Thread:Cyrania de Bergerac/@comment-24993958-20151126093701/@comment-26463535-20151126094810

Alright then, thanks for the advice. I'll ditch that idea. That was the last really in-your-face references to his allusion and I had no real idea how to fix the story to avoid Deus Ex Machina.

Any suggestions for what I should do? I do like the lonely seaside cave opening. And I do want to pair him with Liaden as Hunters in an academy. I just would like a springboard suggestion. I can come up with the rest from there.