Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160402201256/@comment-25279497-20160423202233

Phantomlink959 wrote:   Zal Mano Outside resembling Kisame a bit, in my opinion, he green as grass.

Kirito, here some advice that will save us all some headaches. Write down everything with a full explanation in Word or Google Docs. Like Phantom said, everything you posted so far is half baked. Take a day, week, heck even a month or a year, write down every idea you have, throw out the nonsensical ones, and refine from there. Because right now every one of your ocs falls into "FNG" and poorly written fanfiction territory.