Thread:HazelQuill7445/@comment-5430952-20170202084026

Hrm, is it me or does Merlot's background seem a bit... haphazard? It doesn't seem to flow in a timely fashion. I think it would make more sense if his views on Grimm were before the fall of Mountain Glenn, not after. Not to mention some points seem redundant. Though it would be a rather substantial edit, I think it would look better with some reorganizing. But I wanted to check with you before I did it, so it wouldn't lead to any misunderstandings. Thanks in advance. ;)

Alhazad2003 (talk) 08:40, February 2, 2017 (UTC) 