Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-27966940-20180117043937/@comment-27425734-20180226023445

Sentry 616 wrote: I'm not sure what you're saying, but aside from their take on FNKI, that artist's work isn't particularly... good, in my opinion. It's unnecessarily edgy imo.

Mars Ukiuki, DragonNAW's OC. I posted him a few comments up. He's the one with the wings and the red hair. I personally don't have an issue with an edgy character design if there is a reasonable justification for it, and the edge factor is more balanced. In this case, I think the trench coat should be shortened to just a jacket or a vest, the chunk of hair falling across one eye should be moved aside, and the spikes on the boots and the armor on his calves should be removed. Make the texture on the wings more like the feathers of an actual bird, and use more of that rusted-brown color and less red and black.