Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27082610-20160429173411/@comment-27447621-20160430173025

CushionySiren3 wrote: Thanks for spacing everything.
 * Throws aside polite cardboard cutout of self* Aces, let's do this.

So, how long have you been watching the Wiki? This is a lot better than a lot of first-time attempts. I'm putting things here as I see them, don't expect any rhyme or reason... First off, I'd suggest TAUP as the team name, as all team names need to be a 4-letter acronym of the team member's names that also reminds (or flat-out is) a color. Right now, his full name sounds like a shade of paint. Not trying to say you SHOULD change it, but First, middle, and last names don't need to all fit into one color. Heck, you could do anything for any name, first, middle, or last, as long as one of them follows the CNR. Weapon Type needs to be an acronym as well (the example used is HCSS for High-Caliber Sniper Scythe. For Visual Effect, is there an effect that occurs before he goes invisible?  that would go there... For Landing Strategy, he would have landed during the Soiree in the Emerald Forest that put him into his team, right?  What strategy did he use?  or did he just hit the ground because he couldn't decide on one? I would recommend another way to transform Dawn Tranquility than squeezing the handle in a very specific way, as that can be hard (or easy enough to be accidental) in the thick of battle. That's all I'm seeing at the moment, though I'll keep looking.