Talk:Ilia Amitola/History/@comment-28288412-20170928200857/@comment-4010415-20170928202253

Like I said, I phrased it that way because it sounded good and was grammatically correct. I wasn't sure how else to insert it into the paragraph. If we can find a better way and a better place to put it in the paragraph, then that'll be great. But I opted to just put "The daughter of miners," because it sounds good and she is the daughter of miners.

And it is pretty important that she's the daughter of miners and that she personally knew miners because that lets you know that the mine cave-in was something personal for her and gives her a reason to be horribly upset and worried and to get pissed off at her friends for snickering about it. It makes more sense for us, as the audience, if we know about that because her friends were essentially snickering about what was possibly the deaths and severe injuries of people Ilia personally knew, including possibly her parents. It is important.

If we didn't know about that, it would seem like an overreaction for her to start sobbing her eyes out and then get pissed at her friends, would it not?