Thread:VedranTheII/@comment-5217560-20160114232829/@comment-24993958-20160115090437

I am very well aware my distaste for people getting trained before 12 is purely personal, and it’s likely going to stay that way mostly because I’m a bit jaded, be it from too many videogames and shows just doing it wrong or whatever paternal instinct I can muster…this has nothing to do with your oc, or even yourself for that matter, so I don’t expect you to change it just because I have a problem with it…but because I have a problem with it I feel it necessary to voice it and you…and the anon before you to some extent…just happened to tip me over the edge on the matter.

Let it be said that the alterations you made does tie in the story in a way that makes it flow more naturally and removes the only real problem I had with her backstory, anything else are just nitpicks I wouldn’t personally do…which in layman terms means your character is both fine and will be liked by the overwhelming majority of people.