Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160721222431/@comment-25396609-20160825011829

i don't even...

That is literally the worst way to design a character. You don't just throw random concepts together and then ask other people how to improve it.

The most experimental characters i have submitted were fully considered, every detail of their history was planned to some degree and it was justified within the design before i ever submitted them. I plan possible alternatives, expansions, and future plot paths in advance.

Look, as far as i can tell your character plan is to make her as moe as humanly possible.

You are trying way too fucking hard; you can't force something like that by jamming elements together; you have to build it carefully, block by block, or let it arise naturally.