hunter was his original pitch [basing him on the fairy mythos where they kiddnapped mortals], but I wrote and couldn't figure out how to make him a bounty hunter[was going to add a section describing his capture and forced service [hence the collar] but ran out of time)

But I'm glad you approved of everything else and I will seek to try the no violent/ mentally scaring experiences challenge next. I'm planning to do the other members of team OREO now so it will be a good place to it (I'll do them as Beacon Graduates).