Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27144409-20180525193802/@comment-38934077-20190626221533

Bluewindbag wrote: how about now? Tbh I think her personality still needs some tweaking. You can't eat your cake and have it too. She can't be cynical, prideful, disrespectful, pretentious, and lacking in self-awareness while somehow also being good-natured and caring. You gotta commit to one side. Remember, this is an introduction to your OC, so any character development you may or may not have planned for her should not be included.