Thread:Kirito Rose/@comment-27966940-20160429001725/@comment-25936766-20160524003749

The problems in the 1st arc were some Deus Ex Machinas at specific points, Kirito being too OP and a Marty Stu, and of course some writing issues here and there, but overall not too bad.

But starting from the 2nd arc, Kirito's traits were eliminated until only his Marty Stueness remained, and the writing became worse and more stupid at times. Up and past the point where he can take a sword to a gun game, and literally beat everyone's asses with no trouble.

Then again, it was never meant to go past the 1st arc, the other arcs were only made because the Author needed to milk it.