Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-26397825-20161205132101/@comment-30473431-20170108190341

Okay so I've edited his backstory. Ossian Dartmouth enters the town, attempting to save it from the attack. This is when he sees Hunter. After the Beowulf slashes him, Ossian kills it along with many other Grimm that would've attacked Hunter while he was injured. The Grimm were beginning to become too much, only having time to save Hunter from the attack and they made a retreat away from the town.

Ossian treated Hunter's wound but couldn't heal his sight, causing him to be blinded. After this, he allows Hunter to join him as he has no where else to go and that's where he learns echolocation and aura sensory. Whilst learning it, Ossian defended Hunter from the attacks.

Is this better?