Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-25396609-20150826013454/@comment-24993958-20150826221035

Clarus Nox wrote:

Name: Vayne Nite

Wow…here I was considering removing my blogpost about not overloading semblances since the template is outdated…and here you are not only using the same one I used to make a point, but you somehow made it even more broken…You also:

-added a lot of unnecessary extra data in his backstory…what do I care what his teamates weapon or even personality was when most of them either die or stop being important in the next paragraph? The only fact out of there that matters is that one is a fox faunus and one is still alive.

-name does not correlate to his physical appearance…also you forgot to mention how and if his name fits the cnr, meaning I had to do the digging. Vanity is generally linked to violet but you made his eyes light blue, while wagons where predominately made of wood, bringing to mind green and brown, which your character does not have.

-no description on his hair length…given his common outfit choice I’ll presume he has that stereotypical shoulder length uneven hair all bad boys with problem do.