Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20170705210718/@comment-26397825-20170814090952

Darth Screamer wrote:

2)Appearance

-Aura Colour: Translucent What kind of colour is translucent? If you're saying her aura is clear, then no. Everyone has a proper colour for their aura, and clear is not a colour.

3)Characteristics

The loss of her companions required much counselling, after which she opted to continue with her training, in their memory and honour. She would go on to finish her first year. As her second year started, she went on to become Prof. Letta's aide. I'm glad you mentioned that she had counselling, though I think maybe it should still be ongoing. Even if she's pretty much over it, there are going to be moments that set off the trauma she would have faced, and survivors guilt is a very real thing when you are the only survivor out of a group.

Also, maybe a note about her becoming Professor Letta's aide due to no longer having teammates, making any mission she went on extremely dangerous with only one person who hasn't completed their training yet. As it is, it sounds a bit like she just did it for the hell of it.

III) Combat Info

-Landing strategy: Activates drill, pointing it downward to allow for it to take the brunt of the impact. That's not how a drill works. All she'd end up doing is skewering herself on the blunt end of her sword - and with enough force a blunt object can pierce skin.

As an aside...does she have a heat based semblance purely because she's a fire ant? Because that strikes me as...sorta lazy. Instead of making something that fit her personality at the time of unlocking her aura, you just went with something that matches her Faunus type.