Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6863431-20150103062825/@comment-26955524-20160618184248

I actually wrote a fic a while ago. Just a little two-shot based on a theory I hade about the show. It was originally going to be a one-shot, but I felt it ended too ambiguously. I would love critiques and feedback to help me improve my writing. For example, looking back on it, I felt that second chapter came out feeling incredibly rushed. But for all I know, that could just be me. But like I said, feedback is appreciated

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