Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20150713052232/@comment-24181684-20150714154123

Bajarias.josef wrote:

Animal Basis:Grey wolf

Grimm Title: Fenrir

This just seems like a beowolf with a slightly different colour and less lanky arms. Also, I'm most likely wrong, but having a wolf at 8ft tall and 24ft long seems sort of disproportionate.

On another note, this:

"They are rather docile to humans and will only attack once they intrude their territory,they are aggressive enough to drive other grimm out from their home."

I dunno, it defeats the point of it being a grimm if its just gonna stay in its own little world, not attacking humans, which from what I've seen is all they want to do, regardless of territory. Even the Goliaths were waiting for an opportunity to attack Vale ( or at least I presume).

What do you mean by "driving grimm out of their home"? If that you're implying that it has attacked other grimm, I don't believe that makes sense in the canon, as the grimm have only been known to attack humans and on occasion, animals.

Finally, for it being a dangerous grimm, you're really underselling it with those strengths and weaknesses, I'll go over them both seperately.

Strengths: The problem with using it can think as a strength. They all do that, they just get slightly better at it with age, along with some other attributes (more plating and sheer size, with other attributes such as the ursa majors plate spikes). Oh, and please be more descriptive about its features and the like, such as how fast it is; Is it as fast as Ruby when she uses her semblance, or something more a kin to Blake's speed.

Weaknesses: This suffers from a lack of description too, except that this isn't just underselling the Fenrir as a threat, it makes it seem rather pathetic, as according to you, it can be killed just by giving it a stab under its chin. This wouldn't be a problem, if you hadn't said that he was extremely dangerous. The way it seems now, it really is just a glorified beowolf.

On a different note, I might come back in later to throw out a grimm design I have in mind.