Thread:ProjectPredacon/@comment-25555436-20150214214416/@comment-25857155-20150222005309

As long as the mood swings stay manageable, it's all good, right? Otherwise, you may want to consider seeking medical advice. Sometimes these things can be caused by health issues - vitamin deficiencies and such.

You seem to take some key influences from TwoKinds. There's nothing wrong with that, of course - I'm actually liking the webcomic a fair bit (now that I'm in more recent, better-written, and significantly better-drawn parts of it). Anyway, your story sounds interesting, and I think I would enjoy reading it as much as stories from certain other writers on the side whose works I have read descriptions for. Lore is important, but needs to be appropriately integrated, else you end up having to write other books to explain your first books, like Tolkien (whom I keep a shrine in my closet to, right next to the one for C.S. Lewis (not really, relax)) did. ^.^ Or like I will have to if I don't figure out how to integrate my lore into the main story. =/ Oh, and making up a language is a serious pain, so be careful with that one. It's not just making up words, it's making up methods for tense, number, and sometimes gender as well. ^.^; Conjugations, declensions, and that sort of thing.

I would definitely like to hear more about your story. It might inspire me to work more on my own, rather than getting distracted by RWBY fanfictions.

... Really, Live? You don't remember ACCA (Acacia), my A-Team that you led me to rename? Hrmph. I shall repost it. It'll take up a lot of room, though, so I'll probably drop it on my page or something.