Board Thread:Off Topic/@comment-24993958-20160601181154/@comment-24534644-20160607035855

-Seeing as you've had past issues with balancing height and weight appropriately for your characters, I hope you realize that 6'4 is REALLY tall for a 17-18 year-old girl.

-I'm not suree what you mean by "sassy" in the face area. Sassy is a personality trait, not a facial structure.

-I'm going to refrain from saying anything about you making a character with human/faunus parents so soon after praising mine. Though I will raise an eyebrow at it. The backstory is just a little bit bland, but it works, and it's leagues better than anything and everything that you've tried before it.

-Normally I'd say put both weapons under the same listing, but that's a nitpick.

Overall I'd say it passes. Though I'd wait to get some other opinions on that.